Alyosha / Stories / The Black Statue Part the Second

Story Stats:

 

  • Views: 2092
  • Rating: 4.4
Advertisement

• The Black Statue Part the Second

56 comments » | Report this Story

By Alyosha | Created: Apr 11, 2007

Page 1 / 30

This Part Two of my story, "The Black Statue." A quick recap, in part 1, Francis' mother discouraged her son from thinking that the statue talks to him, and that he should forget about that so-called "Laxia Clan." One night, Francis is awakened by a mysterious voice that calls him out of the house.

Pages in this Story

  • 1
    • This Part Two of my story, "The Black Statue." A quick recap, in part 1, Francis' mother discouraged her son from thinking that the statue talks to him, and that he should forget about that so-called "Laxia Clan." One night, Francis is awakened by a mysterious voice that calls him out of the house.
  • 2
    • Francis, without even thinking, went to the lady on the bridge.
  • 3
    • "Leila? Is that really you?" Francis asked, staring blankly at the beautiful creature in front of him. "Of course, dear child... it's me, Leila... your friend," The lady replied in a caring voice.
  • 4
    • Francis rushed in the arms of his friend and immediately hugged her. "I knew I wasn't making anything up! I knew you were real!..." Francis declared. "Now, now... don't cry..." "Mom didn't believe me!" Francis said, tears streaming from his eyes, "I feel as lonely as ever!" Leila hugged Francis even tighter. "That's why I am here... to ease the pain... stop crying now, everything will be all right... I promise." Leila said, trying her best to comfort Francis.
  • 5
    • "Come with me, I know a place that will make you feel better, Francis." Leila said, beckoning Francis to come with her.
  • 6
    • "Where are we going? Are we going to that place you told me about? To the place where you said your ancestors lived?" Francis excitedly asked her.
  • 7
    • "Just come with me. Patience, my dear little boy... You'll see in the right time."
  • 8
    • Back at the family bedroom, Lady Vanessa was peacefully sleeping, unaware of the events taking place. Her husband was on the balcony couch, also sleeping, as he preferred the cool night air.
  • 9
    • Lady Vanessa was suddenly awakened by the sound of lightning. She realized that it had already begun to rain. She went up to check on her son to ensure he isn't bothered by the storm, and to call her husband in. "Francis... Francis, son, are you all right?"
  • 10
    • When she got up, to her great shock, her son was no longer in his bed! "Oh my goodness gracious! Handel! Come immediately! Our son is not in bed!" Sensing what might have happened, Lady Vanessa, not minding the storm, rushed outside the house.
  • 11
    • She was too late. She got out just in time to see a lady holding her son disappear in what appeared to be a portal. She stood on the bridge, helpless, not knowing what to do. Finally, she broke down in tears.
  • 12
    • "I am so sorry Francis... I had to keep the truth from you... I did not have the courage to tell you... I was not able to protect you... oh Francis! I will give anything just to get you back, just to bring back time!" She sobbed hysterically, regretting all that she had done.
  • 13
    • Lord Handel had followed his wife. He got there just in time to hear what his wife was saying. He went to his wife, but instead of being angry that his wife hid many things from him...
  • 14
    • He hugged her comfortingly. "There now, dear, we will get our son back... There is always hope.." Lady Vanessa laid her head on her husband's shoulder "I am so sorry, dear... I kept many things from you. I knew from the beginning that I should have told you everything... but now, it is too late... oh what have I done!?"
  • 15
    • "Don't lose hope... I know that we will get our son back. I am with you always... do not ever forget that. We will do this together..." Handel assured his wife.
  • 16
    • Back inside, Vanessa finally calmed herself down. They both sat down in the couch. "Now I know that you have some explaining to do, my dear. So let's not waste time anymore. Tell me what I am supposed to know." Handel said in a firm voice.
  • 17
    • Lady Vanessa looked at her husband in the eye, and her husband gave her his "You-can-trust-me" look. Lady Vanessa took a deep breath and started to tell everything. "You see, it all started with our son. About a month ago, he started "communicating" to that statue we have outside. I told him not to do it anymore, since it is not good for him to believe that the statue is communicating back to him."
  • 18
    • "Wait a minute," Handel interrupted. "You mean that statue we have outside? The one you said your grandparents gave you?" "Yes," Vanessa replied.
  • 19
    • "So, what's your point now? Do you know anything about this? Are you now telling me that when I saw you talking to that same statue weeks ago, you literally meant it? I don't understand... what's going on!?" Handel replied in a confused, analyzing look.
  • 20
    • "You will know more things later," Vanessa replied, sensing that it would not be easy to convice her husband. She has to SHOW him, she thought. "What you need to know that the events that took place this night is all related to that statue outside. That is all you need to know for the meantime," Vanessa replied.
  • 21
    • "But I have something to show you." Vanessa's tone changed, from a confident one, to a doubting and worrying tone. "But promise me... that you will not leave me no matter what happens and no matter what you see..."
  • 22
    • Lord Handel gave Lady Vanessa a reassuring hug. "I love you, and I will always stick with you no matter what. Through thick and thin, remember?... so, show me what you need to show me." They both went outside to the balcony.
  • 23
    • Lady Vanessa stood on one corner, looked up to the heavens, and uttered the words:
    "Ancestors, hear my plea, Open up your hearts to me, Grant me this I ask of you, Change me back to who I should be!"
    At first, it seemed as if nothing happened...
  • 24
    • Then a shining blue light appeared out of the dark night sky, brighter than any star any human being has seen from earth.
  • 25
    • The bright light descended from the heavens, and came upon Lady Vanessa. She was then surrounded by a bright blue light...
  • 26
    • And in the blink of an eye, Lady Vanessa changed in front of Lord Handel. "Oh my goodness!" Handel exclaimed, still in a very big shock, "I cannot believe what I am seeing!"
  • 27
    • At the same time, the statue downstairs began to glow...
  • 28
    • The light, an orange one, became stronger and brighter...
  • 29
    • And brighter...
  • 30
    • And changed into a young woman.

    ~To Be Continued~


    Thanks so much for reading my story! Hope you liked the second part!

    Special thanks to (again) estatica and to all the others whose works inspired me to write something of my own (namely Jubilant, blueclarity, spiffyriffic, and many more.)!

    All custom clothes and makeup can be fount at modthesims2.com!

    Watch out for the third part!

56 Comment(s)

Note: We do our best to make sure the comments posted are of non-offensive material and on-topic. If you see something that is irrelevant or abusive, please report it and we will remove it as soon as possible.

On Apr 9, 2007 Alyosha wrote:
Hey simmers! First of all, thanks for reading my story! Part three may take a little longer to make, so have patience! Hopefully, you'll still like to read it! Thanks again!
On Apr 11, 2007 slime wrote:
WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO VERY GOOD 5 POINTS WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
On Apr 11, 2007 DIDA wrote:
how...do you do that?i mean the lighting....it's wonderful...tell me please....how they changed??Wonderful story! 5.0!!!
On Apr 11, 2007 josh1092 wrote:
Wow how did you do that? Great story I want more now. lol 5.000000000000000000000000
On Apr 11, 2007 eshuff wrote:
Beautiful! I love the relationship and the way you've developed the characters just as much as the technical stuff. Very very good job!
On Apr 11, 2007 theclique wrote:
omgosh how did u do all that lightning stuff??
On Apr 11, 2007 corylangreck wrote:
Is the light part of the game? It kind of reminded me of the angular gradient in Photoshop.
On Apr 12, 2007 Devalyn wrote:
Nice settings - did you make the lights in Photoshop? They are very cool
On Apr 12, 2007 lyladogs wrote:
Wow! So Lady Vanessa did know some things...
On Apr 12, 2007 german84 wrote:
Well... Most indeed you deserve your five points. Great job with the lights and the shape-shifting. Good luck!!
On Apr 12, 2007 Liesanne wrote:
This part is even better then the first! Great pictures and very good suspence. I will be looking forward for the next part --- Nieky
On Apr 12, 2007 xsarbearx wrote:
On Apr 12, 2007 dannybond1990 wrote:
must read on! must read on!!!!!!!! 5.0
On Apr 12, 2007 downloadsforever wrote:
This is all so confusing...IT'S GREAT!
On Apr 12, 2007 Mistress Useless wrote:
Lovely story!
On Apr 12, 2007 blueclarity25 wrote:
Wow! The lighting and special effects were incredible! Each screenshot was gorgeous! I'm in awe! Incredible work! 5.0!
On Apr 12, 2007 scarlet_white wrote:
Yeah not just the screenshots and the effects areliterally something incredible and Imean it, story wise is very charming and appealing
On Apr 12, 2007 atangki wrote:
wahhaha.. great, great, great! 5.0!
On Apr 12, 2007 tesasims wrote:
5 points I am looking forward to the next chapter
On Apr 12, 2007 sweetheartwva wrote:
great story
On Apr 12, 2007 greeksim wrote:
Great!
On Apr 12, 2007 Alyosha wrote:
I am so overwhelmed by all of your wonderful comments and feedback! All of you have so much inspired me to write more! I am currently uploading Part 3, and it is the longest part so far! It also explains some other things, and introduces new characters, as well as new places/settings! In my opinion, part three is where the excitement (a.k.a Boredom) really begins! Thanks so much again!
On Apr 12, 2007 monmel wrote:
Very good work Can`t wait for next part
On Apr 12, 2007 estatica wrote:
WOW, brilliant chapter! The plot is excellent and the special effects are very convincing! I love this story! 5.0!
On Apr 12, 2007 wrote:
Oh! I can't wait for the next part- I love a good mystery.
On Apr 12, 2007 fizz bomb wrote:
Brilliant, waits patiantly for chapter 3
On Apr 12, 2007 caracolin wrote:
WWWooowww I REALLY LOVE YOUR STORY !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I want to know what happens after!!!!!
On Apr 12, 2007 anaspears wrote:
The light ROCKS! And the story is really great! I cant wait for the third part to come out (I just hope there's also part 4 and so on!!!) ROCK ON!!!
On Apr 12, 2007 shes_a_libra wrote:
ACK! I want more!
On Apr 12, 2007 MonikaZydron wrote:
Great story! Love it all: plot, special effects, deco, everything! Well done, I will definately stay tuned for all the parts to come! 5.0
On Apr 12, 2007 babsbunny72 wrote:
great story cant wait for part 3
On Apr 12, 2007 tishaqua wrote:
Great story can't wait for part 3
On Apr 13, 2007 dogz wrote:
omg
On Apr 13, 2007 gothiclynn wrote:
That was an unexpitect twist ! Can't wait to read what happens next !
On Apr 13, 2007 fallenangelohio wrote:
Wonderful! Can't wait for the third part, you are a gifted storyteller!
On Apr 13, 2007 lexique wrote:
that was some amazing special effects, and the story is really exciting!!! i carnt wait until the next part. 5.0 5.0 5.0!!!
On Apr 13, 2007 rchris_ness wrote:
Loved it! Can't wait for the next one!
On Apr 13, 2007 MoriaG wrote:
.?:*¨¨*:?.A.?:*¨¨*:?.FIVE.?:*¨¨*:?.STAR.?:*¨¨*:?.STORY.?:*¨¨*:?. i love it, nicely done, i love the whole she changed into what she was before and the statue changed too. i hope he does not leave her and they find their son. good job, great story
On Apr 14, 2007 wrote:
thie story deserves 1000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000.0
On Apr 15, 2007 Jubilant wrote:
Wow, I am so honored to be listed as one of inspiration. This chapter was really good and I am going to jump right over to chapter 3 and find out more.
On Apr 15, 2007 bittymittenz wrote:
Awesome!
On Apr 16, 2007 Nyell wrote:
Great chapter! I really like the effects. Keep up the good work!
On Apr 19, 2007 baconhead91 wrote:
FANTASTIC!
On Apr 22, 2007 AnniKayna wrote:
amazing! [sorry for such a short comment, but I cant wait to read the next chapter!!! ]
On Jun 27, 2007 kaylafrie wrote:
wow >
On Jun 27, 2007 kaylafrie wrote:
i like it i love it omg great job there buddy!
On Aug 16, 2007 andi and grim wrote:
wooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
On Oct 17, 2007 lildebbye75 wrote:
Another great part, a real page turner (or mouse clicker lol) I gotta go find out what is going to happen next, Lord Handel is better than me I would have ran as soon as I saw the bright light lol.
On Dec 10, 2007 Emilie Jolie wrote:
btw, her husband is really stubborn
On Feb 14, 2008 Leia699 wrote:
OOO! Can't wait!
On Mar 15, 2008 Deedee09 wrote:
ok //
On Mar 22, 2008 mccurdysim wrote:
Great job
On Mar 29, 2008 twinkletoe wrote:
Fantastic!!!
On Sep 9, 2008 charray wrote:
Very nice story. Great job. Thanks.
On Jan 4, 2009 mpatton wrote:
Looking forward to the next part of the story.
On Jan 5, 2009 fairydust0524 wrote:
I love stories with magic.

Add a Comment

Warning: Use of bad language, unsuitable links or flaming will result in deletion of your account - regardless of your membership status. Please note that comments must be suitable for our PG13 audience. Your IP address is logged and abuse of this service will result in a ban and evidence sent to your ISP.

A d v e r t i s e m e n t
 

Top of page | Frontpage | Privacy | Terms of Use | Copyright 1999-2011 The Sims Resource - All rights reserved   Share 

This site is not endorsed by or affiliated with Electronic Arts, or its licensors. Trademarks are the property of their respective owners.
Game content and materials copyright Electronic Arts Inc. and its licensors. All Rights Reserved.