This is the Third Part of my story! Thanks to those who have read my stories so far! If you haven't read the first 2 parts yet, it is highly recommended that you read those first, because you will get confused with this part if you don't. In this chapter, I will introduce you to new characters, and give a hint of the characters to come. This chapter is the longest so far, and to those who are wondering what or who are the people who makes up the Laxia Clan, well, you will see them here! Have fun reading!
A quick recap. We last left Vanessa and Handel at the Balcony, where Vanessa shows Handel her true self. Francis, Vanessa's adopted son, was taken somewhere by his so-called friend, and the statue COMES TO LIFE!
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On Apr 13, 2007 lyladogs wrote:
Oh yeah! I'm first to comment! OH YEAH!! Vanessa's evil!!
On Apr 13, 2007 monmel wrote:
Very good
On Apr 14, 2007 tishaqua wrote:
Can't wait for the next story thought this one was a littlehad to understand
On Apr 14, 2007 josh1092 wrote:
I loved the peaceful land they lived in. 5.000000000 well done.
On Apr 14, 2007 scarlet_white wrote:
I was definitely taken by surprise by this installment, pleasantly suprised, I kind of have a prediction of where things are going although maybe you will surprise me again let's see what will happen. Great Work!
On Apr 14, 2007 dannybond1990 wrote:
Woot woot!! I love your stories. Keep up the great work!
On Apr 14, 2007 MoriaG wrote:
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:»«:M:»«:E:»«:!:» «:!:»«:!:» »(¯`v´¯)--» THIS IS ONE OF THE BEST STORIES I HAVE READ, i love it.
On Apr 14, 2007 Alyosha wrote:
Hi! tHANKS FOR THE GREAT FEEDBACK SO FAR! I am so sorry to say that part 4 will take a little longer to release since I am having a difficult tim e in doing it! it has become a bit complicated and expect part 4 to be a bit dark!
On Apr 14, 2007 wrote:
Amazing! It's original, well-written and holds your attention. I love it!
On Apr 14, 2007 estatica wrote:
Wow! The sets are phenomenal, and the pictures keep getting better and better! You got me on the edge of my seat the whole time! I hope you update soon, excellent job!
On Apr 14, 2007 caracolin wrote:
I can't wait for part 4 ^^ So interesting !!! Don't stop, please ^^
On Apr 14, 2007 wrote:
U R an EXPERT story Writer Well done
On Apr 14, 2007 Moor1@28 wrote:
nice story my name is Emily can you help me i am nw here i am from Italy can you help me with my stories?
On Apr 14, 2007 Nono_Girl wrote:
Great!Astory in a nother story!You have to love it!!!!!!!
On Apr 14, 2007 NO mach wrote:
Why do I even pretend I do not know what will happen...
On Apr 14, 2007 blueclarity25 wrote:
I'm blown away by your beautiful sets and costumes. It's really stunning and a pleasure to read. I'm captivated with this series. Great work! It keeps getting better and better!
5.0
On Apr 15, 2007 fizz bomb wrote:
WOW I love the way the story is unfolding so interesting and I love the settings your using can't wait for the fourth episode
On Apr 15, 2007 Jubilant wrote:
Wow, I was not expecting a whole nother world. Fantastically detailed and great pictures. I am really looking forward to chapter 4.
On Apr 15, 2007 Liesanne wrote:
Poor Francis
Great story and even better pictures than before. I really love it
On Apr 15, 2007 atangki wrote:
It's great! I want more and more! Love it! Love it!
On Apr 15, 2007 slime wrote:
WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO VERY GOOD 5 POINTS WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
On Apr 15, 2007 greeksim wrote:
Great story!..
On Apr 15, 2007 Mistress Useless wrote:
Lovely story!
On Apr 16, 2007 eshuff wrote:
Beautiful sets, inspired photography, and wonderful story! You got another home run!
On Apr 16, 2007 shes_a_libra wrote:
LOVE IT! Can't wait for the next part!
On Apr 17, 2007 fallenangelohio wrote:
OOOOOOHHH!!!!
I'M HOOKED! I NEED MORE! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!!!!!
On Apr 18, 2007 Nyell wrote:
I loved it! It's creative and unique...
On Apr 18, 2007 Nyell wrote:
Yeah, rate...5.0
On Apr 19, 2007 baconhead91 wrote:
OMG! that was so good! geez you are wonderful!
On May 7, 2007 tesasims wrote:
On May 9, 2007 german84 wrote:
Hey!! I had not finished reading this part when I looked at the fourth one. Great story!!
On Jun 27, 2007 kaylafrie wrote:
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On Jun 27, 2007 kaylafrie wrote:
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On Aug 1, 2007 Kikowiko wrote:
thanks!!
On Nov 14, 2007 lildebbye75 wrote:
amazing, I have no clue what's going to happen next but I am definitely eager to find out. Love the pics and the flow of the story great job.
On Feb 14, 2008 Leia699 wrote:
Nice one! Very clever plot & those props are wonderful!
On Mar 7, 2008 qasert wrote:
On Mar 29, 2008 twinkletoe wrote:
Great job once again!!
On Jan 4, 2009 mpatton wrote:
This is getting very interesting. Keep up the great work.