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On Aug 13, 2006 BBKZ wrote: | Unpublish| Delete

That's my first story, so forgive me - it's short and my English is not so good. But next parts will be longer and more interesting... Hope you'll like it :-) Enjoy!

On Aug 17, 2006 TheaDidia wrote: | Unpublish| Delete

I like it! The pictures are well done!

On Aug 17, 2006 vkd wrote: | Unpublish| Delete

Cool but eerie!

On Aug 17, 2006 zlsuter wrote: | Unpublish| Delete

great story

On Aug 17, 2006 toripitt wrote: | Unpublish| Delete

wiked cool asome story

On Aug 17, 2006 BBKZ wrote: | Unpublish| Delete

Thanks for your comments

On Aug 17, 2006 boogerbrat101 wrote: | Unpublish| Delete

great story i rate it a 5

On Aug 17, 2006 treenasims wrote: | Unpublish| Delete

Good story beginning can't wait to see the next chapter.

On Aug 17, 2006 kkffoo wrote: | Unpublish| Delete

Spooky, great car accident shot!

On Aug 17, 2006 TheMistress666 wrote: | Unpublish| Delete

I do like the stories when they done go on for ages... Nice small chapters are great! cant wait to see the next one!

On Aug 17, 2006 Olga2102 wrote: | Unpublish| Delete

WOW! Cool story!

On Aug 17, 2006 greedy wrote: | Unpublish| Delete

Good stuff cant wait for part 2

On Aug 17, 2006 MandyMands wrote: | Unpublish| Delete

Oooo! very great and I love the screenshot angles!

On Aug 18, 2006 LilyoftheValleyICE wrote: | Unpublish| Delete

Wow weird, lol. Interesting start ^^

On Aug 18, 2006 BBKZ wrote: | Unpublish| Delete

Thanks one more time I'm glad you like this story

On Aug 18, 2006 Wigwog wrote: | Unpublish| Delete

It was cool!

On Aug 18, 2006 carol84 wrote: | Unpublish| Delete

I think it's nice and sad. I want more....

On Aug 18, 2006 BBKZ wrote: | Unpublish| Delete

I will upload next chapter soon So don't worry - it'll be next parts I hope - more interesting and maybe more scary

On Aug 18, 2006 slime wrote: | Unpublish| Delete

short but good

On Aug 19, 2006 Emerald_Lexus wrote: | Unpublish| Delete

aww...so sad...can't wait for the next chapter...

On Aug 19, 2006 lexique wrote: | Unpublish| Delete

that was quite kwl, i loved the sudden death of her husband. very un-expected! lol. your english is quite good, but it was tooo short! cant wait until the next part

On Aug 20, 2006 evi wrote: | Unpublish| Delete

Very very good story. Smart shots. Congratulations

On Aug 20, 2006 Little Seer wrote: | Unpublish| Delete

Interesting!

On Aug 21, 2006 BBKZ wrote: | Unpublish| Delete

--> lexique... This was my first story. I had some problems with Story Wizard and I only wanted to check if SW is working well now .... Thank you all for these comments

On Aug 21, 2006 *louise* wrote: | Unpublish| Delete

I know this sounds cruel, but I couldn't help giggling when her husband was suddenly underneath the car! I'm looking forward to reading chapter 2. Also, your english was fine...no need to apologise.

On Aug 21, 2006 Sergeykins332 wrote: | Unpublish| Delete

i like the car acident ~Serge

On Aug 31, 2006 SimsBarbie wrote: | Unpublish| Delete

Creepy...i like this begining.

On Sep 19, 2006 Adira wrote: | Unpublish| Delete

Good story. Liked it. Hope for more!

On Oct 14, 2006 Mistress Useless wrote: | Unpublish| Delete

pretty good beginning!

On Nov 21, 2006 MoriaG wrote: | Unpublish| Delete

Love the screenshots!! and how in the world did you get the car to run over him. too funny, like he just stood there and didnt run, hehehe, great nightmare pictures.

On Dec 13, 2006 manuela55 wrote: | Unpublish| Delete

On Dec 24, 2006 civetinja wrote: | Unpublish| Delete

Thanks !

On Jan 25, 2007 Evee3 wrote: | Unpublish| Delete

kool, how did you get the person under the car? how did you get the skeleton in the coffin? and why didn't the ghost have any hand s or skin or anything? anyways, 5.0

On Feb 28, 2007 Palina wrote: | Unpublish| Delete

Very cool story...Thank you!!

On Mar 27, 2007 jerif wrote: | Unpublish| Delete

On Jun 11, 2007 zmrozona wrote: | Unpublish| Delete

bardzo fajne, ale czy bedzie kolejna czesc? podobaja mi sie zdjecia i rozumiem podpisy ( ja robie postepy ^^') Super ale mi si? podoba ta emota

On Jun 11, 2007 md198 wrote: | Unpublish| Delete

Short...but to the point

On Jun 20, 2007 spacemouse wrote: | Unpublish| Delete

Very nice story. Thanks for sharing.

On Feb 12, 2008 ulis wrote: | Unpublish| Delete

very good !!!

On Jul 29, 2008 Sxylady_1978 wrote: | Unpublish| Delete

scary stroy

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