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• Nightmares...

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By BBKZ | Created: Nov 22, 2009

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Martin and Sidney have known each other since high school. They've fallen in love and bought cute house...

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  • 1
  • Martin and Sidney have known each other since high school. They've fallen in love and bought cute house...
  • 2
  • They were so happy together. Their friends have always wanted to dance on their wedding ;-)
  • 3
  • Soon they decided to get engaged. Sidney was the happiest woman in the universe...
  • 4
  • Her sister - Helen - has just told: 'I knew that! That's the guy for you! Congratulations!'
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  • And she started to cook all the best for her sister wedding...
  • 6
  • Sidney has had red dress. 'It's because of my love. My love is so hot!' - she said.
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  • But one day...
    'Oh my God! I've got so bad feelings! Something's gonna happen' - she screamed.
  • 8
  • Martin was going to work when it happened :-(
    'Noooo! Watch out! - he was afraid.
  • 9
  • Martin has car accident. The driver was drunk and ran away from crime scene...
  • 10
  • Sidney couldn't stop crying...
  • 11
  • After few weeks with insomnia she fell asleep.
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  • She dreamed about weird room with death body of her husband...
  • 13
  • It was so terrible!
    'Aaaaaaa!' Nooooo!'
    She saw skeleton of Martin...
  • 14
  • Martin's ghost visited her. He wanted to help her but he couldn't.
    'Why me? Sidney needs me. God, why me? - he was so depressed...
    ...
    Will he find some possibility for making her wife happy?
    ...
    See it soon...

40 Comment(s)

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On Aug 13, 2006 BBKZ wrote:
That's my first story, so forgive me - it's short and my English is not so good. But next parts will be longer and more interesting... Hope you'll like it :-) Enjoy!
On Aug 17, 2006 TheaDidia wrote:
I like it! The pictures are well done!
On Aug 17, 2006 vkd wrote:
Cool but eerie!
On Aug 17, 2006 zlsuter wrote:
great story
On Aug 17, 2006 toripitt wrote:
wiked cool asome story
On Aug 17, 2006 BBKZ wrote:
Thanks for your comments
On Aug 17, 2006 boogerbrat101 wrote:
great story i rate it a 5
On Aug 17, 2006 treenasims wrote:
Good story beginning can't wait to see the next chapter.
On Aug 17, 2006 kkffoo wrote:
Spooky, great car accident shot!
On Aug 17, 2006 TheMistress666 wrote:
I do like the stories when they done go on for ages... Nice small chapters are great! cant wait to see the next one!
On Aug 17, 2006 Olga2102 wrote:
WOW! Cool story!
On Aug 17, 2006 greedy wrote:
Good stuff cant wait for part 2
On Aug 17, 2006 MandyMands wrote:
Oooo! very great and I love the screenshot angles!
On Aug 18, 2006 LilyoftheValleyICE wrote:
Wow weird, lol. Interesting start ^^
On Aug 18, 2006 BBKZ wrote:
Thanks one more time I'm glad you like this story
On Aug 18, 2006 Wigwog wrote:
It was cool!
On Aug 18, 2006 carol84 wrote:
I think it's nice and sad. I want more....
On Aug 18, 2006 BBKZ wrote:
I will upload next chapter soon So don't worry - it'll be next parts I hope - more interesting and maybe more scary
On Aug 18, 2006 slime wrote:
short but good
On Aug 19, 2006 Emerald_Lexus wrote:
aww...so sad...can't wait for the next chapter...
On Aug 19, 2006 lexique wrote:
that was quite kwl, i loved the sudden death of her husband. very un-expected! lol. your english is quite good, but it was tooo short! cant wait until the next part
On Aug 20, 2006 evi wrote:
Very very good story. Smart shots. Congratulations
On Aug 20, 2006 Little Seer wrote:
Interesting!
On Aug 21, 2006 BBKZ wrote:
--> lexique... This was my first story. I had some problems with Story Wizard and I only wanted to check if SW is working well now .... Thank you all for these comments
On Aug 21, 2006 *louise* wrote:
I know this sounds cruel, but I couldn't help giggling when her husband was suddenly underneath the car! I'm looking forward to reading chapter 2. Also, your english was fine...no need to apologise.
On Aug 21, 2006 Sergeykins332 wrote:
i like the car acident ~Serge
On Aug 31, 2006 SimsBarbie wrote:
Creepy...i like this begining.
On Sep 19, 2006 Adira wrote:
Good story. Liked it. Hope for more!
On Oct 14, 2006 Mistress Useless wrote:
pretty good beginning!
On Nov 21, 2006 MoriaG wrote:
Love the screenshots!! and how in the world did you get the car to run over him. too funny, like he just stood there and didnt run, hehehe, great nightmare pictures.
On Dec 13, 2006 manuela55 wrote:
On Dec 24, 2006 civetinja wrote:
Thanks !
On Jan 25, 2007 Evee3 wrote:
kool, how did you get the person under the car? how did you get the skeleton in the coffin? and why didn't the ghost have any hand s or skin or anything? anyways, 5.0
On Feb 28, 2007 Palina wrote:
Very cool story...Thank you!!
On Mar 27, 2007 jerif wrote:
On Jun 11, 2007 zmrozona wrote:
bardzo fajne, ale czy bedzie kolejna czesc? podobaja mi sie zdjecia i rozumiem podpisy ( ja robie postepy ^^') Super ale mi si? podoba ta emota
On Jun 11, 2007 md198 wrote:
Short...but to the point
On Jun 20, 2007 spacemouse wrote:
Very nice story. Thanks for sharing.
On Feb 12, 2008 ulis wrote:
very good !!!
On Jul 29, 2008 Sxylady_1978 wrote:
scary stroy

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