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By BBKZ | Created: Nov 23, 2009

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This is story 'bout young marriage - Sarah and Archie. He is great doctor with high ambitions and she is policewoman. Few monts ago they bought new house...

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    • This is story 'bout young marriage - Sarah and Archie. He is great doctor with high ambitions and she is policewoman. Few monts ago they bought new house...
  • 2
    • After furnishing their new home, they had much of fun :-)

    - Oh! Look who's going to us! - screamed Archie.
  • 3
    • Archie's father wanted to visited them. He came with Archie's cousins - Geena, Layla and Chris.
  • 4
    • - Do you have any plans for the future? - Layla asked.
    - Well, we spent lot of money to build this house. I think I will work harder at Police Station - Sarah said.
    - Oh, yes. We need to have money to pay all these bills - Archie added.
  • 5
    • Sarah made lobster for dinner. She was so happy that their guests liked their house.
  • 6
    • - What do you want for dessert? Do you like berry pie?
  • 7
    • - Mmmm, it's delicious!
  • 8
    • They've been eating, talking all afternoon. Sarah was a bit tired. But Geena and Chris were having fun and they didn't want to go home.
  • 9
    • Archie took all dishes and started to clean.
  • 10
    • Geena and George spent their time really fantastic. They had pillow fight with... Sarah's new pillows!
  • 11
    • - Hey! What are you doing? These are my new pillows! Don't make that mess in my house! - Sarah screamed. She was really mad at her guests. - Go home. You aren't polite.
  • 12
    • - Aaawwww.

    Few minute relax.
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    • And then...

    - Honey. Don't worry 'bout those pillows. They only wanted to have great time and have some fun. It's ok now. - Archie explained.
    - Oh', Archie. This was long day. I was exhausted. Kiss me and let's go to get some sleep...
  • 14
    • This was really long day but also long night. They had many great dreams...
  • 15
    • But Sarah woke up at midnight.

    - OMG. What is going on? I don't feel good.
  • 16
    • - Am I sick? Or... Am I pregnant?
  • 17
    • - My, oh' my... I think this is not sickness. I will have big pregnancy belly!
  • 18
    • Next day she went to her doctor. He told her:

    - Yes, you have right - you're going to have baby.
  • 19
    • That day she decided to do some exercises. She need to be fit. Pregnancy isn't just a big happiness. It's a hard work!
  • 20
    • For example: many visits in bathroom.

    - Yuck. I hate that - Sarah complained.
  • 21
    • But she was really happy! Doctor said that the baby is healthy and everything was going fine.
  • 22
    • Her pregnancy belly was not so big yet but she felt that she was tired of all of this... It was middle of the summer, temperature was so high. She was going out the house only for paying the bills.
  • 23
    • Next day she called to her favorite shop.

    - Do you have maternity clothes? Yes, yes. I'm expecting a baby and... most of my clothes doesn't fit me now.
  • 24
    • She was waiting for a taxi...
  • 25
    • - OMG! Could you drive slower? I'm pregnant and I'm sick! - Sarah wasn't feel good after travel.
  • 26
    • She found many nice clothes for her.
  • 27
    • - Well. I'm fat, but I'm still beautiful - Sarah said.
  • 28
    • She tried to prepare well for giving a birth of healthy child.
  • 29
    • She'd been doing many exercises.
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    • But one day she made dinner... And it started to fire in the kitchen...
  • 31
    • - OMG! Archie! Help! - Sarah screamed.
  • 32
    • - It's OK, darling. But remember to be careful.
  • 33
    • That evening Archie wanted to do something special for his wife...
  • 34
    • He turned on the music and asked her to dance.

    - Archie, I'm a bit crazy but you love me, don't you?
  • 35
    • - Oh, yes! You're the best wife on the world!
  • 36
    • But nice evening has ended...

    - Archie, I think it's time! Baby is coming...
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    • Sarah went to the hospital. Time was ticking away and Archie had to go to work. But after he went home, phone called...

    - Mr. Archie Brown? It's Clara Smith from St John Hospital. We have some great news for you.

    Archie knew what this lady wanted to tell him.

    - Is it a boy or a girl? - he asked.

    ...........
    If you like this story (I hope), you will have to wait for the next chapter...
    ...........

86 Comment(s)

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On Sep 30, 2006 BBKZ wrote:
I want to apologize for my English. I'm foreigner and I don't speak this language so well But... enjoy while reading my story!
On Sep 30, 2006 kellik wrote:
good story, cant wait to see what she has, i love the maternity clothes, where did u get them ?
On Sep 30, 2006 leahcm wrote:
Don't worry, your english is fine! Great story and I can't wait for part 2.
On Sep 30, 2006 nea200pl wrote:
Don't worry about your english - it's absolutely fine. Your story is great and well done. I'm waiting for part II.
On Sep 30, 2006 nenna222 wrote:
This was a very cute story! I cannot wait for the next chapter!
On Sep 30, 2006 boogerbrat101 wrote:
That was excellant i give it a 5
On Sep 30, 2006 LaurieR wrote:
Really cute! I will be watching for part 2.
On Sep 30, 2006 evi wrote:
Beautiful story BBKZ! For me your English was just Perfect i liked the story. It was simple and common but you did a great presentation. Great shots and... how lovely Sunair's items look!
On Sep 30, 2006 vanessa190371 wrote:
interesting
On Sep 30, 2006 caclark wrote:
On Sep 30, 2006 DElyMyth wrote:
Great Story, but I'm curious and I'll try to guess... will she have twins? (ok, I'll wait for part 2).
On Sep 30, 2006 millie80 wrote:
Your english is good - don't worry! Good story too!
On Sep 30, 2006 Dragoness300779 wrote:
Your English is fine, it is a great story! I shall keep looking to make sure I don't miss chapter 2!
On Sep 30, 2006 Zaylia wrote:
Great story, you doing a wonderfuljob with it and can't wait until part 2. I have a feeling that she is going to have twins, one of each. Can't wait to see what happens next.
On Oct 1, 2006 gonein60 wrote:
terrific story, way to go.
On Oct 1, 2006 haesle wrote:
terific story....
On Oct 1, 2006 darkangelsoul wrote:
On Oct 1, 2006 Gileswench wrote:
And? AND???? You've got me on tenterhooks! Thanks for sharing. I can't wait to read the next part.
On Oct 1, 2006 kidnumber48 wrote:
Where did you get the maternity outfits? Are they on this site? My sims have a horrible habit of wearing the same outfit all the time. Very vivid shots and considering the simplicity of the story, strangely riveting. I look forward to seeing the baby or babies in all their vivid gorgeousness! I think I'll give it "foive".
On Oct 1, 2006 Riverwillows wrote:
Huh, you speak and spell English better than a lot of people born in the USA. (Yes, I am native Californian.) Good story so far.
On Oct 1, 2006 blindboy22 wrote:
Yeah, your egnlish isn't that bad. Great Story!
On Oct 1, 2006 LIUBlueJeans wrote:
Great use of the camera! Good job. Looking forward to more.
On Oct 1, 2006 Adira wrote:
Good story. Liked it. Hope for more! (Your English is fine, don't worry about it.)
On Oct 1, 2006 DIDA wrote:
Great story!Excellent house's decoration.I want more!
On Oct 1, 2006 Olga2102 wrote:
amazing story
On Oct 1, 2006 swetex wrote:
Great stoty, it was really a pleasure to read it and of course I'm waiting for next parts
On Oct 1, 2006 gothiclynn wrote:
Great story ! Can't wait for part two , although I have a feeling she's going to have twins !
On Oct 1, 2006 Kaelyandra wrote:
Nicely done
On Oct 1, 2006 Nath92 wrote:
Hello! Great story. It was simple and very easy to understand. Can't wait for the next installement! I hope the outcome is twins! Good work, keep up the excellent work! I'll be motivating you... Keep it real, Nath92
On Oct 1, 2006 sophie2006 wrote:
I loved this story, you probably speak english better than me and your house was brilliant cant wait for part 2 and loved her clothes and hair
On Oct 1, 2006 sophie2006 wrote:
Oh and also loved the fact that most of the house was PINK!! lol
On Oct 1, 2006 BBKZ wrote:
Hi, everyone I want to thank you all for these nice words I'm surprised and glad that you like my story.... Some of you asked about maternity clothes. I got them from http://www.sims2cri.com/eng_home.php ... You should download some hack from MTS2, as I remember, but... well... follow the instructions from Sims2cri and everything will work fine .... About newborn kid... Actually - I don't know if this was boy, girl or twins. I saved my game when I took last picture when Sarah was having this pain (I don't know how to say it in English, hihi) of giving birth... So - this will be surpise for me too So... thank you all one more time I'm going now to play my game and create next part of story See you soon!
On Oct 1, 2006 cringo wrote:
great keep up the good work
On Oct 1, 2006 URULE wrote:
WOWWWWWWWWWWWW.............
On Oct 1, 2006 URULE wrote:
greeeeeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaaattttttttttttttt
On Oct 1, 2006 clcewest441 wrote:
Very nice story! I have a feeling it's going to be twins! My girl had twins and I didn't even do a code!
On Oct 1, 2006 clcewest441 wrote:
Oh, don't mean to post another comment- but I love your Sims house! Did you make it? Or download it?
On Oct 1, 2006 mvenny13 wrote:
Really great story! I loved the sets and the plotline.
On Oct 1, 2006 BBKZ wrote:
clcewest441 - I've built this house by myself. As you can see in my Downloads: I love building new lots ... Thanks once again, you guys, for comments... Oh! And you can see new picture from next part in my Screenshots There is a baby!!
On Oct 1, 2006 Minti3 wrote:
Very nice! I liked their pink kitchen Can't wait for the next part!
On Oct 1, 2006 miagirl340 wrote:
nice work! Keep up the good work!
On Oct 1, 2006 queenie28 wrote:
Great story BBK! Cute couple. The deco in the house is beautiful and I love the matenity outfits you chose. Looking forward to part 2!
On Oct 1, 2006 jaldeer wrote:
Your Story is the BEST! and I have that hari to!
On Oct 1, 2006 kkffoo wrote:
Great job BBZ, love the car-sickness shot...so true Photos are colourful and story makes an entertaining read.
On Oct 2, 2006 shady411 wrote:
great job
On Oct 3, 2006 Miyu-Tenshi wrote:
Oh, very suppensful love it!! Great job! Very excellent story! I loved the sims-goregous and goregous house!!
On Oct 3, 2006 SimsBarbie wrote:
In picture 22 while Sarah is at the mailbox, didn't anyone notice the newborn baby off to the left in the background standing up!!! lol.. Noone has mentioned that yet. Unless it's like a knome. Anywhoo, great start on the story. I am looking forward to part 2. All the pics are awesome and cool UFO shot in picture 24.
On Oct 3, 2006 SimsBarbie wrote:
In picture 22 while Sarah is at the mailbox, didn't anyone notice the newborn baby off to the left in the background standing up!!! lol.. Noone has mentioned that yet. Unless it's like a knome. Anywhoo, great start on the story. I am looking forward to part 2. All the pics are awesome and cool UFO shot in picture 24.
On Oct 3, 2006 BBKZ wrote:
---> SimsBarbie. Yeah, you're right. There is a baby in this pic. But it's not her baby yet And UFO. Wow, I've just noticed it. It's from neighbourhood Thanks for comments
On Oct 3, 2006 Giraffee wrote:
Nie mogę się doczekać, by zobaczyć kolejną część tej opowieści. Ile będziemy musieli jeszcze czekać? hihihi... Fantastyczna historia!
On Oct 3, 2006 willowswand wrote:
i enjoyed this story and am looking forward to next chapter,
On Oct 4, 2006 Salavat wrote:
looking foward to the next part keep it up
On Oct 5, 2006 zlsuter wrote:
great story cant wait for more keep up the good work
On Oct 9, 2006 darqstar wrote:
Beautiful maternity clothes. And you did excellent for someone who doesn't speak English as their first language!
On Oct 21, 2006 Elioclya wrote:
Awww, very nice - and very pretty clothes!
On Oct 22, 2006 BBKZ wrote:
Thank you so much for so many fantastic comments As you see: there is part two of this story!! Enjoy!
On Oct 27, 2006 vkd wrote:
Lovely story! Great pictures. I love those weird things like the standing baby and the uFO wonder how they got there!?!
On Nov 18, 2006 casanova83 wrote:
Great story!
On Nov 21, 2006 MoriaG wrote:
Great story! I was so into the story that i did not even noticed the baby or the ufo, until someone mentioned it. I absoluately love the pink kitchen and bathroom!! great job on the pregnancy, so accurate!!
On Dec 5, 2006 Mistress Useless wrote:
Great work!
On Dec 20, 2006 manuela55 wrote:
On Jan 15, 2007 civetinja wrote:
Thanks !!!
On May 5, 2007 bingochao1 wrote:
excellent story
On Jun 8, 2007 URULE wrote:
it i aint visted this site 4 ages now...im bout 2 read part 2 PS.U RUlE! from URULE PSS.B mi bud plz!!!!!!!!
On Jul 29, 2007 aniao wrote:
I'll give jou 5.0, great story and bautifull house
On Aug 11, 2007 rizzberry wrote:
Nice work
On Aug 14, 2007 ila73 wrote:
Super
On Aug 27, 2007 qvisn wrote:
English was good, story was very good.
On Sep 13, 2007 spacemouse wrote:
Very nice story, thanks for sharing.
On Oct 26, 2007 baybii_vanity wrote:
cool story x
On Nov 27, 2007 123456789_1234 wrote:
Very good
On Nov 28, 2007 Ariana31Player wrote:
really nice story!!!
On Dec 4, 2007 kimmyburke2222 wrote:
Very cute and well written - looking forward to part 2
On Feb 12, 2008 ulis wrote:
lovely story
On Feb 23, 2008 karolinka_12 wrote:
On Mar 1, 2008 jerif wrote:
Great job!!
On Mar 3, 2008 jadespacemonkey wrote:
Very Interesting, thanks for sharing it...
On Mar 12, 2008 kat795 wrote:
5.0!!! Really Nice Story!!!
On Mar 23, 2008 Deedee09 wrote:
Very good !
On Jul 29, 2008 Sxylady_1978 wrote:
very cute story
On Aug 20, 2008 squeakers wrote:
OMG!!!!Wonderful story, now I need to go and read the rest of it, your english is great, you speak it much better than some people I know!!!!I hope you plan on writing more stories, you have a real talent for it!!!!!
On Sep 11, 2008 Chuck66 wrote:
love your story its very sweet!!
On Sep 18, 2008 charray wrote:
Nice story
On Dec 10, 2008 Tiiiinkerbell wrote:
Very good story
On Dec 29, 2008 MelodyMaddie520 wrote:
cute!
On Jul 7, 2009 Laubhaufenxp wrote:
i love it

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