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By BBKZ | Created: Nov 22, 2009

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(if you want to know what is going on - read part 1)...

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Archie went to the hospital as fast as he could. He saw her wife and asked her:
- Where is our baby? Where is our little girl? Are you OK?
- Oh', Archie. Everything is fine. I'm tired but I'm very happy - Sarah answered. - Do you want to see her?
- Absolutely!

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  • (if you want to know what is going on - read part 1)...

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    Archie went to the hospital as fast as he could. He saw her wife and asked her:
    - Where is our baby? Where is our little girl? Are you OK?
    - Oh', Archie. Everything is fine. I'm tired but I'm very happy - Sarah answered. - Do you want to see her?
    - Absolutely!
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  • - Do you mind if we call her Natalie? - Archie asked.
    - It's beautiful name! I agree!
    - My little Natalie. I love you honey...
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  • Few days later all of them went home. Natalie was very quiet and calm child.
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  • - Natalie! It's time for dinner! Mommy will give you tasty milk.
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  • Sarah took her baby and went to kitchen.
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  • - I hope that milk isn't too hot for you. - Sarah was worried. - Oh'! Don't hold that bottle so tight! Hahaha...
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  • - Good girl. - Sarah said after Natalie ate everything.
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  • She liked spending all her free time with baby. Her biggest dream came true - now she is mother!
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  • - What a tasty belly! I will eat my little darling! Yummy! - Sarah and Natalie spent great time together.
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  • - OK. You look tired. Now you have to sleep. - Sarah was doing really great job!
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  • But she was exhausted too. She was too tired to go to her own bed.
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  • Few hours later Archie came back home from work.
    - Honey! Go to bed. You don't look good. Please, you also have to relax. I will spend some time with our daughter.
    - All right. But I only want to be good mother.
    - You are. Trust me: you are.
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  • Sarah was really tired. That was good idea to go sleep.
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  • Archie loved spending time near Natalie too. He was so proud of his wife and his first daughter.
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  • Later...
    Sarah wanted to chat with her younger sister.
    - Oh' dear. It is exhausted but I love Natalie! I don't want to go back to work yet. Don't say that! - Sarah wasn't really happy when her sister was talking like that...
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  • - Hire a nanny? Hmm. That's a good idea! I will work only 3 hours. My little baby won't forget me ;-)
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  • Sarah was thinking about that idea. She didn't know that she will need so much time for relaxing.
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  • She took newspaper and tried to find good nanny.
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  • - If you want to go dancing on some party, I will stay with your child also at night! - Mrs. Novak said.
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  • - No, no! I want to be close to my baby for a long time. I will need your help only between 8 and 12 in the morning. - Sarah said.
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  • And this was good idea.
    Few months later Natalie grew up. She was very beautiful little lady.
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  • - Natalie! I think you should try to walk normal. It's time to learn you how to walk like all people - Archie decided.
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  • When Archie was sitting on the couch, Sarah was trying to learn Natalie how to walk.
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  • - One more step. Come on, baby!
    Sarah was doing really great job :-)
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  • - OK. I know what does your 'moo moo eat' mean. But your nanny doesn't. I will learn you few words - Sarah said.
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  • She wasn't so happy when she had to go to work. But it was Friday and it was also last day at work in this week.
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  • Natalie didn't miss her mommy so much. She had great toys in her room.
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  • She was having great time.
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  • - Natalie. It's time for bath. You don't want to be dirty girl, do you? - Archie was great father too.
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  • When Sarah was coming back from work, she screamed:
    - Stop the car! Did you hear?! Stop the car! It's my BABY!!!
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  • She has right. Natalie went outside the house and she was on the road!
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  • - Oh' my God! Nat, don't do that anymore! Mommy told you few times that you must not go outside without me or daddy! - Sarah was frightened.
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  • They went home. Sarah changed Natalie's clothes. She was really mad at herself.
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  • - I know that I read you about bears which were walking in the park. But you are not bear!
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  • Natalie didn't understand why her mommy is upset.
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  • Archie decided to try to explain her why mommy was crying after that accident.
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  • - I also like bears but you are human... you are our little human and you can't do that anymore - Archie was sad too.
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  • But Natalie understood. She promised that she will be good girl now. She went to her room and played with her toys.
    - Yummy! Yummy! Tasty bunny!
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  • It was long day. Sarah took Natalie to her bed.
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  • - Archie. I'm so sorry. It was my fault. I don't want to work anymore. I want to be with my baby... - Sarah cried.
    - Darling. It was accident. But, thank God, everything is OK now.
    - But I really don't want to work. I've always wanted to be a mother. So I will be mother. Good mother.
    - All right. I have great job and my boss pays me really big money. I agree.
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  • - I love you, Archie - Sarah started to kiss him ;-)
    - You crazy woman! Mmm... I love you too...

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    If you want to know what happen next, wait for next part...
    I hope you like this chapter as much as previous one...
    See you soon! Bye!

63 Comment(s)

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On Oct 22, 2006 sophie2006 wrote:
Brilliant and natilie is sooo adorable iam gald she didn't get run over and your stories are ace hope theres a part 3
On Oct 22, 2006 spooneroon wrote:
That was a GREAT story!!!! I love little Natalie's room!
On Oct 22, 2006 Olga2102 wrote:
awesome!
On Oct 22, 2006 Gibson Twins wrote:
Watch out Natalie Cars are dangerous
On Oct 23, 2006 lilqueennbri wrote:
very sweet
On Oct 23, 2006 bflosweethart wrote:
Love it just the beggining was a little to slow but more exitment came like the toddler bear in the street! fun!!
On Oct 23, 2006 Gileswench wrote:
I love Sarah and Archie trying to explain to Natalie that she isn't a bear! LOL!
On Oct 23, 2006 ikinloosh wrote:
Great story cant wait for the next chapter
On Oct 24, 2006 nea200pl wrote:
It's a great story and very well done! Thank you for creating and I'm waiting for more chapters!
On Oct 24, 2006 Giraffee wrote:
this is the best story I've ever read
On Oct 25, 2006 blueyedlady87 wrote:
Cute story. Loved the first nursery!!
On Oct 25, 2006 PeachBum wrote:
lol, loved the story. She's so cute.
On Oct 26, 2006 veronica_234 wrote:
sweettt
On Oct 26, 2006 vkd wrote:
Hi, I couldn't find your 1st chapter so I couldn't chack if I had read it or not but I seemed to follow this one ok anyway. It is very sweet and I like the bit about the kid thinking she was a bear - no wonder the poor thing dressed up in that costume! Lol. Looking forward to seeing more. Thank you
On Oct 31, 2006 zlsuter wrote:
great story cant wait for more
On Oct 31, 2006 newmansfan12 wrote:
awesome
On Nov 8, 2006 shady411 wrote:
Great story, keep at it.
On Nov 17, 2006 Linasmultrollet wrote:
On Nov 21, 2006 MoriaG wrote:
Great story!! how in the world did you get the picture of Sarah in the car and of natalie in the road with cars? I hope they fired the nanny!! not a good one if the baby got in the road!! great pictures!
On Dec 26, 2006 manuela55 wrote:
On Jan 21, 2007 civetinja wrote:
Thanks !
On Jun 8, 2007 URULE wrote:
IT! I cant wait 4 part 3 (IM SERIOUS SO U BETTER FINSH IT SOON!!!!!!!!) B MI FRIEND PLZ! fROM URULE
On Jun 8, 2007 URULE wrote:
cLOTHES GET 10000000/10
On Jul 11, 2007 zmrozona wrote:
Dokonczysz? Straaaasznie mnie wciagnelo! Chcialabym umiec tak pisac po angielsku, czytanie juz mi niezle idzie Historia jest swietna simy tez ta dziewczynka sliczna! Czekam na nastepny rozdzial... ukaze sie prawda? I love this story .
On Jul 28, 2007 Gugała wrote:
To jest historyjka ??
On Jul 29, 2007 aniao wrote:
i love it
On Aug 11, 2007 rizzberry wrote:
Haha that's great! Does the term "his first daughter" imply something in the future???
On Aug 14, 2007 ila73 wrote:
Fajna i ciekawa historia
On Aug 27, 2007 qvisn wrote:
This part was really good too.
On Oct 20, 2007 rubberdukiepolice wrote:
aww that was the BESTEST STORY EVER!!!! 5.0 for that one!! good job. yes i read the first chapter, I rated it 5.0 aswell!! good on you!!
On Oct 25, 2007 holally wrote:
aww Natalie is cute! I loved that bear story!
On Oct 26, 2007 baybii_vanity wrote:
i cant wait for part 3 x
On Nov 27, 2007 123456789_1234 wrote:
Very good
On Nov 28, 2007 Ariana31Player wrote:
wonderful!! keep up the good work!!
On Dec 4, 2007 kimmyburke2222 wrote:
Very cute and touching story - keep it up!
On Dec 31, 2007 fishstix001 wrote:
very creative
On Feb 12, 2008 ulis wrote:
very good !!!
On Mar 1, 2008 jerif wrote:
On Mar 12, 2008 kat795 wrote:
On Mar 17, 2008 ShMehairi wrote:
hi nice story... i am looking forward for the next part I loved Sarah's outfits, they are so cute
On Mar 23, 2008 Deedee09 wrote:
Much much better then before
On Mar 24, 2008 andjelak wrote:
LOVE IT, LOVE IT AND LOVE IT!!!
On Mar 28, 2008 maryash2 wrote:
On Apr 3, 2008 lissa loo wrote:
How cute!!!!
On Apr 5, 2008 rose juice wrote:
aww i hate it when a good story ends
On May 11, 2008 neledekimpe wrote:
... and they lived happily ever after
On May 13, 2008 Miss_Nadine wrote:
I luv it cnt wait till next part
On May 22, 2008 Anime-Hearts wrote:
Aww that was so sweet!
On Jun 6, 2008 MagySims wrote:
Really Good! I love that story! Pls do another part!
On Jul 1, 2008 !Angelfish! wrote:
Great!!!!!!! loved it!!!!
On Jul 29, 2008 Sxylady_1978 wrote:
great story
On Aug 9, 2008 LindseyCaye wrote:
I loved it
On Aug 20, 2008 squeakers wrote:
Love this story, you are so talented!!!! Hope you keep going, I'd love to see more!!!!! Natalie is a doll too by the way!!!
On Aug 21, 2008 KDLANG0 wrote:
Great story!
On Aug 21, 2008 Maki`s wrote:
Wow,this is soo cool!!!I can't wait next part!
On Sep 11, 2008 Chuck66 wrote:
aw very sweet, n i love ur stuff
On Sep 20, 2008 themeparks wrote:
Kind of boring
On Oct 1, 2008 tykijones wrote:
wheres part 3 needs to hurry up
On Nov 5, 2008 pinkbutterflies_84 wrote:
great story I think I liked the story even more because my daughter's name is Natalie and I call her Nat too
On Nov 26, 2008 Rykkel wrote:
Lovedd it. You should really make more. You have talent, no doubt.
On Dec 29, 2008 MelodyMaddie520 wrote:
Haha that was so nice...I was afraid the poor baby was going to get hit by a car, tho!
On Jan 10, 2009 squeakers wrote:

Wonderful story, I love all of it!!!Your screenshots are amazing, and I love how you decorated the rooms!!! Natalie is darling, especially when she thinks she is a bear, I'm so glad she didn't get hit by the car!!!! Any chances at all there will be a new chapter? This one is a five for me!!!!

On Jan 31, 2009 ReadySteadyGo! wrote:

I like this story


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