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By Elena. | Created: Nov 25, 2007

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This is the 4th chapter of "The Story of Letta Divine". I want to thank, a very special thanks that is, to Forwardmotion for the Atlaua collection - without it my story wouldn't be the same and to all of the fantastic creators out there! It seems that in this episode we have a little tummy problem...

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  • This is the 4th chapter of "The Story of Letta Divine". I want to thank, a very special thanks that is, to Forwardmotion for the Atlaua collection - without it my story wouldn't be the same and to all of the fantastic creators out there! It seems that in this episode we have a little tummy problem...
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  • - It hurts so bad Grandma! I wish it would stop...
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  • - I know sweetheart, that pill I gave you will make you feel so much better!
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  • - I know Grandma. Next time I won't eat so many sweets...I promise!
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  • - There, there! I know what would make you feel better!
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  • - Not another cup of onion tea! said Stella.
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  • Minerva laughed and told her that what she had in mind was to tell her more from Letta's story.
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  • -Yes Grandma, you can tell me, I will feel much better, replied Stella.
    Grandma got confortable and started her story:
    After the episode with Carmine, Rufus drove Letta to her hotel suite.
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  • - I'm so sorry for what you have to go through, he said, I wanted this night to be magical for you!
    - Don't worry Rufus! It is all I have ever dreamt of...did you see those reporters and photographers and all the people in the bar?
    - Oh yes! Tomorrow every single newspaper, magazine and TV show will have you as their topic! I can bet all my money on it! I'll let you rest, you must be tired.
    - Thank you! Goodnight Rufus!
    - Goodnight my little shining star!
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  • Letta wanted to go to sleep, but she couldn't help crying. She had everything she ever dreamt of, in so little time! And now this...How could she fall in love and let him hurt her?
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  • When she woke up the next morning she found a big bouquet of flowers on the desk, just like the one Carmine had sent her before. She took the card and read it:
    " Love is the most beautiful feeling in the world. When you are in love everything changes, the whole world spinns around the one you love. In love there is no more I, there is always us. I love you and I am sorry we have to go through times like this one. I am sorry I haven't told you more about me, about who I am. I didn't want to anything from you, I wanted to take everything slow, I didn't want you to feel pressured by the situation. Forgive me, Carmine"
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  • Letta was out of breath. She now knew she was wrong when she walked away on poor Carmine last night. She wanted to make things up, but she had no idea how to find him...
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  • There was a knock on the door and when she opened the door Letta was in for a big surprise. It was Farah.
    - Hello Letta dear! she greeted her with a big smile on her face.
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  • - I'm warning you, replied Letta, if you are here to start a fight you can leave immediately!
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  • - No Letta, I'm not here to start a fight! I am here to appologise! I guess i couldn't stand the fact that Carmine really found happiness and I didn't. Rufus made me realise I was wrong and that I should mend things!
    - I don't know what to think....
    - Listen, Carmine is a great guy, he is everything a woman could want! He didn't do anything wrong, he just wanted to take things slow, I guess. And I ruined everything... I'm such a numb sometimes. Forgive me please!
    - Oh Farah! Do you really mean that?
    - I want you and Carmine to be happy! I gave him your hotel adress, I hope you don't mind...
    -I don't, in fact, he already sent me flowers. I guess I should thank you then...
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  • Farah hugged her and said:
    - You have nothing to thank me for dear! I was the one who was wrong!
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  • As Farah was on her way out, Rufus came to tell her something very important.
    - Letta!! You know that guy who was standing with me at the table last night?
    - I saw him...
    - Well, he is an important executive at one of the most successfull magazines in Las Vegas and guess what?
    - What?
    - He wants you to be on the cover of his next magazine.
    - Oh my God! Are you serious?
    - Yes, the only problem is that the magazine has to be on the stands tomorrow and that you will have to wear glam undies.
    - Glam undies? I don't know...
    - You don't have to, but trust me, it would be fantastic for your career! Trust me on this Letta! nothing like this has ever been done before, you have to do it!
    - Today?
    - Now! Farah will fill your place tonight so you don't have to hurry.Won't you Farah?
    - Of course dear! Just go and get pretty on the cover of that magazine!
    - Ok, I'll do it!!
    - That's my girl!
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  • - I can't stand Farah, Grandma, she should mind her own business...
    - She should, but she feels threatened by Letta as she has more success than she does. It's like when someone comes and takes your place...
    - Forget the place, tell me more...
    - Letta rushed to the shoot. When she got there everyone was waiting for her and they were all very nice to her. They signed a contract and after that photographer started his work. She was so beautiful in that glam underwear and the camera loved her!
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  • Meanwhile at the bar Farah and Rufus were having an argument:
    - You were the one who told me to change my attitude!
    - With Carmine, not with Letta you fool! Now you messed things up!
    - Don't you yell at me!
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  • Rufus didn't say anything else and left. He went by the magazine to pick Letta's photos and get them to her.
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  • - Rufus! It's so nice to see you again!
    - Guess what I have?
    - What? No... don't tell me! The photos!
    - Exactly!
    - So fast?
    - Well they had to be ready by tomorrow as I told you so i had them make me some copies.
    - You're the best!
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  • - Come on let me see them! I am very curious!
    Rufus started showing her the photos.
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  • -Here you go... You look so so sooo different, at first I couldn't believe it!
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  • - This is my favorite! shouted Rufus.
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  • - Oh I like this one! said Letta.
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  • - You look wonderful in every single one of those pictures! I am so proud of you! Congratulations, you made it!Wait till the magazine hits the stand tomorrow!
    - It's still a dream to me you know...
    - It's not a dream, beautiful, it's living in a dream.
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  • - That's true! I don't realize it yet...
    Rufus gave her a hug and told her that she has to get used to her new situation, that everytime when she wakes up she will be a star. He was readu to tell her something when he was interrupted by a knock on the door...
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  • - CARMINE! Oh Carmine! shouted Letta.
    - Now that's what I call a warm welcome! replied Carmine.
    Rufus on the other hand didn't share their happiness and left without saying a word.
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  • - Carmine, I am very sorry about last night! I was wrong...it was just that..
    - Don't say anything about last night, let's leave everything behind and have a fresh start now!
    - I agree with you! No more problems and worries!
    - Deal!
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  • - So what have you been up to? asked Carmine.
    - I will appear on the cover of "Sim Showgirl" tomorrow in some very glam undies!
    - Wow! Boy do they move fast! Congratulations! My girl is a star!
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  • - I like it when you call me that!
    - That?
    - Yes, that...
    - My girl...
    - Yes, your girl!
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  • Carmine grabbed her by the waist and kissed her passionately.
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  • that night was the most wonderful night of their entire life!
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  • While Letta and Carmine were together and had a great time, one can't say the same thing about Rufus and Farah. They were arguing again:
    - You really messed things up Farah, said Rufus while shoving her.
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  • - Rufus!! How could you?!
    - Get out of my sight, now! before I do something I regret! GO!
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  • - What happend? asked Ava.
    - Farah can drive me nuts sometimes, she thinks she is a big diva and has all these tantrums.
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  • - Ohh, poor baby, the things that you have to go through!
    - If you only knew! I just wish there was someone in this world who could help me and care for me...someone who would do this without asking for something in return or asking questions, replied Rufus.
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  • Ava looked at him, she was so in love with him!
    - I could be that person Rufus, if you would only let me...
    - Ava..my sweet and dear Ava...did I ever tell you you are the most beautiful?
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  • Rufus had a plan and it was working. He grabbed Ava and kissed her.
    - I don't want you to think about my problems, he said, you have to...
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  • - Stop it Rufus, Ava interrupted him, I want to be there for you, no matter what your problem is. I don't care! I know you for quite a while and I know that everything you do is always for the best interest of people around you and frankly I don't care how you do it!
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  • - Do you really mean it?
    - I do!
    - Hmm... what if I kidnapped someone?
    - I don't care, I'm sure that they deserved it! I'm here for you and as you always say " Your wish is my command"!
    His plan was working once again and he couldn't be more happy about that.
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  • He dismissed Ava telling her that he has some urgent business to take care of and he left. He was very upset with himself, with the fact that he let things go this far. He had to admit that he was in love with Letta, with her sweet voice, her beautiful face, her soft skin and with her purity, honesty and dignity. He had to have her, no matter what!
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  • When he got to the end of the dark alley he was walking he was greeted by two men:
    - Hey boss! What are you doing here at this time of night?
    - Shut up Stanley. I'm the one who is asking the questions here. How are they?
    - Hungry and crazy boss!
    - Crazy?
    - Yes, one of them lost it...
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  • - That may be good news. i will go and see what I can do this time and depending on that I will let you know what to do.
    - Sure boss.
    - Wait here.
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  • As soon as he entered the room Greta shouted at him:
    - You bastard! Look what you have done!! Let us go! Why are you keeping us here
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  • Rufus didn't say anything, he just slapped Greta and told her to shut up and listen.
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  • She started crying as Rufus asked her one more time:
    - Are you willing to sell the bar?
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  • - No, that is not going to happen!
    - Look at your sister there, she could really use some help, you know. And both of you could use some food, a good bath and your life back! All you have to do is sign that damn contract!
    Greta looked at her sister and knew that selling the bar was their way out, the last alternative!
    - Ok Rufus, you win! I will sell the bar to you, just let us go!
    - It's 5 o'clock in the morning right now, at 10 a.m. someone will bring a contract for you. After you sign it I will let you go.
    - I hope you are not fooling me...
    - If I have the bar, I don't care about you.
    - Ok...
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  • - How did it go boss?
    - Great! Just great! At 10 a.m. I will bring you the papers they each have to sign. They must not read the papers though. The crazy one has to sign the contract in which she leaves me the bar, without money of course, and the other one must sign a "Goodbye Letter" for someone. Got it?
    - You are very clever boss!
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  • - After they each sign the papers they are supposed to, get Kara in the mental hospital. When you check her in tell the staff there you found her on the street and you couldn't just live her there, after all you have a good heart.
    - And what shall we do with the other one boss?
    - Get rid of her.
    - How boss?
    - I don't care, it's up to you, I don't even want to know!
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  • - Don't worry Kara, you will soon get well..I hope!
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  • - As days passed things were great for Letta. She was the topic of everyone in town and boy was Las Vegas a big town! Her shows were the best of the best. Everyone wanted to see her...
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  • night....
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  • after night....
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  • after night....
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  • after night....
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  • Her relationship with Carmine couldn't be better! She would still wake up and couldn't believe all of this was true!
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  • - I'm sorry I have to go, it's important that I attend to my duties as a soldier!
    - Don't worry, I understand, besides you will only be gone for two weeks, I think I can handle that! I will be busy with more shows and magazines...
    - Yes, I know, my girl is a star!
    - I love you Carmine, more than anything in this world! Don't you ever forget that!
    - I won't because I love you the same way!
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  • - Are you sure you're going to feel better? Did you see a doctor about that the other day?
    - I didn't have time to see a doctor, it must have hurt because I was very tired and I hadn't eaten anything all day...
    - Don't you ever do that, ok? I am worried about you! I want you to be ok. Don't get sick!
    - I won't, I promise I will behave!
    - Good! I have to go now!
    - Take care Carmine!
    - I will, you too!
    And he left...
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  • -Autch! Grandma now that you mentioned "hurt" ... aautch!! My tummy!
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  • --- TO BE CONTINUED ---


    Will the plan of our beloved Rufus succeed? And what will he do about Carmine and Letta now that he has admitted to be in love with her? Will Carmine get home safe? Is Letta's health problem serious? Will Stella be ok? That in the next chapter of "The story of Letta Divine"

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On Nov 23, 2007 Elena. wrote:
Thank you for reading another chapter of Letta's story. i am sorry for any spelling mistakes, I know I have some !
On Nov 25, 2007 Devalyn wrote:
another great chapter I love the dresses and outfits you use, they look so pretty!
On Nov 25, 2007 cariadbach wrote:
An other excellent chapter , full of mystery . Your pictures are wonderful , Letta and Stella are beautiful. Bravo
On Nov 25, 2007 mini me3393 wrote:
I still can't see the pictures. But I'll keep checking back until I can.
On Nov 25, 2007 jaundyce61 wrote:
Yes, a great continuation!
On Nov 25, 2007 Kungfuchicken wrote:
omg omg omg omg omg!!!! I love these stories they are the BEST!
On Nov 25, 2007 Emilie Jolie wrote:
I have a feeling Carmine will die....
On Nov 25, 2007 plyangel456 wrote:
The story was just wonderful even though I only saw half of the pictures. Thanks for sharing!!! -plyangel456-
On Nov 25, 2007 123456789_1234 wrote:
good
On Nov 25, 2007 Pippa22 wrote:
Great part. Some of the outfits are so cute.
On Nov 25, 2007 candy820 wrote:
Another Great chapter. I Loved all the outfits to.
On Nov 25, 2007 mini me3393 wrote:
Yay! The pictures all finally loaded! And it was definately worth the wait. I'm seriously in love with this story. But I definately don't like Rufus. He's terrible! And Carmine better come home alright, because I suspect that Letta may be pregnant. ;D But I'll be waiting for the next part. ^^
On Nov 25, 2007 leifofdel wrote:
Another great installment. I love your work it is awesome. Keep it comming. it!
On Nov 25, 2007 qvisn wrote:
Brilliant part, there is so much to worry about, i hope the next part doesnt take too long. 5.0
On Nov 25, 2007 qasert wrote:
On Nov 25, 2007 binky13 wrote:
Poor sisters. I hope that they get help from Rufus.
On Nov 25, 2007 Karie wrote:
I'm ready for the next chapter, please!!! OMG, Rufus is such an..well you know what he is! I kind of felt bad for Farah in this one, because she's so trusting of him and then he treats her like crap. You better not kill off Carmine! I agree with mini_me, I bet she's pregnant too! You did a great job (as usual). I was sitting at the edge of my seat! How come they only let us rate to a 5.0? You need a 100.0 or a 100,000,000.0!!!
On Nov 25, 2007 curlyqlaura wrote:
amazing story. i cant wait till the next one! goodjob
On Nov 26, 2007 xxxluvexxo wrote:
liked this one as well. i loved all of the outfits!
On Nov 26, 2007 Lily Fairy2 wrote:
Fabulous!! As usual with these stories! All of your sims are beautiful and Farrah doesn't seem as much as a cow any more, and I hope Carmine doesn't get killed!! I think Letta needs some happiness! I REALLY don't like Rufus, I liked him at the start, but now he's just a mean guy!! 5.0 as usual!
On Nov 26, 2007 converse02 wrote:
WOO!! Awesome story, I've been waiting for this part to come out! At first I liked Rufus, now I hope something terrible happens to that kidd. And oh poor Kara, I hope she will be ok!! Great story, and I think Letta is pregnant!! And Farah, I think she will warn Letta of what Rufus is trying to do, and Carmine, in a way I still don't trust him for some reason.. I dont know why but I don't. Fantastic chapter! Loved it 5++
On Nov 26, 2007 iluvhorses13 wrote:
I must say, your story is one of the best out right now! I love it to pieces. Please continue soon!
On Nov 26, 2007 Karie wrote:
I totally didn't realize that you made the FRONT PAGE AGAIN!!!! CoNgRaTuLaTiOnS!!!!!
On Nov 26, 2007 Zayury wrote:
Fabulous story! Your screenshots are very clear, sharp, and AMAZING! I love all the wonderful outfits she wore for her 'photo shoot' and for her performances! I'm glad she made up with Carmine! This story is very entertaining! Excellent job!
On Nov 26, 2007 hiedibear75 wrote:
Oh my gosh I hope the sisters are rescued. It would be horrible if anything happened to them. They seem so sweet and the bar is theirs. I can't wait for the next chapter. I think someone learned her lesson about eating too much sweets. Glad that Letta and Carmine are patching things up. It's nice that Farrah isn't such a witch after all.......she just listens to that terrible Rufus. Someone needs to make Rufus disappear. Another 5.0 wonderful as always.
On Nov 26, 2007 jjab73 wrote:
Wow..now I can't wait for #5...
On Nov 26, 2007 loveisagamble202 wrote:
it was awsome need up the good work 5.0
On Nov 26, 2007 IluvLucy87 wrote:
Great job as usual! I really like this story. Can't wait to find out what happens next. I hope Stella is okay and that the sisters get rescued!!!!
On Nov 26, 2007 wickedgoddess_athena711 wrote:
aha! I knew it! farah was just faking her goody goody side! Hopefully Rufus won't succeed! But what of Kara?
On Nov 26, 2007 katty007 wrote:
Very nice! The screens are very... natural, like as if it was real life! I just can't wait to find out, what happened next. Only Rufus disappointed me, I haven't expected him to be so cruel. I can only hope, he is not a murderer...
On Nov 26, 2007 samcactus101 wrote:
Its so damn good!!! I don't have any other words to describe this chapter,,, its so GOOD!
On Nov 26, 2007 Alyosha wrote:
Wonderfully done as usual! Keep up the marvelous job! I love how things are starting to get along... and I daresay, Letta is PREGNANT!
On Nov 26, 2007 AshGreg wrote:
awsome story cant wait to see the next one
On Nov 26, 2007 goodie2shoes wrote:
Uh-oh. Rufus thinks he likes Letta, but if he really did, he wouldn't be doing this! Great part. If Carmine's as amazing for Letta as I think he is , then I'm glad they're back together! Great part!
On Nov 26, 2007 BBKZ wrote:
You take one of the best photos I've ever seen And story is so wonderful... Aww...
On Nov 26, 2007 sunny33 wrote:
great!!
On Nov 26, 2007 nyvicious wrote:
very nice story, i can't wait for the next chapter. I can't see rating this story any less than a 5.0 bravo.
On Nov 26, 2007 trolzgirl wrote:
Best story EVER 5.00000000000000000000000000
On Nov 26, 2007 Lucreecia wrote:
*-* it's a so thriling story ! can't wait to see the next chapter Your a great sory writer I admire you greetings ~lucy~
On Nov 26, 2007 OpheliaNival wrote:
This story is so way beyond great, I can't even describe... beloved Rufus needs to be taken down ! I still don't trust Farah, and now what is happening with this Ava-girl? I hope those two sisters smell the rat and get out before it's too late! Please hurry! I can't stand the wait ! Just kidding, take your time, but not too long
On Nov 26, 2007 Sara1993 wrote:
OMG, I LOVE IT!!! it's SOOOO good Please inform me when the next part comes out. 5.0
On Nov 26, 2007 dawanflower wrote:
Wonderful part!!! I love it!
On Nov 26, 2007 mangooo1 wrote:
Oh my! I hope there's nothing serious and Letta will be healthy. And poor sisters... please don't hurt them Anyway, this part is as fantastic as the previous ones. Keep up the good work, Elena!
On Nov 26, 2007 hazabaza1 wrote:
Dang! I can't stand how EVIL Rufus is! The poor sisters... Why doesn't he die sometime?
On Nov 27, 2007 lilbit4 wrote:
thank you for another great story you are one of the best we have right know
On Nov 27, 2007 Kenvjo wrote:
One of the best stories yet! Great job!
On Nov 27, 2007 xtamadea wrote:
beautiful job once more!! ohmy, Rufus is the devil in human's form. don't he have any good side to him at all, manipulating different women at the same time. I'm beginning to wonder who grandma Minerva is and what part did she take in Letta's story. Is she Ava???? Letta looks pregnant. If she is, then Rufus will have big problem in his hands.
On Nov 28, 2007 sweetcharming wrote:
one word: perfect
On Nov 28, 2007 Nenehunni wrote:
boohoo - hurry up and make the next one please !!!!!
On Nov 29, 2007 baconhead91 wrote:
OMG! these stories are so amazing! I can't get enough! poor little stella, she's so cute. it's strange, but in like every picture Letta always looks like a different person. but i guess its not. you are such a goood writer! great job
On Nov 29, 2007 sarsha2roxy wrote:
Another greatttt chapter!! Great clothes! They were all so cute >< Great work! Can't wait till the next chapter!
On Nov 29, 2007 rover202 wrote:
This is like watching a movie , I absolutly adore the granny charater you made Two thumbs up!
On Nov 29, 2007 BoodaMae wrote:
What a GREAT story--I just can't get enough! The CC is a BIG part of the story...I don't what I'd do without it! Well, good job, yet another 5.0 from me! Oh yea, thanks for giving me the heads up on the story being out--I really loved that! Happy simming with Letta && the others! ~Sarah~
On Nov 30, 2007 balletdanz wrote:
I love the storys you wright. GREAT JOB cant wait until next chapter!!!!!!!!
On Nov 30, 2007 Intuition wrote:
I adore this story! Where do you come up with all these twists and turns? They are making my heart jump and hide when I see Rufus...I hope he doesn't harm anyone, it would be a shame...I can't wait for the next chapter - even though I got a glimpse yesterday
On Mar 10, 2008 mnlynn wrote:
Great story. Keep up the good work, I will be looking forward to more stories from you.
On Mar 28, 2008 monnie06 wrote:
that was great
On May 10, 2008 MattMackay2006 wrote:
where do u get those outfits!!! ur stories are amzing!!!
On May 12, 2008 Maggan123 wrote:
Coool
On May 12, 2008 Maggan123 wrote:
OHH NOW!! Donīt sey itīs over!! I whanna see more!! Tel me when you have the next!! I must her!! It was soooo goooodd
On Dec 24, 2008 van!a wrote:
nice

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