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Hey there, everyone! I've never written a story for my sims, so I thought I'd give it a go. I decided to put all my Custom Content aside for this one, and I'm going maxis only... I hope you all enjoy it!

.:A note from the Author:.

Hey there, everyone! I've never written a story for my sims, so I thought I'd give it a go. I decided to put all my Custom Content aside for this one, and I'm going maxis only... I hope you all enjoy it! She held the ring box between her delicate fingers. I watched every inch of her face, waiting for her reply.
"Will you marry me?" I asked again.
It seemed like the whole world stood still waiting for her response. She pulled the ring from the box and held it between her thumb and fore-finger. "Oh, Samuel!" She cried, "of course I'll marry you!"
I felt a wave of relief flood through my body.

I felt her hand reach for mine, but I was too happy to register.
I just sat there smiling, and as she gazed into my eyes, I couldn't help but think how lucky I was... Preparations for the wedding began straight away. Zoe was so excited, I'll never forget the way she'd bounce out the door for her next meeting with the wedding planner, Kelly.
She wouldn't let me do anything. I think she was afraid I'd mess it up. So I kept out of it. I think the only thing I chose was the size of my suit. I remember the morning she chose the cake.
The planer took her to a sweet little bakery on the outskirts of town. They had a fairly big range and she wasn't sure what she wanted.
"Which one should I get?" she asked.
The planner smiled. "Not an easy choice now, is it?"
Zoe shook her head.
"Well, the theme is yellow," Kelly hinted. She jabbed a finger towards the shelves "Maybe you should take that one." "You are so right!" Zoe exclaimed. "I'm glad you're here."
With a laugh, Kelly replied, "Nonsense, girl! You've got it all under control. Just your bridal shower left, and then the big day!"
Zoe shivered. "I didn't realise it was so close," she said.
"Cold feet?" Kelly asked.
A week flew by, and soon enough, it was time for the wedding.
Zoe left that morning with a kiss, and I thought all was well.
I guess I'll never really know what got into her... We decided to have an evening wedding.

I remember standing at the altar. The cool night breeze brushed against my skin. Zoe looked amazing. She walked up the aisle with all the grace she could muster. But she didn't look happy.
She stopped right behind me, while the priest gestured for her to move forward. I turned to face her, but still, she didn't move.
"What's wrong?" I asked.
The park was filled with silence. Everyone was waiting for her to speak.
"I'm not getting married today," she said.
 I stepped back, even with her.
"Are you nervous?" I asked.
She nodded. "More than ever."
I reached forward to hug her, but she pulled away.
"No," she said.
My eyes began to water.
"Sam, I still love you," she said. "But I'm not getting married tonight."
I stood in silence and one by one, the tears began to roll down my cheeks. "So this is goodbye?"
She nodded. "Good bye, Samuel."
I watched, teary eyed, as she turned to walk away. "Goodbye, my love," I whispered. P.S I know there wasn't any spaces or anything, and the dialougue came out all jumbled, but I swear that when I put it together it was easier to read! Thanks for reading, everyone! =D I look forward to your comments and feed back...
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All is Fair in Love and War

Jan 19, 2009 by Jaws3
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    26 Comment(s) posted so far

    On Jan 19, 2009 jackieQ789 wrote:

    loved it is there going to be a anther part

    On Jan 19, 2009 jarlet wrote:

    cool story loved it! can't wait to read the sequel!\:wub\:

    On Jan 19, 2009 trolzgirl wrote:

    that was Nice and Sad  \:wub\: \:\(

    On Jan 19, 2009 smiley00girl wrote:

    Great! Can't wait for more!!!\:D

    On Jan 19, 2009 dqueen wrote:

    it was great! I have tears in my eyes! \:wub\:

    On Jan 19, 2009 maxi king wrote:

    \:\(poor Sam!\:\(

    On Jan 19, 2009 Earcat wrote:

      How sad!  I hope there will be a sequel.

    On Jan 19, 2009 jennnnnie02 wrote:

    Aw, this was amazing, but very sad. \:\(

    On Jan 19, 2009 muggelx1 wrote:

    A very nice story, I love weddings\:wub\:

    On Jan 19, 2009 MissJay wrote:

    That was great! Can't wait to see what happens next! \:\)

    On Jan 19, 2009 stephanie1225 wrote:

    Great part, I hope the next ones out soon!! \:D

    On Jan 19, 2009 Scarlet1000 wrote:

    ?How come she left?...that was very sad....but i like the pictures
     

    On Jan 19, 2009 vicarious37 wrote:

    \:\( It started out as the perfect love story but ended on a sad note. Zoe must have had a really good reason to leave Sam at the alter like that. I hope there will another chapter to this wonderful story\:wub\:

    On Jan 19, 2009 tykijones wrote:

    Why did she leave she had better have a good reason !!! \:\(  cant wait for the next part

    On Jan 19, 2009 tykijones wrote:

    Why did she leave she had better have a good reason !!! \:\(  cant wait for the next part

    On Jan 19, 2009 bloodtie wrote:

    I really liked that it was quite good and very interesting.  Oh and I liked the way you did the dialoge.

    On Jan 20, 2009 zucchinideen wrote:

    Great story....cant believe its all maxis stuff though, I never thought it looked good but your pictures looked great! \:rah\:

    On Jan 20, 2009 Little Cloud wrote:

    I liked it, but will there be a part 2 \:wub\: \:confused\:?

    On Jan 20, 2009 adorkable9894 wrote:

    What a heartbreaking story! I hope Samuel moves on, he deserves better!

    On Jan 20, 2009 YrS92 wrote:

    Great story, please write a part 2\:wub\:

    On Jan 21, 2009 Warrayfinson wrote:

    WOOOOOO! Great story, please tell me there is a part 2! \:\) \:rah\:

    On Jan 21, 2009 shady411 wrote:

    I hope that there is a part 2.

    On Jan 21, 2009 Livdude wrote:

    Bravo! Great work, hope to see more :P

    On Jan 23, 2009 SuperStar94 wrote:

    Awww poor Sam \:\( A great story! I can't wait to see more \:wub\:

    On Jan 25, 2009 aakerhjelm wrote:

    really good story. hope that there is more.

    On Mar 29, 2009 omik79 wrote:

    Poor guy \:\(  Cant wait to see what happens next...Hopefully we will find out why she left *hugs for Sam*

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