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Thankyou everyone for reading my story. I would like to say a huge thankyou to crystal_89! She is an amazingly awsum story writer and a great coming up with storytitles-er. Now on to the next part!

Thankyou everyone for reading my story. I would like to say a huge thankyou to crystal_89! She is an amazingly awsum story writer and a great coming up with storytitles-er. Now on to the next part! Now I rode my bike for about 15 minutes before I made it past my next-door neighbours barn, now that's the country for ya. A million things were running through my mind, what was I going to say to my mum? I haven't seen her since my parents broke up. It was a really quiet riding along the dirt roads, bits of stone occasionally got trapped in my tyre then came loose and hit me in the leg, which made me wish I had taken the truck. I arrived at the nearest town just as dawn broke. I had been riding my non-stop for a few hours and I needed a break, not to mention my butt was incredibally sore. I decided to walk into the town's only cafe if you could call it that. i walked in and sat at the counter. I couldn't help but notice the waitress didn't have eyebrows and she noticed me noticing, she laughed. "You're probably wondering about my eyebrows?" I nodded. "Well me and my boyfriend were having a BBQ at his parents house, me and him were trying to light the BBQ when we noticed the gas had been left on, so when we lit the BBQ it burst into flames and singed my eyebrows" She smiled. I wished I hadn't asked. "So now what can I get ya darl?" I studied the menu and then I checked my pocket.
"Ummmm....I think I'll go with the...flapjacks"
"Excellent choice! Do you know we have the best flapjacks in town?" She laughed. "Coz we're the only ones in town that sell flapjacks that's why we're the best" She kept talking as she walked away, eyebrows isn't the only thing she's lost...... They drowned the flapjacks in maple syrup so much that I HAD to have water afterwards. I hadn't gone very far since I snuck out last night, I thought to myself, I'd better get a move on if I don't want to get caught. I paid the 'no brow' waitress all the money I had in my pocket and left. I had been travelling all day long without taking a break and I past 3 or 4 towns. I past a park with some comfortable looking enough benches, so I decided to stop and have a break. The sun had just gone down and there was people walking by, I decided to grab my violin out of my backpack. Yes I managed to cram it in with all my stuff. I managed to find a small jar in the rubbish bin near by, and I started to play my violin hoping for tips. A bunch of people went past but didn't put any money in my jar, except for one kind lady that put a 20 in there. I strong breeze came from the....north western direction....I don't know I didn't have a compass on me. But it crossed my face and I could distictly smell the sea.....which meant I had to be close to where I wanted to be. I heard thunder crack above me, then it started pouring with rain. I was going to run under a tree for shelter but then I remembered something about lightning and trees or something, and I didn't want to risk being struck by lightning. So I just sat back down on the now wet bench in the pouring rain, I sheltered my head with my backpack and tried to get some sleep. I had my eyes closed for maybe 5 minutes when I started to hear footsteps coming closer, I opened my eyes to find a tall dark and handsome figure looking over me. I sat up rather quickly and invited him to sit down.
"Did I steal your bench or something?" He looked puzzled. "My bench? nope"
 "Then is there some reason why your sitting here?" He thought for a moment "You asked me to sit down" This guy was so frustrating! "Who are you? And why are you here? Why did you wake me up?"

 "I'm Michael Vendrate, I uhh ummm saw you at the....cafe this morning. I was the chef there and-"
"You followed me?" STALKER I thought in my mind but didn't say outloud...
"No...I....uhhhh....yes I did, I followed you in my car I was going to offer you a ride but then....I don't know" I was sooo confused.
"Do you uhhh want a ride? It's better than being out in the rain" Do I want a ride? I do but I don't even know the guy and he just expects me to go with him? What if he like I don't know kidnaps me? My head was telling me no, but my heart was telling me yes, yes, yes!!
"Sure why not?" "Cool my charger's just over there in the parking lot" I walked with him to his car, I just hoped that everything would be okay. I didn't get a bad feeling about Michael, but you never know......

Digging Up The Past: A Rude Awakening

Nov 13, 2008 by clairepitts1994
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    24 Comment(s) posted so far

    On Nov 13, 2008 butteryy wrote:

    Great part! This Michael guy's kinda mysterious I wonder whats going to happen with him in the next part. \;\)

    On Nov 13, 2008 crystal_89 wrote:

    Awesome part! Congrats on being featured, you had awesome shots too with the bike... haha no eyebrows...! lol

    On Nov 13, 2008 shelllharn wrote:

    great part claire loved it as always congrats on getting featured,the eviction is out plz read and comment thanx hun\:rah\: 5.0 \:D

    On Nov 13, 2008 zucchinideen wrote:

    \:rah\: \:rah\: \:rah\:

    On Nov 13, 2008 narniana wrote:

    Loved that part!!I can't wait for more!!!\:wub\: \:D \;\)

    On Nov 13, 2008 smiley00girl wrote:

    Great! Can't wait for more! \:D \:P \:D

    On Nov 13, 2008 mogan44 wrote:

    Awesome chapter! Looking forward to the next one!

    On Nov 13, 2008 pretty_bunny wrote:

    Cool part! That guy is freaky... \:confused\: No eyebrows lol \:P

    On Nov 13, 2008 ashleighlouise111 wrote:

    Amazing! I LOVE THE BIKE SCENCES! I WANT ONE\:wub\: Thanks for posting was a really nice story,can't wait for the next part!\:D \;\)

    On Nov 13, 2008 muggelx1 wrote:

    very good story

    On Nov 13, 2008 candy820 wrote:

    Awesome as always! At least she made a 20 so now she not broke. Hope the guy helps her out.\:D \:D

    On Nov 13, 2008 skyblue7377 wrote:

    Incredible!! You are an incredible artist.....I just adore your work

    On Nov 13, 2008 DiddakoiGirl wrote:

    Lol....no eyebrows....\:P

    On Nov 13, 2008 harvickgirl wrote:

    \:wub\: Awesome! \:eek\: No Eyebrows!

    On Nov 14, 2008 cherill wrote:

    Guess I have to wait for more, sigh!\:ph34r\:

    On Nov 14, 2008 stephanie1225 wrote:

    \:eek\: AHHH DON'T GET IN A STRANGERS CAR!!!
    lol good job\:D

    On Nov 14, 2008 Hardyfan101 wrote:

    Good job!!!!\:D \:D \:D

    On Nov 14, 2008 ~wyldchyld~ wrote:

    Great chapter, waiting for more!\:rah\:

    On Nov 14, 2008 Livdude wrote:

    Very good, can't wait for more \:\)

    On Nov 14, 2008 charray wrote:

    Great job on this part \:rah\: \:\) \:\)

    On Nov 15, 2008 ProwlerTylo wrote:

    Great story, keep up the good work.\:\)

    On Nov 23, 2008 simsnina wrote:

    Dont do it! Don't do it!
    LOL
    x\:wub\: \:wub\:

    On Jan 3, 2009 angelnicole wrote:

    Great Story!

    On Apr 2, 2009 Kvetoslava wrote:

    \:rah\:

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