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Thankyou to everyone that left such kind comments on the last part. I shall try and get these few last parts out as soon as possible, but I don't want to rush them, so you may have to wait and bear with me. Having said that I hope you enjoy this chapter :)

Thankyou to everyone that left such kind comments on the last part. I shall try and get these few last parts out as soon as possible, but I don't want to rush them, so you may have to wait and bear with me. Having said that I hope you enjoy this chapter :) I couldn't sleep very well, I was too excited and nervous to sleep well. So I decided to get up and go for a walk to the toilets. I turned to see Michael fast asleep next to me, he looked like he was dreaming. I couldn't help but smile at him as I got up and headed out the door. I walked to the toilets and walked around the motel, the whole exercise took maybe 15 minutes. I was starting to get cold so I decided to head back to the room. As I neared the door, I heard horrific screams coming from inside. "NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!" I ran inside to see Michael sitting up in bed screaming, I didn't have a clue what to do.
"Michael?!?!? What's wrong!!?!??!" I ran over to him. He looked me in the eyes.
"No!!" he screamed again.
"MICHAEL!! What's going on!!?!?" He grabbed my arm and screamed NO! again, then fell back to sleep. "Michael? Are you awake?" He didn't answer, he just mumbled some more in his sleep. I poked him slightly to wake him up. "Michael?" I asked again. But still he didn't respond. I pushed him hoping to wake him up "Michael!" But he just kept on dreaming, I could see sweat pouring down his face.
"MICHAEL!!" I shook him, and this time it worked, he woke up. "Are you alright?" I asked. He started breathing heavily and looking around him, where his gazed fixed on me. It took him a few seconds but he realised where he was. "Are you alright??" I asked him again with great concern.
"I'm..I'm fine" He smiled at me then hugged me. I don't know what it was, he scared the living daylights out me or something, but I just burst into tears. "I'm alright Nicole" he smiled at me as he put his arm around me.
"I...I know!" I told him in between sobs. "You...just scared me that's all" I told him as I tried without success to wipe my tears away. He turned around after I had stopped crying, and wiped the remaining tears away. I smiled back at him. He then pulled me closer and kissed me. "So much for sleeping in" he said as he looked outside.
"Do you want to go and get some breakfast? Or do you want to have noodles?" Michael asked.
"Hmm noodles do sound tempting, but nothing can beat breakfast cooked by someone else" I smiled.
"Alright I'll put the dishes away that you 'forgot' to last night"
"Hey! I was letting them 'air dry'" We both laughed. I went to the especially disguisting toilets to get dressed and fix up my hair. I wanted to look my best, when I saw my mother. I finally decided what I was going to wear, and how I wanted my hair to look. We got in the car, I chucked my backpack on the backseat. Michael went and paid the guy for the room, and gave back the pj's he borrowed.
"So where does your mother live?" I pulled out the piece of paper that I wrote her address on.
"Here" I said as I pointed to the address. Michael pulled out a map to find the street.
"Her house is only a few minutes away from here" he smiled. "Well let's go have breakfast and we can go from there"
"Okay" Michael revved the engine and pulled out of the drive-way. "So after this do you want to go and see your mother?" he asked.
"Well...it might be too early, why don't we have a look around for a while? I noticed there's a beach nearby? Do you want to go there?"
"Well when do you want to see your mother?"
"Sometime after lunch" I smiled, trying not to show how nervous I was. Our food soon arrived, I had omelettes, of course, and Michael had some crepes with mouthwatering strawberries and chocolate syrup, just the smell made me wish I'd gotten the same thing. We finished up breakfast.
"So we going to the beach?"
"Yep!" I smiled. I always loved the beach, but because I lived in the country, I hadn't been since I was little. We arrived at the beach, and we bought some bathers and towels from the small shop that was near-by. I put my sun-screen on while Michael started making a sandcastle. We swam in the ocean until our fingers got all pruny.
"Do you want to leave now? See your mother?" I nodded. We walked over to the showers, to wash the salt water out of our hair and skin. Then we got in the car and headed for my mother's house. "Well here we are" Michael stated aloud.
"Yeah, here we are"
"Well aren't you going in?"
"I don't want to go in by myself, will you come with me?"
So we both got out of the car and headed for the door. We walked up the path, all you could hear was the gravel moving underneath our feet. We walked up to the door, I hesitated for a minute, then knocked on the door. A little girl walked up to the door, then yelled out to her mother and walked away. Me and Michael just looked at each other. She came to the door.
"Can I help you?" She asked whilst smiling sweetly.
"I'm...I'm Nicole" she just stood there staring at me, then she looked over at Michael.
"And this is Michael" I told her "He's --"
"Her boyfriend" Michael butted in. Leaving me standing there nearly with my mouth wide open.
"May we come in?" Michael asked.
"Yeah...sure" she told us and stepped aside.

Digging Up The Past: My Mother

Dec 8, 2008 by clairepitts1994
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    23 Comment(s) posted so far

    On Dec 8, 2008 clairepitts1994 wrote:

    There's only one more part left!!\:D I'm sorry this one was so short! and if the last few slides didn't make much sense, but I got interrupted by my 6 year old next door neighbour, and she was reading everything I was typing out loud, which really confused me to as what sentence I was on\:P So I'm going to try and finish the final chapter as soon as I can, and I hope you would all like to read and comment\:\) Hope you all have a lovely wonderful day adios xox

    On Dec 9, 2008 harvickgirl wrote:

    \:wub\: Lovely! Can't wait for the next chapter!

    On Dec 9, 2008 stephanie1225 wrote:

    Great part!! Her mom didn't recognize her?? How sad \:\( \:D

    On Dec 9, 2008 butteryy wrote:

    Great part! That's sad her mom didn't know it was her? I wonder what's going to happen next...he said he's her boyfriend that is so cute! Awww \:wub\: Can't wait for the next post! \:D

    On Dec 9, 2008 robbyngirl wrote:

    Got to love kids, my daughter does the same thing. She is 13 and point out evrything detail.\:D The suspense is great! Can't wait for the next one!! 5.0\:rah\: \:rah\: \:rah\:

    On Dec 9, 2008 charray wrote:

    Very good part \:rah\: \:\) \:\)

    On Dec 9, 2008 Hunter_13 wrote:

    How could her mom not know it was her...They have the same hair color and everything...thats just sad... 5.0 \:rah\: \:rah\: \:rah\:

    On Dec 9, 2008 narniana wrote:

    Awesome part!!!!!!!As always!!\;\) \:D \:wub\:

    On Dec 9, 2008 smiley00girl wrote:

    I loved it! And just one more part\:\(

    On Dec 9, 2008 65missy65 wrote:

    omg when when he woke up i like felt so sorry for nicole i dont kno why tho love the story line x \:rah\: \:rah\: \:wub\:

    On Dec 9, 2008 muggelx1 wrote:

    very good story\:rah\:

    On Dec 9, 2008 rssheehy wrote:

    \:rah\: great story

    On Dec 9, 2008 tykijones wrote:

    why didnt her mom remember her cute little sister keep going

    On Dec 9, 2008 spicylove wrote:

    \:rah\: very nice keep up the good work

    On Dec 10, 2008 chanchan12 wrote:

    Thnx 4 continuing on And great story very nice
    \:\) \;\) \:P \:o

    On Dec 10, 2008 Hardyfan101 wrote:

    I think that you like to cut off!!! BUT I LOVED IT!!!!!!\:rah\: \:rah\: \:rah\:

    On Dec 10, 2008 Srforests wrote:

    This was certainly a lot better than most of the stories on here! I could actually understand everything! Thank you for using such good grammar and spelling and interesting plotline and good pictures and - well good everything. Thank you.\:D

    On Dec 10, 2008 elvizog wrote:

    \:rah\: \:\) \:\)

    On Dec 10, 2008 shelllharn wrote:

    great part loved it can't wait for the finale i can see it being so good \:rah\: \:rah\: \:rah\:

    On Dec 13, 2008 plyangel456 wrote:

    Loved it and they looked so much alike!!! -plyangel456- \:D

    On Dec 13, 2008 joker52455 wrote:

    Oh! You horrible person! Why did you stop there?! Such suspense! \:rah\: \:rah\: \:rah\: \:rah\: \:rah\:

    On Dec 13, 2008 simsbababii wrote:

    xD I love six year olds, and this story.

    On Apr 2, 2009 Kvetoslava wrote:

    \:rah\:

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