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Thank you to everyone who read and comments on my stories. I hope you all like this next part ;) So read on and don't forget to comment and tell me what you think!! I appreciate all types of feedback!

Thank you to everyone who read and comments on my stories. I hope you all like this next part ;) So read on and don't forget to comment and tell me what you think!! I appreciate all types of feedback! "I'm not going!" I said determinedly. "I came in to tell you that we're not going. It's your sister sheriff campbell came in just before, Lana's been in an accident the doctors don't think she'll survive" He said it so calmly that it scared me even more. "Are you coming to the hospital? I do I have to have an argument with you to come?"
"no no of course not" I grabbed my jacket and in no time we were in the car and on our way to the hospital. We walked in just as she woke up. She was alright. Thankgod! We never ended up leaving our small town, the guy my dad thought he saw was just a hilusination which he is now getting medical help for. Mum's sent him off to the loony bin *smacks hands in face* here we go again. But everything's turned out alright. Me and Rachael are friend's and everythings alright.
~The End~ Sorry the last part was so short :( But my computer is really slow and I was going to take longer to end it but I'm sorry that I couldn't. ^Random person from my other story. Sorry once again, but it's better than nothing.

Maxwell: Final

Nov 11, 2008 by clairepitts1994
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    12 Comment(s) posted so far

    On Nov 12, 2008 skyblue7377 wrote:

    very good stuff

    On Nov 12, 2008 maxi king wrote:

    \:cool\: nice\:cool\:

    On Nov 12, 2008 jayb04 wrote:

    It's cool thanks \:rah\:

    On Nov 12, 2008 clairepitts1994 wrote:

    I'm sooooo soooooo soooooo sorry!! That it was such a crappy ending\:\( but I'm glad I finished it when I did coz the lot the family was on had a major glitch and I lost them all\:\( So I can't redo the ending which I was going to do before\:\( Well SOOO SORRY!!! once again! But I'm writing another story "Digging Up The Past" And i'm making it much MUCH!! better than this story so feel free to read it and comment SORRY again!! bye \:\) xox

    On Nov 12, 2008 shelllharn wrote:

    it was still good even though it was short love your work\:rah\:

    On Nov 12, 2008 zucchinideen wrote:

    \:rah\: \:rah\:

    On Nov 12, 2008 ProwlerTylo wrote:

    Great ending. Really nice work on the whole story.\:\)

    On Nov 12, 2008 mogan44 wrote:

    Although I'm sad it was so short, at least you finished the story for us. Too bad about your lot!!! Thanks for the story though!

    On Nov 12, 2008 DiddakoiGirl wrote:

    Oh. I was very confused for a minute there, but I get it now \;\) It's too bad about the glitch.....\:confused\:

    On Nov 13, 2008 Hardyfan101 wrote:

    I am mad at your computer!!! Of course even if it was still great!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!\:rah\: \:rah\: \:rah\:

    On Nov 13, 2008 crystal_89 wrote:

    Woah sudden ending, okay.. but still awesome! AHehe!

    On Nov 13, 2008 joker52455 wrote:

    \:rah\: \:rah\: \:rah\:

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