clairepitts1994 / Stories / Maxwell: Introduction
693 Views
4.3 Rating

Thanx for....going to read my new story! Well it's kind of new, it's a continuation of my previous story Road to Greater Things. But you don't have to have read Road to Greater Things to get this story ;)

Thanx for....going to read my new story! Well it's kind of new, it's a continuation of my previous story Road to Greater Things. But you don't have to have read Road to Greater Things to get this story ;) "Morning everyone"
"Morning dad" Me and my sister said at the same time.
"Do you want to come and help me with the horses?"
"I've got to finish getting ready for school" with that Lana ran back to her room.
"I'll help" "Come on Bella" I said as I was putting on her halter. Bella was my favourite mare she was very quite and sweet. "Good girl Bella..." "Come on son, you better get ready for school or you'll miss the bus"
"Yeah, I'm going inside now.." I walked inside to find mum cleaning up after breakfast.
"You missed the bus again, you'll have to run to school"
"Okay..." I sighed. So I ran. "I thought you missed the bus?"
"I uhh did.....I got a lift with my mum she had to go in to the clinic today....."
"Whatever, are you gonna stand there or are you gonna practice? We need to win the competition" Let me introduce you to my two best friends. This would be Kate, she is a huge music nut. Ever since she heard of the battle of the bands competition she has thought of nothing else. She desperately wants to win. And this is Adam the drummer for our newly formed band. He's a great mate, and a great drummer. I can't introduce my friends and not introduce you to the girl of my dreams, Rachael. She is the perfect image for the girl next door, we used to hang out together when we were kids. But ever since we both started high-school we haven't really spoken at all to each other. "I heard you missed the bus this morning?"
"Oh yeah I did, but I made it to school on time. I ran"
"Did anyone see you??" He started getting really worried.
"I told you when I run as fast as I can no-one can see me" "I just don't want you to get caught or hurt"
"I won't, you worry too much"
"I worry just the right amount. I have to go now those cows won't feed themselves but just be careful don't use your gifts for a while"

Maxwell: Introduction

Oct 30, 2008 by clairepitts1994
    Rate this:
       

    Page 1 / 13

    More from this Category:

    Report this Story:

    If you find a problem with this story or wish to report inappropriate content, click here

    Add a Comment

    Note: Please report any offensive comments so we can remove them. Use of bad language, unsuitable links or flaming will result in deletion of your account - regardless of your membership status.

    17 Comment(s) posted so far

    On Oct 31, 2008 skyblue7377 wrote:

    good intro

    On Oct 31, 2008 crystal_89 wrote:

    Aww now we have competition, my story and yours... its on! \:ph34r\:

    On Oct 31, 2008 Livdude wrote:

    Good introduction \:\)

    On Oct 31, 2008 Warrayfinson wrote:

    Awesome work yet again. So this is the story of their kids, it looks to be getting better!
    Keep Creating!!\:D \;\) 5.0!

    On Oct 31, 2008 -kalisa- wrote:

    Great start! And I can't understand how you do it - a new story almost every day. That's amazing! Keep up the good work!\:rah\: \:rah\: \:rah\:

    On Oct 31, 2008 trolzgirl wrote:

    \:D awesome!

    On Oct 31, 2008 DiddakoiGirl wrote:

    I agree with Kalisa- how do you find the free time?!\;\)You've got me interested with Maxwell's 'gifts'.....I can't wait to see what other ones he has! Oh....I sound like a loony. Well, it's early in the morning here \:wub\: And the horse is called Bella!!!! Ha ha...It won't let me post smilies for some reason....

    On Oct 31, 2008 smiley00girl wrote:

    Awww Maxwell is a teenager now! Great start!\:D \:P \:D

    On Oct 31, 2008 katlin194 wrote:

    I really liked it..\:rah\:

    On Oct 31, 2008 candy820 wrote:

    Awesome! And I can't wait to see what's next.\:D \:D Maxwell turned out so cute.\:D

    On Oct 31, 2008 mogan44 wrote:

    Awesome intro, I want to find out more about his "powers" and I think Raechel is very pretty!

    On Nov 1, 2008 jwilmot07 wrote:

    I like it so far.\:D

    On Nov 5, 2008 jayb04 wrote:

    So far so good

    On Nov 5, 2008 Hardyfan101 wrote:

    Sorry i didn't see it and started on the newest one!!! I am get up to date though!!!\:rah\: \:rah\: \:rah\:

    On Nov 14, 2008 Murphy75 wrote:

    Super powers huh? Nice story!\:D

    On Mar 27, 2009 Kvetoslava wrote:

    \:rah\:

    On May 19, 2009 fabrizioammollo wrote:

    Chatchy intro...

    Random Featured Stories:

     
    Please wait - loading...
    Please wait - loading...