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Thank you to everyone who read and comments on my stories. I hope you all like this next part ;) So read on and don't forget to comment and tell me what you think!! I appreciate all types of feedback!

Thank you to everyone who read and comments on my stories. I hope you all like this next part ;) So read on and don't forget to comment and tell me what you think!! I appreciate all types of feedback! "I saw him today Penny, I saw Pierce"
"What makes you think it really was him, you've been seeing pierce everyday since we got here"
"I know it was him, he was real we have to move tonight" I heard them whispering quite clearly. "Moving!!! I'm not moving!!!" I got up and yelled.
"It's for your own good Max, beleive me" mum said in a hushed tone.
"We are moving and your coming with us!!" He yelled.
"No I'm not" I said as I walked out the door. I had a few minutes to myself before dad came in.
"Move over, I need to talk to you about something important" "Max there's something I should have told you a long time ago.....I don't know how to say this" "You're.......you're an alien Max" "Ha! That's ridiculous....are you serious?"
"Very, and there's people out there that are trying to find you, people who you don't want to find you, if they do there's no end to what they'll do to you" "You're starting to freak me out a bit. So I'm an alien? That's why I have all these gifts, what about Lana? Is she an alien too? Are you not our real parents?"
"No, Lana's not an alien, and i'm your real father but we don't know who your mother was" "You have to understand, that your mother and I still love you and--"
"I'm a freak! I'm an ALIEN FREAK!!!"
"Don't be like that, your over-reacting" "I'm over-reacting! Well HOW did you expect me to take it??!?! Oh great I'm and ALIEN, my whole world's changed and I'm OVER-REACTING!!!!??!??!"
 "Max It's al--" I didn't stay around to see what he had left to say. "Luke what happened to this place it's a dump??!! And nobody's here!" Kate asked the clearly stressed Luke.
"My waitress took the day off" So Kate and Adam offered to help Luke out. They started by clearing all the tables. Then some customers came in so Kate took their order and served them their meal. They finally finished cleaning and serving up, and Luke closed the Diner, but let Kate and Adam stay after all their help, it was the least he could do.
"Why don't we call Max? And see if he wants to come and have some coffee or something?"
 "Why do you have to include Max in everything! We never do anything anymore, it's never just the two of us" "What do you mean, Max is your best friend!"
"Yeah he's my best friend, but so are you! Me and Max do stuff without you, why can't we do stuff without Max for a change?"
"What's with you all of a sudden?" Adam sighed. "It's not just all of a sudden Kate"
"Can you please tell me what's going on?"
"I....I like you Kate" "Why didn't you tell me before?" "Because you're always going on about how much you love Max, you don't like me like that and I just can't take it anymore that's why I told you! I'm going! I'll talk to you later..." Adam left Kate, with a lot to think about. "Hey, I stopped by your house but your parents didn't know where you were, you weren't in the barn and you weren't at Luke's. So there's only one other place you'd be!" She said with a beaming smile. "Hey are you okay? You don't seem like yourself"
"I'm fine, just you know normal school stuff that's all" I said flatly just as Jezzabelle came up to Kate. "Okay....What is that horse doing....."
"She likes you" I smiled. "She loves carrots...." I said to Kate as Jezzabelle starting nibbling her hair.
"Okay that is one strange horse" Kate said in between laughs. "Did you know that Adam likes me?" She blurted out.
"Yeah, he's liked you ever since the first grade. How could you not know this?"
 "I don't know! Oh it all makes so much sense now!! I have to go seeya!" She said as fast as she could and left. "It's good to see your finally home, you need to get your stuff packed pretty fast we're leaving in half an hour"
"I'm not going anywhere!!!" "I know you don't want to leave and that's normal but--"
"Normal! I am anything but normal!! And I"M NOT GOING!!!" "Yes you are son."
"Well I'd like to see you make me!"

Maxwell: New Truths

Nov 4, 2008 by clairepitts1994
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    28 Comment(s) posted so far

    On Nov 4, 2008 candy820 wrote:

    Great chapter! hope max listens to his dad.\:D

    On Nov 4, 2008 crystal_89 wrote:

    OOo ooh, aww orrr I feel sorry for max, hang on *re-reads road to greater things* OMGosh thats right hes their son but the mother isn't... that his mum, oh im confused aren't they his parents both his mum and his dad because they both went into hiding and...? Okay I think i get it but i don't but the chapter was awesome! \:D

    On Nov 4, 2008 crystal_89 wrote:

    But lana was their baby and wait that was the natural born baby... aha! I see.... but wait im still confused, so wait oh no i don't.. yes i do, oh nevermind its stil awesome regardless!

    On Nov 4, 2008 Warrayfinson wrote:

    Moving?! Oh ,my! Well, I'm tuning in for the next chapter!
    Keep Creating!!\:D \;\) 5.0!

    On Nov 4, 2008 crystal_89 wrote:

    And oh thats their house! From the last story and I GET IT! Max was an alien but oh! I see it's not confusing max was his fathers son and not the ladies but lana was! sorry for anyone who is annoyed by my rambling but I just had an epifiny or how ever its spelt.... don't worry folks its all sorted!

    On Nov 4, 2008 zucchinideen wrote:

    Great installment...cant wait for more! \:rah\: \:rah\:

    On Nov 4, 2008 kezsridg wrote:

    Hmmmm, I hope Max comes around and moves with his family...I guess that means the government has found them after all those years...

    On Nov 4, 2008 -kalisa- wrote:

    \:D Great, that's all I have to say! 5.0

    On Nov 4, 2008 mogan44 wrote:

    Great chapter, I loved the last caption and screen shot, it made me laugh because it's totally something a teenager would say.

    On Nov 4, 2008 jennnnnie02 wrote:

    Another great chapter.\:D

    On Nov 4, 2008 nelsonj wrote:

    great

    On Nov 4, 2008 nonosma wrote:

    I enjoyed the story...hope to catch the next one!

    On Nov 4, 2008 skyblue7377 wrote:

    wow..super duper good stuff

    On Nov 4, 2008 smiley00girl wrote:

    I guess it must be awful if your parents tell you that you're an alien\:D \:P \:D Great part!

    On Nov 4, 2008 shelllharn wrote:

    loved it , i have only just realised that is a follow on of your last story road to greater things how cool so they told max the dark secret he is not amused \:eek\: lol i loves it loves it loves it hahahahaha my new story/reality tv special \:rah\: \:rah\: should be out tomorow so look out for it and tell me what u think and if you have any ideas let me know xx 5.0

    On Nov 4, 2008 DiddakoiGirl wrote:

    Ha Ha....Carrots....\:P It must be really freaky finding out your mother is, you know, NOT your mother.....And your sister is like, your half-sister.....\:confused\: Ok, I'm confusing myself now....\:wub\:

    On Nov 4, 2008 jwilmot07 wrote:

    This reminds me alot of Smallville mixed with some Secret Life of Alex Mac, haha. I love it, can't wait to read what's next!\:rah\:

    On Nov 4, 2008 Emilia Sims wrote:

    This is so cool!\:rah\: Can't wait for the other part!

    On Nov 4, 2008 gamrlrg wrote:

    I really like this story but it would have been better if I'd read Road to Greater Things. Still, it's a very good story but it's kind of hard to follow if you haven't read the other story. Still Good though!!!\:rah\: \:rah\: \:rah\:

    On Nov 5, 2008 Hardyfan101 wrote:

    WoW!!! REOWWWWW do you think that you could make him any mader????\:rah\: \:rah\: \:rah\:

    On Nov 5, 2008 plyangel456 wrote:

    Very good chapter! I loved it and thank you crystal 89, I was confused also and you just answered all of my questions. \:wub\: \:wub\: \:D -plyangel456-

    On Nov 5, 2008 jayb04 wrote:

    \:confused\: Ohhhh \:\)

    On Nov 5, 2008 BillsAngel wrote:

    \:wub\: love it thank you

    On Nov 7, 2008 maxi king wrote:

    \:rah\: great part!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!\:rah\:

    On Nov 8, 2008 mightyfaithgirl wrote:

    \:rah\:

    On Nov 11, 2008 joker52455 wrote:

    submitted on my b-day! \:D anyway, the story was pretty good. Apart from some random/awkward parts, the story is very well written so far \:rah\: \:rah\: \:rah\:

    On Mar 27, 2009 Kvetoslava wrote:

    \:rah\: \:D

    On May 19, 2009 fabrizioammollo wrote:

    Good job \:rah\:

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