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Thankyou all for reading my story, feel free to leave comments. There's only a one more chapter left to this story, just thought I'd let you know. :)
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25 Comment(s) posted so far
On Oct 28, 2008 Warrayfinson wrote:
Keep Creating!!
On Oct 28, 2008 crystal_89 wrote:
Yay baby lana... hmm i wonder where that name came from... anyway 5.0 as usual how aesomely awesome!
On Oct 28, 2008 candy820 wrote:
Lana looks like Maxwell. Great chapter.
On Oct 28, 2008 Salami95 wrote:
great chapter!
To short!!!
5.0!!!
On Oct 28, 2008 inge8208 wrote:
Sad to hear there will be only one more part after this. It's a very good story.
On Oct 28, 2008 shelllharn wrote:
awww how cute, as you know i love this story with the final part plz make it longer as i am going to be sooo upset
when it ends lol keep up the good work hun
5.0
On Oct 28, 2008 shelllharn wrote:
ohhh i forgot to say very well done for it making the featured story

wooooopwoooop xxxxxxxx
On Oct 28, 2008 whitmartinez wrote:
On Oct 28, 2008 misha1013 wrote:
On Oct 28, 2008 -kalisa- wrote:
On Oct 28, 2008 Valgrida wrote:
Great story
On Oct 28, 2008 gtsimsgirl12808 wrote:
aw lana is sooo cute
On Oct 28, 2008 DiddakoiGirl wrote:
Only 1 more chapter?
Aaw....
Lana is so cute.....
On Oct 28, 2008 tonya99rn wrote:
On Oct 28, 2008 wrote:
that was a great chapter keep writing! cant wait till your next one
On Oct 28, 2008 fieldhckylova25 wrote:
o ill have to go back to read the others!!
where did you get your eyes?
On Oct 28, 2008 skyblue7377 wrote:
wow...absolutly wonderfull story...beautifull screenshots
On Oct 28, 2008 Scarlet1000 wrote:
yay!!! Soo cool. shame on the last chapter my computer didn't show any piccys.... please make more anyway its sooooooooo exciting!!
On Oct 29, 2008 plyangel456 wrote:
Awwwww she's so cute. Awesome chapter! -plyangel456-
On Oct 29, 2008 Hardyfan101 wrote:
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!! Why his he acting like that!!!!
On Oct 29, 2008 mightyfaithgirl wrote:
Very nice.. I need to go back and read the other chapters so i know whats fully going on!
On Oct 30, 2008 kitfu11 wrote:
She's so pretty!!!!!
On Nov 2, 2008 ProwlerTylo wrote:
Great story, keep up the good work.
On Mar 27, 2009 Kvetoslava wrote:
On May 19, 2009 fabrizioammollo wrote:
Great part!