clairepitts1994 / Stories / The Brontte Legacy: Chapter I
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Welcome all to my new story. I'm still writing my other story "Digging Up The Past" but I have hit a few.....unsuspected bumps. I won't go into detail but there is a big glitch on the lot and I've tried a few things then I changed the lot, and it was all good but now I can't upload it whenever I try it says "Error uploading story (-165288186) Socket Error #11004" So if anyone knows how to fix it so I can upload it, it would be GREATLY appreciated. I have a few ideas to fix it, so in the meantime I've decided to write a LEGACY!! I thought it might be fun!!! So read on and tell me what you think ;)

Welcome all to my new story. I'm still writing my other story "Digging Up The Past" but I have hit a few.....unsuspected bumps. I won't go into detail but there is a big glitch on the lot and I've tried a few things then I changed the lot, and it was all good but now I can't upload it whenever I try it says "Error uploading story (-165288186) Socket Error #11004" So if anyone knows how to fix it so I can upload it, it would be GREATLY appreciated. I have a few ideas to fix it, so in the meantime I've decided to write a LEGACY!! I thought it might be fun!!! So read on and tell me what you think ;) "This place is great for a growing family, there are a few holes in the roof that could use a patch-up, and it's just gotten indoor plumbing" The man described the house with much more detail and the way he spoke made George and May want to buy it even more.
"What happened to the woman that lived in this house before us? Why is she selling it?" May enquired.
"Well she died, she had a heart attack"
"Oh my goodness!"
 "What do you think May?" George asked his wife as the the man that was trying to sell them the house listened intently.
"Well what do you think?" she questioned back.
"I think it's a bit expensive" "Daddy could always help us out with some money" May smiled.
"He didn't even approve of our marriage May, and I want us to buy a house on our own without your father's help, now do you like this house?"
"I do suppose it is quite cozy and it could do with some fixing up, but other than that...I love it!"
George turned. "We'll take it, when can we move in?"
"Well all the lady's belongings have already been sold and moved out, so you can move in as soon as tomorrow" May jumped in his arms and squeeled. She was exstatic, being pregnant and now she has a home.
"Well that's hardly lady like ma'am" said the man who had now sold the house.
 "Well if a woman can't express her feelings then there's not much point to her life" at that the man bit his top lip and walked outside.
"I love you" George whispered. Before May knew it, she was making the finishing touches to her baby room. George is hoping for a baby boy, while May is hoping for just a happy and healthy baby. Not long after May did the finishing touches on the baby room she went into labour. George panicked he didn't know what to do, he pulled himself together and called the midwife. She arrived in under 5 minutes and told George to sit and wait. So there he was sitting and waiting while he heard painful screams coming from their bedroom. After 6 hours the midwife came in. She had no expression on her face and George thought the worst, he jumped up from the couch.
"Is the baby alright??!?"
"Yes the baby's fine"
"What about my wife? Is she okay!?!?!" George started to fear for her life.
"May is....just fine Mr. Brontte" George sighed a huge sigh of releif.
"Can I see her?"
"She's resting at the moment, but I can bring out your daughter"
"A girl?? She had a girl!!" A huge ear to ear smile crossed George's face. "I have a daughter" he smiled again.
"I'll just go and clean her up then bring her to you" "Oh my goodness she's beautiful"
"She looks just like her mother" the midwife added.
"Can I hold her?" "She's your child you're going to have to hold her sooner or later" She smiled and handed her over. "She's beautiful" George said for the 7th time.
"I'll put her in her cot and you can see your wife" "Hey hunny, how are you?"
"hmmmph" was all he got as an answer.
"I'll let you rest" he rubbed his hand over her cheek, bent down and kissed her.
"I..call..her...Annelise" May managed to say.
"That's a lovely name" George said and left May to rest.

The Brontte Legacy: Chapter I

Nov 17, 2008 by clairepitts1994
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    26 Comment(s) posted so far

    On Nov 17, 2008 clairepitts1994 wrote:

    Oh\:o I've fixed the problem now\;\)

    On Nov 18, 2008 candy820 wrote:

    Awesome start.\:D \:D

    On Nov 18, 2008 maxi king wrote:

    \:wub\: nice story!\:wub\:

    On Nov 18, 2008 shelllharn wrote:

    great start how did you get your pictures to go that colour?\:rah\: \:rah\: \:rah\:

    On Nov 18, 2008 -kalisa- wrote:

    I really can't understand how you do it...How can you write several great stories at the same time??? \:confused\: Just amazing!\:D \:rah\: 5.0

    On Nov 18, 2008 Earcat wrote:

    very nice

    On Nov 18, 2008 teagiiechou wrote:

    I like it already! Love the sepia effect! \:D

    On Nov 18, 2008 pretty_bunny wrote:

    Great start! I'm reading your digging up the past story too.\:D

    On Nov 18, 2008 mogan44 wrote:

    Nice beginning, I love the effect you used on the photos. Thanks for sharing!

    On Nov 18, 2008 DiddakoiGirl wrote:

    \:rah\: I love the sepia effect, too!

    On Nov 18, 2008 smiley00girl wrote:

    I love it!!! Keep it up!\:D \:\) \;\)

    On Nov 18, 2008 skyblue7377 wrote:

    great stuff....love your story tons!

    On Nov 18, 2008 tykijones wrote:

    i love your stories u should write more often

    On Nov 18, 2008 wrote:

    WOOOW THAT SEPIA EFFECT IS COOL! \;\) AND YOUR STORY IS COOL TOO \:wub\: 5.0\:wub\:

    On Nov 19, 2008 SnowiJingleBells wrote:

    Nice job! I like the sepia effect.. makes it look antiqueish \;\) \:rah\:

    On Nov 19, 2008 Hardyfan101 wrote:

    Loved the Sepia Effect!!!! \:rah\: \:rah\: \:rah\:

    On Nov 19, 2008 charray wrote:

    Wonderful start \:rah\: Keep up the good work \:rah\: \:\)

    On Nov 19, 2008 crystal_89 wrote:

    Awesome makes it all look so old and awesome and do I detect a major drama about to occur....hmmm?

    On Nov 19, 2008 stephanie1225 wrote:

    Very good \:D

    On Nov 19, 2008 Murphy75 wrote:

    Great start!! I can't wait to read more!\:D

    On Nov 19, 2008 joker52455 wrote:

    I liked the sepia effect \:D great beginning and I love the baby's name. Annelise:

    \:rah\: \:rah\: \:rah\: \:rah\: \:rah\:

    On Nov 20, 2008 zucchinideen wrote:

    \:rah\: \:rah\: RAH!


    5.0

    On Nov 20, 2008 xtessax34 wrote:

    very good start, can't wait till the next chapter, keep up the great work!!\:\)

    On Nov 22, 2008 robbyngirl wrote:

    \:rah\:

    On Nov 28, 2008 paotreta wrote:

    Nice story!I'm gonna watch the rest right now!\:D

    On Apr 2, 2009 Kvetoslava wrote:

    \:rah\:

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