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Clara takes a ride in her family's carriage one beautiful summer afternoon in 1871. Clara often liked to be alone, and this serene river is a perfect place to reflect and rest her horse...

Clara takes a ride in her family's carriage one beautiful summer afternoon in 1871. Clara often liked to be alone, and this serene river is a perfect place to reflect and rest her horse... Two Eagles, who often comes to this creek, is completely oblivious to Clara's presence. He also prefers solitude and nature. Gingerly, Two Eagles approaches Clara. Clara finds herself not the least bit afraid, and in his broken English, they both manage to communicate very well. Clara cannot believe how at ease she feels, and how much they have to talk about... In a rush of emotion, Two Eagles sings an Indian Love Song to Clara, much to her delight..the horse however, seems unimpressed... Clara cannot believe how her heart is racing, her face is turning hot..as Two Eagles gently kisses her hand... Love blooms quickly among the mighty pines in this secluded forest... What's this? Joseph, the man who wants Clara to marry him, has followed her on her ride and watches in disbelief at what he is witnessing... Two Eagles watches in anger as Joseph spews his vemon at Clara and her reckless behaviour...What about her reputation?! Joseph turns his anger toward Two Eagles, Clara is extremely frightened....what has she done? Clara can take no more and in a move totally uncharacteristic, She tells Joseph she cannot stand him, and never wants to see him again...her life is her own...Joseph is mortified and cannot believe his ears... The dust of combat arises as Joseph and Two Eagles forgo weapons, and fight hand to hand...to the victor, the spoils.... Clara cheers lustily and long for Two Eagles, and prays nothing will happen to him... Two Eagles handily beats Joseph...in utter humiliation, Joseph slinks off his pride; and other body parts; badly bruised... Clara runs and jumps into Two Eagles muscular arms...she has never been so happy... However, realilty begins to sink in, how can they possibly live in each other's worlds? Clara comes from a rich family..they will never accept Two Eagles, and Two Eagles tribe will never accept Clara.. "We can go off together...deep into the wilderness, where no one will ever find us!!" Clara cried. Two Eagles gently caresses her face..."I could not do that to you...I love you too much..." A final and tearful embrace, Clara begins to sob quietly..."I will love no other..." she whispers.."until the day I die..." Two Eagles is overcome with emotion and runs deep into the woods....he begins to sob uncontrollably...a lone seagull his only witness... Two Eagles howls of despair echo through the pine trees..... Clara, still by the creek... wipes away the acid tears stinging her eyes... Waves of utter sadness and depair wash over Clara..how can she ever be happy again...for a brief moment, she knew true love, she knew she would never feel it again... Clara finally arrives back at her parents stately victorian home...she collects her emotions before going in...her parents must never know, they would not understand.... 34 years later, Claire sits alone playing a sad tune on her piano. She is now a widow. She married a kind man whom she did not love, but made the best of it. As she sits in the twilight, she plays an Indian love song she heard so many years ago, and thinks of the love she briefly had one summer afternoon among the pines...

Indian Love Song

May 28, 2012 by drewsoltesz
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    101 Comment(s) posted so far

    On Sep 14, 2006 drewsoltesz wrote:

    The story may seem short compared to others, but it is my first one....Hope someone likes it!\:\)

    On Sep 20, 2006 kkffoo wrote:

    Great story, loved the setting!

    On Sep 20, 2006 caclark wrote:

    great pics

    On Sep 20, 2006 confide wrote:

    A really nice story, and i love the ending. Great job \:\)

    On Sep 20, 2006 Silaks wrote:

    Great job with the pics \:D

    On Sep 20, 2006 nea200pl wrote:

    Such a sad ending \:\( - it doesn't change the fact that I love it! \:wub\: It's a great story and you had a very good idea to set it in the past! \:\) \:\) It's really hard to see stories like that around. Beautiful pictures, sims, their clothing and surroundings. Five stars from me and please bring us more!

    On Sep 20, 2006 Maya2006 wrote:

    Loved it, but I wanted more

    On Sep 20, 2006 filizk wrote:

    I like it a lot. The settings are very well done. The costumes and everything matches very well.

    On Sep 20, 2006 annicia wrote:

    Loved everything about it! Great pictures!\:rah\:

    On Sep 20, 2006 frogger1617 wrote:

    Great Job!

    On Sep 20, 2006 Lidia wrote:

    \:\) Great!

    On Sep 20, 2006 floydine wrote:

    Great story!

    On Sep 20, 2006 crmlcooki wrote:

    \:rah\:

    On Sep 20, 2006 darci321 wrote:

    The costumes and the emotions of your characters and the action made a great short story. Well done! \:\)

    On Sep 20, 2006 wrote:

    very nice

    On Sep 20, 2006 CASSIA238 wrote:

    I loved the story!\:wub\: I hope clara and two eagles still find a way to be together after all those years. Clara is to old to die of unhappiness.\:\( I sure hope you write more stories!\:\)

    On Sep 20, 2006 Olga2102 wrote:

    WOW! Really great story!

    On Sep 20, 2006 sandybvv wrote:

    nice!!!!
    ilove the characters.. the costumes, excellent job~~~\:rah\:

    On Sep 20, 2006 jerriellen wrote:

    Oscar Winner for...Best Picture, Best Costume, Best Story telling, Special Effects........ This is a brilliant story! And very enjoyable thank you.. when does it come out on DVD?\:D

    On Sep 20, 2006 neels wrote:

    Thanks, it is truly lovely

    On Sep 20, 2006 Cerulean Talon wrote:

    Very nicely poignant! Beautiful shots and nice backdrops.

    On Sep 20, 2006 LilyoftheValleyICE wrote:

    Very lovely, and totally different from other stories on here as far as I know. Love the setting too! Great job ^^

    On Sep 20, 2006 theheatmiserette wrote:

    I loved it! The costumes and setting were wonderful! \:rah\:

    On Sep 20, 2006 lia2223 wrote:

    \:rah\: Good Story, Love the Pics

    On Sep 20, 2006 Lovella-ya wrote:

    Great story!\:rah\:

    On Sep 20, 2006 SimanthaRat wrote:

    Nice job! Unique theme, great sets, good writing. Very fun. Thanks for sharing!
    \:D

    On Sep 20, 2006 DeeKaye55_ wrote:

    Love the story!!!! Love the set and costumes!!! Can't wait for your next story!\:D

    On Sep 20, 2006 Ajoya wrote:

    \:wub\: What a wonderful story! It puts me right in the mood for Thanksgiving! SUPERB!!!\:rah\:

    On Sep 20, 2006 jaldeer wrote:

    WORE Did You? Get The Hoses\:o \:eek\:

    On Sep 20, 2006 tmgoff wrote:

    loved your story so wished they found a way to be together but i loved it anyway thank you\:D

    On Sep 21, 2006 Gileswench wrote:

    (wipes away stray tear)

    That was lovely and sad. Thanks for sharing.

    On Sep 21, 2006 venusdemilo wrote:

    Lovely Victorian setting....very sad story. Sometimes we can't have what we truly want. Rated it 5 stars....\:rah\:

    On Sep 21, 2006 djehmli wrote:

    \:rah\:

    On Sep 21, 2006 mash0318 wrote:

    i would have to say amazingly done\:rah\:
    great pics \:cool\: awsome setting\:wub\:

    On Sep 21, 2006 mash0318 wrote:

    i would have to say amazingly done\:rah\:
    great pics \:cool\: awsome setting\:wub\:

    On Sep 21, 2006 mash0318 wrote:

    i would have to say amazingly done\:rah\:
    great pics \:cool\: awsome setting\:wub\:

    On Sep 21, 2006 shmoopie wrote:

    nice story and beautiful costumes! \:wub\:

    On Sep 21, 2006 wrote:

    So bittersweet!\:\( I loved it anyway ,though! The pictures were great, too!\:\)

    On Sep 21, 2006 wrote:

    It is really good!!!\:rah\:

    On Sep 21, 2006 lilgypcgirl9087 wrote:

    loves it!!! u should make them meet 34 years later get married have kids then keep going linda like that\:rah\: \:rah\: \:rah\: \:wub\: \:ph34r\:

    On Sep 21, 2006 runtsa wrote:

    great sets. well done \:D

    On Sep 21, 2006 haesle wrote:

    So sad and very romantic..I loved it...keep it coming..great work \:wub\: \:rah\:

    On Sep 21, 2006 fraslili wrote:

    OOOW, SAD \:\( . I LOVE YOUR SKINGS AND CLOTHES! \:wub\:

    On Sep 21, 2006 wrote:

    That was a beautiful story. \:wub\:

    On Sep 21, 2006 SimsBarbie wrote:

    I know what they feel....\:wub\: \:\(

    On Sep 21, 2006 zlsuter wrote:

    great story \:rah\:

    On Sep 21, 2006 savanabonita wrote:

    Wow wonderful \:\) Your story is real good!!!!!!!!!! full of emotions \:rah\: \:wub\:

    On Sep 21, 2006 bos02184 wrote:

    hoping you would write more stories like this\:wub\: \:wub\:

    On Sep 21, 2006 evetsangel wrote:

    Great story, I loved the setting and period. But it was way too short! I hope there are more stories like this to come.\:D

    On Sep 22, 2006 crayanne wrote:

    Just perfect!!!!!!!!!!!!
    I loved it!!!!

    On Sep 22, 2006 Karie wrote:

    Wow, wonderful job! I really liked it, but it was so sad. I sure wish they could have stayed together. It was a great story. I hope you continue writing stories!

    Karie

    On Sep 22, 2006 vkd wrote:

    Wow, amazing and so beautiful. You've done a wonderful job well done and thanks for sharing it \:D

    On Sep 22, 2006 TheMistress666 wrote:

    What a wonderful story! and the pictures are beautiful, i do hope you are going to make some more! \:rah\:

    On Sep 22, 2006 Tammy wrote:

    \:rah\:

    On Sep 22, 2006 DIDA wrote:

    Beautiful costumes, fantastic expressions, great scenes.\:rah\: Congrats.\:rah\:

    On Sep 23, 2006 D2Diamond wrote:

    What a sweet love story! Great job!\:rah\:

    On Sep 23, 2006 elocinpage wrote:

    Saw an image in the screenshots section and it led me here. Very cute stroy.

    On Sep 23, 2006 wrote:

    Sad story..\:\( Wonderful shots

    On Sep 23, 2006 MoriaG wrote:

    The costumes were great, i love the settings, you did a great job in keeping in era, the story is very dramatic. kind of makes me wonder if two eagles will be reunited with her now and how their lifes were when they were apart

    On Sep 24, 2006 darqstar wrote:

    Aww, a tragic romance. Excellent job.

    On Sep 25, 2006 Miyu-Tenshi wrote:

    Wow, this story is so moving! Love the pics and scenery! great job!\:rah\:

    On Sep 25, 2006 Adira wrote:

    Good chracters and storyline!\:P

    On Sep 25, 2006 wrote:

    Awwww poor Clara. This was a great story with lovely pics. \:rah\:

    On Sep 25, 2006 Tiger Lily 1963 wrote:

    Very nice story and great pictures! \:\)

    On Sep 27, 2006 Toxic_Storm wrote:

    great ending and good story..\:P

    On Sep 27, 2006 wrote:

    Amazing stuff and story idea\:rah\: \:rah\:

    On Oct 7, 2006 jstwinkle5 wrote:

    Pretty good for a first try I'd say, Loved the setting. Could have a tad longer. \;\)

    On Oct 7, 2006 wrote:

    *sniff* love that story! made me sad but it was G-R-E-A-T!\:D

    On Oct 7, 2006 netza wrote:

    Sad storie! Therefore I loke it...

    On Oct 7, 2006 Sunangel24 wrote:

    \;\)

    On Oct 9, 2006 Crystalstar wrote:

    Sad\:\( But you did a good job!\:D

    On Oct 10, 2006 lilredkat wrote:

    great job\:\)

    On Oct 11, 2006 craftylady368 wrote:

    \:rah\:

    On Oct 27, 2006 Jubilant wrote:

    What a lovely story, I do hope to see more stories from you.

    On Nov 3, 2006 wrote:

    \:\) Very sweet story you did a great job

    On Dec 18, 2006 manuela55 wrote:

    \:D

    On Dec 23, 2006 bookworm1 wrote:

    It was so sad and poignant. I still liked it though.

    On Jan 10, 2007 civetinja wrote:

    Thanks!!\:\)

    On Feb 8, 2007 Love4oneAnother wrote:

    I love the premise of this story, it's a fantastic idea. The thing is, I'd have loved it to be long with more elaboration of all the people's histories. You kinda just jumped into everything without explaining too much. Good though. I love your work!

    On Apr 7, 2007 jaundyce61 wrote:

    So this was your first story, VGood...again, such deep heartfelt emotion that you inject in your characters, I too, wish it was longer, but an excellent 1st effort!

    On Apr 22, 2007 ukiyo wrote:

    Lovely story and fantastic scenery! Thanks for sharing it. \:D

    On Apr 28, 2007 baconhead91 wrote:

    Tha's such a sad story. \:\( It was very good though. Thanks for being awesome \:\)

    On May 1, 2007 md198 wrote:

    ...\:\(

    On May 4, 2007 AnniKayna wrote:

    \:wub\: \:wub\: \:wub\: \:wub\: \:wub\: \:wub\: \:wub\: \:wub\: \:wub\: \:wub\: \:wub\: \:wub\: \:wub\: \:wub\: \:wub\: \:wub\: \:wub\: \:wub\: \:wub\: \:wub\: \:wub\: \:wub\: \:wub\: \:wub\: \:wub\: \:wub\: \:wub\: \:wub\: \:wub\: \:wub\: \:wub\: \:wub\: \:wub\: \:wub\: \:wub\: \:wub\: \:wub\: \:wub\: \:wub\: \:wub\: \:wub\: \:wub\: \:wub\: \:wub\: \:wub\: \:wub\: \:wub\: \:wub\: \:wub\: \:wub\: \:wub\: \:wub\: \:wub\: \:wub\: \:wub\: \:wub\: \:wub\: \:wub\: I loooooved it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    it's a beautiful,and romantic,and restless,and impossible love!!!!!!!!!!!! just my cup of tea \;\)
    thank you so much for creating it. lovely screenshots.
    where did you get Two Eagles' clothes? loved them. \;\) take care :P

    On May 31, 2007 eshuff wrote:

    since I've been so taken by what you've done recently, I went back and found this. So beautiful and evocative. \:rah\: \:rah\: -- B

    On Jul 2, 2007 spacemouse wrote:

    Very nice story. Thanks for sharing. \:\)

    On Aug 31, 2007 Zayury wrote:

    \:wub\: Everything was beautiful! Very sweet sad story! \:wub\:

    On Sep 5, 2007 sallyhails wrote:

    Bitter sweet story, I liked it.\:wub\:

    On Nov 7, 2007 lillith_666 wrote:

    \:D Really good, on to your next....

    On Nov 15, 2007 trilbyfay wrote:

    Star crossed lovers, a sad and beautiful story, loved it.\:wub\: \:wub\: \:wub\:

    On Nov 28, 2007 katty007 wrote:

    It is very, very romantic and sad... The fact, that it is short, is only a benefit. Such stories don't take much space, but they take many feelings. Thanks for sharing.

    On Jan 29, 2008 qvisn wrote:

    So sad but good story, you left the end open so we have to imagine what comes next, HMMM something to think about.\:rah\: \:D

    On May 21, 2008 wrote:

    A superb and unique story.

    On Jul 15, 2008 maxi king wrote:

    \:wub\: loved this story!\:wub\:

    On Jan 27, 2009 mrssittin1 wrote:

    Awwww....such sad ending  \:\(
    I liked it very much!!

    On Mar 11, 2009 Kvetoslava wrote:

    \:rah\:

    On Apr 17, 2009 wrote:

    Good work!

    On Jun 20, 2009 candy820 wrote:

    Great story as always. I loved it.\:D 5.0 here\:D \:D

    On Sep 8, 2009 RepulsiveDesire wrote:

    I really enjoyed this story. I loved all your shots and the storyline was fantastic. Really great work (like you don't already know \:P )

    On Dec 5, 2009 jsf wrote:

    I wanted to be your 100th comment on this story  \:D  Always fives, my friend, I love your style!

    On Jul 18, 2010 DVSV wrote:

    Nice story \;\)

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