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Rainee's Terrible Secret IV - ANSWERS
If you have just clicked on this story, please read parts I - III first; each episode has surprise twists which will just be ruined for you if you read this one first!
If you have just clicked on this story, please read parts I - III first; each episode has surprise twists which will just be ruined for you if you read this one first! The next day, Rainee - Mary-Anne - still hadn't told Jack - Dusty - about the letter. She hadn't decided whether it was safe yet . Who could possibly know his true identity? Were she and her son in grave danger? But then again... it was his letter, and therefore, his business. A week later, Mary-Anne's head was no clearer. As she sat outside on the patio waiting for Jack's friends to arrive at his birthday party, she resolved to give him the letter tomorrow. He was turning 13 today and she didn't want to spoil that for him. She felt confident he'd confide in her if anything dangerous was revealed in the letter. While Jack and his friends played Marco Polo without a care in the world, Mary-Anne felt a sense of dread and forboding. She had a feeling tomorrow their lives would change forever... The morning started just like any other. Mary-Anne made breakfast for Jack, all the while wishing she could shake the uneasy feeling in the pit of her stomach. As usual, Jack was taking ages in the bathroom, singing away in the shower, "I wanna be like you-hou-hou... an ape like me-hee-hee... like to be hu-u-u-man too-oo-ooooooo!"
"Jack? Jack?" Mary-Anne knocked a little louder, "JACK!"
"YEAH?"
"Your breakfast is ready honey... and I have something for you that I'll just leave here under the door." Mary-Anne slipped the envelope half under the door of the bathroom. She desperately wanted to be there when Jack opened it so she could read his expression, but she knew that would just annoy him, so she went back downstairs.
"Oh yeah!" Jack whooped. "Must be a late birthday gift - what's this? 'Dusty Rhodes? huh?" As he started to read the letter, and saw the photographs that were attached, Jack's face turned to disbelief... "Dusty, my son
This is your father, Sunny. before you go on reading, please make sure you are alone, in private, as this is for your eyes only..." "You have grown up believing we were a normal family. Now that you are old enough, it's time for you to know the truth about us, and make your own decisions." "Bear with me so I can start from the beginning. About a year after your baby brother was kidnapped, I went out to get the mail. As I flipped through the envelopes, I saw one addressed to your mother, in a handwriting that was horribly familiar to me. It was a matter so important, a matter of life in death in fact, that caused me to open the letter." "Although I had no idea what such a person could possibly want with your mother, I was not even remotely prepared for what I was about to read. " " "To my dear hen, Rainee" the letter began, "I'm sorry it's taken me so long to write, you have probably seen the newspapers by now, and understand why I fled with our son..."
Dusty, I have attached the original letter from "Leod Mcgregor" to your mother for you to read, and shan't go into detail here. As you can imagine, my heart broke to discover your mother had cheated on me, and had also lied to me about the baby being mine. Even after his kidnap, she still didn't come clean with me, she allowed me to suffer the loss of a son that wasn't mine! It was at that moment I realised your mother did not love me, and so I closed my heart to her." "I made a big and dangerous decision to leave my old life with her behind, and continue with my mission, which I shall tell you about in a moment. That day you received a phonecall from Detective West informing Rainee of my death, it was me, using a voice-disguiser. I staged my own death, Dusty, but I couldn't let you or your mother demand to see my 'body' which is why I described it as such a brutal death.
But before I continue, I want you to understand that it was not YOU that I left. I have longed for you every day, and I love you more than anything. I had to let you stay with your mother until you were old enough to make your own choices." "The truth is, my real name is Samuel Lewis and I have been Secret Agent 514 for the SIA since I started college. Your mother has never known the truth about my identity, and I guess I tried to make our life as normal as possible to protect her, and then you. This is the reason I was able to stage my own death so convincingly, as I had access to all the systems which publish death certificates and notices, and all the rest of the admin that goes along with it.
We moved to Riverblossom Hills just after you we born, because I was working on a very big investigation, searching for a dangerous serial killer. "Wedgewood Harris has been one of the SIA's most wanted felons for 15 years, nicknamed "The Chameleon Killer", he's able to disguise his character, voice and looks so completely, he's eluded us to this day. I was recruited by the SIA in college to study method acting and try to find a way into this psychopath's way of thinking.
I have studied this man for most of my adult life, and I feel I know him so well, even though I have never met him. It was his hand which penned the love letter to your mother.
I cannot describe to you to pain, humiliation, surprise and intrigue of discovering your mother had known him so intimitely, and under my own roof - under our noses! I guess I was too busy looking elsewhere I forgot to look closer to home..." "In the past year, I have spent some time as a mole in various prisons around the country trying to find information about Wedgewood Harris.
In between, I have kept an eye on you and your mother. I wanted to make sure you were safe, and I also watched your mother to see if she had any information on Wedgewood's whereabouts. It appears her research has gleaned nothing, and I am ready to move on." "It has been so hard for me, Dusty, to live without you. I have loved you more than life itself since the moment you were born and it's taken every ounce of my strength to wait until you were 13 before asking you to come with me." "You are old enough now to make your decision.
I know you love your mom. But right now, I'm not sure she has your best interests at heart, and she really betrayed us. Me especially, but she put your happiness in jeopardy too, my son.
This is the last I shall say about your mother; I don't want this to be harder for you than it must already be." "If you think about what I've said, look at the pictures, the letters, and documentation, and you decide to come with me, simply wait at the bus station after school, and don't get into the bus. You can choose any day, I will wait for you. Somebody will be watching. I will come to get you when that day comes. Pray God, it happens soon.
From your loving dad,
Sunny. " "Wow!" whispered Dusty. He'd missed his dad so much, and had wished his dad were still alive for years, and here he was! Dusty felt so hurt and angry by what he'd discovered about his mother. Just then he heard her tap on the door.
"Jack? Jack! the school bus is here. Hurry, or you're going to be late!" She was disappointed there wouldn't be time to ask him about the letter.
"Okay mom. I'm coming." Dusty ran out of the house past his mom, the letter and documents tucked safely in his school bag, and got onto the bus. As his mother waved him goodbye Dusty still didn't know what to do. Every bone in his body ached to be with his dad again, and he was so angry with his mother. He felt disgusted by her. But how would he feel knowing this might be the last time he ever saw her? He didn't now what he should do...
... to be continued ...
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On May 20, 2007 S.Cains wrote:
An amazing part! I loved it, I knew she should have opened the letter but then again... a lie only leads to bigger lies. I can't wait to see what happens next and as much as I want Dusty to be happy I will feel sorry for his mom if he leaves her.
On May 20, 2007 wrote:
Marvellous! Loved every bit of it - and some things about earlier installments became clear too, now.
On May 20, 2007 josh1092 wrote:
He should go with Sunny.5.0
On May 20, 2007 AnniKayna wrote:
...wow,it what I said as well!!! :P
very interesting implications... 
definatly!!!
very nice, also. I dont know why, he reminds me someone that I know...but I couldt say who. he's also so different! (from how Dusty looks in another serie that I read-so its kinda weird...!!! 
not a big deal, anyway).
surely *this*is* a big twist!!!
cant wait for the next chapter to be published
Dusty shouldnt worry...he can go with Sunny anytime he want,he can at least wait for the day after. and face his mother before leaving, mabye. by the way: teenage-Dusty is soo cool!!!
keep going like that,its awesome!!!
have a nice day
On May 21, 2007 Jubilant wrote:
That was really really good. I was not expecting that all! I am very curious to see who Jack / Dusty will decide to live with.
On May 21, 2007 wrote:
This seriously gets better and better with every story, i never expected that the dad was still alive! I can't wait for the next chapter!! Great Job!
On May 21, 2007 atangki wrote:
It gets better and better!
I love it! I hope the next part comes out soon! 
On May 21, 2007 marizza82 wrote:
SO IT COULD BE BETTER.....
On May 21, 2007 wrote:
He should go home and confront her about it, if she goes off her nut, leave. If she stays calm, think about it then leave. If I was him I would do anything to get away from her. 5./0
On May 21, 2007 cariadbach wrote:
Did not expect that twist to the story. I love how you have done some of the shots, great effect. Will wait and see what happens next
On May 21, 2007 wrote:
A professional story,I love work done by you...To be honest I don't know what Jack/Dusty should do,It was a surprise to see the letter was from Sunny-His Dad!!
Cool Chapter.I would rate it an 100.0 if I could!!
On May 21, 2007 marizza82 wrote:
That was my sis!!!It was the best chap!!! Samuel Lewis??? W O W
On May 21, 2007 wrote:
ohoh! Neat!
On May 21, 2007 Iceanna wrote:
The story keeps getting better and better..Looking forward to more..
On May 21, 2007 wrote:
Nice story I wonder what he will do
On May 21, 2007 SueAlJen wrote:
On May 21, 2007 wrote:
This is such a shocker! You really know how to make me interested. You just keep coming up with more and more "surprises" and new events. I hope he will leave with his father. It's not a good life for him right now. I guess I'm just going to read about it in your next part. Can't wait for that
On May 22, 2007 BBKZ wrote:
fantastic story! well done!! hope for more
On May 22, 2007 foxysensei wrote:
WHAT'S BEGINNING TO CONCERN ME IS THE LACK OF READERSHIP! MY RATING DOESN'T EVEN REGISTER AS I GET TOO FEW COMMENTS FOR THIS STORY AND HARDLY ANYONE READS IT.
THE NEXT PART IS TURNING OUT TO BE VERY COMPLICATED FOR ME TO WORK OUT, AND IT'S TAKING A LOT OF TIME.
I'M WONDERING WHAT TO DO ABOUT GETTING MORE READERS BECAUSE IT'S GETTING SO INTRICATE THAT IT WON'T REALLY BE WORTH THE DAYS AND DAYS OF WORK AND PLANNING IF NO ONE READS IT. ANY SUGGESTIONS?
BUT I MUST JUST SAY, ONCE AGAIN, THANK YOU TO ALL THOSE WHO DO COMMENT. YOU HAVE KEPT THE STORY GOING.
~ FOXY ~
On May 23, 2007 LuvBuzz82 wrote:
Just read all 4 parts, very creative and I luv'd part 4...the twist has me thinking....is this really Sunny or is it really "Leod" playing some sick game with "Jack" er "Dusty"!
As for getting more readers, maybe u should advertise ur upcoming parts at the forum and try to get ur readers involved by asking what they'd like to see have in the next chapter or if like the letter is really from Sunny, give ur readers a chance to give u input on what Dusty should do...ect...just an idea! Anyway I really enjoyed reading this and can't wait to see what happens next...Good Luck! 5.0!
On May 23, 2007 spacemouse wrote:
I loved reading it. thanks for sharing
On May 23, 2007 Magic1 wrote:
Your story is very engaging and very hard to wait for the next part. I can't understand why no one is reading, especially since I see so many great comments. Please dont give up, your story is wonderful.
On May 24, 2007 jaundyce61 wrote:
A good installment, love your screenshots!
On May 24, 2007 Lily Fairy2 wrote:
Foxysensei:"ANY SUGGESTIONS?"
I'm a sucker for bright colours!
How about you do a teaser trailer for each chapter that is just about to come out? Or include a chapter from the upcoming chapter? I bet that would get readers' attentions. It certainly got mine with the bright colours.
Excellent chapter, the screenshots are brilliant, and I can't wait for part V!!
If I could rate more I would rate you a 100/10
Keep writing, this is just too juicy to miss!
LillyFairy
On May 25, 2007 molli17 wrote:
On May 30, 2007 zeonadawolf wrote:
He's alive!
On Jun 17, 2007 alliecat371 wrote:
Wow! This is getting better and better!
On Jun 21, 2007 wrote:
I'm very entertained by this story!
On Jul 5, 2007 pretty_baby wrote:
oohhh good stories you got going on here
On Nov 12, 2007 Emilie Jolie wrote:
Idiot dad,
Rainee is upset by her mistake, why bother her? 
On Dec 3, 2007 OpheliaNival wrote:
This is the best part so far! Loved the screenshots and the way you explained everything. I don't think it's good that the dad is backstabbing the mother like that, but sadly enought I happens all the time... Sure, she cheated but there's nothing she can do now to change it