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Finally, the last part of the story.
If you haven't been reading Rainee's Terrible secret, the next 4 slides will give you a quick synopsis of the story so far. For those of you who have been following, you can skip them if you wish!
If you haven't been reading Rainee's Terrible secret, the next 4 slides will give you a quick synopsis of the story so far. For those of you who have been following, you can skip them if you wish! In Part I, we met Rainee, Sunny and Dusty Rhodes, a very normal family. Or perhaps not...
We soon discovered Rainee had an illicit affair with Scotsman, Leod McGreggor, & fell pregnant by him! She lied to her husband and said it was his baby. Leod kidnapped the baby from the hospital just after he was born and vanished... Sunny had not seen the baby, and still believed it was his own child who'd been kidnapped. The unhappy family continued to search for a year, until Rainee heard about the disappearance of a famous serial killer, Wedgewood Harris, who had been living in Riverblossom Hills under the guise of a Scotsman, Leod McGreggor! Her baby had been kidnapped by a serial killer! In Part II we saw that Rainee was beginning to go a little bit mad. Not in the angry way. In the crazy way. She got a horrific phonecall from the police to say her husband, Sunny, had been murdered! Why a phonecall, and not a visit? The murder was so gruesome, they would not allow her or her son to come and see the remains. The likely killer? Wedgewood Harris (A.K.A. Scotsman - Leod McGreggor). In Part III Rainee became obsessed with finding Wedgewood and her baby boy. She sold everything and moved with Dusty to Bluewater Village where she changed their identities. Their names became Mary-Ann and Jack Hartford. She also underwent a major image makeover so she could investigate her case without being recognised by Wedgewood Harris. We met her friend Mab, who was the only person Mary-Anne trusted. Mab had been helping with her investigation, and visited one day with news that she may have discovered Wedgewood's location. Then the postman, Sheldon Hanby arrived with a very important-looking letter. Only, it was not addressed to Mary-Anne or Jack Hartford, but to Dusty Rhodes. Who knew their true identity and where they lived? Were they in terrible danger? Should Mary-Anne open the letter? In part IV Mary-Anne decided to respect the letter was private and gave it to Jack/Dusty just after his 13th birthday. She felt sure he'd tell her if there was anything serious to worry about. What he read was quite a revelation. It was from his father. He'd staged his own death because he'd learnt about Rainee's deceit. How? He had checked the mail one day and found a love letter from Leod McGreggor to Rainee. The reason he opened the letter was because he recognised the handwriting on the envelope. Why did he recognise the writing? Because his real name was Samuel Lewis and he'd been a secret agent for the SIA since college, studying the profile of the Chameleon Killer, Wedgewood Harris. It amazed him that he'd been searching for so long to find this man, and here he'd been, woo-hooing with Rainee, right under his nose! Samuel invited Dusty to leave his mother, now he was old enough to make his own choices, and come and live with him. "If you think all this sounds too far fetched or too confusing, the stories are still available on Foxysensei's profile to read.
Who the heck am I? Nevermind. You'll never see me again. Not in this story anyway. It's only because I'm ridiculously goodlooking that I'm even here. I am not part of this story. Nor do I want to be. Might end up dead. Enjoy the rest of the story. See ya... NOT!" Dusty stood at the bus stop and watched the school bus come and go. He'd made his decision to go and live with his dad, but somehow he felt awfully sad about leaving his mother. He reasoned that she probably wouldn't even notice. She was so busy looking for her other kid that she had no time for him. Still, maybe she would worry, a bit? Should he have left a note? Well, he'd ask his dad what do do. His dad always gave great advice. He couldn't believe he was waiting to see his DAD!!! He waited a little longer, the letter still tucked safely in his schoolbag. He prayed he would see his dad that afternoon, as time was creeping by and he wondered if it had all been a hoax. He started thinking about his dad, remembering their father-son chats. As he was reminiscing, he was approached by someone who knew his name, but whom he did not recognise.
"Mr. Dusty Rhodes, I presume?" asked the man. "Yeah?" Dusty was dying to ask the man about a million questions, but he waited for the man to speak, instead.
"I am a colleague of your father's. I believe you knew to expect me. Please, right this way." Dusty was ecstatic that he was going to see his dad. He hadn't been able to concentrate at all today. For over two years he'd thought his dad was dead. He had missed him every day. He had never been close to his mother that way. Her obsession with finding Wedgewood Harris had driven them even further apart too. They walked to a park nearby and Dusty saw a man sitting on a bench by the fountain. Was it his dad? He looked as if he were sleeping. Or praying...
"Dad?" Samuel opened his eyes.
"Dusty? Is that you?" "Oh! my son! Look at you! you're almost a man!" Dusty's reunion with his dad was a joyful, yet tearful one. He could never have imagined ths moment would come, even though he'd wished it for so long.
They left that afternoon, and discussed all the changes and discoveries that had been made during their separation. Samuel had bought a lovely little cottage for them to live in, some 2000 miles South West of Bluewater Village, in New Simshire. It was waiting and ready for their arrival. They settled in nicely, and fell into their natural father-son and best friend routine. Samuel decided to keep Dusty at home for a few weeks before sending him to a new school, and he took some much needed time off work. Dusty hadn't spoken to Samuel about his mother yet. He would wait until the time was right to ask what he should do about letting her know where he was. He guessed it may be hard for her, having lost her baby, and now her oldest child had also vanished. He hoped that she cared... While Dusty was playing video games one Sunday, Samuel sat down to read the newspaper in his study. Suddenly, he dropped the newspaper in shock and started to shake. He tried to calm down, took deep breaths and counted to 10. This was going to be an awful blow for Dusty. Why hadn't he initiated a conversation about Rainee before now? The boy was probably too afraid to bring her up in conversation - considering she'd cheated on his father, and lied about the baby. When Samuel had calmed down, he gathered up the newspaper and went through to the living room to show Dusty. "Dusty... I'm sorry, boy..."
"Just a sec Dad, I'm just about to break my high score!" "Dusty. This can't wait." The sadness in Samuel's voice stopped Dusty instantly. As Dusty read the headline, he thought he was dreaming. No, it felt more like he had been plunged into a nightmare, or a horror movie.
"Wedgewood Strikes Again" said the headline.
"Two dead, one missing..." "Sheldon Hanby, well-liked civil servant in Bluewater Village, has been murdered by smothering. His body was discovered early Saturday morning at his home. In his hand he held a note... Bluewater residents are devastated." "The Chameleon Killer struck again late last night at the residence of Mab Other, a well-known and respected Events Coordinator from Bluewater Village. Her body was discovered early this morning by her live-in domestic worker, Kaylynn Langeraak who says she did not hear any unfamiliar or suspicious noises coming from Mab's Crossing last night. Mab too was smothered, and in Mab's hand, there was also a note..." "Bluewater Police are still looking for Mary-Anne Hartford who was reported missing on Friday, by Mab Other before her own death. Optimism is low on the ground but detectives say they are doing everything they can to solve the mystery of Mary-Anne's whereabouts and that of the Chameleon Killer, Wedgewood Harris..." As Dusty finished reading, he felt his heart was broken. His mother, vanished! He wished he had contacted her, spoken to her. He wished things were different. He wished he could go back in time... somehow he felt responsible. "Dusty? Son, I'm so sorry. I know you love your mother, and I still care for her. I will find this Wedgewood Harris. You can count on it! We will get her back to safety!" "Dad, what if he's killed her? What if we can never get her back? What if she is lying somewhere right now with a note in her hand? I remember, the day Mab came to visit, about a week before I got your letter. As I was leaving for school I overheard her talking to mom about the location of Wedgewood Harris. She said she felt sure he was in Forsythe's Rest." "Forsythe's rest you say? Hmmm, that's some 4,000 miles away. I'm going to have to go there right away Dusty. It may be a long shot, because this is all the evidence we've got, but it's possible he killed Mab when she found out too much." "Dad you could be putting yourself in danger! Where will you find him? You don't even know what he might look like now!" "Son I understand your fear but please calm down. Remember, I have been doing this for many years. I know how to take care of myself. Serial killers always leave a mark - a signature. This one's is that note. I need to get to the bottom of it and find this guy. I've seen the note, many times before. It's always the same poem. I'm going to find it's author. I'll organise for someone to come here and watch the property. I can't take any risks about you getting hurt." As Samuel hurried to make preparations, Dusty reflected on the Chameleon Killer. He wondered if the killer might have killed his baby brother too, and what possible motive could he have had for killing the postman? Samuel spent two frustrating days in Forsythe's Rest looking for Wedgewood. His only hope was that someone might recognise him from his mugshot photo, but he was beginning to feel doubtful. This was the Chameleon killer after all. He had probably changed his image completely by now. "Excuse me, Miss? I wonder if you could help me. I'm Detective Green from the SAPD, I'm looking for a man who is reported to live in this area. I would like you to take a look at this photograph, if you will." "Sure detective. Ummm, let's see... gosh! Hmmm, he does look familiar... who is this... let me think..." "Oh yes! Now I remember! Douglas Campbell! Scottish guy. Loves his garden. He's a single dad - got the cutest little son! Really sweet little chap." "I must say, I'm rather surprised. I mean, he doesn't look like a criminal. Is he one?" "Oh, hehe! nothing serious at all. Not serious at all. Thanks so much for your time, ma'am. Good Day."
"My pleasure. Goodbye Detective Green!" Said the girl. She was rather disappointed he hadn't tried to get her number. She thought he was rather nice looking indeed. Samuel considered what the pretty girl had told him. It seemed strange to him that the Chameleon Killer had only changed his name, but not his disguise. It was clear he was still in his Scottish character. It was a relief to know the little boy was alright though. He was curious to see the child. After a few relatively easy enquiries, Samuel found himself outside Douglas Campbell's cottage. He'd arranged a wire to be attached to his body so the SIA could hear everything that was said. There were also backup teams hidden in the vicinity in case anything went wrong - they could rush in and take Wedgewood out! The door was opened by a sweet looking girl in her 20's holding a baby.
"Good day ma'am. I'm Detective Green here from the SAPD and I'm here to see Mr. Douglas Campbell. Is he here?"
"Och, Ay, Detective. He's just inside," She said, in a soft Scottish accent. Then she yelled behind her, "Douglas you daftie! What didja dae now? The detectives are here for you. Mr. Green, please come in, it's nippy out there! I'll take yer coat." Samuel had to admit, he found the girl quite charming. he didn't quite know what to feel when he saw the Scotsman standing there in front of him. It was hard to believe this was Wedgewood Harris. He'd waited for this moment his whole career, and somehow it felt quite normal to be standing in front of this man, who allegedly murdered so many innocents and who'd had an affair with his wife. it all seemed so unlikely in this utterly normal setting. "Yeh've come tae see me, Detective? ah kin assure ye, ah've been up tae no nonsense."
"Well perhaps we can sit down and you can answer some of my questions, then?" said Samuel. "Och, detective, is this about the wee bairn then?" Worry clouded his face, and Samuel realised he was afraid he'd been caught out for kidnapping the baby. Of course, this was a terrible crime in its self, but that wasn't why Samuel was there. He didn't care much that the little boy had been taken by his own father.
"No, Mr. Campbell. That isn't why I'm here." "Oh good. Not tae worry. Not tae worry. I dinnae mean anything by it. Just a silly daftie comment any eejit could make." He gave an unconvincing chuckle. "Ainsley will make us a nice cuppa tea, awright lass?"
"Sure, ye boy's set yersevles down in the kitchen where it's nice and toasty," said the girl. As they sat down to tea at the kitchen table, Samuel asked if Mr. Campbell wouldn't prefer to talk to him in private? Ainsley, Douglas Campbell's sister it appeared, insisted it was okay that she stay, and Douglas agreed: they had no secrets from each other. Samuel found this quite remarkable for a serial killer. "Mr. Campbell, can you tell me briefly about your life's history. You know, where you were born, grew up, etc, what brought you to this country, and what you've been doing ever since?" Asked Samuel. "Well fer sure. Ah was born in Scotland, Ah'm sure ye might have guessed it by now. I grew up there and eventually followed my heart to your country aboot 7 years ago when ah fell in love with a sweet Simlish lass, who broke my heart shortly after that. Nevermind, aslaat. AmurNy ginna let that git me down! So ah moved from Pleasantview tae a lovely little town called Riverblossom Hills where ah was happy until I met this other lass, who seduced me like, and this wee laddy is a product of her. She passed away when the wee bairn came into this world ye see, and Ainsley here lived in Forsythe's Rest so ah thought ah'd come and live here, give him a place tae grow up with some family around." "So you are saying his mother has passed away then? Who was she? And your sister... why is she here, not in Scotland?" "Och, our stories are right similar detective. Green. I came here, following my doolally heart after some nasty bampot of a man. It's been a blessing tae have Douglas an' wee Boyd here tae look after. Ah've missed my big brother sir. We used tae write tae each other all t'time while ah were sill in Scotland."
"Yes, we were aware of that. Do you recognise this note, Mr. MCGREGGOR?" "Och! You know mah real name, detective!" Leod was quite shocked.
"Yes, 'Leod'. I know a lot more than you think. Now. The note. Can you please explain this to me?" "Oh, Detective. This is the wee poem I copied out for Ainsley when ah were living in Riverblossom Hills. Yonks ago. Ah thought it were really pretty, ah wanted tae share it with the lass. How did ye get it?" The note said,
"Isn't this quite meaningful?
Two young companions
With devotion so fierce
Cherished but closed
No intruder could pierce
'til like Earth & like Sky
Daybreak tore through the peers
Me xxx" "I think the real question here, Mr. HARRIS, is where did YOU get the poem, and WHY do you leave it in the hands of all your victims after you've smothered them?" Samuel had a feeling this could get dangerous. He felt bad for the little boy sitting in his high chair... Leod and Ainsley look at each other, astounded. The look of disbelief and misunderstanding was written all over their suprised faces. Samuel's question hung in the air for a while, until it became quite awkward and he started to feel angry, and a little uncomfortable. "The note!" insisted Samuel. "This note! You admit that you wrote it, do you not? Admit it! Wedgewood Harris! I know who you are. We have finally got you!"
"Um, sir..." said the Scotsman, "Ah cannae say ah really understand what you mean?" As Samuel looked from Leod's confused face... ... to Ainsley's, he could see they weren't lying. They really did not know what he was talking about! But, if Leod wasn't Wedgewood Harris, how could he have written this note? It wasn't a famous poem, it had only ever been seen by the SIA as evidence on crime scenes. True, it was usually typed. This was the only one that was handwritten, but it was always the same poem. "Mr. Campell - erm, McGreggor? I can see you haven't got the first clue what I am talking about, which now makes me believe you are innocent of the crime I have come here to arrest you for. I am sorry to have wasted your time, and yours, Ainsley, but I must ask you how you came to write this poem? And why have you changed your identity?" "Well, Detective Green. Ah'm afaird if ah tell ye the reason ah changed mah name, ye might arrest me in any case."
"Mr. McGreggor, it's a matter of life and death that you tell me the truth instantly."
"Well, Detective Green, I have kinda been half expecting tae see one of ye here sooner or later. Ye see, Boys, mah wee bairn here, his mother ain't really dead like. Ah sorta, helped m'self tae him from outta the hospital when he was born. Ah felt he would be happier with me fer different reasons, sir. Ah knew she wouldna minded like. She would hae been able to visit him, in my mind." "Mae brother kin be a real eejit, sir. When I heard his mince ah knew he couldnae got away with it. He loved the bairn so much though. I told him, the police will be after ye. Ah told him tae come home tae Scotland but he couldna leave t'country like, because Boyd wasn't registered yet. That's the real reason ah moved here, sir. Tae help & look after the wee bairn. We all changed our names so that he wouldna be caught out." "Well. That's quite a tale. Obviously, this is a matter that will have to be dealt with separately. Why is your mugshot on our criminal database though, Mr. McGreggor?" "Och! don't remind me sir! Ah was just taking a walk, minding mah own usiness like,when a crowd of lovely lasses happened tae walk by, jest as a police car were cruising past. There was an almighty gust of wind an' mah kilt were blown up o'er mah ears an' those poor lasses got an eyeful! The coppers, no disrespect if you please sir, they arrested me on t'spot fer Indecent Exposure! Sir. Spent the night in the gaol. Got off wit' a warnin' an' a slap on t'back of t'hand, sir."
"Wow! haha! Leod, that explains why there no name to match the mugshot in the system. I have always wondered about that," Samuel was surprised, but he was beginning to like Leod despite himself. "...And the note, Leod?"
"Ah, that! Well it were something ah read a while back while ah were back in Riverblossom Hills. Ah thought it were right special, t'way the two companions were so close, like Ainsley and m'self... an' then they were torn apart... ah always wrote when ah missed her. How didja git the letter tae frame me?" Samuel explained to them that when the police found the first murdered body in Riverblossom Hills, they took over all the outgoing communications for the post office, and intercepted all mail going out. They knew the Chameleon Killer's modus operandi and he never used technology like the phone or internet to communicate, always post because it was less secure. The detectives would open and read the mail, and then reseal it before sending it on. When the detectives had found Leod's note to his sister, they immediately thought he was the Chameleon Killer. The note was unsigned, so all they had to go by was her name and address on the front of the envelope. They had called Ainsley and asked her who she knew in Riverblossom Hills that would write to her. Quite innocently, she told them Leod's name, not knowing it would frame him as the murderer. She then called Leod, to say, "The cops were asking after you." The day they intercepted it had been the day Rainee had gone into labour, had the baby, and Leod had run away with him. He thought they were after him because of the baby. When Leod went missing, the SIA took it as proof he was the Chameleon Killer on the run. About a year later, Samuel, a.k.a. Sunny, checked the mail and recognised the same handwriting from the poem on an envelope addressed to Rainee, and became suspicious. When he tore it open, he read Leod's brief love letter and became convinced Rainee had been seeing a serial killer, who'd now run off with the baby. He lost all respect for Rainee and had left her, staging his own death. Ainsley turned to little Boyd and said, "Wow! Wee Laddie! Look what a huge mess yeh've bin the cause of!"
"Please," said Samuel, "Leod, how did you first come to know that particular poem?"
"Well, Detective Green, ah told ye ah was seduced by that lass in Riverblossom Hills. Terrible thing it were. So terrible. She were married, ye see, and she had another wee laddy. Ah felt awful guilty... well, one afteroon we were hastening tae git decent, git dressed and all - her lad was due back hame from school any time soon. She were in t'lavvy or sommat and ah picked up a little note ah saw under t'bed. It was t' poem ye see. On it, were a post-it, which said 'FOR LEOD'. So ah assumed she'd written it fer me, like. Yeh know?" "You first saw the poem under RAINEE'S bed?"
"Och, ye know her name as well then!"
"Yes... but that's not important. I do wonder how SHE had the poem now though. And why did it say, 'FOR LEOD'? Perhaps Rainee knew who the Chameleon Killer was! Mr. Campbell - McGreggor - Ainsley, thank you so much for your time, but I really must get going!" As he waved them goodbye, Samuel couldn't help feeling relived the little boy had gone to such a good home with lovely warm people to raise him. As Samuel walked thoughtfully away, he wondered how on earth Rainee had come across that poem. She'd never seen or heard it through him - he was sure. She'd had no inkling what his real job had been. And why had she written 'FOR LEOD' on it? Was it a love poem? Suddenly, he had an idea... ...as he dialled the SIA Head Office he wondered why he'd never done this before. He was amazed how much he'd trusted his wife, and how much she'd let him down.
"Yes, Agent 514 here. I need a background check on 'Rainee Rhodes', maiden name 'Luca'. Thanks... yeah. I'll hold." "... sir, background check available.
Current status: Missing.
Name, Mary-Anne Hartford...
previous: Rainee Rhodes - married surname.
Maiden surname: Luca.
Maiden name, Rainee Luca, christened age 8 by adoptive parents, Sean & Katherine Luca. Given up for adoption: aged 2 weeks approximately.
Birth name: Winnifred Edgewood Harris." Meanwhile, back at the Scottish home, a mysterious woman in black rang the doorbell. "Good day ma'am. Kinna help yeh?" asked Leod politely. "Leod! Dah-ling! Oh! it's SO good to see you again!" "Och, ahm sorry, lass. Ah dinnae think ah know yeh?" "Oh! Of COURSE you do darling! It's me! Rainee... do you remember?" she smiled wickedly, "I believe you have something that belongs to me?" She marched past him, into the house, without a flicker of hesitation. "Oh! Who's this? Leod, is this him? Oh, hello," she said dismissively to Ainsley. "How are you?" "Come to Mummy, Angel. Come on!" said Rainee, in a sickly sweet voice, holding out her hands to the toddler. He started to cry and clutched his aunt Ainsley tightly. He didn't know Rainee. He'd never seen her before in his life! Rainee snatched him from Ainsley and the wailing continued.
"There, there. Don't be such a cry-baby!" said Rainee.
"Och, Rainee. The wee laddie is just a baby..." pleaded Leod.
"Oh Leod, stupid man. I meant your blubbering girlfriend over here!" Samuel had run as fast as he could, while calling for backup. He only hoped he wasn't too late. Earlier, as he'd listened to the report, all the pieces of the puzzle slotted into place. He suddenly realised Leod & Ainsley were in terrible trouble. Sheldon, the postman had been murdered because he knew 'too much' - he'd delivered a letter with Dusty's real name on the envelope. Mab had also known too much - Rainee had used her to find Leod, and now that she had got what she needed from Mab, she got rid of her too. Rainee had written that poem! And it made total sense now! It was about those two little girls who were nasty to Rainee at the orphanage - "Two young companions, With devotion so fierce." She had talked about them a lot... best friends who wouldn't include her - "Cherished but closed, No intruder could pierce" ... One had been adopted, Samuel remembered her saying - "til like Earth & like Sky, Daybreak tore through the peers" . The other girl... murdered just before college - when Samuel had been assigned to this case to find W. Edgewood Harris. Rainee knew where Leod was! She had written on that poem once, "FOR LEOD" which means she meant to kill him! Only, that must have been the day Dusty discovered her in a passionate embrace with Leod, and Rainee had called to tell Leod they couldn't see each other again. She'd come to do the job! As he ran into Leod's cottage, Samuel feared what he might find. "Oh!" Rainee gasped, "Sunny? You're alive!" "Rainee, don't try to do anything stupid. This house is surrounded by SIA agents. Your time is up, and I'm arresting you on seven counts of murder. Anything you say or do can and will be used against you in a court of law..." "Sunny! Darling! Is this the way you greet your wife! I think you have some explaining to do!" "You have the CHEEK to say I have some explaining to do, while we stand in the home of your LOVER and his BABY which you had.. I am not even going to waste my breath on you any more you filthy person!" Samuel spat. He was so angry! "I can't believe you, Sunny! I... Well, I don't know how you know all this. I don't know why you're here. What's going on here?" "That's not important right now, Winnifred Edgewood Harris. Your number's up. To think all this time, we thought Wedgewood Harris was a man. That first body you left, with a note in her hand... that poor girl from the orphanage, Butter Mint. There was a faint marking in the paper. You had obviously written your name on the sheet above it... we made out W EDGEWOOD HARRIS. But why? Rainee... why?" "She deserved it. She was so mean to me while we were growing up! And those others... they had all done something in their way to snub me." "And you know the best thing for me, Sunny? I don't feel guilty about any of it! Especially not Mab. Mab was the other girl at the orphanage, you know. theone who got adopted. It took me long enough to find her, but when I did, she didn't recognise me, I'd changed my name to Mary-Anne and looked totally different. I was proud to be the Chameleon Killer! Oh, Leod. How ironic it was that you were framed. When I read it in the newspaper, I collapsed. Of all people! I was just worried you'd be stupid enough to get caught and that my baby would be taken away and gone forever! Now I can take him!" "You're not going anywhere!" Samuel yelled. A few seconds later, some agents and policemen from the SIA burst in and W. Edgewood harris was arrested. "Dear diary," wrote Dusty, " An awful lot has happened in my life, and a lot has changed in the year since my mom went to prison." "She's in a high security, private locked up cell where they put the most dangerous criminals. I can't believe that I'm related to someone so dangerous!" "Dad married a very pretty girl, Penny, who he met in Forsythe's Rest while he was looking for Wedgewood Harris. Apparently they left quite an impression on each other. I really like her, she's genuinely nice. We've moved to Forsythe's Rest so he could be with Penny, and he's since retired from the Secret Services. I'm really proud to have a dad like him. They gave him a huge payout for completing his mission - he'll never have to work again!" "I'm glad to be near my baby brother. He's just learning to speak, and sometimes he comes out with these little Scottish sayings and it's too cute! Leod and Ainsley are very welcoming of me. Ainsley treats me like her own brother." "And best of all, is my girlfriend Meadow Thayer. I met her at my new school, Forsythe High, as well as loads of other wonderful new friends. She's definitely the most pretty girl in the school and she's tons of fun too. I feel sad for my mom that she had to miss out on all the happy endings, but I guess in the end, Justice prevails." "Well diary, that's it for now. See you tomorrow! Dusty Lewis". THE END
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On May 30, 2007 rhondalee472 wrote:
I loved your story. I have been following it since the beginning but, I honestly didn't see that twist coming. Fantastic job. I hope to read more stories by you in the future.
On May 30, 2007 marizza82 wrote:
wow!!!!!!!!!!!!
On May 30, 2007 Daishi wrote:
On May 30, 2007 cariadbach wrote:
On May 30, 2007 hazabaza1 wrote:
That was a suprise ending! I didn't expect any of that to happen. Geez, you should write detective films or something! 5/5
On May 30, 2007 S.Cains wrote:
I wasn't expecting that! Well, not at first, but soon I began to suspect her as soon as she went missing. Great ending with a great plotline... never once got boring!
On May 30, 2007 AnniKayna wrote:
definatly great job!!! 5.0, Im sorry I cant rate higher.
have a very nice day
On May 30, 2007 SueAlJen wrote:
On May 30, 2007 Lily Fairy2 wrote:
Wow! It was Rainee! I never knew! Woah, what a twist! It's very good! I hope to see more from you! 5 from me!!
On May 30, 2007 CE-A-CE wrote:
I'm Speechless!! Very good twist!! I hope that you wrute more stories in the future
On May 30, 2007 zeonadawolf wrote:
Awesome story!
On May 30, 2007 drewsoltesz wrote:
What a smashing conclusion to your tale, you did yourself proud! I love suspense, and you executed it well here....
On May 30, 2007 ragemacsika wrote:
Good story
On May 30, 2007 Bigred72 wrote:
This has been one of the BEST stories I have read. I loved the twist at the end. Good Job!!
On May 31, 2007 joanna1907 wrote:
On May 31, 2007 sunshinegirl28 wrote:
Oh my Gosh!!!
That was fantastic!!!!!
On May 31, 2007 sunshinegirl28 wrote:
Sorry, forgot to rate!
5.0 definitly!
On May 31, 2007 sunshinegirl28 wrote:
On May 31, 2007 wrote:
I LOVED it!
It was awsome the whole way through and i'm glad that i read it. It must have taken some really good planning to come up with this story and the awsome, unexpected twist! Great Job! 5.0, i wish i could rate higher but i can't.
On May 31, 2007 Chrisim2 wrote:
On May 31, 2007 kadoatie wrote:
Wow! I loved it. I've been reading all the parts and have really enjoyed it. I definately didn't expect that big twist though, with Rainee! Who knew she had it in her? I guess it does make sense though!
Great job with the story, the screenshots are very very good, and overall this has been an excellent story. I look forward to more from you! 
On May 31, 2007 jaundyce61 wrote:
A great and unexpected plot twist!!!
On Jun 1, 2007 wrote:
Oh, awesome awesome awesome! I loved it!
On Jun 1, 2007 sanl1210 wrote:
On Jun 1, 2007 eshuff wrote:
well done! some unique screenshots!!
On Jun 1, 2007 kolkol7 wrote:
AWWWWWWWWWWW! I LOVE IT!! I love love love love love it! Maybe you could write about Dusty's adult life??
On Jun 1, 2007 josh1092 wrote:
Wow she set all that up just because of 2 girls who bullied her? Well done.
On Jun 1, 2007 IheartRHPS wrote:
Bravo! I really enjoyed reading your story. Very original. It was so suspenseful and extremely surprising. I had no idea what to expect! Super job and keep up the awesome work!
On Jun 1, 2007 spacemouse wrote:
Good story. Loved it.
On Jun 2, 2007 itachigirl wrote:
man i didnt expect that!!!my ownly problem was reading the scotish,even though im part scotish(only a little) its a nice way to end(not for the people who died)can you make a sequal,please
On Jun 2, 2007 atangki wrote:
Wow! That was so unexpected! Well written story! I hope to read more stories from you.
On Jun 4, 2007 wrote:
words cannot explain how totally AWSUM that was!!! make another part, please please!!! 5.0 all the way my friend.
On Jun 5, 2007 bryk1984 wrote:
Great story, I really like the unexpected twist at the end!!!!
I hope that you continue to write!!!
On Jun 12, 2007 Magic1 wrote:
Great story suspensful up to the very end. I did'nt think it might be rainee. I'm glad it was'nt leod. By the way your screen shots are magnificent, you must work very hard on them. Thanks for a great story.
On Jun 13, 2007 Pink_Princess wrote:
Wonderful characters
On Jun 17, 2007 alliecat371 wrote:
Great ending! I'm glad that justice prevailed
On Jun 20, 2007 wrote:
OMG. I LURVED IT!
On Jun 21, 2007 wrote:
On Jul 5, 2007 pretty_baby wrote:
rreally awesome story!!!!!! that twist was not expecting that at all so good work
On Aug 27, 2007 gamegirljill wrote:
Exciting stories! First I've read and they really kept me hooked. Loved all the twists, turns & drama.
On Nov 12, 2007 Emilie Jolie wrote:
"If you think all this sounds too far fetched or too confusing, the stories are still available on Foxysensei's profile to read.
This is all hilarious! 
Who the heck am I? Nevermind. You'll never see me again. Not in this story anyway. It's only because I'm ridiculously goodlooking that I'm even here. I am not part of this story. Nor do I want to be. Might end up dead. Enjoy the rest of the story. See ya... NOT!"
"My pleasure. Goodbye Detective Green!" Said the girl. She was rather disappointed he hadn't tried to get her number. She thought he was rather nice looking indeed.
On Nov 12, 2007 Emilie Jolie wrote:
Although I don't really like how Rainee wasn't so innocent....
On Dec 3, 2007 OpheliaNival wrote:
This was the absolute best part (although I said the same with the last one...) It had it all! Great snaps, awesome and original plot, plenty of excitement, unexpected twists and the hunky anchorman
Thank you so much for sharing this, I've enjoyed it so much!
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ME MY SIMS MAKE OUT WHIT 20SIMS her ASPIRETION ROMANCIT IS mAX
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On Aug 31, 2008 wewe78 wrote:
wow really good I loved it!!!!
