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One cold, snowy Christmas day, a beautiful baby was born. Her mother was so poor and she had no money to keep the baby safe and warm, so she wished and she wished for a miracle for her little girl...

One cold, snowy Christmas day, a beautiful baby was born. Her mother was so poor and she had no money to keep the baby safe and warm, so she wished and she wished for a miracle for her little girl... ...she wished and she wished for someone, anyone, to love and cherish her baby. Who should hear her wish but the fairies of the forest Pleasantview? They whispered into the young mother's ear and they promised to give her a good home. Her baby was magicked away in a sparkle and flourish... ...our beautiful little Christmas baby found herself in a Christmas wonderland! A toy store where a lovely young lady, Cassie Nova worked. Cassie instantly fell in love with this little beauty! But it was closing time! She had locked up the shop! Not a soul was to be found, so where had this little angel come from? A whisper in Cassie's ear from the fairies told her everything she needed to know! When Cassie got home she called her housemates with her urgent news, "Anita! Mimi!". They named her "Anasylvia". They discussed around their table what they should tell the little girl as she grew up... how would she ever understand why her mother had left her, and how she was found and raised by a coven of witches? They decided to be truthful and to teach her to believe in love and to grow up never feeling abandoned. As she grew, they began to worry... ... she was so tender hearted, so beautiful, and so impressionable. And these days, she seemed so distracted... Soon they found out whay. Mimi spotted something very interesting whilst flying over the forest one day: Anasylvia had fallen in love with a man almost twice her age! LOU SMORELS! Mimi was horrified and frightened the little girl's heart was going to be broken. Anita and Cassie couldn't believe their little princess was being persued by such a dirty old man! They had all heard about his philandering ways, hosting parties for all the beautiful young ladies in Pleasantview... ... how he would spike their drinks, enticing them for his own fun! Somehow, he never seemed to get caught! His many girlfriends all believed he was theirs alone. Although they were worried, they knew there was not much they could do to stop their young sweetheart from seeing this horrible man. Anasylvia continued to sneak around with Lou! She was so in love, and today she had some big news to tell him! A big secret... she hadn't even told her guardians! When he heard the news, Lou gave her a big hug, and said he was so happy! He said they would have a big white wedding, he would buy them a house and when the baby was born, he would be the proudest father in the world! They agreed to meet in their secret place the next day at the same time. The next day, Anasylvia waited and waited for Lou... she wondered where he could be? She began to worry about whether he really did love her... had it all been a big joke? What would she do now? How was she going to tell her guardians? She cried and she cried herself to sleep that night. She had been abandobed again! The next day, in vain, she waited again... She began to notice changes in her body... she would have to tell the girls what had happened. Of course, they were devastated! They had promised to take care of Anasylvia and now look whatr had happened! How the young girl had followed in her mother's footsteps! They felt they had failed her, but vowed theywould always care for her and her baby and give them both everything they needed. Anasylvia really didn't look well when the day came for her baby to be born... Anita gave Anasylvia a witches hat to help her through the pain, but when the Grim Reaper appeared, things weren't looking good at all. The Grim shocked them all when he took Anasylvia's baby. Anasyvlia was distraught! She didn't know how much bad louck she could take. It seemed that if she ever loved anyone, they were taken away from her. The witches didn't know what they should do! They thought they should make a spell to bring Lou Smorels to Anasylvia and do some explaining! Anasylvia told him the tragic news, and was disusted to see he was obviously drunk and didn't care. He declared, "Why are you wasting my time? The kid probably wasn't even mine!" She was really depressed. Eventually she went completely mad. When Anasylvia took her own life, the 3 witches decided they would get revenge on her behalf, on the sinful, uncaring Lou Smorels. They made a very powerful love potion, transforming themselves into beauties. They were going to teach Lou how it felt to have a heart, and how it felt to be a woman! As the wolf howled, the transformation was complete and the mission begun! Invisibly, they each moved in to Lou's den of iniquity. He was a gorgeous man but way he strutted his stuff, it was obvious he thought he was God's gift to women! Individually, the witches seduced Lou. First Mimi, on the beach in the rain... ... then Cassie in the most famous 5-star hotel in Pleasantview .. with Anita just down the hall. Lou was sure they had no idea! he thought he was a champion! Until suddenly something very strange happened! Lou worked out really hard to try and lose his fat stomach. Even then, when Lou looked in the mirror, he still thought he was the handosomest devil in all of Sim City 9 months later, after another fun session in the 5 star hotel... The sisters clapped their hands with glee as Lou began to shout about his labour pains! Mimi was especially glad to see him suffering, if only slightly compared to what he'd put Anasylvia through. What she knew, and that he didn't was he was about to get a triple surprise! As Lou raised his babies, he couldn't believe how much they looked like those girls he'd once used. What were their names again? Oh yes, Mimi... Cassie... and Anita. He wondered how those gals were - hadn't seen them for some time! He loved his children so much! He forgot all about his rampant love life and his girlfriends and became a real family man. But his life was also filled with sadness... ... because he loved them so much, he suffered every day. He worried about them all the time... From the time they were babies, he worried they might be taken away from him... When they were children he worried about their schooling, and he worried that they might not know how much he loved them. When they became teenagers, he worried they might get into trouble, and even worse, they might find out about the trouble he had caused someone their ago... not so long before they were born. One day, his worry turned him into stone. Forever more, Lou Smorels wuld be trapped inside the statue of a worried, heartbroken woman... ... always wondering whatever happened to his three beautiful daughters... Cassie, Mimi and Anita.

THE END

Teaching Lou Smorels...

Mar 7, 2007 by foxysensei
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    58 Comment(s) posted so far

    On Mar 7, 2007 lwilfong wrote:

    Great story. Very well done. Thanks for sharing and congrats on being featured. \:D

    On Mar 7, 2007 maggiesmom1 wrote:

    Woah. I didn't excpect thta coming. Good twist at the end!

    On Mar 7, 2007 blueclarity25 wrote:

    Wow! Very cool twist on the Love, life and woohoo challenge! I like this version a lot. Finally Lou Smorel is suffering for all his deviant behavior!\:\)

    On Mar 7, 2007 xImpaledxAngelx wrote:

    That was really good. No offence, I'd put off reading it because of the whole fantasy thing... but it turned out really great. \:o \:\)

    On Mar 7, 2007 Mykki wrote:

    Different, wasn't sure what to expect. Well written and over all very good

    On Mar 7, 2007 priestmere wrote:

    Great fable.

    On Mar 7, 2007 r0ckstarr wrote:

    \:wub\: \:wub\: \:wub\: \:wub\: \:wub\: \:wub\: That ending hit me in the face like a sack of bricks... I LOVED IT!!

    On Mar 7, 2007 wrote:

    Wow! I really like this- very creative and surprising!

    On Mar 8, 2007 sunaire wrote:

    \:wub\: So cute!

    On Mar 8, 2007 Saffronzoe wrote:

    \:wub\: \:wub\: \:wub\: WOW GREAT

    On Mar 8, 2007 scarlet_white wrote:

    Wow, amazing, extremely creative and very unpredictable\:rah\: \:rah\: \:rah\:

    On Mar 8, 2007 kieblerkis wrote:

    very interesting... good story... thanks for sharing! \:\)

    On Mar 8, 2007 sweety_nia wrote:

    Wow!! That was so cool! I really wasn't expecting the story to be this way. Good job. ^_^

    On Mar 8, 2007 Silvenight1 wrote:

    Now that was odd, but more than a little funny.

    On Mar 8, 2007 bec71 wrote:

    I did'nt really get it?\:rolleyes:

    On Mar 8, 2007 wrote:

    I love his hair! Awesome. \:rah\:

    On Mar 8, 2007 foxysensei wrote:

    Wow! I was featured? Mate I'm going to stop sleeping because I always seem to miss it even though i spend most of my waking hours online! Lol. Thanks for the nice messages. \:wub\:

    On Mar 8, 2007 wrote:

    EXCELLENT!!!!

    On Mar 8, 2007 Palina wrote:

    Great story!! Thank you!\:wub\: \:wub\:

    On Mar 8, 2007 Marylyn Linney wrote:

    Great work... \:rah\:

    On Mar 8, 2007 coco_goddess wrote:

    That was a good story with a twist at the end, a different take. \;\)

    On Mar 9, 2007 06bek wrote:

    cool story!

    On Mar 9, 2007 wrote:

    Amazing! I LOVED it!! GREAT job!! \:rah\: \:rah\:
    I rate it 5.0!!

    On Mar 9, 2007 kolkol7 wrote:

    L\:wub\:ve it!

    On Mar 10, 2007 bandgeek12 wrote:

    awesome!!!\:rah\: \:rah\: \:rah\:

    On Mar 10, 2007 mnemosyne27 wrote:

    great story! karma hit lou smorel really bad..\:D

    On Mar 10, 2007 kitfu11 wrote:

    Wow I really liked that story! Awesome twist at the end, great job~ \:cool\:

    On Mar 10, 2007 huffy24 wrote:

    u have writing SKILLS..nice job\:rah\:

    On Mar 10, 2007 S.Cains wrote:

    the baby Anita is so cute. Loved the story too

    On Mar 11, 2007 monmel wrote:

    Wow \:D What a great story \:D I loved it \:wub\: \:wub\: \:wub\:

    On Mar 11, 2007 wrote:

    Awsome story!!!\:rah\:

    On Mar 11, 2007 fallenangelohio wrote:

    Incredible! Hope you do more. You have definitely have a talent for story telling.\:rah\: \:rah\: \:rah\:

    On Mar 12, 2007 R.Quest wrote:

    Loved the story... what twist at the very end

    On Mar 12, 2007 Nik-Noo wrote:

    cute story

    On Mar 14, 2007 PatPB wrote:

    \:rah\: great story!!

    On Mar 17, 2007 alley1800 wrote:

    Great twist, overall great story..thanks for sharing!

    On Mar 18, 2007 albaby wrote:

    good. but one little critique though. her mother don't look poor with that clothes.

    On Mar 19, 2007 wrote:

    that twist was great good work\:wub\:

    On Mar 26, 2007 jerif wrote:

    \:D Cool story

    On Apr 26, 2007 sara_87 wrote:

    awesome story!!!\:D \;\)

    On Apr 26, 2007 sara_87 wrote:

    ups! forgot to rate!

    On Apr 29, 2007 wrote:

    Wow, amazing, extremely creative\:rah\:
    but i would love to know where you get your
    people and the fetures for them!
    awsome!
    please comment back w/ more detail!\:rah\: \:rah\:

    On May 3, 2007 wrote:

    0k.. hahaha made baby with him self.
    what.

    On May 14, 2007 foxysensei wrote:

    [B]Teehee, I know, sounds whack! (I used a cheat)[/B]

    On May 15, 2007 wrote:

    this is a charming story. I loved it a lot! ! ! \:D This is so unique and very original.

    On May 17, 2007 wrote:

    i loved your story

    On May 23, 2007 wrote:

    Wow, what a twist! Nice work.

    On Jun 17, 2007 Elisa G wrote:

    SO AWESOME!!!! \:D
    Can't wait for the next one... will there be one? Pwueeze... \;\)

    On Jun 20, 2007 shumain wrote:

    u have talent n i liked how the story ended\:rah\: \:rah\: \:wub\:

    On Jun 21, 2007 wrote:

    I really enjoyed that story! And the cast was perfect!

    On Jun 21, 2007 jennyjen wrote:

    Great story! \:P

    On Jul 16, 2007 tagteamluva wrote:

    Great story--to bad revenge isn't so easy.

    On Aug 8, 2007 ziggy28 wrote:

    This is the first story I have read... thanks it was great!!\:rah\:

    On Oct 23, 2007 Emilie Jolie wrote:

    Ooh! \:confused\: Nice!

    On Feb 17, 2008 saywat1222 wrote:

    amazing...but sad\:rah\: but\:\(

    On Mar 16, 2008 sappbaptiste wrote:

    \:rah\: That was a really good story! It sucks what happned to Anaslyvia... My question: Did Anaslyvia really have a baby when she was a teen?? Did you use inteenminator?

    On Mar 16, 2008 sappbaptiste wrote:

    My question: I want to know where you got those skins for your sims? Thank you -sappbaptiste

    On Apr 21, 2008 simsaddict19 wrote:

    \:rah\: Exciting and cute I LOVE IT!\:rah\: \:P

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