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Andromeda, the alien daughter of Mike Koertjens has just started University. She's far away from home and doesn't know anyone on campus.

Andromeda, the alien daughter of Mike Koertjens has just started University. She's far away from home and doesn't know anyone on campus. I sure hope there's lots of fun to have, they tell me this is the best part of your life. My roomies study all the time, where is the fun? Guys, I don't know what you're up to but I'm gonna check out the pub on campus. Why is that guy looking at me like that..not nice? Everyone is looking at Andromeda. They never saw an alien girl with no nose and such huge eyes. And with this skin colour it's even scarier. Why isn't she green? It's so much easier that way. Weird girl. Wow, creepy. Andromeda overheard what student were saying about her. She's very sad and decides to buy Dr. Luke Goody's extreme makeover machine. Just one day later (Buy online before 6 pm and you have it in your house the next day) The Luke Goody machine arrived. Andromeda was very nervous. Would it work? Is it right? Would dad, Fiona, Michelle and Sean reckognize her?



 Wha..Well I mean...WOW. I am a complete different person. A different person needs different hairstyle and clothes. There Suntan Getting rid of the old me. (On the outside that is). I have to tell my parents. My family will die if they see me and I didn't prepare them. Her it goes: "Dear dad, you'll never guess what I did..." Now I'm ready to meet new people. Meet even old people or people I already met. But I'll be a new person to them. Off to greet the world as the new Andromeda. Was this a wise decision? What if they don't like me? What have I done! I can't turn back the clock. People don't react at all. No curious glares or looks. Hmmm.. that is new to me. A bit lonely though. I don't have my looks anymore to attract attention. Maybe it needs some time. I should focus on the inner me. Yep, that's what I'll do. Be my nice and sweet self! It's time to meet the town.
Hello world! Here I am!

Andromeda's Extreem Makeover

Feb 15, 2009 by fredbrenny
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    20 Comment(s) posted so far

    On Feb 15, 2009 alicia7tommy wrote:

    Nice job, I rated five\:\)

    On Feb 15, 2009 jbh88 wrote:

    I rated five too. Will she find she's happier as an alien? Pleeease continue!\:\)

    On Feb 15, 2009 xfadedhearts wrote:

    I rated it a four. Good job!

    On Feb 15, 2009 Little Cloud wrote:

    \:D

    On Feb 16, 2009 mmanning27 wrote:

    good job!

    On Feb 16, 2009 candy820 wrote:

    Great story. I rated it a 5.0 also

    On Feb 16, 2009 charray wrote:

    Great job on this story \:\) \:rah\:

    On Feb 16, 2009 Jaws3 wrote:

    lol. \:D

    On Feb 17, 2009 damnanoir wrote:

    great job! 5!

    On Feb 19, 2009 TUTULA wrote:

    Nice story, good work\:rah\:

    On Feb 19, 2009 snowangel0437 wrote:

    It was a really Good story

    On Feb 21, 2009 Pernille93 wrote:

    Solid story, is there coming a second part?
     

    On Feb 23, 2009 shady411 wrote:

    Nice job

    On Mar 7, 2009 fabrizioammollo wrote:

    Nice job. I think it's great that becoming normal and pretty doesn't solve any problem...

    On Mar 8, 2009 spitzmagic wrote:

    There is just so much of the Sims I don't know...like  why wasn't she green. I noticed that when she was born. Good story.I'm lovin how you do this...:P

    On Mar 30, 2009 kc1983 wrote:

    Cute story, she is a bit conflicted though. Maybe in need of a therepist.

    On Sep 20, 2009 oldmember_msthickems wrote:

    this was a cute one... i wonder is there a second part to it.. does she confront the guy that was making fun of her or not??
    smooches \:\)

    On Oct 4, 2009 martoele wrote:

    Yes, I like this chapter. Very good...\:rah\:

    On Nov 4, 2009 AbsintheBess wrote:

    She looks awesome afterwards, sad she changed herself though \:\(

    On Mar 26, 2010 Divinefelinep. wrote:

    lol this is cute

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