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Please note, this chapter is not entirely within the canon of the rest of the story. Just a slightly surreal head trip brought on by the end of the world as they know it.

The real story will be back shortly. In the meantime, enjoy ...

Please note, this chapter is not entirely within the canon of the rest of the story. Just a slightly surreal head trip brought on by the end of the world as they know it.

The real story will be back shortly. In the meantime, enjoy ...

The Golden Child -- (Bonus)

Nov 17, 2011 by spladoum
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    17 Comment(s) posted so far

    On Nov 17, 2011 martoele wrote:

    **clap-clap-clap** This chapter was simplely superb! You could feel the horror in Trish's mind, eyes and facial expression.... \:eek\:  And then the darkness that surrounded her.... \:rolleyes:  Just like nightmares use to be: Frightening! I really love this 'in between' chapter where Patricia's fears manifest in the night! Big fat 5.0..... \:rah\:

    On Nov 17, 2011 orlov wrote:

    \:rah\: \:rah\: \:eek\: \:eek\: OMG!!! What a great Chapter! From the superb shots to the choice of using black and white, the graphic quality is amazing; you blew me away with this! Just like watching a great horror movie late at night. . .13 is positively stunning, and shot 11 is so effective it needs no text at all. . .So Very Well Done!!!! Bravo, Brava, Encore!!!! \:D

    On Nov 17, 2011 Hellsaint wrote:

    I really like this short chapter, but I having too much of a strong feeling that Pat is still not out of the dream yet \:eek\: the expressions are priceless and amazing screens, great job and thanks for sharin \:D

    On Nov 17, 2011 fruitopia wrote:

    I loved this in between story.

    On Nov 17, 2011 jarlet wrote:

    Stunning, amazing and high quality shots...\:D loved pics 8 and 13 !pleasant interlude  and great read!!congrats!\:rah\:

    On Nov 17, 2011 isarpgista wrote:

    PERFECT!!! \o/ The shots are awesome! The expressions are incredible! We can see the fear in the images! I LOVED it!!! \:D

    On Nov 17, 2011 fabrizioammollo wrote:

    Wonderful job! This bonus chapter is a little treat! The shors are great. \:rah\:

    On Nov 18, 2011 fredbrenny wrote:

    from beginning to end I sat on the edge of my seat... Stephen King comes to mind... LOL :P  Perfect short story in itself, although, I like to think ( \:\)  ) This will not be over completely... Mom in the car unconcious.... SUPERB! *applause* \:rah\:

    On Nov 18, 2011 Ben72006 wrote:

    It quite something and I have really have feeling Trish is not out of her dream just yet.

    On Nov 18, 2011 Degera wrote:

    I am blown away, your work on this is just outstanding.  I'd give you more than 5 stars if I could! \:wub\:

    On Nov 18, 2011 spitzmagic wrote:

    Something reeks of Zombies \:eek\: Excellent chapter \:rah\:Congrats on the feature \:rah\:

    On Nov 19, 2011 evi wrote:

    Great idea spladoum! I do enjoy... nightmares\:wacko\: You earned my 5 stars again\;\)

    On Nov 20, 2011 Nemesis_3050 wrote:

    oh wow oh wow oh wow

    On Nov 25, 2011 Mangio wrote:

    What a nightmare \:eek\: Poor Trish, i wonder what she did to deserve such harshness.. i'm glad her mother was there to comfort her \:wub\: She definitely woke up in time \:D 

    On Nov 30, 2011 urm0m wrote:

    Poor Trish \:\(

    On Dec 1, 2011 RatRaceRob wrote:

    Interesting that even when Trish 'woke up' to her mother's comfort... her world is still horror movie black and white \:ph34r\:.  Exceptional episode as always \:cool\: \:rah\:

    On Mar 15, 2012 taxa08 wrote:

    \:rah\:

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