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Hi!
This is the last chapter of "Diary, Dear!" stories. I was surprised that there are so many who will be sad for that, but I think there's been enough drama in the lives of Helena and Driss, so it still is the last one...But probably not the last story I write.
I must say that I really started to like the characters of "Diary, Dear!" and the game somehow got a new meaning for me.
By the way, Aaron draw this picture. I bet it's him riding a llama :D
Thank you all for commenting my previous stories, reading them really made me happy.
Ok, enough now :)
Here it is --->

Hi!
This is the last chapter of "Diary, Dear!" stories. I was surprised that there are so many who will be sad for that, but I think there's been enough drama in the lives of Helena and Driss, so it still is the last one...But probably not the last story I write.
I must say that I really started to like the characters of "Diary, Dear!" and the game somehow got a new meaning for me.
By the way, Aaron draw this picture. I bet it's him riding a llama :D
Thank you all for commenting my previous stories, reading them really made me happy.
Ok, enough now :)
Here it is ---> Dear Diary!
Five years have passed... After getting engaged with Driss I started planning our weddings. I remeber all of it as it was yesterday. It makes me laugh now, but back then I was so nervous about the weddings...Everything had to be perfect and all kind of things disturbed me. For excample, my teeth didn't seem to be white enough. Christine was my bridesmaid...She helped me with the dress on my wedding day, actually she helped me with everything. Everyone important to me were there... My dream came true - I married the love of my life... The ceremony was so beautiful... It was the happiest day of my life and thinking about it still brings tears to my eyes, even now, 5 years later. Mom and dad were so happy for me, I could see that from their faces. We didn't have a big wedding party... ...the guests were dancing a bit and just having fun... In the end of the party Vincet surprised everyone, especially Christine, by proposing her. So my wedding day was a very important day for Christine and Vincet also - they got engaged. After the weddings, Driss, Aaron and I moved out from my parents house. We were renting a small flat, that was all we could afford at that time, but I was happy to live with my little family. Aaron got himself his own room, new and blue. Driss started working as a dish washer in a fast food restaurant. Back then it was the best job he could get, but he was trying hard to improve his language skills. I started writing a novel while I was home with Aaron. I was trying to be a good wife to Driss... And a good mom to Aaron... He deserves it. I can't believe how fast children grow up... Driss is a great dad, but I know that he still feels guilty sometimes that he wasn't with me and Aaron from the beginning. I have told him so many times that the most important thing is that he's here now. Christine and Vincet got married some months after Aaron's second birthday. They are perfect for each other. After Mike broke Christine's heart long time ago, I hoped she'd find someone better...And she did. Vincet is a good guy and the best brother I could ever wish for. After their weddings I found out I was pregnant again. This time it didn't scare me, I was happy. Everything was just soo great! Months passed and the doctor told me I was going to have twins! Driss did everything to keep me happy and comfortable... I wasn't the only one who was pregnant - Christine and Vincet were expecting their first child, too. I often took Aaron to the same park where Christine found out on one cold winter evening years ago that I was going to have Driss's baby. Time passed and I gave birth to twin girls. Sofia has Driss's skin colour and brown eyes. Her hair are brown like mine. Maria looks very similar to Aaron - same skin colour, brown eyes and black hair. Taking care of 2 babies was not easy, but atleast I had Driss. Soon the flat was too small for our family and we moved into a little house that Driss had bought. He was doing well at work. Aaron got a new blue room again. And was very happy about it, of course. I think Aaron will be an artist one day. Just look at his drawings. So cute :) Half a year ago Driss decided to quit job and open his own moroccan style restaurant. For some first weeks the main customers there were dad and Vincet, but right now many people are visiting it. I work there as a chef... And Aaron is often there too to help us. Not. I almost forgot to tell you that Christine and Vincet had a son - Simon. She often visits me and takes Simon with her. And her cat Belle, because Sofia just loves the cat! Belle, Belle, Belle is all I hear from Sofia. I think "Belle" was the first word she said. I should get her a kitten. That's Simon - my little nephew and the son of my best friend...Simon, Sofia and Maria like to play together, but as they're all still so little, the house is full of screaming toddlers sometimes. Ok, not sometimes, often. Christine's sister Caroline helps me to babysit them. She's grown into a beautiful young lady - she's 14 now. I like to have all my big family over, there's enough space in my home for everyone. Sadly Vincet is at work most of the time and can't visit me so often. What do you think he's doing? Selling cars, of course...It's probably his dream job. I finished my first novel and to my surprise it became very popular. What do you think how it started, my Diary? I can tell you...
"Dear Diary! I'm writing for the first time..." So that's all, Diary Dear!
XXX
Helena

Diary, Dear! (20)

Jul 16, 2008 by -kalisa-
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    2
    Dear Diary!
    Five years have passed...
    3
    After getting engaged with Driss I started planning our weddings. I remeber all of it as it was yesterday.
    4
    It makes me laugh now, but back then I was so nervous about the weddings...Everything had to be perfect and all kind of things disturbed me. For excample, my teeth didn't seem to be white enough.
    5
    Christine was my bridesmaid...She helped me with the dress on my wedding day, actually she helped me with everything.
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    Everyone important to me were there...
    7
    My dream came true - I married the love of my life...
    8
    The ceremony was so beautiful...
    9
    It was the happiest day of my life and thinking about it still brings tears to my eyes, even now, 5 years later.
    10
    Mom and dad were so happy for me, I could see that from their faces.
    11
    We didn't have a big wedding party...
    12
    ...the guests were dancing a bit and just having fun...
    13
    In the end of the party Vincet surprised everyone, especially Christine, by proposing her.
    14
    So my wedding day was a very important day for Christine and Vincet also - they got engaged.
    15
    After the weddings, Driss, Aaron and I moved out from my parents house. We were renting a small flat, that was all we could afford at that time, but I was happy to live with my little family.
    16
    Aaron got himself his own room, new and blue.
    17
    Driss started working as a dish washer in a fast food restaurant. Back then it was the best job he could get, but he was trying hard to improve his language skills.
    18
    I started writing a novel while I was home with Aaron.
    19
    I was trying to be a good wife to Driss...
    20
    And a good mom to Aaron...
    21
    He deserves it. I can't believe how fast children grow up...
    22
    Driss is a great dad, but I know that he still feels guilty sometimes that he wasn't with me and Aaron from the beginning.
    23
    I have told him so many times that the most important thing is that he's here now.
    24
    Christine and Vincet got married some months after Aaron's second birthday.
    25
    They are perfect for each other. After Mike broke Christine's heart long time ago, I hoped she'd find someone better...And she did. Vincet is a good guy and the best brother I could ever wish for.
    26
    After their weddings I found out I was pregnant again. This time it didn't scare me, I was happy.
    27
    Everything was just soo great!
    28
    Months passed and the doctor told me I was going to have twins!
    29
    Driss did everything to keep me happy and comfortable...
    30
    I wasn't the only one who was pregnant - Christine and Vincet were expecting their first child, too.
    31
    I often took Aaron to the same park where Christine found out on one cold winter evening years ago that I was going to have Driss's baby.
    32
    Time passed and I gave birth to twin girls.
    33
    Sofia has Driss's skin colour and brown eyes. Her hair are brown like mine.
    34
    Maria looks very similar to Aaron - same skin colour, brown eyes and black hair.
    35
    Taking care of 2 babies was not easy, but atleast I had Driss.
    36
    Soon the flat was too small for our family and we moved into a little house that Driss had bought. He was doing well at work.
    37
    Aaron got a new blue room again. And was very happy about it, of course.
    38
    I think Aaron will be an artist one day. Just look at his drawings. So cute :)
    39
    Half a year ago Driss decided to quit job and open his own moroccan style restaurant.
    40
    For some first weeks the main customers there were dad and Vincet, but right now many people are visiting it.
    41
    I work there as a chef...
    42
    And Aaron is often there too to help us. Not.
    43
    I almost forgot to tell you that Christine and Vincet had a son - Simon. She often visits me and takes Simon with her. And her cat Belle, because Sofia just loves the cat!
    44
    Belle, Belle, Belle is all I hear from Sofia. I think "Belle" was the first word she said. I should get her a kitten.
    45
    That's Simon - my little nephew and the son of my best friend...Simon, Sofia and Maria like to play together, but as they're all still so little, the house is full of screaming toddlers sometimes. Ok, not sometimes, often.
    46
    Christine's sister Caroline helps me to babysit them. She's grown into a beautiful young lady - she's 14 now.
    47
    I like to have all my big family over, there's enough space in my home for everyone.
    48
    Sadly Vincet is at work most of the time and can't visit me so often. What do you think he's doing?
    49
    Selling cars, of course...It's probably his dream job.
    50
    I finished my first novel and to my surprise it became very popular. What do you think how it started, my Diary? I can tell you...
    "Dear Diary! I'm writing for the first time..."
    51
    So that's all, Diary Dear!
    XXX
    Helena
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    On Jul 16, 2008 bettybetty13 wrote:

    AWWW!! Such a happy ending! I am glad everything worked out. I am looking forward to reading more of your stories!

    On Jul 16, 2008 stephanie1225 wrote:

    oh i loved it and i love that you finished it you rock!!\:D

    On Jul 16, 2008 big trouble wrote:

    it's so beautiful stroy!\:wub\:

    On Jul 16, 2008 Deedee09 wrote:

    very good \:\)

    On Jul 16, 2008 nleslie wrote:

    Awesome! Great ending! xx If I could give you 1000,000,000.0 I would!!! \:rah\:

    On Jul 16, 2008 MagySims wrote:

    Aww... it was soo sweet story. I really enjoyed that... 5.0 as always... you must do more more stories... Keep Writing, Don´t stop xD... \:wub\: \:wub\: \:wub\:

    On Jul 16, 2008 Fikcija wrote:

    Great ending! And the part about the novel was a great idea also! I loved your story, can you please leave me a comment if you start a writing a new one, just to make sure I will check it out? \:rah\:

    On Jul 16, 2008 xxtiffxx wrote:

    Fantastic as always. Im sad its over now though. you should write more! \:wub\:

    On Jul 16, 2008 Phatnote wrote:

    That was a very enjoyable story, I'm honored to have had my own story posted next to yours! \:D

    On Jul 16, 2008 jointhenavy wrote:

    Fantastic! Your story is the reason why I want to play The Sims again right now, hehe.

    On Jul 16, 2008 PAP3RxH3ARTS wrote:

    Fanstastico \:\)
    Loved the ending \:\)

    On Jul 16, 2008 misha1013 wrote:

    that's a sweet ending\:rah\:

    On Jul 16, 2008 Angela! wrote:

    BEST STORY EVERRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!\:wub\: \:wub\: \:wub\:

    On Jul 16, 2008 sophielx_415@hotmail.com wrote:

    Don't make it the last one i love these story.

    On Jul 16, 2008 qasert wrote:

    \:wub\:

    On Jul 16, 2008 -mackenzie- wrote:

    Great ending, enjoyed reading it \:D\:D \:D\:D \:D5.0

    On Jul 16, 2008 thekewlestnerd wrote:

    great story! \:rah\:

    On Jul 16, 2008 lisa9999 wrote:

    That was great!!!!\:wub\:

    On Jul 16, 2008 samcactus101 wrote:

    That was so touchie..\:wub\:\:wub\:\:wub\:\:P I like the kiddy drawing picture at the beginning:PCute!\:wub\:

    On Jul 16, 2008 wrote:

    This story was one of the best i have ever read !! Great ending to a brilliant story !! \:\) \:D

    On Jul 16, 2008 woodstock95 wrote:

    Great stories! I loved them all!\:rah\:

    On Jul 16, 2008 pdgd2824 wrote:

    I LOVE IT!! I have read the story since the beginning and I'm sad to see it end. You need to get another story up, maybe a spin-off of this one. 5.0\:rah\: \:rah\: \:rah\:

    On Jul 16, 2008 Alathiel wrote:

    \:rah\: Great job, I hope you will write more stories

    On Jul 16, 2008 babychinx wrote:

    Omgg!! You cannot finish it and just when ii was getting into it. Oh well, but promise to make another one as good as this. Maybe u could have a whole collection one day in the shops..I would definitely buy it lol.
    10 out of 10
    \:rah\: \:rah\:

    On Jul 16, 2008 twixxy wrote:

    \:rah\: Kalisa, Diary Dear is one of the best storylines I have read on TSR. You've done an excellent job and I look forward to many more stories from you, so keep up the great work! p.s. Who would have known you could find love on the internet, I'm definately a believer now \;\)

    On Jul 16, 2008 Kerry001 wrote:

    Great ending! I am glad that you wrapped up all the loose ends so we know what happened with everyone. I look forward to reading more of your work. \:D \:wub\: \:\)

    On Jul 16, 2008 maryash wrote:

    great job! im gonna miss her and driss

    On Jul 16, 2008 erospsyche wrote:

    \:\( So sad to see it end..great story!

    On Jul 16, 2008 sparklewand wrote:

    That was such a great ending to the series. Amazing!!!\:D

    On Jul 16, 2008 FathomDesigns wrote:

    Very good. Sad to see it end though \:\(

    On Jul 16, 2008 arc1801 wrote:

    \:\) \:\) \:\)

    On Jul 16, 2008 wrote:

    It's such a great series. I just can't beleive it has to end.\:wub\: \:wub\: \:rah\:

    On Jul 16, 2008 JENCA wrote:

    You should do a part 2: The next generation
    But hey, that's my husband! His name's Lazlo \:o \;\)

    On Jul 16, 2008 wrote:

    do not stop writting the story\:rah\: \:rah\: \:rah\:

    On Jul 16, 2008 muggelx1 wrote:

    very nice story\:rah\: \:wub\:

    On Jul 16, 2008 SuperStar94 wrote:

    Awww wow! Lovely ending \:wub\: Could you let me know if you do another story? I wouldn't want to miss it! \:D

    On Jul 16, 2008 rose juice wrote:

    aww! i'm all happy now!! but sad because it all over. but as some wise person said:
    Don't cry because it's over
    Smile because it happened
    \:D

    On Jul 16, 2008 thedodd wrote:

    Best story I've heard!\:wub\: \:wub\:

    On Jul 16, 2008 Pernille93 wrote:

    I have absolutely no idea why, but my heart jumped when I read "my Diary? I can tell you...
    "Dear Diary!" ----- There's just something about stories which goes into a story in the story, if you can follow me \:confused\: I just loved this, and I hope you make another one that looks like this, especially the ending \:D

    On Jul 16, 2008 wrote:

    loved it\:rah\: \:rah\:

    On Jul 16, 2008 cpyle822 wrote:

    Great Job, I cant wait to see what you come out with next.\:rah\: \:D \:cool\:

    On Jul 16, 2008 Maddster94 wrote:

    awhhh.
    that was amazing.
    i'm so sad it's over :[

    On Jul 16, 2008 blackbutterflys wrote:

    awwwwwwww its done\:\( i love it\:wub\:

    On Jul 16, 2008 Murphy75 wrote:

    Great ending to a great story! I'm sad to see it ending!\:D \:rah\:

    On Jul 16, 2008 TrailRunner782 wrote:

    Great story!! I'm going to miss them, they're such a cute family. \:D I can't wait to see some of your new stories, hopefully you write more. \:\)

    On Jul 16, 2008 slime wrote:

    Such a good ending! \:D I can't to see more stories from you and the babies looked so cute! \:D Hopefully you can post pictures of them growing up! \:D This was really good, 5 points! \:rah\: \:rah\: \:rah\:

    On Jul 17, 2008 tracysimer wrote:

    That was the cutest series I have read. I loved her Morrocan vacation and the scenery and the cute little flat they had.beautiful\:wub\:

    On Jul 17, 2008 lilsnugi44 wrote:

    awwww i loved this story!!!\:wub\:

    On Jul 17, 2008 madeleine1994 wrote:

    i think you should change there skin.

    On Jul 17, 2008 plyangel456 wrote:

    Cute story as always, I'm sad that it ended though. By the way, I love the cute little pictures that Aaron drew. -plyangel456- \:D

    On Jul 17, 2008 pjeff03 wrote:

    That was the best story! I am 100% with nleslie!\:rah\: Sadly, I can only give you a 5.0. 5.0 For U!\:rah\: \:rah\:

    On Jul 17, 2008 kitfu11 wrote:

    Aww!!! I'm so glad that everything worked out well in the end! \:wub\: I'm sad to see it end, but I'm looking forward to your next stories! \:D

    On Jul 17, 2008 PollyPlummer wrote:

    One of the best stories I've read around here!!! Congrats!!! \:D You had a good use of language, of vocabulary (only but a couple of spelling & grammar mistakes that are not really that important...) and good painting of characters. It's only not much realistic, everything was way too perfect, BUT it was a real nice story. You know, borrowing the idea of a Spanish author, when the sister of the main character tells her brother (about his diary, what a coincidence), I think that if they've that pretty life, that's lucky of them. So... I'm glad your sims had so much luck in their life \:\)!!!! Good thing to read you'll keep writing stories!

    On Jul 17, 2008 Chuck66 wrote:

    love the story!! fantastic!

    On Jul 17, 2008 wrote:

    neat ending to a neat story! sad it was to be over but it was a great ride!\:D \:D \:D

    On Jul 17, 2008 Dream-In-Hell wrote:

    I just love these stories \:wub\:

    On Jul 17, 2008 drkfirecloud61 wrote:

    Aw. It was great. I look forward to new stories in the future!

    On Jul 17, 2008 boogerbrat101 wrote:

    i love ur stories soooo much \:wub\: and im sad that this is the last diary dear\:\(

    On Jul 17, 2008 wrote:

    \:D \:rah\: \:D dang its over already??? AN AWESOME STORY!! PLEASE WRITE ANOTHER STORY!!

    ps: can you give us an update sometimes on how everyone's doing?

    On Jul 17, 2008 wrote:

    Great! Ive read all of the diary dears that you have wrote. Great twist at the end where she publishes her diary into a novel!

    On Jul 17, 2008 katlin194 wrote:

    Very good and the pictures look amazing!\:rah\:

    On Jul 17, 2008 Lily Fairy2 wrote:

    It's brilliant!! I'm glad everything worked out in the end! \:D

    On Jul 17, 2008 almaxx wrote:

    You can make diary of Sofia or Maria\:rah\: \:\) \:D

    On Jul 17, 2008 converse02 wrote:

    alas.... tis over now!!\:\( \:D you did a fantastic job on every story and I know what you mean by having the game feel like it has a different meaning! lol anyways nice job!!!\:wub\: 5++ for sure!

    On Jul 18, 2008 redwingsbeann wrote:

    \:rah\: I loved this story. \:\( I'm sad this will be the last=(

    On Jul 18, 2008 meghan22 wrote:

    Beautiful story!! 5!!! \:D \:\)

    On Jul 18, 2008 happyb8888 wrote:

    Wonderful story! Cannot wait for your next one!!!!!
    \:rah\: \:rah\: \:rah\: \:rah\: \:rah\: \:rah\:

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    On Jul 18, 2008 x_beautiful_chaos_x wrote:

    This was a very interesting and unique story, I really liked it! Sad it's over though, but even the best stories must come to an end =(. Hope you start a new story soon. The diary idea was really cute, two thumbs up! =)

    On Jul 18, 2008 Shayleexo wrote:

    I really loved the ending, it was so cute!
    I'm a little sad the series is over though!
    \:rah\:

    On Jul 18, 2008 -kalisa- wrote:

    Thank you, thank you, thank you for the comments \:D

    On Jul 19, 2008 MissJay wrote:

    I love that it had a happy ending! As all things this story came to an end and you made it a great story!

    On Jul 20, 2008 wrote:

    Really great, your stories just made me smile over and over again, and I'm more than a bit sad that it's ending. \:\) Keep on writing more of your wonderful stories!! \:\)

    On Jul 21, 2008 age1116523 wrote:

    I loved it! This was one of my favorites. Such a happy ending!\:D \:D

    On Jul 22, 2008 Anime-Hearts wrote:

    I loved it! \:D \:D \:D

    On Aug 19, 2008 Xanthia_love wrote:

    Oh my..! so sweet !! i really enjoyed the story..! so full of realism and emotions . absolutely luvd it !! \:wub\:

    On Sep 18, 2008 Juicy101 wrote:

    I loved reading all of these stories. That was a excellent ending.\:rah\: \:rah\: \:rah\:

    On Sep 21, 2008 wrote:

    Wow...I'm speechless...\:rah\:

    On Sep 26, 2008 skyblue7377 wrote:

    This is even better than the last chapter!!

    On Oct 15, 2008 Thera_M wrote:

    Bye bye diary!

    On Mar 19, 2009 Desu Baloney wrote:

    ......................................................................................................................................................................................................
    that was so good I think I might cry...no seriously. oh well.

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