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Hello!
This is my new story "Forbidden Love". I hope I didn't steal the title of someone's story, although with a title like this it's very possible that I still did. Some songs inspired me to write this story, they will be included soon. I'm sorry for the mistakes and please let me know what you think! :) Hope you will like it.

Hello!
This is my new story "Forbidden Love". I hope I didn't steal the title of someone's story, although with a title like this it's very possible that I still did. Some songs inspired me to write this story, they will be included soon. I'm sorry for the mistakes and please let me know what you think! :) Hope you will like it.
"It's great that my mom works here, don't you think, Richard? We can play together every day!" "Yes, Sarah...That's great! So what are we going to do next?" "You promised to show me your secret room, remember? Please, pleaseee, I want to see it!" "Ahh yes! I will show you...But I'll go and drink something at first, ok? I'm so thirsty!"
"Ok" Sarah said, excited to see the hidden place soon.
"Wait here, Sarah, I'll be right back!" Richard said and left the room.
Sarah was looking around in the room while waiting for Richard...
"Everything looks really beautiful here..." she said out loud. "I wish it was my home."
Meanwhile Richard's grandmother, Eugenia, walked in. "You little brat, what are you doing in my house?" she got angry, finding Sarah looking at her expensive vases. "I'm really sorry, Mrs. Kenrick, I was just waiting for Richard..." Sarah tried to explain. "Waiting for Richard???" Eugenia got furious "A girl like you shouldn't have anything to do with my grandson!" "I'm really sorry, Mrs. Kenrick, I'm really, really sorry..." Sarah said quietly.
"Enough! Where is your mother?" Eugenia asked, raising her voice.
"She's outside..."
"Sneaking around in my house like that! Just wait until I talk to your mother!" Eugenia said, walking away, "Come!" she shouted.
The girl followed her, confused and terrified. She didn't understand what she had done wrong.
Eugenia was mumbling something about Sarah stealing her vases while they were walking down the stairs. "I'm sorry, Mrs. Kenrick. I wasn't planning to take anything. I was just waiting for Richard..." Sarah tried to explain, getting more and more confused about the whole situation. "Grandmother! I asked her to come inside!" Richard came running from the kitchen. He knew from the look of his grandmother's face that she didn't like having Sarah in her house.
"Go to your room, Richard" Eugenia commanded and took Sarah outside.
"This child! Nothing good will come from her"
Eugenia felt how her head started to ache. All she ever wanted in her life was to be happy. But her life hadn't turned out the way she had planned.
Her money and her grandson was all she had left.
"Now where is this useless gardener? Wendy!?!" Eugenia shouted, looking around in front of the house and heading to the back yard after that.
She found Sarah's mother watering the flowers.
"Wendy, how many times have I told you not to bring your daugher here!"
"She's nothing but trouble! I found her sneaking around in my house!" Eugenia complained with an angry tone in her voice. "I'm really sorry, Mrs. Kenrick, but it's summer and I have nowhere to leave her" Wendy apologized. "I'm sure Sarah has a good explanation..." she continued. "I do not care about her explanations! I don't want to see her in my house again! Ever! Is that clair?" Eugenia yelled.
"Mrs. Kenrick, please. She's just a little girl..."
Sarah couldn't watch Mrs. Kenrick shouting at her mother, she covered her eyes with her little hands and ran away from there, crying. "Poor mommy..." Sarah said through the tears. She stayed there hiding from Mrs. Kenrick until it got dark outside. "Oh, Sarah. You will get me fired like that one day...You know how much I need this job..." Wendy told her daughter after finishing the work. "I'm sorry, mommy, I didn't mean to do anything bad..." Tears filled Sarah's eyes again. She knew that Mrs. Kenrick was a mean woman, but she felt so guilty that Eugenia had yelled at her mother because of her. "Let's just go home" Sarah's mother said as they left the Kenrick mansion. Sarah's home was very small, but she still loved it. She had spent all her life in this litte house. It was the best her mother could afford being a gardener and a single mom. Sarah's father had left them some months after Sarah was born. "Go wash your hands, Sarah, I'll cook us something for dinner" Wendy said, opening the fridge. "Mac and cheese again..." she whispered. "Richard might be rich and have a big house, but it's much better to live here" Sarah thought while washing her hands. "My mommy atleast loves me..." she said, dryed her hands and went back to the kitchen. "Mommy?"
"Yes, Sarah?"
"Why does Mrs. Kenrick hate me so much?"
"She doesn't hate you, sweetheart...Life hasn't been kind to Mrs. Kenrick, she's just very sad because of that" Wendy explained. "But that's not my fault, is it?" Sarah asked. "Of course not, Sarah. How could it be your fault? You're seven years old..." Wendy forgot herself thinking about her little daughter and that old Mrs. Kenrick, and burned the dinner.
"Oh no! Not again!"
"It's ok mommy, I like sandwiches too..." Sarah tried to comfort her mother.
"What a horrible day it has been..." Wendy whispered, disappointed in everything and everyone except Sarah. Her little daughter gave the meaning to her life. Sarah sat quietly, eating the sandwich her mother had made. This evening was not different from all the other evenings she remembered. It had always been just Sarah and her mother, the same house, the same kitchen, and even the sandwich tasted the same as usually. "Ready for bed, Sarah?" Wendy asked after the dinner, opening the bed that had been 'on the wall' during the day to give Sarah more space to play.
"I don't feel tired yet, mommy..."
"Sweetheart, please...It has been a long day for both of us. Good night, Sarah"
"Good night, mommy...Will you come too?"
"I will soon, just go to bed and close your eyes."
Sarah changed her clothes and went to bed as her mother had asked...
"I hope Mrs. Kenrick won't be at home tomorrow" she said. Knowing that she would see Richard again in the morning made her feel happy.
"My little girl...You're so sweet and innocent. I wish I could protect you from that cruel world..." Wendy was thinking, looking at her sleeping child. There was only one bed in the household. Soon they were both asleep, dreaming of a place where life was better and people were nicer to them. When Wendy went to work the next day, she took Sarah with her again. She really didn't have anywhere to leave her. Hiring a nanny was something Wendy couldn't afford. Sarah knew she wasn't allowed to go inside the house anymore, so she tried to stay close to her mother in order not to do anything forbidden again. Hunting bugs kept her entertained. For a while. Soon Richard came.
"I'm really sorry about yesterday, Sarah. You know my grandmother..." he apologized.
"I know, Richard. That wasn't your fault, so don't worry...I'm just not allowed to enter the house anymore" Sarah told him. "But grandmother isn't at home today..." Richard said and a foxy smile appeared to his face. "Do you still want to see my secret room?" "I don't know...Mrs. Kenrick could get back any moment" Sarah doubted, although she was dying to see the room Richard had talked about so many times. "Let's better play outside today..." she finally said. "Good morning, Richard" a man said, coming outside to check on her son before going to work. Richard's father Lionel was a business-man and his job took most of his time. He felt guilty for not spending enough time with his son, but he thought Richard's grandmother knew more about bringing up children anyway, so he let his mother-in-law do all the hard work. Richard's mother Henrietta had passed away when Richard was a toddler. That was the only thing Sarah knew about her, no one ever wanted to talk about Henrietta Kenrick. Sometimes Richard stopped at her mother's grave and just stood there, looking very sad. Luckily for him, Sarah was always there to comfort him.
"You're my best friend, Sarah!" he used to say.
Soon Sarah forgot her fear and spent hours playing in the house again with Richard. When Mrs. Kenrick wasn't at home, the kids went to jump on her bed. For revenge. When Mrs. Kenrick was at home, Richard took Sarah to his secret place where no one could find them. Richard's room had once belonged to his mother - Henrietta probably needed a place to hide, too. And now it was Richard's. Sarah loved the room - it was safe there... It was the only place where no one could take her away from Richard.

{To Be Continued...}

Thank you for reading!
-kalisa-

Forbidden Love

Nov 30, 2008 by -kalisa-
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    56 Comment(s) posted so far

    On Nov 30, 2008 msdimples595 wrote:

    Loved it they were so cute

    On Nov 30, 2008 harvickgirl wrote:

    Loving it ! \:rah\:

    On Nov 30, 2008 -mackenzie- wrote:

    cute story\:D \:D liked it\:\)

    On Nov 30, 2008 bebefury wrote:

    so cute!\:\)

    On Nov 30, 2008 catsandbooks wrote:

    Loved this beginning! \:D

    On Nov 30, 2008 lilyjul96 wrote:

    Cute!!!!!!!

    On Nov 30, 2008 DiddakoiGirl wrote:

    Loved it lots! \:rah\: Please continue!

    On Nov 30, 2008 Jaws3 wrote:

    Another great story!\:D

    On Nov 30, 2008 Anime-Hearts wrote:

    Such a sweet story! \:wub\: Can't wait for the next part! \:D \:rah\:

    On Nov 30, 2008 sims 2 friend wrote:

    AAAAW! How cute! \:wub\: \:wub\: \:wub\:

    On Nov 30, 2008 Fikcija wrote:

    Yay, another story from you!!! 5.0 \:rah\:

    On Nov 30, 2008 narniana wrote:

    LOved it!\:wub\: Can't wait for the next part!!\:D \:D

    On Nov 30, 2008 smiley00girl wrote:

    Awesome! I loved it and I can't wait for more! Sarah and Richard are sooo cute together!\:wub\: \:D \:\)

    On Nov 30, 2008 whitmartinez wrote:

    \:wub\: Another great story from you! Sarah and Richard are cute and I wonder as the years go by what will happen with them and also if the secret room is involved. Can't wait to read the next chapter.

    On Nov 30, 2008 tykijones wrote:

    there should be a part 2

    On Nov 30, 2008 Earcat wrote:

    Great story so far. Congratulations on being featured.

    On Nov 30, 2008 charlemainexvx wrote:

    loved the story cant wait for the rest !\:D

    On Nov 30, 2008 islandchild97 wrote:

    awwwwwwww...... that old woman is beep beep beep

    On Nov 30, 2008 Selenaq wrote:

    I can't wait to find out what happens! Keep up the great work! \:wub\: \:rah\:

    On Nov 30, 2008 kk_am20 wrote:

    You did a fantastic job!\:\)

    On Nov 30, 2008 ankitanki wrote:

    i love it !
    keep up the good work !

    On Nov 30, 2008 plyangel456 wrote:

    Awwwwwwww how sweet! I loved it! -plyangel456- \:D \:rah\: \:D

    On Nov 30, 2008 norabora95 wrote:

    \:rah\: \:wub\: loved it so far! post more really soon!
    wow! evil grandma! i like it.

    On Nov 30, 2008 JapaneseChinLove wrote:

    I love this story!!! You are such an ah-mazing writer!!! Sarah and Richard are so so so sweet and adorable!!! 5.0!!! Great job!!! \:wub\: \:wub\: \:wub\:

    On Nov 30, 2008 misha1013 wrote:

    awwwww.sweet story......loved it can't wait for more\:rah\: \:wub\: \;\) \:D

    On Nov 30, 2008 serei wrote:

    I like it, it's so sweet!\:wub\:

    On Nov 30, 2008 great b2 wrote:

    Awww this is such a cute story I love it. cant wait till the next one.\:wub\: \:wub\: \:wub\:

    On Nov 30, 2008 lordeverglot wrote:

    This story is SO interesting!!! Good Job! Adleast some quality story among all that trash. Not all but mostly. \:\)

    On Nov 30, 2008 mightyfaithgirl wrote:

    \:rah\:

    On Nov 30, 2008 French Fry100 wrote:

    oh u made a new story love ur storys i was starting to get bored this story was cute \:D XOXOXOXOXO

    On Nov 30, 2008 wrote:

    Wow I love that story!\:rah\: \:rah\: \:rah\:

    On Nov 30, 2008 KDLANG0 wrote:

    I just love this story!\:wub\: So cuuuuuuuute and I just adore cute things\;\) \:P So pleeeeaaaaase continue!

    On Nov 30, 2008 tonya99rn wrote:

    \:D Wonderful story! Very well written! You are so creative! Love your work! Please continue soon!\;\) \:D

    On Nov 30, 2008 Scwt wrote:

    \:D \:D \:D

    I like where this is going.

    On Dec 1, 2008 simslover123 wrote:

    \:P \;\) \:cool\: yaaaay!

    On Dec 1, 2008 jadedqueenie wrote:

    aaaawwwwww \:wub\:

    On Dec 1, 2008 spicylove wrote:

    \:wub\: so cute i love your story keep up the good work\;\)

    On Dec 1, 2008 zucchinideen wrote:

    \:wub\: \:rah\:

    On Dec 1, 2008 mlpokm wrote:

    great job! 5.0!!!\:rah\: \:rah\:

    On Dec 1, 2008 powerfulcheese wrote:

    cute story\:wub\:

    On Dec 1, 2008 Little Cloud wrote:

    Oh, a new story!!! I love it! You did a very good job \:rah\: \:D, like always \:wub\:. Can't wait for the next part!

    On Dec 1, 2008 stephanie1225 wrote:

    Great job!! \:D

    On Dec 1, 2008 wwechick38 wrote:

    this was such a cute beginning! i hope to see more soon \:\) it's a 5.0 well earned \:D

    On Dec 1, 2008 charray wrote:

    Very cute story \:rah\: \:\) \:\)

    On Dec 1, 2008 SueAlJen wrote:

    \:wub\: very sweet!

    On Dec 2, 2008 pjeff03 wrote:

    OOOOOHhhhhhhhhhh. Interesting story. Oh, FYI, I WAS working on a story with the same title, but my computer crashed, for good. I just don't want you to be upset, because when we get a new computer, I will work on it. I have words written, I just need to make it happen in sims. \:rah\: \:rah\: \:rah\: Fantastic story! \:rah\: \:rah\: \:rah\:

    On Dec 2, 2008 robbyngirl wrote:

    Love the story!! 5.0\:rah\:

    On Dec 2, 2008 lotteke wrote:

    I love the story \:wub\:

    On Dec 2, 2008 elvizog wrote:

    \:wub\: \:\)

    On Dec 2, 2008 bettybetty13 wrote:

    Another great story Kalisa! \:wub\:

    On Dec 4, 2008 Thera_M wrote:

    It is very great like it ussually is when you write it.
    I reallz know what are zou talking about not having the right words for the story.
    But good luck and keep it so great!

    On Dec 4, 2008 yeli11 wrote:

    aww itt suchh a cute story

    On Dec 4, 2008 CamCo9 wrote:

    That's soooo good! I loved it and can't wait for the next part of the sory! \;\)

    On Dec 8, 2008 Hardyfan101 wrote:

    Nice!!!\:rah\: \:rah\: \:rah\:

    On Jan 14, 2009 Desu Baloney wrote:

    that was SO awesome! Yeah, this is way in the furture, but I  saw your story as I was surfing the site, and I love it! Glad I took the time to leave off studying for a while and have some fun!

    On Mar 9, 2009 Kvetoslava wrote:

    \:rah\: \:wub\:

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