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Hello!
This is the final part of "Rose Or Someone"...

Hello!
This is the final part of "Rose Or Someone"... She arrived to the hotel, hoping there would be a room for her. "It doesn't look like an expensive hotel...Good..." she said and stepped out from her car. She took the child and started to look for the place where she could check in. "I think this should be the it...Hello??? Anybody here?" she shouted. The little boy she was holding started to whine. After waiting for a moment, a man appeared.
"Can I help you, mam?" he asked. He was looking very sleepy, but no one could blame him, as it was almost 3 o'clock in the morning. "Oh, hello...I am really sorry to disturb you so late, but me and my little daughter need a place to stay" she lied...
"No problem..." the man replied. "Just let me get the key..." he said.
"Great...what about the check-in?" the woman wanted to know. The child started to cry, he was hungry and wanted to sleep.
"We can do it in the morning, I can see that your daughter is really sleepy, so it's not a problem!"
"Thank you" "Come, I'll show you the room" the man told her and went outside. She followed him. "Here it is!" "The bathroom is over there, there should be enought warm water right now...What else...Ahh...do you need a crib for your daughter?" the sleepy man asked.
"Yes, please, it's very kind of you" she said, trying to be as nice as possible.
"No problem!" After the man left she put the boy on the floor and nervously started to walk around in the room. Soon the man returned with a crib. "Where should I place it, mam?" he asked... "It's fine like that, thank you..."
"No problem!" "Ok...enjoy your stay. Good night!" the man said and left, still feeling very sleepy. "Ok, you brat...This man brought you a bed, so sleep now. And don't you dare to make a sound while I'm trying to sleep" the woman said and put the child into the crib. "So...what now...hopefully this stupid man didn't recognize me...Nah, of course he didn't, darling, he's not smart enough for that..." she told herself and went to the bathroom. She took off her wig and decided to have a soothing bath.
"I need a plan...I need a plan...I think I should give him up for adoption and marry a rich old man. What a brilliant idea!" the woman said and laughed. Meanwhile a police car stopped in front of the hotel. And then another... The poor sleepy man didn't know what to say when he suddenly saw two officers entering the hotel.
"Emmm....May I help you?" he asked. "Hello" the policeman said, "I'm officer Lindberg and this is officer Springhill" "We're looking for a woman named Violet Redford and we have a reason to believe she's staying in your hotel" he continued, "Last seen with black hair, travelling with a 3-year-old boy"
"Violet Redford? Let me think..." the man said... "No, there is no Violet here...although...One woman arrived about 15 minutes ago..." "But she's definetly not the one you're looking for, she's here with her daughter" "She seemed to be a really nice girl..." the man said.
"It's her, that's the woman we're looking for!" officer Springhill said, "Where is she?" "But, but..."
"Just tell us where she is!"
"Room 32"
 After getting the key to room 32 the officers rushed upstairs. "The boy is here! We found him! He's fine!" officer Lindberg told his partner. "Take him outside!"
"Hello Mathias...Everything is ok. You're safe now!" officer Lindberg said and took the boy. At the same time another car arrived. ... A man got out from the car and ran towards the hotel. "Mathias!" "Matty!!!" he shouted desperately. 'Over here!' he heard someone saying and ran upstairs, following the voice. "Oh Mathias!" he said, grabbing his son from the police officer. Mathias put his little arms around his fathers neck and hugged him so strongly as he'd never let go. "Daddy!" he said. His father's eyes filled with tears. "Baby, I'm so sorry...What has she done with you? It's ok now, daddy's here." Aaron told his son. Officer Lindberg arrested Violet. The woman had tried to escape, but she couldn't. When Aaron saw her, he just couldn't stop himself. "How could you, Violet, how could you!?!?!" he shouted and shoved her, "You're one heartless..."
"Sir!" the policeman stopped him. Then they took Violet away. Aaron was standing there with Mathias, watching them leave.
"Bad mommy!" Matty suddenly said.
"Bad, bad mommy..." Aaron replied his son's words, wondering who had told Mathias that Violet was his mother. The little one had never even seen Violet before she kidnapped him. "Let's go home now, Matty..." "Daddy will take you home..." Aaron said and tickled his son, "Everyone is waiting for us" "It's going to be ok, Mathias, I will never let anything happen to you again. Ever." -The End-

Thanks for reading! I know there should have been more action in this story, but it's not really my genre :P

-kalisa-

Rose Or Someone (3)

Sep 20, 2008 by -kalisa-
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    19 Comment(s) posted so far

    On Sep 21, 2008 halfasian751 wrote:

    i loved it! it was so cute when matty was hugging aaron and his hands were clasped around his neck, and matty looks so cute with his hair short

    On Sep 21, 2008 wrote:

    \:rah\: I'm so happy that Aaron and Mathias are together again!!! 5.0 \:D

    On Sep 21, 2008 Etnik13 wrote:

    Great job!

    On Sep 21, 2008 -mackenzie- wrote:

    good that violrt is now in prison,\:D nice job\:rah\: \:\)

    On Sep 21, 2008 SuperStar94 wrote:

    Awwww - such a cute ending. Those picures with Aaron and Matty are lovely \:wub\:

    On Sep 21, 2008 Fikcija wrote:

    The story is great \:\) I'm glad it has a happy ending. \:rah\:

    On Sep 21, 2008 candy820 wrote:

    Awesome I'm glad violet got caught. And Matty is back with his Dad where he belongs. I loved the story and the awesome pictures of Matty and his Dad.\:D \:D 5.0 here

    On Sep 21, 2008 Kerry001 wrote:

    \:rah\: \:wub\: \:rah\:

    On Sep 21, 2008 simsnina wrote:

    Loved it \:wub\: \:wub\: \:wub\:

    On Sep 21, 2008 Murder Of Emo wrote:

    amazing.\:wub\:

    On Sep 21, 2008 bettybetty13 wrote:

    \:wub\: I am so happy Mathias is ok and back with Aaron!!

    On Sep 21, 2008 Lear01639 wrote:

    Awesome glad they found matty \:D i loved it 5.0

    On Sep 21, 2008 finsgirlie wrote:

    such cute pictures of matty and daddy! this was great....

    On Sep 21, 2008 whitmartinez wrote:

    \:wub\: great ending and I loved the pics of Mattie with his dad.

    On Sep 21, 2008 shelllharn wrote:

    great story loved it wooooo\:rah\: \:rah\: \:rah\: please read mine and comment xxx

    On Sep 22, 2008 wrote:

    Nice story like it a lot\:D \:D \:D

    On Sep 22, 2008 kitfu11 wrote:

    Good! I'm glad that witch is in jail now! \:rah\: \:D

    On Sep 22, 2008 Juicy101 wrote:

    Great Story. Matty is finally going to be with his family again. I am glad the police caught Violet. She is getting what she deserves. \:D

    On Sep 25, 2008 Irnouba wrote:

    i love how all your stories are connected!!

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