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It was late when she arrived to Vanessa's house. Vanessa, her best friend was out of town for the weekend and she needed a place to stay.
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On Sep 18, 2008 MagySims wrote:
Omg it is sooo cool. Canīt wait for another part. =) 5.0
On Sep 18, 2008 qasert wrote:
On Sep 18, 2008 wrote:
Damn I wanted to see what that 'thing' was. Sounds like a good story plan. Hope the next part is out soon.
On Sep 18, 2008 finsgirlie wrote:
this is great! very mysterious!
On Sep 18, 2008 SuperStar94 wrote:
Wow, you have me hooked now
Will look out for more parts of this
On Sep 18, 2008 bettybetty13 wrote:
Is this Violet???? Hmmmm.....
On Sep 18, 2008 pjeff03 wrote:
I am with bettybetty13. IS this Violet? The hair it showed at the end was blonde and the crying could be Mathias...
5.0
On Sep 19, 2008 skyblue7377 wrote:
ooooo...nice!!! I am loven it...can't wait for more!!
On Sep 19, 2008 simslover123 wrote:
oooo yeah it's gotta be violet and mathias, ohh poor baby.
On Sep 19, 2008 Fikcija wrote:
Oops... Missed this story. I saw the title in the stories section but didn't notice this story is written by you, until reading "Me, Maria (14)" there was a sentence "Someone had reported about a woman named Rose, they believe it might be Violet". Then something in my head said "Wait a second... Rose? There was a story!!!" So I'm going back to read about Maria and I'll read this right after that...
On Sep 19, 2008 Fikcija wrote:
What can I say, 5.0 as always
I love it how you align the stories.
On Sep 20, 2008 halfasian751 wrote:
good story....all your stories are really great
On Sep 21, 2008 whitmartinez wrote:
On Sep 21, 2008 wrote:
very nice story
On Sep 21, 2008 wrote:
Very mysterious! I actually didn't understand who she was before I read the comments...Someone from your other story!!!
5.0
On Sep 21, 2008 simsnina wrote:
Can't waqit for a part two.. I hope there is one!
5.0!
On Sep 21, 2008 Kerry001 wrote:
This has to be Violet. At least she is feeding Mathias. But she needs to let him out!
On Sep 22, 2008 kitfu11 wrote:
OMG Violet! What a horrible person!
On Sep 23, 2008 blackbutterflys wrote:
On Sep 23, 2008 sar612 wrote:
fab story