A VERY special thank you to:
Tenderhrt for inspiring me to continue to write and practice!
RyleeRyder @ Scribbler's Abode for her photo editing tutorials.
SimConnection.com for all your wonderful Custom Content. My stories would be bland without! ;o)
The T for that fabolous dress my Sim is wearing! TY!
And truely, Latoyanwebb for an amazing charater!
I would also like to thank all of my TSR family for taking time out to read, rate and sign GB's that encourage me to continue to learn and grow. It took FOREVER for this one! I hope you will enjoy! ;o)
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On Nov 13, 2006 lexique wrote:
wow, i luvved the sorry, carnt w8 to the next part!
On Nov 13, 2006 vkd wrote:
Grrrr why did you stop
LOL very good start can't wait for more! What is going to happen? I have my ideas but I wanna know NOW! Just kidding! Great work, stunning pictures and really good suspense! Thankyou
On Nov 13, 2006 Gibson Twins wrote:
What a lovely story please make chapter 2 soon
On Nov 13, 2006 Tenderhrt wrote:
Like I told you on the exchange I am sooooooooooooooooooooo proud of you, you did a great job with this story and I am so looking forward to chapter 2 don't do like me and keep us waiting too long! LOL... Awww I'm tearing up now!
^5
On Nov 14, 2006 WitchiePoo1472 wrote:
When is Chapter 2!? I kept trying to read and didn't realize the chapter was over.
On Nov 14, 2006 oldmember_m k31 wrote:
i love it1
PLZ write more soon!
On Nov 14, 2006 wrote:
On Nov 14, 2006 newmansfan12 wrote:
love it
On Nov 14, 2006 elizgrl_518 wrote:
Liked it a lot
On Nov 15, 2006 wrote:
You are the queen of storys!
U rock! Write more soon!
On Nov 15, 2006 latoyanwebb wrote:
What! What happens next! It's time to post the next one. I'm left wondering and I like it. Keep up the good work! Oh by the way I look good!
On Nov 15, 2006 LIUBlueJeans wrote:
On Nov 15, 2006 neels wrote:
Can't wait for the rest
On Nov 15, 2006 wrote:
Great story, and I must say your pics are top-quality. Well done!
On Nov 16, 2006 pili_vamp wrote:
Great story, so emotional... I was kind of sad at first... now... I don't kno what to think... should there be a wedding propousal? should she say yes? Should she run into Shawn at the very same time Jeremy was taking the ring out??? And don't know... but whatever you'll write I'm sure it will be great... You're ready to make your own Soap!!!
On Nov 16, 2006 pili_vamp wrote:
On Nov 16, 2006 wrote:
i love it!
On Nov 16, 2006 MoriaG wrote:
Great story!! I love the pictures and setting. THe Dress is beautiful!!! and very intertesting, cant wait for chapter 2, you left us hangin
On Nov 16, 2006 slime wrote:
thats it it was so great why did it it end i can wait for the next part 5 points
On Nov 16, 2006 dawny1234 wrote:
vgd
On Nov 16, 2006 amiej330 wrote:
On Nov 16, 2006 savanabonita wrote:
Wonderfull story
I love it
On Nov 16, 2006 SimsBarbie wrote:
(Hey that ended way to fast!!) LOL Anywho, that red dress is hot! and so is the hairdo that went with it! Rajun Cajun is so beautiful ont he outside! I think Jeremy is sweating cuz he wants to propose?
Though Cloe still loves the man in her past. Wow! Great start. I can't wait to see what will happen next.
On Nov 16, 2006 lisap426 wrote:
I kept clicking to go the next frame only to find out it was over
(duh!!) great story, can't wait for the next part
On Nov 17, 2006 wrote:
Ooooh I can't wait to find out what happens next. Great story well done!
On Nov 17, 2006 Nono_Girl wrote:
Loved it.Hurry up with ch.2plizzzz!!!!!
On Nov 17, 2006 gadalu wrote:
Your story is really fantastic - I like it so much and hope I can soon read the next chapter
On Nov 18, 2006 lilqueennbri wrote:
I LOVE IT. can't wait to find out whats going to happen next.
On Nov 18, 2006 karupin wrote:
I love this story. Can't wait for you to continue it
On Nov 18, 2006 greeksim wrote:
Very good
On Nov 18, 2006 drewsoltesz wrote:
Very good screenshots, you set the mood perfectly...a good cliffhanger...well done!!
On Nov 18, 2006 panila wrote:
this story was amazing
On Nov 18, 2006 Eisbaerbonzo wrote:
More!!!
Please, don't let us wait too long. I love the way you present the opening pictures, it's pretty much work but worth while.
On Nov 18, 2006 bydea wrote:
Good story. Can't wait to read Chapter 2.
On Nov 19, 2006 wrote:
I got soooo mad when it ended!
L-O-V-E the story!!! Chapter 2!!! Hopefully it will come out sooon!!!
5 points that are WELL DESERVED!
On Nov 19, 2006 wrote:
very good, I loved it...
On Nov 19, 2006 Linasmultrollet wrote:
On Nov 19, 2006 wrote:
Wow!! That was great Plz Make a Park Two I loved it!! !
On Nov 21, 2006 kittydiva_2017 wrote:
What can I say except, I loved it!!!!!!!!!!!
On Nov 21, 2006 kittydiva_2017 wrote:
On Nov 23, 2006 cireking213 wrote:
Hi Ajoya!
I love to write stories, but I have a hard time reading stories written by others. I rarely finish, or start to skip over what they write. I feel bad about that, but I finished yours. I guess I don't finish because some writers don't raise interesting questions in my mind. You raised some for me. I thought Shawn was an interstesting character. My first question was: is he going to show up again in Chloe's life? I hope so. My Second question was: what's so exciting about the Rajun Cajun? Chloe really is excited about it. My third was why is Jeremy so nervous? So good job on keeping me reading. I wish it was longer. You should know from my stories--and this comment--that I write a lot.
On Nov 23, 2006 wrote:
Great story I'm going to read the second chapter now!!
On Nov 24, 2006 ohmyitsnikki wrote:
Great story! Onto the next part! Thanks for sharing!
On Nov 24, 2006 wrote:
CAn't wait till the next 1!
On Nov 25, 2006 Mystrelia wrote:
Whoa! You know how to leave a person hanging, don't you? LOL It's a good thing Chapter 2 is up--I'll be on the lookout for the cliff in that one!
On Dec 1, 2006 EarthGoddess54 wrote:
Great cliff hanger! Very well written, the reading is smooth and you did a great job portraying each character's unique personality. I like that the dialogue is so real to life. 5.0 all the way!
On Dec 1, 2006 coolstuffin wrote:
Good reading! The characters are well developed for so early in the story, you successfully built an anticipation of dramatic events and then left the story with a great cliffhanger. 5 from me and off to read part 2.
On Dec 12, 2006 jazzi04 wrote:
On Dec 25, 2006 wrote:
The pictures are beautiful! But you left me hanging! Off to read 2!
On Dec 29, 2006 manuela55 wrote:
On Jan 5, 2007 Olga2102 wrote:
great idea and great story!!!
On Jan 5, 2007 shady411 wrote:
Great start. Very interesting and fabuluos pics
On Jan 17, 2007 Pete789 wrote:
On Jan 18, 2007 kamyelena wrote:
uhhh...nice!!
On Jan 21, 2007 filizk wrote:
Fantastic story and great screenshots and settings. Off to the second chapter now.
On Jan 27, 2007 civetinja wrote:
Great story ! Thanks !
On Feb 9, 2007 xtessax34 wrote:
that was very good!
On Aug 20, 2007 Zayury wrote:
On Aug 20, 2007 studyofme wrote:
Nice Beginning! I'm glad I figured out where to find this story.
On Aug 27, 2007 binky13 wrote:
Interesting beginning.
I like the mystery at the end.
On Nov 12, 2007 OpheliaNival wrote:
Great beginning! Maybe he's about to propose?! I am so ready for more!
On Jan 18, 2008 cptnemo6 wrote:
Great story!!!
On Jan 20, 2008 lordeverglot wrote:
good job! great story