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This is the third chapter of Bring Me To Life. Stories appear om my mind just like a movie. Read and enjoy

This is the third chapter of Bring Me To Life. Stories appear om my mind just like a movie. Read and enjoy Alice: "Now, don't lie to me Alice II. What did you see in the room the other night?"
Alice II: *metalic voice* " I saw a ghost. A shining bright ghost. Is it so difficult to understand? Do you want me to draw a picture of it to you?"
Alice: "Very funny!"
Alice: "What was he doing? Why was he in our bedroom?"
Alice II: *metalic voice* "How am I supposed to know all these things? I promise the next time we meet i'll invite him for tea or dinner. You pay. I'm just an android..."
Alice: Oh...
Very far away from there...maybe in another dimension of time and space...
Holmes: " Excuse me, why are you following me, sir?"
Man: "Are you Sherlock Holmes?"
Holmes: "Yes, indeed, I am."
Man: "I need your services, Mr. Holmes. Something very important to all human kind was stolen from my lab."
Holmes: "You are a scientist?"
Man: "Yes, sir. Please, can you take the case?"
Holmes: "I can think about it. You may visit me at my house on Baker street tomorrow morning. Here is my card."
Man: Thank you, "Mr. Holmes."
Back to the present
Lord Western *thinking*: "He is back... I can feel it in my bones...I must stop him... He must be stopped!"
Lord Western *thinking*: This time he will never escape again. I shall capture him and put him in the box..." Lord Western *thinking*: He shall never make my life miserable again..." That night Alice had a very weird dream...she dreamt she was outside the manor in the mist... in the cold, but she wasn't feeling cold...she wasn't alone, though...she could feel the presence of someone Aidan: "Do not be afraid of me. I would never harm you, for you are my 'anam cara', my soul mate, my everything..." Aidan: "I shall be with you always, every day of your life, beloved..." Alice: "Aidan...?"

To be continued...

Bring Me To Life - Chapt. 3

Jul 18, 2010 by AnnieBoo
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    14 Comment(s) posted so far

    On Jul 18, 2010 martoele wrote:

    Ah.... fantastic! Romance mixing with mystery. I love it. \:wub\: I love the screenies and I love the sims you have created. 5.0 ~ Margo.

    On Jul 18, 2010 fredbrenny wrote:

    You are sooo good! \:wub\: Love it Love it Love it!!! (cute Sherlock)

    On Jul 19, 2010 AnnieBoo wrote:

    Thank you girls!!!! \:wub\:

    On Jul 19, 2010 YrS92 wrote:

    Lovely, I love Sherlock\:wub\: And the whole romance and mystery\:wub\: Can't wait for more... \:wub\:

    On Jul 19, 2010 LaSunrise wrote:

    Fantastic chapter... I love your story \:wub\:

    On Jul 19, 2010 Illandrya wrote:

    Oooh, ghosts, romance, mystery - and a very spiffy looking Sherlock Holmes. I'm enjoying this story and looking forward to more!

    On Jul 20, 2010 fabrizioammollo wrote:

    This is a great story!

    On Jul 21, 2010 RatRaceRob wrote:

    Great chapter/screens \:D Looking forward to the next!

    On Jul 24, 2010 Mangio wrote:

    Romance, mystery, fantasy? \:rah\: Its so perfect, what amazing screen \:wub\: Love the last one especially \:wub\: Can't wait for more

    On Aug 10, 2010 Simlight16 wrote:

    Okay, I'm glad I found this chapter! But I hope that the next one is out soon!

    On Oct 19, 2010 cumry wrote:

    I love your story its great, cant wait for the next one \:wub\:

    On Feb 22, 2011 emilymarie0201 wrote:

    Love it<3 \:\)

    On Oct 17, 2011 xhaii wrote:

    as expected, another excellent chapter from you annie ^^
    I'm really looking forward that you'd continue this story..I'm so loving it, the mystery,romantic thing, i meant the whole thing
    with the time space, ghosts..who will come out next after sherlock holmes? Harry Potter? HAHAHA :P

    On Nov 24, 2011 evi wrote:

    Beautiful story\:\)

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