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Hey there and welcome to the fourth and final chapter of my story ''Songs about Jane''.
A BIG... no...HUGE thank you to the people, who followed the series.
And thank you for the lovely comments you left me.
You really made me happy.
If you haven't read the previous chapters, then I think you should do it... but if you have, you're welcome to read further.
Enjoy the story.

Hey there and welcome to the fourth and final chapter of my story ''Songs about Jane''.
A BIG... no...HUGE thank you to the people, who followed the series.
And thank you for the lovely comments you left me.
You really made me happy.
If you haven't read the previous chapters, then I think you should do it... but if you have, you're welcome to read further.
Enjoy the story. This kiss made Jane shiver.
It was a special kiss.
When, she kissed Mike, she never felt like this.
It was like a kiss from the movies... unexpected, romantic... perfect. But it wasn't long lasting.
Jane's mother arrived home. ''Jane, what the hell is this?'' she said with disgust. Jane walked over to her mother.
''Um...mom...this is...um...Colin. I met him a day ago. He lives next door.'' she said in a shy voice. Colin started feeling uncomfortable.
''Jane, I think I should go.'' he whispered.
''Okay, bye.'' Jane said. ''What is this, Jane? You just broke up with your boyfriend and now you're smooching some guy you just met.'' her mom started yelling, while Colin walked out of the door.
Jane: ''Mom, how can you say this? Colin is very nice.''
Jane's mom: ''But what do you want me to say, when you're standing here wrapped in only a small white towel... and besides, you tought, that Mike is nice too.''
Jane: ''Colin is nothing like Mike.''
Jane's mom: ''Fine... whatever..'' Jane: ''Can you atleast tell me, where have you been?''
Jane's mom: ''My boss called me.I went to meet him and I got my job back... and we also sat in the bar and drank a little.''
Jane: ''That's great... exept the bar part...''
Jane's mom: ''I'm really happy, that you came to visit... realy really happy, but I think you should go live with dad.''
Jane: ''What?'' Jane's mom: ''I love you very much but I don't want you to live like this. You deserve a better life... with someone, who cares about you. If you stay here, I won't be around much, but you need someone to be around.''
Jane: ''I understand..but me and dad...we had a little fight.''
Jane's mom: ''Well it's still early in the morning... you can call him, meet somewhere and still manage to be in school in time.''
Jane: ''Fine.'' Jane's mom walked out, while Jane went to the phone. She dialed her father's number. Her fingers were shaking like crazy. He picked up.
''Dad, I need to talk to you... can we meet somewhere?'' she said. An hour later they met at Lily's diner.
''So, are you hungry?'' Jane's father smiled while handing her the menu.
''Dad, it's not why i'm here. we have to talk.'' she said. ''Fine, let's talk.'' her father took a deep breath. Jane: ''I am very sorry.. for everything I said to you....''
Jane's dad: ''Don't say anything... I know that your sorry and I am too. I treated you like a little girl. But everything will change now.''
Jane: ''So... I'm coming back home after school.''
Jane's dad: ''Ofcourse...but now you have to go to school or you will be late. We will talk home.'' ''Okay...thank you, dad.'' she smiled.
She got off the table and rushed to school. AFTER THE LESSONS.

Jane opened her locker to put some books in there. When, she closed it, she realised that Mike is standing next to her. ''How are you?'' he asked.
''I was fine until I realised that you're here.'' she smiled. Mike: ''Oh, come on ,Jane! We both know that you still love me.. you're just angry. Let's just kiss and make up.''
Jane: ''And you got the nerve to talk to me like this? Even after what you did?'' ''Come on, love, I said I'm sorry.'' he said. He started getting closer to her.
Mike: ''You know how I miss your touch... your lips... it drives me crazy.. the fact that you're not mine.''
Jane: ''Mike, you're scaring me...'' Mike: ''You can't resist me... you still love me.''
Jane: ''You're crazy.''
Mike: ''Yes I am. I am as crazy for you as you are for me. Now come here!''
Jane: ''Mike stop...'' ''I SAID STOP!'' she pushed him away. ''I can never love you... not after what you did...'' She turned around and quickly walked away from him.
Mike was very angry. He couldn't stand the fact that Jane doesn't belong to him anymore. After school Jane returned to her mother's apartment.
She wanted to take some stuff before she goes back to live with her father. Suddenly she saw Colin.
He started smiling when he saw Jane. ''Jane, I am so glad to see you...'' he reached out his hand to her cheek. ''Colin, it's not the best time right now.'' she said angrily. Colin: ''But I tought that everything was okay between us... we kissed...''
Jane: ''It doesn't matter.''
Colin: ''What? It does!''
Jane: ''No, it doesn't... I was in pain... you were around. I used you... that's all. Now I'm moving back in with my dad.''
Colin just looked at her with a sad look on his face.
Jane: ''You know what?... I don't need that stuff from mom's apartment... I'm leaving now.'' She walked away.
Colin just stood there. It was a huge shock. He actually started to fall in love with her. A WEEK LATER.

Jane changed her look a lot since living with her dad. She got tired of being the so called- grey rat and decide to finally be noticed.
All this time she couldn't stop thinking about Colin. What she said to him... it wasn't true... she didn't even know why she said it. She probably said it because she was afraid to get hurt again. But this time she hurt herself and Colin. She couldn't live with this anymore. After class she ran into her classmate Elizabeth. Elizabeth: ''Hey, jane, how are you?''
Jane: ''Strange, actually... why are you talking to me? You almoast never talk to me.''
Elizabeth: ''I just wanted to say that I'm really sorry for you... my friend told me what Mike did to you. He is a bastard... and Chrsitine is a sl...'' Jane: ''It's fine. I got over it. There are other things on my mind right now... other people.. another person... someone else.''
Elizabeth: ''Oh, so you're dating someone?''
Jane: ''Not sure...I said afwul things to him... made him feel like he doesn't matter to me. But he does. I never fell for someone in such a short period... I shouldn't be talking about this.'' Elizabeth: ''No, IT'S FINE! My advice is- stop feeling guilty! If you don't feel anything for Mike anymore, then find that other guy... apoligize to him. Tell him how you feel.''
Jane: ''Wow, Liz, I'm supprised that you care.''
Elizabeth: ''Me too... by the way... nice hair.'' Suddenly Mike appeared.
Mike: ''Elizabeth, can you please let me and Jane talk in private?'' Elizabeth: ''Sure... whatever...'' Mike: ''Are you STILL mad at me?''
Jane: ''No, I'm not... infact... I don't care about you at all.''
Mike: ''I have something important to tell you.''
Jane: ''Spil it out! It's not like I can hide from you anywhere...'' Mike: ''Jane, I love you...''
Jane: ''WTF?????? Are you kidding me?''
Mike: ''No, seriously. It makes me crazy.. the fact that you don't care about me. I realised it just now.... I am truly in love with you.''
Jane: ''Well I'm not in love with you...''
Mike: ''But who else do you have exept me? Nobody cares about you like I do.'' ''You know what?... there is somebody... and he cares.'' she smiled.
Then she just walked away from Mike. She didn't want to talk to him anymore. ''I have to go and talk to Colin.'' she said to herself, while walking out of school. Suddenly she saw Colin standing in front of her school.
She was very supprised. She felt her heart pounding faster.
''What is this-the day of supprises?'' she tought. She ran to him and gave him a hug.
''I'm SO glad to see you.'' she said. ''Well I tought that you're going to kill me for coming.'' he laughed. ''No, I'm happy that you came...I am sorry, for what I said to you. I am an idiot. That kiss DID matter to me. More that you can imagine.'' she said. Colin: ''It's okay. I.... hey, did you do something with your hair?''
Jane: ''Long story. So how did you find me?''
Colin: ''I asked your mother the address of your school.''
Jane: ''AND SHE TOLD YOU?''
Colin: ''She sure did.'' Jane got closer to him.
''You really mean a lot to me, Colin. Now I understand.'' she said.
 ''You mean more than a lot to me, Jane. I started having feelings for you from the moment you called me annoying.'' he smiled. Jane closed her eyes and got ready for another breathtaking kiss.
Suddenly an annoying voice interupted them.
''WHAT THE HELL AE YOU DOING?'' It was Christine.
She looked angrily at Jane and Colin. Suddenly Mike ran over to them.
Mike: ''We broke up less than two weeks ago and you are already in the arms of some other guy? What the hell is wrong with you?'' Jane couldn't stop smiling.
They were acting like little children. Why does this even bother them?
''Colin, this is my best friend Christine and my boyfriend Mike.'' she said ironically. Then they both turned around and walked away. Christine: ''Did you see that?'' Mike didn't even look at Christine. He just walked away from her just like Jane and Colin did.
Looks like he didn't care about her as much as he told her.
Christine was furious.
She felt her body shivering. She couldn't discribe her feeling in words. Then she looked to the other direction.
She could still see Colin and Jane holding hands. It was a weird feeling. She wasn't sure what that feeling was but it made her stomach turn inside out. But if you watched this situation from a short distance, you could see- Christine was jeleous of Jane after all. ''I still liked the dark hair better.'' Colin said.
''Shut up.'' Jane smiled. THE END.

So this is it, mates. You heard all the songs about Jane.
I'm very grateful to all the people, who read my stories and commented them.
And about the custom content-
1. Thank you to all the custom content creators!
2.I really don't have time to write all the custom content down... I'm writing in a hurry, so if you want to know something about the custom content I used in the story, just send me a PM and I will see what I can do for you.
You are welcome to leave comments, even negative ones. All are appreciated.

Thank you for reading and have a lovely day.

Stay tuned for my next story soon.

Songs about Jane 4

Aug 26, 2007 by Becca182
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    22 Comment(s) posted so far

    On Aug 27, 2007 adodge1994 wrote:

    awesome i lov this story thanks for writing it and i truly appreciate it, thanks again,\:rah\: and where did you get her second hair and how did you make the people look so real? something with the graphics??

    On Aug 27, 2007 atangki wrote:

    So sad it had to end.. \:\( But I'm glad things worked out for Jane and Colin in the end. \:D\:rah\: \:rah\: \:rah\:

    On Aug 27, 2007 cmufreak03 wrote:

    I loved it! Amazing work. Thank you for sharing with us all. I can't believe Mike and Christine.

    Good job. 5.0 \:D \:rah\: \:D \:rah\:

    On Aug 27, 2007 lia2223 wrote:

    \:rah\: Great story. Mike & Christine got what they deserved.

    On Aug 27, 2007 converse02 wrote:

    Good One! \:D Its sad is had to end...\:\( But I loved it all. 5++ \:rah\:

    On Aug 27, 2007 S.Cains wrote:

    Great ending, they have a lot of chemistry, Colin and what's-her-name lol! Christine is gorgeous, did you create her yourself? \:D

    On Aug 27, 2007 Ikaridasu wrote:

    fabulous story \:wub\: \:rah\: \:D

    On Aug 27, 2007 sanl1210 wrote:

    I still think Mike is a liar, and too bad you're not making another part for this, I reallyyyy liked it!\:wub\:\:rah\:\:D\:D\:D\:rah\:\:wub\:

    On Aug 28, 2007 kitfu11 wrote:

    Awesome! Sad it had to end, but I can't wait for your next story! \:D And yay, Jane found true happiness after all! \:wub\:

    On Aug 28, 2007 basketballbabe818 wrote:

    great job on the story!!!!

    On Aug 29, 2007 Murphy75 wrote:

    Wow...Loved this story! You did a great job!\:rah\:

    On Aug 29, 2007 spacemouse wrote:

    Nice story, well done. \:\)

    On Aug 29, 2007 ragemacsika wrote:

    Good story \:\)

    On Aug 29, 2007 Hanefcik wrote:

    \:rah\: It ended so well... I love happy endings! And Colin is so handsome... Great job!

    On Aug 29, 2007 kisekiai wrote:

    really nice story, I'm happy for Jane \:\)

    On Aug 30, 2007 MinnieID wrote:

    That was a GREAT ending. \:D \:cool\: \:rah\:

    On Aug 30, 2007 Mikaella wrote:

    Very sweet! Hmm... what about the next story having an unpredictible ending? :P

    On Sep 1, 2007 itachigirl wrote:

    that was pretty good 5.0\:D

    On Sep 1, 2007 kecr101 wrote:

    I'm so sad that it had to end, but it was good that it ended so well for Jane. \:\)

    On Sep 1, 2007 xtamadea wrote:

    loved the story and the characters (they look so real!)... a little sad that it had to end. cheers to more of your brilliant stories next time.\:rah\: \:rah\:

    On Sep 25, 2007 PimpShorty0828 wrote:

    Awww, how sweet. Mikes such a creep and christine is 2 faced.

    On Oct 26, 2007 wrote:

    excellent! your really talented.

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