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And we're back! This is part 1! Yay! Well, I founf Decorgal's Pose hack, but its not showing up in my game! :[..Any help? Well, I know the pics. are kinda lame, but I really am working on it! Take a look!----->

And we're back! This is part 1! Yay! Well, I founf Decorgal's Pose hack, but its not showing up in my game! :[..Any help? Well, I know the pics. are kinda lame, but I really am working on it! Take a look!-----> "Ughhh! Stop singing please!" Valeri yelled over her sisters gracious voice."Who sings that song?" She asked.
"Uhmmm.....I think Britney Spears. Duh! It's Gimme More!" Vanessa exclaimed, using sarcasm to get back at her sister.
"Well PLEASE let her sing it, she does it better!" Valeri joked."I'm just kidding, ya sound great sis!" She said as the doorbell rang. "Well. that's it for now." DeAndra sighed, closing her 'closet'.
She sat down on the bed, exhausted from a day of moving in. She heard her daughters' laughter in the room next door, and chuckled to herself. How much longer could hse go on pretending that her girls weren't growing up? She layed back on the bed just as the doorbell rang.
"I'll get it!" yelled Valeri, exited. Her friends were supposed to come over...... Valeri looked at the woman through the door, obviously not her friends coming to see her new so-called-house. She looked familiar, and Valeri felt a pang of Deja-Vu.
'Where have I seen this woman before?' she thought, and put a smile on her face, opened the door, and instnatly recognised the woman standing in front of her.
It was her Aunt Katherine. What on Earth could she possibly want?

A Beautiful Dis-As-Ter;Prt. Uno [1]

Feb 20, 2008 by BoodaMae
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    "Ughhh! Stop singing please!" Valeri yelled over her sisters gracious voice."Who sings that song?" She asked.
    "Uhmmm.....I think Britney Spears. Duh! It's Gimme More!" Vanessa exclaimed, using sarcasm to get back at her sister.
    "Well PLEASE let her sing it, she does it better!" Valeri joked."I'm just kidding, ya sound great sis!" She said as the doorbell rang.
    3
    "Well. that's it for now." DeAndra sighed, closing her 'closet'.
    She sat down on the bed, exhausted from a day of moving in. She heard her daughters' laughter in the room next door, and chuckled to herself. How much longer could hse go on pretending that her girls weren't growing up? She layed back on the bed just as the doorbell rang.
    "I'll get it!" yelled Valeri, exited. Her friends were supposed to come over......
    4
    Valeri looked at the woman through the door, obviously not her friends coming to see her new so-called-house. She looked familiar, and Valeri felt a pang of Deja-Vu.
    'Where have I seen this woman before?' she thought, and put a smile on her face, opened the door, and instnatly recognised the woman standing in front of her.
    It was her Aunt Katherine. What on Earth could she possibly want?
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    15 Comment(s) posted so far

    On Feb 21, 2008 jackieQ789 wrote:

    good story cant wait for part 2 \:rah\: thanks for sharing \:rah\:

    On Feb 21, 2008 katlin194 wrote:

    A little too short.\:confused\:

    On Feb 21, 2008 Nefira wrote:

    too short...but i'm looking forward to 2 part\;\) \:\)

    On Feb 21, 2008 spicylove wrote:

    kinda to short but it gives you the mind to make your mind wonder more about your story i cant wait until you update good job so far\:rah\:

    On Feb 21, 2008 ksinclair878 wrote:

    Wow, I'm sorry but that was way too short. You can still do the suspense thing with a longer story than that; but I am looking forward to the next part.

    On Feb 21, 2008 ksinclair878 wrote:

    Oh I forgot, to find Decorgal's hack click on "Hobbies" then "All". If you don't find it there they you didn't download the hack properly.

    On Feb 22, 2008 aaaaaaac wrote:

    \:rah\: \:rah\: \:rah\:

    On Feb 22, 2008 swirlique wrote:

    SHORT>>

    On Feb 22, 2008 Sxylady_1978 wrote:

    nice but a little too short \:\)

    On Feb 22, 2008 inesia17 wrote:

    Isn't it, like others said, too short??\:wacko\:

    On Feb 22, 2008 ,xPheobe. wrote:

    Very Short, but good part! Cant wait for moree..\:rah\:

    On Feb 23, 2008 xbluexmistx wrote:

    Well it is kinda too short and i HATE that song Gimme more (even though thats got nothing to do with it lol) but the story is pretty good.

    On Mar 3, 2008 donaldch wrote:

    \:cool\:

    On Mar 27, 2008 civetinja wrote:

    Thanks for sharing !\:\)

    On Dec 17, 2008 rssheehy wrote:

    \:rah\:

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