Hiya there! This is my first story I've written, so this story probably won't go far! Please leave comments and rate, but be honest! Most of the CC is from TSR! If you ask me what it is you want specifically, I'll let you know! With much adeu, read on! :]
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12 Comment(s) posted so far
On Jan 27, 2008 qasert wrote:
On Jan 27, 2008 duckiepie wrote:
You've got a good writing style and it sounds like an interesting story. Try and make your pictures a bit clearer and it'll be perfect x
On Jan 27, 2008 thekewlestnerd wrote:
Yes, clearer pics and a longer story would be nice, but good intro! Off to read the next part
On Jan 27, 2008 chayann wrote:
Nice Job Booda! We'll work on those pics.....
On Jan 27, 2008 wrote:
The pics are quite blurry, that's too bad
but the story is ok.. It would be nice if it was a bit longer though..
On Jan 27, 2008 donaldch wrote:
On Jan 27, 2008 1ayotola1 wrote:
Short and nice! I feel sorry for her that her dad's in prison
On Jan 29, 2008 Sxylady_1978 wrote:
good story
On Feb 1, 2008 spacemouse wrote:
Very nice, well done. Keep up the good work!
On Feb 3, 2008 aaaaaaac wrote:
On Feb 24, 2008 wrote:
A bit of rambling, but still cool,
On Mar 13, 2008 civetinja wrote:
Thanks for sharing !