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This is my new story: "From Past To Future: Minako's Adventures". I hope you will like it:D

This is my new story: "From Past To Future: Minako's Adventures". I hope you will like it:D Japan 1475
The king of Japan, Soichi The Redborn, was walking into the catacomb of his palace. He didn't like that place, but he had a big problem and he needed help. And there was only one person who could help him. "I knew that you will come to me, king of Japan. I know your problem. And I've got the solution" a scary man said to the king.
"What do I have to do Mamoru? The Gods are angry with me! The people of my country are hungry and we have no money! Please help me!" Soichi said. "There is only one solution" Mamoru started." Yes you are right, the Gods are angry with you. To save your country you have to sacrifise your daughter to them!"
"What? My only daughther, Minako? No I can't do that!". Soichi was frightened.
"The Gods don't want your daughter near the country. That's why they cursed you and Japan" Mamoru ended.
Soichi left from there. How would he tell that to Minako? It was a wonderful, sunny day. Minako was going to the Great Gades, as her father told her. She saw him there.
"Father! What do you want?" she asked. "Minako, I went to our great diviner, Mamoru, and he had some terrible news for me."
"What? Oh please tell me father!"
"I have to sacrifise you to the Gods."
Minako couldn't speak.
"But don't worry. I think I've got an other solution" Soichi said her. "What father?"
"Don't ask and follow me!"
They ran into the palace. They stopped in front of a door. Minako understood what her father had thought.
"But father, are you sure about this? Are you sure that we can trust wizard Nero?"
"I am absolutely sure. That Italian wizard is a real genius. He can save you, I am sure." They went into the room.
"AAAAAAAARRRRRGGGGGGGGGG"
"OH MY GOD! NERO!!" they both screamed. Nero went off that machine.
"My king. My princess. What a lovely surpise. How can I help you?" he said to them like nothing had happened before.
"Wizard Nero, are you alright?" Minako asked.
"Of course I am alright my princess! What a question!" he laughed. "We need your help, wizard" Soichi started. He told him what had happened. Nero thought for a while. He went to his library and he started searching for a book. He found it.
"Yes I think I can help you. I can make a potion. But you have to wait for some days" he said finally. In the catacombs again. Mamoru called someone. A young man came into the room and he kneeled before him. He was Mamoru's son... "I did it Motoki!" Mamoru said." That idiot believed everything I told him and he will sacrifise his daughter! And then, you will become the next king of Japan!" He laughed. But the boy was serious. He didn't like that evil plan. Although, he agreed with him. Minako was in the room when her father came.
"Nero told me that potion is ready. Let's go Minako"
They were both nervous. When they found Nero, he told them his plan.
"Mamoru told you, my great king, that Gods don't want your daughter near the country. So I thought that princess Minako has to go away from Japan. That potion will take you away, to my country, Italy. This is really away, right?"
"Your plan is great wizard Nero, but i can't live alone to a country that i don't know!" Minako said.
"Don't worry my princess! You won't be alone! I will come with you!" "And now" Nero said." Drink that potion"
Minako did what he asked her. It had a weird taste. Suddenly, she felt that she was flying. And then, she disapeared! "She's gone...."the king said sadly.
 "At least, we save her, my grea....OH NO!" Nero screamed suddenly.
"What?"
"I made a mistake....That...that wasn't the right potion..." "WHAT?! WHAT DID YOU DO YOU STUPID WIZARD! BRING HER BACK NOW!"
"I...I...I can't! There is no other potion.....I am sorry..I am...."
"SHUT UP! WHERE DID YOU SEND HER?"
"I don't know! But don't worry! I will found the recipe of that potion again! In two or three months will be ready...."
"WHAT?! IN TWO OR THREE MONTHS?! MY DAUGHTER IS IN A BIG DANGER RIGHT NOW AND YOU TELL ME THAT...."
"There is no other sollution! Please calm down my king!"
Soichi knew that the wizard was right. He had to wait. He thought of Minako...Where was she now? Ok, this was the first part:D The second part will be ready soon. I am sorry for some mistakes:( Plz rate and comment:)

From Past To Future: Minako's Adventures

Feb 5, 2008 by Claudia35
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    32 Comment(s) posted so far

    On Feb 6, 2008 Nenehunni wrote:

    i really like it - i cant remember seeing any japan based story's out before and this looks really good ^_^ i loved it when he said we've got to sacrifice you - i could just imagine a real life look on her face lol

    On Feb 6, 2008 rover202 wrote:

    Very interesting story! \:wub\: \:wub\: \:wub\:
    Can't wait for the next part.

    On Feb 6, 2008 Zayury wrote:

    \:wub\: \:rah\: Wonderful story! Very unique! Your pictures were lovely, very crisp and sharp! Love the scenery and Minako is just adorable! \:wub\: Absolutely LOVE the cover pic!\:wub\: That's what caught my eye, such a beautiful cover! \:rah\: I like the intrigue, mystery, and comedy you are inserting in this story! \:D Hilarious, when Nero realized he gave her the wrong potion! LOL! \:D I wonder were he sent her?! Great job! 5.0! \:rah\:

    On Feb 6, 2008 mangooo1 wrote:

    Really nice story, I liked the whole idea about Japan, wizards and potions \:\) Keep up the good work!

    On Feb 6, 2008 misha1013 wrote:

    great story...\:wub\: \:rah\:

    On Feb 6, 2008 sunny33 wrote:

    great story\:rah\: Nero is so funny\:\) Where did he send Minako?:/

    On Feb 6, 2008 Simlover4eva wrote:

    I think Nero sent her to the future... Hence the name of the story.
    Anyways, 5.0 that was very creative and the pictures were wonderful\:wub\:

    On Feb 6, 2008 spicylove wrote:

    wonderful story love the photos\:rah\:

    On Feb 6, 2008 Pippa22 wrote:

    Great story\:D I love the flowers

    On Feb 6, 2008 maxi king wrote:

    \:rah\:a very good story,I will read the next one for sure!!!!!!!!!!!!!! \:rah\:

    On Feb 6, 2008 qasert wrote:

    \:wub\:

    On Feb 7, 2008 thekewlestnerd wrote:

    Interesting chapter, looking forward to reading more! \:\)

    On Feb 7, 2008 kissme87 wrote:

    Very interesting \:wub\:

    On Feb 7, 2008 BoodaMae wrote:

    Cute! Kinda sad though! Can't wait for part 2! \:wub\:

    On Feb 7, 2008 wrote:

    That was awesome! I love the setting it's played out in. \:D

    On Feb 7, 2008 kitfu11 wrote:

    Ooooh what a great beginning! Can't wait for more~ \:wub\:

    On Feb 7, 2008 marizza82 wrote:

    Interesting story\:D I\:wub\: the setting !! I can't wait to see more\:rah\:

    On Feb 7, 2008 Bury me deep inside your heart wrote:

    Great story\:rah\: I like everything about Japan,I give it 5.0\:D I can't wait to see more!!! Please when you published the second part tell me ok???\;\)

    On Feb 8, 2008 atangki wrote:

    Great! \:D Nice start! :P\:rah\: \:rah\:

    On Feb 8, 2008 wrote:

    This is a different story. I like the plot and the scenery is just great\:rah\: And I think Nero sent her to the future. I am wondering what will happen\:wacko\: 5.0

    On Feb 9, 2008 barbiensims wrote:

    Very clever! \:rah\:

    On Feb 10, 2008 wrote:

    different and cool\:rah\:

    On Feb 11, 2008 wrote:

    can't wait till the next part comes out!!\:rah\: \:wub\:
    Good Japanese style storY!!
    (I'm living in Japan right now)

    On Feb 14, 2008 jackieQ789 wrote:

    loved it going to read part 2 now \:rah\: \:rah\:

    On Feb 17, 2008 VickiJane94 wrote:

    It was wonderful!\:D \:D

    On Feb 18, 2008 aaaaaaac wrote:

    \:rah\: NICE STORY!!!\:\) \:rah\:

    On Feb 27, 2008 primavera77 wrote:

    very nice story!\:\)

    On Mar 10, 2008 Maiviastorm wrote:

    omg I LOVE IT!!!!! \:wub\: \:wub\:

    On Mar 18, 2008 civetinja wrote:

    Good work ! Thanks for sharing !\:\)

    On Mar 27, 2008 zmajce wrote:

    I like that it takes place in Japan.. good job!

    On Jun 16, 2008 arc1801 wrote:

    \:\) \:D \:P

    On Jul 6, 2008 Sallis wrote:

    Great Japanese story. The story is one of my favourites. I'll give you a 5.0 \:D

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