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The final part is here!!!! I hope you will enjoy it:D Thanks for your kind comments in the other part:D I love you!!!

The final part is here!!!! I hope you will enjoy it:D Thanks for your kind comments in the other part:D I love you!!! Minako was thinking of all these stuff she had heard in the history lesson. If she goes back to Japan she will marry Motoki. History can't change. She and Motoki were friends when they were younger. But now... "Hey Mina what are you thinking?" Nick came into her room.His mother let Minako to stay to their house for a few days. Of course they hadn't told her the truth about Minako. "You know....About my future,in the past....."she answered with a smile.
"Oh my this is so weird! So, who's that Motoki?Do you know him?"
"A guy from Japan. He is the son of a scary man, Mamoru."
"And do you like him?"
"I....i..."
Nick's mother came in.
"Nick,Minako your teacher is here."
"What teacher?"
"Ms Michiru"
"What the hell is she doing here?" Nick thought.
Ms Michiru came in. She looked both Nick and Minako and then she talked to the girl.
"Who are you?"
Minako didn't answered at the beggining.
"W..what do you mean Ms Michiru?"
"I saw you in picture of a history book.It was Princess' Minako picture...I also read somewhere a weird story for her. That a wizard had sent her in a strange world to protect her"
"I will explain you ms Michiru! It is such a weird story" Nicholas started. Minako couldn't listen. Her teacher would probably believe that they were both crazy. She went to the garden. She sat in a chair. Ms Michiru had understood everything! She must find a way to go back to Japan but she didn't know how! Nero was the only person who could help her but he disappeared! Nick and Stacy had helped her a lot, but time was passing and she should leave their house in a few days! Who would help her then? And then she realised that she wasn't alone.
"Motoki?" She wasn't sure. Maybe she was thinking of Motoki so much and started to see him everywhere.
She went closer. He was real!
"Princess Minako I was looking for you everywhere!" he said.
"But how...when...?"she had a lot of questions.
"I had to find you, my princess...I have to do something..."
"What? To bring me back? Oh please Motoki tell me you have that potion!"
"Yes I have the potion...but you won't go back..."
"Why not?
"Because my father...wants me to kill you! But I won't my princess, I can't do it! You must not come back to Japan! Your life is in danger!"
"But what will i do? I can't stay here for ever!"
But then Nick appeared.
"What the hell are you doing to Minako?"he shouted angrilly.
"Wait..no!!!"
"Nick he is a friend!"Minako screamed.
"Nick, Motoki has the potion to go back to Japan!" Minako said hapily
"Who's Motoki?"
"I am Motoki..."
Nick had never felt so angry before. But he didn't do anything.
"But my princess I told you, you can't go back to Japan! My father will kill you! And he will kill me too because I didn't do what he had odered me" Motoki said.
"So she has to stay here. With me." Nick said.
"No Nick I want to return! I must return! I can't live here anymore!"
They went into the living room.
"Don't worry about Ms Michiru, Mina" Nick whispered."I told her that she was your grand-grand-grand-grand-grandmother"
"And did she believe you?"
"Yes! She is so stupid, isn't she?"
Japan....
"WHY ISN'T THAT STUPID BOY BACK?!!" Mamoru screamed. He was very angry!
"YOU!" he yelled at Nero."TELL ME!"
"I...i don't know. Maybe he..."
"Give me the potion!"
"But, I don't have more potion left! Only a little."
"GIVE IT TO ME NOW!"
Mamoru drank the last bottle of potion. He was determined .He would the princess and then...he would kill her! Nero saw Maromu disappearing.''What an idiot'' he thought.''He's gone and he left me alone! Now I can go to the king and tell him everything!'' And so he did. Nero ran to the garden and he saw the king. He told him everything.
"So, everything was a lie? About the sacrifise?"
"Yes my king! Everything! And now, your daughter is in great danger! Mamoru will kill her!"
"I must go to find her!"
"That's impossible. Mamoru drank the last bottle". They stood there, without doing anything. They had to wait.
The next moring, Minako woke up and she had a weird feeling. Stacy ran into her room.
"Minako, there's a man looking for you!"
"Where?"
"In the living room! I told him to come! I hope this is alright..."
"Yes don't worry"
While she was making her bed, she heard a not so strange voice.
"Hello my princess..."
"Mamoru!!" Minako screamed. How did he...?
Mamoru read her mind.
"I saw you yesterday, little princess coming in this house. I recognised you, althought you have a different haircut and clothes" he smiled eveily."And now I will...."
Mamoru was ready to kill Minako ,but suddenly Motoki went into into the room.
"MINAKO GO AWAY! AND GET READY! WE ARE GOING BACK TO JAPAN!" he screamed to her.
Minako did what Motoki had told her. She was terrified. She didn't know what to do. But thank god, she ran into Nick.
"Minako! What happened?"
"Mamoru...Motoki is trying to stop him..he told me to get ready to go to Japan."
Nick thought for a while."Come with me" he said.
In Minako's room, the two men were fighting.
"What are you doing idiot? Are you trying to kill your own father?"
"No I am trying to kill a murderer! I won't let you hurt Minako!"
"But you will become a king..."
"I DON'T WANT TO BECOME A KING! CAN'T YOU UNDERSTAND?" he yelled at him. But then he relaxed."Father...you lost me. I've got the last potion. And I won't givve it to you. I will go back to Japan with Minako and you will stay here!" he said and he locked Mamoru into the room.
Motoki ran into Minako and Nick at the stairs.
"I am ready to return to Japan! Nick found my clothes and I made my hair just like it was the day I came!" Minako said to Motoki."Where's Mamoru?"
"Don't worry I locked him into the room. So, be careful the next time you will open the door" he said to Nick.
"We reraly open that room, so we are ok" Nick replied.
"Good bye Nick and thanks for everything!" Minako said and she hugged him.
"Take care" he said and he saw them drinking the potion. And then, they were gone.
Minako looked around.
"WE ARE BACK!!!" she shouted and she gave a kiss to Motoki.
Soichi had a weird dream. Gods were telling him that are not angry with him anymore and better days will come for Japan, and also they told him that he should go to the gardens right now because he would have a surpise. Soichi did what Gods had told him in that dream. And then, he saw his daughter.
"Minako?" he whispered.
"Father! I am back!!"
Soichi hugged her.
Every problem had disappeared now.
He had his daughter back again and that made him stronger.
2008
"So what happened to the Chinese chick?" Mike asked Nick the next day.
"She's gone. And she was Japanese"
"Good morning boys" It was Ms Michiru" This is my niece and your new classmate, Usagi. Nick can you guide her to our school?"
"Hmm yeah, of course Ms Michiru"
While they were going, Mike closed him the eye and he whispered: "Go for it"
And what happened to Mamoru?
The next day, Nick's and Stacy's mother opened the door and she found him inside.
But Mamoru didn't want any help like Minako. He decided to start karate and after a few months a director discovered him and since then, he has been playing in action movies. He changed his name into Jackie Chan.... *THE END*

From Past To Future: The adveture ends

Mar 2, 2008 by Claudia35
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    40 Comment(s) posted so far

    On Mar 2, 2008 Veronn wrote:

    Nice.\:rah\:

    On Mar 2, 2008 qasert wrote:

    \:rah\:

    On Mar 2, 2008 captainlicious wrote:

    \:wub\: \:wub\:

    On Mar 2, 2008 mangooo1 wrote:

    Lol, Jackie Chan, poor man, did he want to kill the princess?! \:P \;\) Glad to see that it is a happy end. \:\)

    On Mar 2, 2008 wrote:

    Love it \:wub\:

    On Mar 2, 2008 Meganmac92 wrote:

    that is sure a nice ending \:ph34r\:

    On Mar 2, 2008 wrote:

    muito massa bem legal!!
    apesar de eu naum entender ingles \:D

    On Mar 2, 2008 Deedee09 wrote:

    Cool cool ! \:wub\:

    On Mar 2, 2008 maxi king wrote:

    \:rah\:love it,the end was so great!!!!!!!!!!!!!! \:wub\: \:rah\:

    On Mar 2, 2008 charliefell wrote:

    brilliant story\:\) \:cool\:

    On Mar 2, 2008 lordeverglot wrote:

    haha great story!

    On Mar 2, 2008 Nadindi wrote:

    lmao jackie chan! Brilliant story! 5.0! \:wub\:

    On Mar 2, 2008 Myst.. wrote:

    That was AWEEESOME! \:D

    On Mar 2, 2008 iluvhorses13 wrote:

    Great ending!\:rah\:

    On Mar 2, 2008 misha1013 wrote:

    lol this is funny....but nice

    On Mar 2, 2008 ulis wrote:

    very nice story!!

    On Mar 2, 2008 onutika4u wrote:

    nice!!!5.0\:wub\:

    On Mar 2, 2008 onutika4u wrote:

    \:D

    On Mar 2, 2008 thekewlestnerd wrote:

    great story! \:rah\:

    On Mar 2, 2008 Katelys wrote:

    well done! i love the Jackie Chan idea\:D

    On Mar 2, 2008 plyangel456 wrote:

    I love the story especially the ending! Well Done! -plyangel456- \:D

    On Mar 2, 2008 BOAV wrote:

    oh... what about nick? `-`
    but still good job!!\:D

    On Mar 2, 2008 kitfu11 wrote:

    Hahahaha! I loved the Jackie Chan bit! \:P And yay, everything worked out in the end!! \:rah\:

    On Mar 2, 2008 odnavgorode wrote:

    interesting\:wub\:

    On Mar 2, 2008 spicylove wrote:

    \:rah\:

    On Mar 2, 2008 varrnas wrote:

    lmao jackie chan thats hilarious.... good twist i liked it

    On Mar 3, 2008 donaldch wrote:

    \:cool\:

    On Mar 3, 2008 kisekiai wrote:

    nice ending...heh

    On Mar 3, 2008 Zayury wrote:

    Very cute ending Claudia! The Jackie Chan part was pretty funny! \:D Lovely story! \:wub\:

    On Mar 3, 2008 AshGreg wrote:

    awsome story \:D \:D

    On Mar 5, 2008 spacemouse wrote:

    Good story. I loved it! \:\)

    On Mar 5, 2008 rover202 wrote:

    Great story with a comical ending! \:wub\: \:wub\:
    Hope to see more stories by you \:D \:rah\:

    On Mar 5, 2008 sandrasullivan wrote:

    Where Did you get her hair?

    On Mar 10, 2008 Maiviastorm wrote:

    LMAO @ Jackie Chan \:wub\: \:wub\:

    On Mar 13, 2008 twinkletoe wrote:

    The ending was very funny!!!!\:D

    On Mar 27, 2008 artrui wrote:

    \:rah\:

    On Mar 27, 2008 zmajce wrote:

    Nice part, but to be honest I expected that they would read a changed history lesson in the class, but well that would be my immagination... \;\)

    On Mar 29, 2008 evi wrote:

    \:rah\: \:rah\:

    On Apr 4, 2008 civetinja wrote:

    Great story ! Thanks for sharing !\:\)

    On Jul 6, 2008 Sallis wrote:

    Too bad it's the last part. I like all parts.
    \:D

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