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Once upon a time, in a land far far away from our world, in a village named Paleo Faliro (Pa-le-uh Fa-lee-ruh)lived a happy little boy, named Hans, but everyone knew him as Little Hans. He lived with his mother, a modern peasant, called Zoe Porfyri (pronounced Por-fee-ree), but she was mostly called Mama Porfyri.

Once upon a time, in a land far far away from our world, in a village named Paleo Faliro (Pa-le-uh Fa-lee-ruh)lived a happy little boy, named Hans, but everyone knew him as Little Hans. He lived with his mother, a modern peasant, called Zoe Porfyri (pronounced Por-fee-ree), but she was mostly called Mama Porfyri. In the centre of Hans' village was the house of the Great Duke Sugaree, who had a pretty, but stubborn and selfish daughter, Arianna. But deeply inside, Arianna felt lonely, without any siblings and friends. Her only companion was her nanny, Zelda Brusher, though Arianna called her just "Brusher". Hans and his mother were working for a rich merchant, Mimis Koutsofidis (Mee-mees Koo-tso-fee-dees), a mean and evil man, whose only interest was money and Playboy. Mimis had two sons. The oldest was an ugly, stupid and annoying boy, named John, but because of his looks and his love for bananas, everyone called him Monkey. Mimis' second son was a proud and hard-working boy, Sam, but because of his looks (again) everyone called him Gypsy (I'm not racist). His mother was a famous Playboy Bunny, named Diamond. She was from Jamamika. Mama Porfyri was sitting near the fireplace. Although she was poor, she had enough money to spent for clothes and jewels. Hans entered and Mama told him:
"Little Hans, my sweet, could your Mama a favor ?"
"Yes Mama, anything for you" he said cheerfully.
"Could you visit the square and buy some eggs ? Your birthday will arrive soon and I want to make you a cake"
"Yes Mama, you are so nice, spending money to make a cake for me !!"
Mama smiled and huged her beloved.
End of the intro
I know it is really small, but it's only an intro, plus I find Hans really cute ^^ !! So, leave some comments if you liked it !!

Little Hans' Tale (the intro)

Dec 12, 2007 by Claudia35
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    20 Comment(s) posted so far

    On Dec 13, 2007 thekewlestnerd wrote:

    Nice, a little short though... but a good start! \:D

    On Dec 13, 2007 samcactus101 wrote:

    Hey, cute intro\:cool\: Hope part 1 comes soon!

    On Dec 13, 2007 123456789_1234 wrote:

    very good \:\)

    On Dec 13, 2007 qasert wrote:

    \:\)

    On Dec 13, 2007 dayane_hola wrote:

    Great story, keep up the good work,good start!\:\) \:cool\: \:D

    On Dec 13, 2007 hanzo11 wrote:

    Hans is so CUTE!!!! \:P I think this will be a good story... but I do think that monkey boy is strnage looking! \:D

    On Dec 13, 2007 lillith_666 wrote:

    Nice intro\:D

    On Dec 13, 2007 OpheliaNival wrote:

    Cute intro, I liked the humour in it... Looking forward to the first part so that I'll get a real impression of it, and I am curious as to see what the storyline will be \:D Keep up the good work!

    On Dec 13, 2007 sunny33 wrote:

    lil Hans is very cute!\:D

    On Dec 13, 2007 goodie2shoes wrote:

    Aw, Hans is cute \:wub\: Loved it, even it was short. Just make it a bit longer, and don't take too long with the next part! \:D Great story. \:\)

    On Dec 14, 2007 AshGreg wrote:

    awsome story cant wait to see the next one\:D \:D

    On Dec 14, 2007 ClaudiaR wrote:

    Good story! I pictured mama like an peasant, well it think times have changed!! \:D

    On Dec 14, 2007 wrote:

    lol good job\:D\:D it takes my 5.0!!!!

    On Dec 14, 2007 marizza82 wrote:

    That was good, they have pretty weird names though !! I can't wait to read more \:rah\: \:rah\:

    On Dec 16, 2007 wrote:

    great job!!!!!! i can't wait to read the next part\:D\:D\:D

    On Dec 19, 2007 1ayotola1 wrote:

    cute little intro!

    On Dec 22, 2007 LilJo wrote:

    Nice Intro, the story looks great. Hans is a sweet sim (:

    On Dec 23, 2007 wrote:

    i love it.

    On Dec 30, 2007 dkfisher1961 wrote:

    Great start. Looking forward to the rest.

    On May 4, 2008 arc1801 wrote:

    \:wub\:

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