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Welcome to the part 4 of "Little Hans' Tale". I hope you like it:) Please leave a comment and don't forget to rate:D

Welcome to the part 4 of "Little Hans' Tale". I hope you like it:) Please leave a comment and don't forget to rate:D Hans showed his Mama wearing rustic clothes and she was crying.
"MAMA!!!!" Hans sreamed. He was terrrified!! He had never seen his Mama wearing clothes like these before. He understood that something terrible had happened. "Oh Hans!!" Mama Porfyri said and she hugged him.
"Mama, what happened?"
"That jerk, Mimis Koutsofidis, fired me and i sold all my clothes to buy our food!!!" "Oh Mama, that's terrible, but don't worry you will find another job, and i will help you! Maybe i should find a job too!"
"No, Hans you are too young and there are mean people like Mimis who..."
"Don't worry Mama! I will be careful" While Hans and Mama were talking, Arianna was having a new haircut.
"Oh yes" she said" I am so pretty now".
She wanted to be wonderful for the new year's party. "BRUUUSHER!!!! IS THE CHRISTMAS TREE READY!!! EVERYTHING MUST BE PERFECT FOR THE PARTY!!!!"
"Yes my lady everything is ready" In the square, Hans was trying to find a job. He went everywhere but no one wanted him. He was tired. He went to the backer's, where the backer Stathis was working.
"Hello Mr Stathis! I was wondering if you want a new assistant"
"Not really Little Hans, I am sorry"
Hans was so dissapointed.
"Hmmmm" Stathis thought. "But I heard that they need someone to work to the Duke's palace.
"The duke's palace?!! YAY!!!" "Did you hear that Monkey? The baby wants a job"
Monkey and Gipsy were there. They were both laughing.
"Of course he does. Our Father fired his mummy and now they don't have any money!!! HAHAHAHAHA" "Unfortunately this is true. But don't worry, i will get a job and we will have money again!!" But then, Hans saw Brusher. But she was alone.
"Where's my angel Arianna?" he though. Brusher mustn't go out without Arianna, so Hans followed her to learn where Arianna was. Brusher went into a house.
"I know that house!! It's Mimis Koutsofidis' house!!! What does Brusher want there?" he thought. He looked through the window.
"Oh Brusher" Mimis said." You are such a wonderful woman. Everything looks so prefect on you. Your eyes, your lips..."
"Mimis stop" Brusher said and she smiled. "Oh Brusher, I can do everything for you...But..you.."
"What Mimis? Tell me!"
"Well, you know, i want you to do me a favour."
"What Mimis? I will do everything you want!!!"
"I want you to convice the Duke to make Arianna marry to my son John( Monkey)"
"Well, that's a bit difficult, but i will give it a try. Besides, Duke is looking for a husband for Arianna, and i think Monk...I mean John is the best for her."
"Oh my love, thank you, and when i stole all his money..."
"What did you say?"
"Nothing, nothing" Mimis said but he had a weird smile. "Oh no!!! They will marry Arianna to Monkey and Mimis will steal all Duke's money!! That's so evil!! I have to warn Arianna!!" Hans run to the Duke's palace. Arianna was in her bedroom, looking for Brusher.
"BRUSHER, BRUSHER!!! WHERE THE HELL ARE YOU??"
 "ARIANNA!!!" she heard a voice.
"You again!!! How did you get here? GUARDS!!! GUARDS!!!"
"Please my princess, i have to warn you!! Mimis and Brush..."
"I DON'T CARE!!! AND NOW GO AWAY!!! I HATE YOU!!! I HATE EVERYONE!!! BUT I HATE YOU THE MOST!!!" Hans went to his house.
He started crying.
"Arianna hates me" In the meantime, Mimis was laughing.
"Ha ha ha this is the perfect plan to be rich!!" What will happen? Will Hans find a job? Will Mama Porfyri buy new clothes? Will Arianna love Hans?
And will Hans stop Mimis' evil plan?
You will find out to next part and final part.
THANKS FOR READING:D:D

Little Hans' Tale part 3

Jan 1, 2008 by Claudia35
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    22 Comment(s) posted so far

    On Jan 2, 2008 goodie2shoes wrote:

    Poor Hans! \:\( I \:wub\: him, he's so cute! I'm sure he'll save Arianna and his mother, though. \:\) Can't wait until the final part! \:D

    On Jan 2, 2008 selena1125 wrote:

    I hope everything works out ok Love it great part!

    On Jan 2, 2008 1ayotola1 wrote:

    REALLY GOOD! Hurry with the next part too! \:rah\: \:rah\: 5.0! Why wouldnt Arianna stop acting like a ___________ and start listening to what Hans has to say!!

    On Jan 2, 2008 hanzo11 wrote:

    I feel sorry for Hans. She may be evil, but Arianna sure is funny;. BRUUUSHER!!!!!!!!! I HATE YOU THE MOST! LOL! \:D

    On Jan 2, 2008 sunny33 wrote:

    Poor Hans \:\( Brusher and Mimis \:eek\: \:eek\: I want more !!! \:rah\: \:rah\:5.00

    On Jan 2, 2008 marizza82 wrote:

    This story gets better and better \:rah\: \:rah\: \:wub\:

    On Jan 2, 2008 qasert wrote:

    \:wub\:

    On Jan 2, 2008 Jubilant wrote:

    I hope Mimi's plan works and arianna becomes poor and learns what it's like to be poor. She'll lose her attitude after that.

    On Jan 2, 2008 wrote:

    Hans is so cute! Arianna is such a little brat. Why does he like her? Mimis is evil! xD I Love your story!\:wub\: Alright keep up the good work! Bye. \:\)

    On Jan 2, 2008 jero22 wrote:

    really good part \:wub\:

    On Jan 3, 2008 Nono_Girl wrote:

    This is such a cute story! I really love it!

    On Jan 3, 2008 wrote:

    Lol, me and the bad guy have the same name, so i want him to win\:P

    On Jan 3, 2008 OpheliaNival wrote:

    Haha, I did not see that coming *shocked that the mother is not wearing designer gear*, sweet little Hans... Arianna is still a *****, hope Hans gets a job in the castle and saves the day. Then he can buy himself a backbone, find a better girl and let Arianna and Monkey spend the rest of their life in a miserable marriage!

    On Jan 3, 2008 wrote:

    hmmm i can see in the comments that everyone hates Arianna..Well i agree that she's a bit mean*ok very mean* but i think that in the end she will turn to a good girl and she will marry Hans\:P All the fairytales has an end like this\:D Anyway the story is great\:rah\: i'll give you a 5.0!!!

    On Jan 3, 2008 wrote:

    i agree with 4teu, and i'm sad the story ends\:\(

    On Jan 5, 2008 seelindarun wrote:

    Hans is so adorable! It just melts my heart the way he wants to help his mom, even save Arianna... \:wub\: \:wub\:

    On Jan 6, 2008 aaaaaaac wrote:

    \:rah\:

    On Jan 8, 2008 donaldch wrote:

    nice

    On Jan 10, 2008 spacemouse wrote:

    Very nice story, thanks for sharing. \:\)

    On Jan 26, 2008 josh1092 wrote:

    She's just going through a 'spoilt brat' period where she doesn't like boys. \:P I'm sure she'll find some sence soon. XD Well done!\:rah\:

    On Feb 19, 2008 sar612 wrote:

    \:rah\:

    On Feb 24, 2008 civetinja wrote:

    Good work ! Thanks for sharing ! \:\)

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