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Hey and welcome to the last part of Hans' tale:D I don't know why, but this is my fave part of the story. I hope you will like it too.

Hey and welcome to the last part of Hans' tale:D I don't know why, but this is my fave part of the story. I hope you will like it too. It was a dark cold night. Hans was trying to light the stove. But then, he heard someone knocking the door.
"Who the hell is now?" "I'm coming" he said."Arianna?! What are you doing here?"
"Oh Hans, I have to tell you something! Can I come in?"
"Yes sure". Hans couldn't believe that Arianna was in his home. "Hans, who is here?". Mama had woken up.
"Nobody Mama, don't worry. Go to your bed again" "Arianna what happened?"
"Hans, all these years I was all alone and nobody cared about me. The only person who loved me without my money or my dad's power, was you and was such a _____ to you." She was ready to cry. "Arianna" he said. "That was 5 years ago. We have changed a lot. Especially you" He gave her a soft kiss in her forehead. "And now go to sleep. You look very tired." Hans gave her his bed to sleep. He was watching her while he was sleeping. She was so beautiful. But someone was watching them through the window.
 The next morning.....
"Good morning Hans". Arianna had just woken up.
"How did you get your sleep tonight? My Mama prepared your breakfast"
 "Good morning my lady"
But the door was knocked again.
"I'll go" Mama said. Unfortunately, they had a terrible surpise. Mimis Koutsofidis, his sons and the Duke Socrates were standing outside. "Oh thank God Arianna, you are alright" the Duke said and he hugged his daugher.
"Father, what's going on?" "YOU" Mimis yelled. "YOU LITTLE ABDUCTOR". Mimis hit Hans on his face.
"WHAT ARE YOU DOING" Hans screamed. They think that Hans kidnaped me, Arianna thought.
"Dad, Hans did nothing. I came here because...."
"My great Duke, I think that little ____ did something to my love. She is not ok. She thinks that boy is not guilty!" Monkey said.
"But he did nothing!"
"Oh my Arianna, what happened to you?" he continued dramatically. After a few hours, Hans was in the prison. In the evening, the Red Executioner will cut his head off.
"Hans?" he heard a voice. "Arianna?"
"Don't worry Hans! I will tell someone to save you."
"Why don't you explain to your father what really happened?"
"I did, but he thinks that you had poisoned my food and I have lost my mind. I am so sorry Hans. This is my fault"
"I love you Arianna"
Arianna became red.
"And I have to tell you something" and Hans explained her Mimis' plan. "Who's the best?" Mimis asked proudly his sons.
"YOU!!!!!" they screamed and Monkey started claping like an idiot.
"In a few hours, that boy will be dead, and nothing will stop our evil plans!"
"BOUAAAA BOUAAA HAHAHAHA"
A servant came in.
"Mr Koutsofidis, a woman wants to....." But the woman came in and she was very angry....It was Mama Porfyri!
"How dare you?" she said and she slapped Mimis."You will kill my son! YOUR SON!" "He is not my son!" Mimis screamed.
"Yes he is and I know you know it. You never cared about him! About me Mimis. I thought you loved me...."
"I did. But now yer mean nothing ter me. I don't want that boy. And he will be killed. Yer can do nothing..." Hans couldn't sleep. He thought that Arianna won't help him. He told her about Mimis and his evil plans, and she will leave him alone.
"NO! "he thought." She will help me! She promised"
"Hans, Hans!" he heard a voice. "Maid Mitso?"
"Com'on Hans. Lady Arianna said Mitso help you. She gave Mitso the keys, and now you is free!"
I knew it! he thought.
"You is free! But you must run, the fire is coming"
"What fire?"
"Koutsofidis' house is burning on! And, Hans in the house was.....your Mama and Lady Arianna"
"WHAT?!" Hans ran to the Koutsofidis' house. Mitso was telling the truth. The house was on fire !
"I have to find Mama and Arianna" He was running around the house, screaming their names. "Hans?"
"Oh my God, Arianna are you alright??!!" he said and he hugged her.
"Hans....I am alright....but...your Mama...is dead..."
 "WHAT? NO YOU ARE LYING!"
"No Hans. I saw her dead body. Monkey and Gypsy are dead too. The fire started from the kichens. It was very close. I was near the exit, that's how I escaped"
"NOOOOOO MAMA!!!" Hans saw Mimis Koutsofidis watching them.
"YOU!" Hans screamed and he ran to him. Mimis tried to go away but Hans was faster. "YOU KILLED MY MAMA!"
"How could I? I loved her! She was the only one fer me..."
"W..what?"
"I lost everything! My sons, my money, my playboys, my home and the woman I loved" he said and he started crying. "The only thing it left is yer my son!"
"What ?! NOOOOOO YOU ARE NOT MY FATHER! GO AWAY!" "Hans wait!!!" But Hans was already running to his home. When he arrived, he started crying. He couldn't believe that. Mama was dead and Mimis was his father. All these years, he believed that his father was away. But now, he knows everything... "HANS! OPEN THE DOOR! I KNOW YOU ARE THERE!" Arianna was screaming all the morning. Hans finally opened the door.
"Hey" Arianna said." How are you?"
"Better"
"I learned about you and Mimis. You know, that he is your father. He left yesterday. He went to Jamamika."
"I will leave too"
"What?"
"Yes I will go somewhere away from here. I can't stand this place anymore."
"But Hans..What about us? I love you..." Hans kissed her.
"I love you too but I have to go. Maybe one day we will get together again.I will never forget you" Arianna was watching him leaving...."I will never forget you too Hans" she whispered.
*THE END*
I know this was kinda sad, but I HATE HAPPY ENDINGS!!!!!!! C U to my next story:D:D:D Do you wanna know where did I inspired my characters from ?
-Hans: Agysilaos is his real name. He's in the 7th grade and soooooooooooo cute ^__^ I wish he was my little brother
- Arianna: Well...well.....There's a boy called Ares in my school, also a 7th grader. He has really long hair and looks like a girl. You got the point...He's mean like Arianna and likes fighting.
- Mama Porfyri: My favourite teacher. She teaches History and always wears designer gear. I killed her (not my teacher) cause I got a C in history.
- Mimis, Monkey, Gypsy: Three stupid, annoying, ugly boys from my class. I HATE THEM !!
- Rula: My sister's annoying friend.
- The servants (Mitso, Krithara, the 2 Dragons etc): They are all my teachers.
- Duke Socrates: A classmate of mine. A bit stupid, but funny
That's all ^___^

Not So Little Hans' Tale "Fairytale gone bad"

Feb 3, 2008 by Claudia35
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    6 Comment(s) posted so far

    On Feb 4, 2008 qasert wrote:

    \:rah\:

    On Feb 4, 2008 AshGreg wrote:

    awsome story cant wait to see the next one\:D \:D

    On Feb 8, 2008 wrote:

    Those are very beautiful sims!

    On Feb 17, 2008 aaaaaaac wrote:

    \:rah\: GREAT STORY!\:D \:rah\:

    On Feb 27, 2008 primavera77 wrote:

    Great job!\:\)

    On Mar 17, 2008 civetinja wrote:

    Thanks for sharing !\:\)

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