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Welcome to the 4th part of Little Hans' Tale. I know I said it 'd be the final part, but it'd be too long, so I divided it in two smaller parts !! I had to re-made my characters cause I lost ALL my downloads :((. But Han's isn't so little now. He's a handsome teenager. Please comment and rate!!!

Welcome to the 4th part of Little Hans' Tale. I know I said it 'd be the final part, but it'd be too long, so I divided it in two smaller parts !! I had to re-made my characters cause I lost ALL my downloads :((. But Han's isn't so little now. He's a handsome teenager. Please comment and rate!!! 5 years later..Hans was working to the Duke's palace as a kitchen boy. But he wasn't really good at cooking and the mean cook Krithara was always yelling at him. He hated this job, but he had to make money to help Mama Porfyri, who was very ill since she sold all (yes, ALL) her clothes. "Hanswel, come here !!"
"Yes ma'm"
" I want you to make pancakes for our lady"
" But I can't cook..."
"Sush !! YOU MUST DO WHAT I SAY BECAUSE..."
"..I will fire you" Hans whispered.
"...I WILL FIRE YOU" Maid Mitso came in. She was a newcomer, she has been working in the palace for a week. She was quiet, she'd barely speak English cause she was from Arachoba.
"Oh I very tired. Can have coffee ?"
"Humph, newbies. They are always tired !! And they don't speak good english..." Krithara said argily. "Hey ya !!" Georgia Rosewood, the sexy gardener came in. Rumors had it that she and the Duke had something more than the ordinary boss-servant relationship.. "Oh no !!"
"HANSWEL !! YOU BURNED THE LADY ARIANNA'S PANCAKES !!!"Krithara yelled at him. Yes, after all those years, Hans still loved Arianna. He couldn't see her very often though. He was only the kitchen boy and she was the future Duchess. And she is going to be married when she becomes 18 years old. "Miss Arianna, I asked you a question" Mr Solonas said.
Arianna sighed.
"Sorry, I didn't hear you.."
"Where is Vladivostock ?"
"Well, I don't know.."
" Homework assignment !!" Solon said in triumph.
"Yeah, go now"
"But.."
" I SAID GO !" Arianna went in bed. Since Brusher was murdered she has changed a lot. She never let the palace and she stays close to her bedroom and thoughts. Arianna doesn't want to get married, and especially to Monkey, but she has to because her father had a deal with Mimis Koutsofidis. Thank God, she has 3 years of fredom. Someone knocked.
"Yes ?"
It was cook Krithara.
"My lady, I'm so sorry, but your pancakes won't arrive on time, one of the newbies burned them.."
"HOW DARE YOU !! I'M SUPPOSED TO EAT AT 11.00 AND IT IS 11.15 !!!" AND THEY ARE BURNED !! GO BACK TO YOUR KITCHEN, YOU MORON !!"
"My lady.."
"I SAID GO !!"
 Arianna went away of her room. She wanted to run and scream, she was so angry! She was running and she wasn't watching where she was going, when... "Hey watch out!!!" a boy screamed.
"GET OUT OF MY WAY!!!"
 They both condiled.
"You idiot" Arianna started but then she realised who the boy was."Hans?!"
"My lady" he said and he kowtowed imidietly. "So, errr, how are you?" Arianna asked.
"You know, nothing new, I am cooking, cleaning, washing, burning pancakes..."
"YOU BURNED MY PANCAKES!!"
Hans laughted. "What about you?" he asked. "I heard you are ...."
"I am sorry but I got to go. So bye"
"Wait!" but Arianna had alread left." Oh Arianna" he whispered. Hans went to see his Mama.
"Hey Mama"
"Hans !! Did you bring any clothes ? Dolce and Gabana..."
"I'm sorry Mama..."
"Oh, that's ok...I will survive..I guess" Meanwhile.....
"Our plan is doing great. Brusher convice the Duke to marry her daughter to my son and then I killed her cause she wanted to marry me. She was such an annoying,ugly woman. And here we are, my son will be married ter the Duke's daughter in three years and we'll be rich !!"
Monkey was picking his nose.
"But I don't wanna live with that snobby cow" he cried.
"Don't worry boy !! We'll kill her and run ter Jamamika with the money. So I will see my dear Diamond again.."
"Boua boua hahahaha !!" they laughed.
"And the" Mimis continued" I will buy you a million of bannanas!!!"
"YAY YUM!!!!!" Arianna was reading a romance. As she was reading, she was imanging the two main characters as her and Hans. "I wish Hans was here" she thought. "Oh my God! What am I doing? I am engaged to Monkey!!! I shouldn't think of Hans"
But then someone knocked the door.
"Yes?"
"Lady Arianna, it's time for your walk"
"Ok I am coming" Hans went to the square to buy medicine for Mama.
"IIIIIII HANSY WOOO !!!"
"Not again.." "Hans will you come to the ball?"
Rula was the most annoying girl in the world. She was following Hans everywhere and she wanted to know everything.
"What ball?"
"The ball Hans!!! Tonight!!! Here in the square!! Oh please Hans let's go together!! Please please please plea..."
"Ok ok stop it!! I will think of it!!". No way, he thought.
"So how are you? Is your Mama ok? Did you learn cooking or not yet? Did you heard...." But Hans stopped listening to her. He saw Arianna passing with her guards, Dragon Cathriene( the blonde) and Dragon Helen( the old one) Hans wanted to make Arianna jealous. So, without thinking of it, he kissed Rula. And it worked. Arianna saw him and she felt so jealous. For one moment, she wanted to cut Rula's stupid pigtails and to slap Hans. Hans went close to her.
"Kowtow to your lady, village boy." Dragon Helen oderded him.
"No it's ok...."Arianna said.
"No my lady it's not ok, I have to kowtow" Hans said. Then he left with Rula. Arianna was so angry and Rula so happy. She thought that Hans was her boyfriend now. When they arrived to Rula's house, she tried to kiss him.
"No Rula wait!!!"
"Why? I am your girlfriend now!!!"
"No you are not!!! I just kissed you to shut it!" "You what?" Rula said angrily. "YOU WHAT?!"
"I am sorry Rula but I don't like you!!"
"DO YOU KNOW HANS HOW MANY GUYS WANT ME AND I LEFT THEM ALL JUST TO BE WITH YOU??"
No one, Hans thought.
"AND NOW YOU ARE TELLING ME THAT YOU KISSED ME JUST TO MAKE ME SHUT IT?" Rula: "- Bad words-"
And after a lot of bad words, she slapped him and she left.
"I guess that was fair..." Hans thought" At least, she will leave me alone.." Arianna was thinking all night.
"I'll do it!" she said finally" I will tell Hans that I love him!" What will happen? Will Arianna say to Hans that she love him? And what about Hans? And Mama? And Rula?You will find out to the next and final( yes THE FINAL this time) part:)

Not So Little Hans' Tale part 4

Jan 26, 2008 by Claudia35
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    17 Comment(s) posted so far

    On Jan 26, 2008 Claudia35 wrote:

    i am sorry for some mistakes \:\(

    On Jan 27, 2008 qasert wrote:

    \:D

    On Jan 27, 2008 Kungfuchicken wrote:

    Ooooh thats so good that she'll tell him! Cant wait \:cool\: \:cool\: \:cool\:

    On Jan 27, 2008 donaldch wrote:

    \:cool\:

    On Jan 28, 2008 Seerlyn wrote:

    Great story!!!

    On Jan 28, 2008 BoodaMae wrote:

    How do you get your pictures so clear? Loved it! \:wub\:

    On Jan 28, 2008 wrote:

    that part was different from the others but it is great\:rah\:

    On Jan 28, 2008 wrote:

    lol Rula is really funny\:D \:P

    On Jan 28, 2008 goodie2shoes wrote:

    Awwww, Hans has gotten even cuter! \:wub\: \;\) I'm glad that Arianna shaped up a little bit. \:P Now she can see how sweet Hans is. \:\) Can't wait for the next part! \:D

    On Jan 28, 2008 seelindarun wrote:

    Hans and Arianna are so cute now! \:wub\: The part with Rula was hysterical, too! \:rah\:

    On Jan 29, 2008 sunny33 wrote:

    Mimis is so mean!! He killed Brusher!!!!\:mad\: But the part is great\:rah\:

    On Jan 29, 2008 wrote:

    Great part! Where did you find Maid Mitso's hair\:o 5.0!!

    On Jan 30, 2008 marizza82 wrote:

    Good part. I'm sure that Hand and Arianna will get together \;\) But Arianna isn't funny anymore \:\(

    On Jan 30, 2008 aaaaaaac wrote:

    \:rah\: \:D NICE STORY! \:D \:rah\:

    On Jan 31, 2008 wrote:

    I don't care if arianna is a good girl now, I still want Mimis to win\:P

    On Feb 1, 2008 spacemouse wrote:

    Very nice, well done. Keep up the good work! \:\)

    On Mar 12, 2008 civetinja wrote:

    Great part ! Thanks for sharing !\:\)

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