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Meet Madison and Anthony Camertus.
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11 Comment(s) posted so far
On May 17, 2007 xLulu wrote:
it was very very rushed.
a bit too rushed.
make it more detailed ...
but otherwise good job!
On May 17, 2007 wrote:
its good but likke xlulu itz realy rushed but i liked it anyway
On May 18, 2007 wrote:
Very short, and not really a lot of plot.
On May 18, 2007 atangki wrote:
Pictures are blurry. And make sure you take pictures with walls up. The story seems really rushed, not showing the plot or anything. Needs a lot more improvement. But good.
On May 18, 2007 sharon21075 wrote:
On May 19, 2007 Dead Rock wrote:
.. Nice??
Well, the photo quality could have been much better..
On May 19, 2007 wrote:
Very short needs more detail...its ok i gess
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On May 19, 2007 clcewest441 wrote:
It was rushed. I finished it in less than a minute. It needs more ... plot. On the 5th page she is already pregnant.
It needs more detail and plot. I give it a 2.5, keep trying and hopefully you will succeed.
Its nothing special anyways, try to think of an idea which no one has made or thought of on TSR before.
Keep it up.
On May 21, 2007 spacemouse wrote:
Nice, but a little bit short.
On May 28, 2007 molli17 wrote:
On Feb 29, 2008 qasert wrote: