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This story is about Dr. George Oliver Davis and how he changed the lives of the two people sitting with him. Adam is the doctor's adopted son and Eve is Adam's wife of only 2 years. The 3 live in a small home just outside of town. Adam and Eve have come to call George by the nickname of G.O.D. his name altogether. In this story you will see just how important the term becomes as they live their lives.
George wants to pass this potion on to Adam, to continue the name for centuries to come, but there is only one problem Adam is the only one to know of the potion and he can't let Eve know he has taken the potion.
Adam, feels it is unfair that only he can take this potion that could extend his life far pass what Eve will ever be able to live, but knowing that it is the wish of his father to do this for his research he agrees to take it. Adam, starts drinking the potion that George created. Now it is only a matter of time before it takes effect and the cell change begins. The process would only take a few mintues but would extend Adam life by uncountless amounts of time.
All the while drinking the potion Adam realized that Eve would never be able to live as long as George or he would and his heart became heavy with future pain. He asked George if he would ever be able to tell her, so she knew that he would be alive and well after her life has passed. George told him for over 150 years and 15 wives he never told them and with that being said it was to remain a secret at he is gone and Adam was to take his place in the cheating of death plan. George whispered in Adam's ear now remember to not say a word or let on that this potion was created unless for some reason you can't avoid explaining what has happened to cause any noticeable changes.
Adam thought what am I to tell Eve 50 years from now when she is old and I am still my say age I am now. Well that is the only time it should ever be mentioned until them kept it under wraps, she might freak out on you if you say something now. A few days later, George was laying in bed thinking "What have I done!" He thought about how his 150 years of life was and how lonely at times it had been to not have someone share his potion of youth.
He was rethinking his request of Adam about not telling Eve what was happening. He felt that maybe if he could make one more potion to give to Eve then Adam could remain happy for life with his one wife forever.
He thought that if he could get another potion done before his own wonder potions effects wore off then he would be creating not only one but two immortal beings to carry on his work. He decided to tell Adam to let Eve know so he could explain in detail the effects of the potion the next morning. Ask George and Adam were talking, Adam's dog Noah came in the house and licking a wet spot of the floor near where Adam had drunk the potion and then went outside. Neither of the men noticed Noah come in or out of the house and also him licking the potion off the floor. That next morning Eve went outside to feed Noah and found a puppy in front of his dog house. She called Adam outside to explain to her what the puppy was doing in Noah house yet alone in the yard and where was Noah.
Adam came out to see the puppy and knew right then that it was in fact Noah but not in the adult form of a few days ago. It was as if he was reborn or something to that effect. He then thought oh my GOD what happened here. Then George came to mind and wondered if somehow did Noah get the potion.
Adam told Eve we need to go in an talk to George, he might be able to answer this question for us both, pretending not to have any idea what was going on at this point. George sat at his computer and begin entering in some information regarding the potion and the different effects it might have on different subjects. He felt this would help Adam explain waht was going on it he was unable to do it himself. Adam and Eve went to George room to talk to him and found that he had died before they could get an answer regarding Noah sudden life change. They both began to morn his death and Adam had to make a choice on if he should tell Eve about the potion. A few days after George's funeral, Eve sat at his computer and found some interesting information on it that had her bring in Adam to help explain what she had read.
She found a file that George left behind on the computer, that Adam was suppose to have read to help explain waht was happening to him and Noah and then be able to tell Eve from there.
But now if was more of a problem than before because Eve was reading it instead of the person it was meant for. Now Adam had to tell the secret to his loving wife, before she goes mad from what she has seen so far. Adam explained the whole thing to Eve and she was in disbelief of it, but if it was true she would remain happy with Adam forever.
Adam told her that he mixed the potion up and put it in a can for her to drink and then she would be able to be the way he is after the cell changes finished. She didn't want to drink it at first but she did and then the potion began to work quicker than Adam's drink did. She begin to drink the potion from the can and then..... The potion turn Eve into and elder woman instead of leaving her the age she was before. To Adam's shock at what had happened he forgot one thing from when he took the potion. His was from a glass not a can and guessing that the can had something to do with the negative reaction. He didn't know what to do at this point but he wanted to cry, because if it worked in the reverse manner then she would die way before she normally would instead of living longer. Eve is becoming really confused now. She is wondering why she is going from an elder to a teenager. She was thinking he didn't read up on the potions side effects.
Eve calls Adam inside and has a long talk with him about this potion that she drank, she is getting scared cause she keeps changing.
She loves the fact of knowing she is not going to die to soon but with all the changes she is going through she is really scared. Adam is doing some research about this potion that he gave Eve. He is now finding out that it has a lot of side effects since he gave it to her from a can.
Adam is going to have to tell Eve that she could be an elder one minute, an teenager the next, or even an adult. Depending on what mood she is in. Adam is thinking he is going to have to keep her in a good mood for her to become an adult again. The notes are very complicated to read so this is how he is understanding them so far. Eve was very happy now since she was an adult again. She wants to have kids so bad but she doesn't want to get pregnant and become a teenager in the process.
Adam and Eve sat down during dinner and had a long talk about this potion. Adam told her all the side effects it will have since he made a huge mistake and gave it to her in a can.
Adam told her one day she could be a elder then a couple weeks after that she could be a teen, then a couple weeks after that she could be an adult again. He also told her the happier she stays the more prone she would be to staying an adult. If you become really angry you will turn into an elder. If you become extreamly angry you will become a teen.
Eve had a question for Adam. What if I become pregnant? Adam told her if she got pregnant she could become a teen after the baby is born due to the stress. Adam had one more thing to tell her before she got to comfortable about the baby thing. He said Eve one more thing before I go.
When and if you do get pregnant, the baby will already have this potion in his or her blood so it will live for a long time just like us. Maybe not as long since it's not the full power of the potion but will have some effect on the length of their lives.
The chances are more likely for them to growup faster than normal kids and that is something we would have to watch when that time comes. It would be hard trying to explain that chance to people outside of the house regarding there changes. Adam noticed a few months later after their talk about kids that after they had sex together Eve was staying in bed alot.
Eve was truly feeling strange to the point that she might become a mother soon, but wanted to and has to stay in the good happy mood or it could cause problems with the babies developement. She later told Adam that they are finally going to be parents and to be ready for whatever G.O.D. had in store for this birth ahead of them.
Eve got out of bed and told Adam that she thinks that the family will have an addition to it in the next few months. She said that she would have to take care of herself and make sure she doesn't encounter any side effects of this until the baby is born.
Adam agreed and told her he would do his best to make sure she did just that, take care of herself. He knew that if they made it through this time that they would know if the child would be carrying the potion in their cells or not.
Please come back to read the ongoing story of this family and their dealings with the fact of a life with no end.
End of Chapter 1
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12 Comment(s) posted so far
On Nov 22, 2006 MoriaG wrote:
Great Story. How do you get her to change so much? Great idea, orginial and i love the whole G.O.D. thing. You might do more close up on the pictures. but great so far!!!
On Nov 23, 2006 Mystrelia wrote:
Wow! You have an excellent storyline going on here--very refreshing after a lot that I have read. When writing it up, though, I think you need to slow down a little and reread a lot to catch the typos. It's kind of hard to read without stumbling on the words.
I'll love seeing more of this story. Good job!
On Nov 23, 2006 wrote:
Good job!
On Nov 23, 2006 bflosweethart wrote:
good story love how you explain every thing going on to the next one
On Nov 23, 2006 gadalu wrote:
Great story
On Nov 24, 2006 crayanne wrote:
Interesting story!!!!
On Dec 24, 2006 white_sands wrote:
good story so far!
On Jan 8, 2007 shady411 wrote:
Interesting story
On Jan 9, 2007 Olga2102 wrote:
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On Jan 29, 2007 civetinja wrote:
Thanks !
On Jun 22, 2007 Iceman721 wrote:
Sorry so long to answer the question of how I changed her so much! I used the AgeSimCheat found in the cheat mode of the game.