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Eden made her final transformation into an adult and moved away from her parents Adam and Eve. After a few years went by she met a wonderful man named Joseph Kelley a very well to do doctor. They have a wonderful daughter named Mary and she is a beatiful teenager now and she looks so much like her mother it's uncanny.

Adam and Eve miss they daugther dearly, but understand that she has to live her life the best she can with the potions limit being unknown at this time. To this day she hasn't told Joseph anything about the potion in fear he and Mary would think of her as being some sort of freak.

Eden made her final transformation into an adult and moved away from her parents Adam and Eve. After a few years went by she met a wonderful man named Joseph Kelley a very well to do doctor. They have a wonderful daughter named Mary and she is a beatiful teenager now and she looks so much like her mother it's uncanny.

Adam and Eve miss they daugther dearly, but understand that she has to live her life the best she can with the potions limit being unknown at this time. To this day she hasn't told Joseph anything about the potion in fear he and Mary would think of her as being some sort of freak. This is their daugther Mary and she spends most of her time with her parents and does well in school and keeps out of trouble.

She is the third generation of Adam and Eve and from what G.O.D. told them about their grandchildern, that the potion would not carry over to them, they will live a normal lifespan as any other person would. Jospeh and Mary went out to the store one day to do some shopping and in the meantime, Eden sat down with a book she found about long life. Thinking she might find some clues on what the potion was and how to make more of make it even stronger.

She figured if she could make it stronger it would last longer or maybe enough be able to be given to her family and they too could life longer. She found information on how to make a potion, but this one was unlike the one G.O.D. gave to her dad.

She decided to whip it up quick since she has didn't have alot of time before the others came home from the store. After putting the mix together and putting it into a drink container, she put some in a cup and thought before taking it, that she hopes it works good enough to past it on. she tilts her head back and drinks it down to the last drop , she feels a calm rush over her body that makes her numb, she starts to walk away but the drink takes a suprizing quick effect. The mixture does something to her that she didn't think would happen and it was starting to make her black out. She tried to keep her balance, but to not any luck. As she started to walk out the bedroom to go get a drink of water, she passed out standing up. Joseph and Mary returned home to find Eden in a standing postion blacked out almost as if she was sleeping or something. Joseph was wondering what was wrong with his wife as she stood motionless in front of him. During Eden blacked out stage she began thinking of her baby Mary and what will happen to her if something goes wrong. A few moments later she awakings from her sleep stage and hugs Joseph as if she hadn't seen him in ages. Mary stand by and wonders what just happen and why. After talking a moment Eden tells Joseph about the mixture in the cantainer, Joseph put some in a cup and wants to have it tested at work to see what effects if might have had on her. He also took a blood sample from Eden to compare with the mixture.

Eden, didn't want him to take the blood, because he would find out that she has the original potion in her blood stream. She feared the worst of him finding out without her telling him before now. With the samples in his pocket, Joseph left the house to go to the lab at the hospital to have the Eden blood and the mixture tested. He didn't know what to think of what had just happened, but he was going to get to the bottom of it as soon as possible. Eden rested and their bed as was joined by Mary, who was in a state of shock from the happenings also.

She asked her mom what was happending and she thought maybe her mom was sick or something to that effect and began to worry. Eden couldn't help but tell Mary something to the effect of what was happening. She told her that she has something in her blood that makes her different form others kinda like magic, but not in the total sense of the word. Mary asked is it like a genie cast a spell on you or something strange like that. Eden told her no not like a genie, but a man named G.O.D. gave your grandfather an potion that was to prolong his life for centuries to come and from what he has told me it just might be true.

I haven't told your father in fear of what he would think of me as a person and so on, so I kept it a secret until what happened with me talking the mixture over there. Mary knew that the whole thing would come to light she her dad took the blood sample and after testing it he would find something strange about it.

She told Eden what she thought and they agreed that once he came back they would all sit and talk it out, and come to some kind of understanding in this whole matter. Joseph came home form the hospital with the results of the testing and wanted them to hear him out. They all sat at the dinner table and Joseph started off by saying "What the heck is going on here?" He then asked Eden, why she never told him about her blood not being the same as a normal human being and what if anything would happen to Mary because of it.

In the end of the long talk Joseph and Mary knew eveything that Eden knew about the potion and it's effects on all involved. She said that she was hoping to create a potion to help them enjoy everlasting life as she might in time.

The only problem was that the mixture she made up as far more stronger than that of what was in her blood and her organs couldn't handle the strain on them and they are in fact shuting down as they spoke to each other. Eden asked if that meant that the mixture didn't work as planned. Joseph told her in fact it did work, but not in the way you wanted it to do so, it in fact robbed you of the centuries you would have lived out down to.... (he paused as if he was going to break out in tears) you have 6 weeks tops.

Eden, didn't want to hear what he just said but had no choice to, she sat there and found that she was going to die in 6 weeks and she would be breaking the chain of life with her family. She had to go call her parents and break the news to them somehow. She went to the phone and called Adam and told him what was happening and he told her to be strong and he would find someway to counteract the effects of her mixture and be able to stop it before the time was up. He would work night and day to get it to her as soon as he could.

They talked for awhile on the phone and then she got tired and decided to go to bed, She was hoping that her dad would be able to save her from this nightmare she was going through. Three Weeks has past.... And Eden body which was not to transform again from the blood stream potion effect, did just that she changed to an elderly woman and was just three weeks away from a untimely death.

Over this time the family spend every minute they could together talking about any and everything that came to mind. They wanted to make the last weeks the best they could knowing that Eden would be gone soon. Eden said to Joseph that with him being a doctor was there anything that he could do to stop this from happening. Joseph said with him not being a sciencist and understand the compounds used in the potion of either form then no he couldn't help.

Eden told him that no matter what she would always love him and Mary and that even in death she would be by their sides in spirit. She then apologized for all that she had done from withholding the fact of the potion to the fact of using the other position. The third week had come and in an instense Eden began an horrible pain ridden attack that took her life from her almost right in front of Joseph with Mary in her room sleeping soundly. As you can see mt Grim came to take Eden away from her family and her parents long before she was due to go. Joseph and Mary mourned Eden death and they would be lost without her, but life must go on. Twenty years have passed since Eden death to the potion and Joseph is now an elderly man and their daugther Mary is yet again a beatiful yound woman. They both wish that G.O.D. has worked harder on the potion from the start before his death in order to really make it worthly of it usage.

But G.O.D. gave no concrete facts that if would do what it was sat out to do, but did make it possible to last for some time to come. Joseph and Mary still keep in touch with them and they are still their youth selves even to this day. Tweny years and a day after Eden died, she returned home from the dead to her own from porch. She gave her long last husband a hug and a kiss, while her daugther a full grown woman now stood on the porch near them. She turned to her and gave her a kiss as if she had never missed a day from being away from her. To this day they don't know or even care how she came back from the dead twenty years later. All that Joseph and Mary knew was that some time needed to be made up that has been missed from her being gone and that they would live life to it's fullest even knowning that long life is not always promised to everyone and no fountain of youth or potion is truly without a cause and effect.

And if the chance came to the others to take the potion of life, they would pass, becasue you only live once no matter how long and it's best to take your chances and live it like it was your last day to truly enjoy "Life" itself.

The Davis Family Final Part

Dec 7, 2006 by Iceman721
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    10 Comment(s) posted so far

    On Nov 30, 2006 Iceman721 wrote:

    This is the final part of the Davis family story.

    On Dec 7, 2006 Melody Curious wrote:

    Lovely message at the end, we could all do with taking heed of that one. Well done! Great story.\:cool\:

    On Dec 10, 2006 JuLaYa-K wrote:

    Really, it was great!\:D It was so sad how Eden died but i luv the message at the end!\:wub\: Nice, once again! \:rah\:

    On Dec 10, 2006 Iceman721 wrote:

    Thank you for wonderful comments and I hope my next story turns out this well\:D

    On Dec 11, 2006 dawny1234 wrote:

    \:\)

    On Dec 24, 2006 white_sands wrote:

    good advice at the end!

    On Feb 3, 2007 civetinja wrote:

    Great story !!! Thanks !

    On Feb 12, 2007 shady411 wrote:

    Well done on the whole story

    On Apr 7, 2007 Olga2102 wrote:

    \:rah\: \:rah\:

    On Mar 31, 2008 jadespacemonkey wrote:

    I hope you continue to write more stories

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