JohnnyDeppLuva / Stories / A Mother's Love: Chapter One
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Please read the Intro first xx

This is the first chapter of my story: There's Nothing Like A Mother's Love, I couldn't fit the whole name in the title so I shortened it to 'A Mother's Love', So that I can write which part we are at =]

Anyway I hope you enjoy this part, thank you for all your great comments on the intro, they have really helped me to continue writing..I never thought I'd be able to write anything lol

RESUBMITTED BECAUSE I DELETED THE OTHER ONE BY ACCIDENT

Please read the Intro first xx

This is the first chapter of my story: There's Nothing Like A Mother's Love, I couldn't fit the whole name in the title so I shortened it to 'A Mother's Love', So that I can write which part we are at =]

Anyway I hope you enjoy this part, thank you for all your great comments on the intro, they have really helped me to continue writing..I never thought I'd be able to write anything lol

RESUBMITTED BECAUSE I DELETED THE OTHER ONE BY ACCIDENT Maria knew what she had to do, she got up early that Tuesday morning and quickly changed into something that would cover her up as much as possible.
But her green face still gave her away. She then tried using sim make up products to make herself look more 'normal' But it did the complete opposite and seemed to enhance her green-ness What was 'Normal' anyway? She thought to herself? Why are people labelled in this world with names such as Emo and Chav?
Who was anyone to label others because they were different? But how different was she really? She looked normal apart from her skin and she felt emotions the same way sims did, she opted to eat their foods instead of her own traditional meals. She styled her hair like she seen in 'their' magazines, and she even bought the latest fashion must haves (online of course). Maria felt that she belonged in this world, she had never experienced this on her own Planet of Alamorra, she always felt wrong on her planet as if she shouldn't be their as if she had a destiny set for her somewhere else.
When she got to Earth that feeling vanished...she loved doing sim things such as painting out on her small walled garden. Maria ran out into the garage, she owned a car but had never used it.....she had only ever been in her walled garden where no one could see her. She quickly jumped in the car and made her way to Sunset Valley Hospital, It was 7am on a Tuesday morning. She chose this time on a weekday because she knew that she'd be less likely to be seen by the sims as they all worked inside big buildings where they could see nothing of the outside world. Maria made it to the Hospital car lot, she started feeling dreadfully ill and felt completely and utterly terrified. At least she had made it this far. It was only ten more yards and she would be inside....Doctors were sworn to confidentiality anyway...weren't they? She decided to sit for a few minutes to gain her strength and courage..but a few minutes turned into 10 and then 10 turned into 30. Finally 47 minutes after arriving she had gained up the strngth to get out of the car..'now just run' she told herself. and that's exactly what she did. Okay so this is where I have decided to leave chapter one...Yes I am mean lol
Please let me know what you all think and thank you for taking the time to read this, It means the world to me xx

A Mother's Love: Chapter One

Aug 20, 2009 by JohnnyDeppLuva
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    11 Comment(s) posted so far

    On Aug 21, 2009 fredbrenny wrote:

    I love it the second time too!\:wub\:

    On Aug 21, 2009 caridina wrote:

    Very nice story. I hpe there gonna be many more chapters \:rah\:

    On Aug 22, 2009 cjthedemoncat wrote:

    do more. its really good.

    On Aug 22, 2009 spitzmagic wrote:

    It's a very nice story I like the message it represents. Good job! \:rah\:

    On Aug 22, 2009 clairepitts1994 wrote:

    I am really hooked on this story!! Oh! but how dare you leave it there!!\:P Chapter 2 better be out soon!!! I need to know what happens to her at the doctors! Awsum storing, good writing and I agree with spitzmagic, I like the message it represents. Can't wait for the next chapter! and many more!

    On Aug 22, 2009 Mangio wrote:

    i wonder how the people will react....\:wub\: cant wait for the next part

    On Aug 22, 2009 maxi king wrote:

    \:wub\:sweet story!\:wub\:

    On Aug 24, 2009 shaml_sim wrote:

    Great part 1! Poor Maria, she just wants to be treated like everyone else \:\( Looking forward to Part 2!! \:D

    On Aug 24, 2009 Little Cloud wrote:

    \:rah\:

    On Sep 4, 2009 staceface2009p wrote:

    aww Maria is soooo pretty ... i wish I could play her \:\(. I loved the screenshots very good job on this story \:D

    On Oct 21, 2009 kat* wrote:

    Nice story! \:rah\:

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