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Part ONE. This is my first story ever! Hope you like the the beginning. These are my characters. Enjoy!

Part ONE. This is my first story ever! Hope you like the the beginning. These are my characters. Enjoy! EXCERPT:
And so Poppy ran and ran. Her heart thumping like a drum beat, sweat dripping from her forehead. She must not stop. Must...keep...on...going. From a distance and owl hooted, its call echoed through the pines...... Dear Diary,
30th June. My name is Poppy and I shall try and write to you every day, or maybe every week, if I remember that is. That's me in the picture with my mum and our new house in Cortville. We moved here suddenly because mum said it was a 'bad atmosphere' in our old place. Every day my mum goes to work. She says she's a lawyer downtown. Mum's never brought anyone home from work because I'm told they're too busy. Oh well. She has me doesn't she? That's all a mother could want. Hehe. A little about me......like all teenage girls I want to be a model on TV. But not the normal kind of model. You see, please don't laugh, but I want to model furniture. That's a sample pic of me modelling a seat. Dear Diary,
2nd July. Not much to say really. Got up, went to school, went to bed, and so on! School's Ok. Not the greatest, not the worst. Oh well. Short entry today. Dear Diary,
14th July. I'm starting to get freaked out. This morning I had a lovely resfreshing bath. Only it wasn't so lovely when I noticed the man at the window staring in. I screamed so much, my throat hurts now. It 21:00 and I'm sitting up in bed. I can still picture those eyes staring in on me. A greeny grey circle with an intense black pupil. What a perve! Dear Diary,
20th July. FANTASTIC news! Mum's old school friend is getting married and we're invited! This calls for...SHOPPING!!! Well it's in a few days and I need a dress. I'm so excited! Aren't you Diary? But Mum got a message from work the next night, saying that they needed her great. She couldn't attend the wedding. I would have to go on my own. At last, I saw one of Mum's workmates. They seemed to be almost warning her. Nah! Thats just me for you! It was a beautiful wedding. There were lots of guests, and even more food! The park the couple had chosen was fantastic, apart from that old shed in the corner. I was enjoying myself greatly, but I also had this weird feeling that...well...I was being watched. Dear Diary,
22nd July. I've got a boyfriend! His name is Josh and he's soooo cute. He looks older than I think he is. He has a little beard and some stuble. It's so adorable! But I wonder why he keeps on asking me about my Mum? Meanwhile......

Hoped you enjoyed Part ONE of "A normal life?". Please comment on it and see you soon in Part TWO. Just to remind you this is my first story and it's a little slow starting.

A Normal Life? - ONE

Oct 29, 2007 by Kungfuchicken
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    15 Comment(s) posted so far

    On Oct 30, 2007 AshGreg wrote:

    awsome story cant wait to see the next one\:D \:D

    On Oct 30, 2007 atangki wrote:

    Nice start.\:D

    On Oct 30, 2007 ila73 wrote:

    nice story \:\) \:\) \:\)

    On Oct 30, 2007 123456789_1234 wrote:

    \:\)

    On Oct 30, 2007 Kungfuchicken wrote:

    Thanks everyone. I appreciate your comments! xxx

    On Oct 31, 2007 samcactus101 wrote:

    Awesome story. I like how you put it as a diary from a girl's point of view..\:wub\: \:wub\:

    On Oct 31, 2007 adodge1994 wrote:

    THis is a really great story, i remember my first story, in fact i have only made like 4, or something like that, but none of them any good, so i quit. keep it up you ar amazing, but for future referance, you might want to edit your camera setting to make the pictures alot more clear, If you need help with that, just message me and ill be glad to help.\:rah\: thank you\:rah\:

    OUTSTANDING AND INCREDIBLE JOB, ESPECIALLY FOR A FIRST STORY.

    On Oct 31, 2007 kaate wrote:

    That was pretty funny \:rah\: great story, i love the pic of the dude looking into the bathroom \:D that was hilarious!!!

    On Nov 3, 2007 bec71 wrote:

    Great Story! I hope theres gonna be another one?!\:D \:D

    On Nov 4, 2007 Dead Rock wrote:


    Good Progression!

    On Nov 6, 2007 qvisn wrote:

    I thought the guy looking through the window was scarey, its made me all prickly.\:eek\: This is a great first story, cant wait to see whats next.. I came to thank you for reading my story and realised you had written one. Well done you.\:D \:wub\: 5.0

    On Nov 13, 2007 OpheliaNival wrote:

    Wow! This is a really good start, certainly got me all interested!!! Now I'm wondering what it is that her mother really does... hmm... and also why is the creepy guy talking to the guy who is supposed to be her boyfriend?! hmm... Well, off to read part two! \:D

    On Nov 13, 2007 OpheliaNival wrote:

    Ooops, in all the excitement I forgot to rate... And also may I say what a great camoflage the creepy guy had when looking at her in the wedding? \:cool\:

    On Dec 29, 2007 kissme87 wrote:

    Good start \:D

    On Mar 20, 2008 qasert wrote:

    \:P

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