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Hello and thanks for clicking on my story (again)!
This is the second part to it. Hope you enjoy it.
Sorry its taken so long, school has been getting tough and I just haven't thought about it.

So far we have been introduced to the characters and the girls have arrived at Worthing School for Girls. They have been shown to their dormitory which they have discovered is disgusting.

Hello and thanks for clicking on my story (again)!
This is the second part to it. Hope you enjoy it.
Sorry its taken so long, school has been getting tough and I just haven't thought about it.

So far we have been introduced to the characters and the girls have arrived at Worthing School for Girls. They have been shown to their dormitory which they have discovered is disgusting. Rosie - "No! This can't be happening! We're stuck, I don't have a mirror, and he said something about doing work!"
 Rosie rattled the doorhandle with all her might.

Rosie - "Its locked! I...it...its locked. MY CLOTHES ARE DOWN THERE YOU HORRIBLE MAN!"
Bessie - "Please settle done. If you shout too much they might get annoyed and, I don't know, do something awful." Bessie - "I'm Bessie by the way."

Bessie sighed and slowly got herself onto the nearest bed. She was still feeling sick. It had been a good two hours since she had stopped travelling, and Bessie wondered why she hadn't got any better. Maybe it was all the excitement. Rosie stopped rattling the door and turned around.

Rosie - "Well I'm Rosie Talbott. My daddy's the owner of Club Distress Furniture, and I shall shout all I like!" No one had heard from Alex all this time. No one even noticed her sitting on the little chair in the corner. She had kept silent. But now, with all this commotion, she couldn't keep it in any longer. She gave a little yelp and burst out crying. It was all too much for a simple soul like Alex. But before anyone could do anything Bessie gagged and ran to the sink. Bessie throw up the remains of her breakfast. Now the room really did stink.

Lucy - "Oh no, oh look, that is disgusting!"
Rosie - "Ugh! That makes me wanna puke."
Faye - "People please stop! We've been in this room for only about a quarter of an hour and you've already made one person break down, and another one sick!"

Things quietened down a bit after that. After a while small talk was made and everyone introduced themselves. A couple of hours past, with the girls talking non-stop. Soon everyone started to feel the pull of sleep.

Faye - "Well, I don't know about you lot, but I'm going to sleep."
 Lucy - "Excuse me? Is just me, or have none of us got any PJs? I am so not sleeping in my everyday wear like you gingey. Plus...I stink. I mean, where are the showers? What have they got here? Some kind of child slavery camp or something?"
Bessie - "Look. This is all we have. You know that doors locked and all our stuff's down there." Rosie - "I'm so sleeping ON my bed. Have you seen the state of these sheets? They looked like they'd been puked on. My maid always gives me new ones every day you know. She throws them away once I've used them once."
Lucy - "Oh my God! Same!"

The two went on comparing how their spoilt little lives were the same as eachothers. The others however, were trying to sleep. It had gone midnight before everyone had dozed off. All you could hear was the sound of a clock ticking and the buzz of a fly trying to get out. If you couldn't see where you were, the room would have sounded pretty peaceful. But that wasn't the case for Bessie. Bessie could not get to sleep. She tossed and turned but to no avail. Her temperature was going crazy. First, she would boil, strip off to her undies, and lay back down. But after a few minutes, she would freeze and try and wrap the measly bed clothes around her. No sleep didn't help how she felt either. Her sickness was getting worse, and at frequent intervals during the night, she would throw up in the sink. It surely wasn't travel sickness now was it? Mr Desser - "COME ON YOU LAZY BRATS! GET UP OR I'LL PULL YOU OUT!"

The girls, at 4am, got rudely awaken by a hellish screeching from the doorway. They struggled to gain conciousness as the land of nod suddenly disappeared. It was Mr Desser. All five groaned, but that made him even angrier. Lucy - "That's the last time I'm sleeping in my underwear. It's disgusting!"
Mr Desser - "Right, get dressed, and line up outside your door. And don't think of trying anything stupid." It took them at least 15 minutes to all get ready. This was not pleasing to Mr Desser.

Mr Desser - "Right! No talking and follow me. You are to start work instantly."
Faye - "But what about breakfast. I really am starving."
Mr Desser - "There is to be no breakfast for you. A single portion of cereal will be provided at lunch, but as for that, you shall have no other. Wouldn't want to waste precious working time would we?
Faye - "But...we can't...you can't possibly think...we could...survive on THAT?"
Mr Desser - "You better start learning to then shouldn't you." After quite a long walk through corridors and down stairs, they arrived in the familiar hall. Mrs Crusher was stood majesticly there, waiting.

Mrs Crusher - "Line up. Now."

They of course did as they were told.

Mrs Crusher - "Right, I hope Mr Desser has explained about the meals, so let's get down to business. You shall work for me, all day, every day. You are to clean my house, polish the furrniture, be my scribe, wait on us hand and foot, and most importantly, amuse me. You are to work in the clothes you have on, there shall be no breaks, and don't even dare go outside. Mr Desser will assign your tasks." The five girls were separated and assigned different tasks. Bessie was last. They walked in silence for most of it.

Mr Desser - "This is your first room. Clean this."

It was the biggest bathroom Bessie had ever seen. And it looked as if had already been cleaned.

Bessie - "But it's clean already. What am I to do?"
Mr Desser - "Clean? Go look closely. When I come back to give you lunch, I shall expect it to be absolutely spotless. And I mean spotless."

With that he walked out, slamming and locking the door behind.

Bessie - "Oh boy."

She gagged and ran to the toilet. So Bessie put her back into it and cleaned the very clean room day after day. Her efforts were not in vain though, because as soon as Mr Desser saw how fresh it all was, Bessie got an extra 10 flakes of cereal as a reward. It had been a week of solid work and they were all starting to feel it. Sleep was limited and every bone and muscle in their body ached like hell. Apart from that, Bessie was feeling worse, with migranes every few hours. She had already fainted twice.

Mrs Crusher - "Bessie, come with me. I have something to inform you."
Bessie - "Yes ma'am." Mrs Crusher - "Ah Bessie, a letter has been sent by your parents. There seems to be some bad news. Your father has passed away a couple of days ago from a bad stomach virus. Your mother stated 'not to worry, you're in good hands'. She has also sent you a gift, but as personal items are not allowed, I shall be keeping it.

Bessie couldn't swallow, let alone breath. Why her? Why her father? But what about this stomach bug? She turned to walk away before the tears came.

Mrs Crusher - "Oh yes. And I hope you're FEELing better." Meanwhile:

Jack - "Lousy school making me work. Digging holes here in this lousy patch. Hey whats this?

He picked up a bone. He looked down and shifted a bit of earth.

Jack - "What? No...it can't be. Oh Jesus!" End of Part TWO. Stick around for part THREE. Comments are much appreciated and sorry again for it taking so long.

The School - TWO

Jan 26, 2008 by Kungfuchicken
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    20 Comment(s) posted so far

    On Jan 27, 2008 qasert wrote:

    \:D

    On Jan 27, 2008 mini me3393 wrote:

    Oh my gosh! Did they do something to their parents!? Ahhh I'm already hooked on this! But don't worry about taking a while. School comes first. But wow, I can't wait for the next part!

    On Jan 27, 2008 jackieQ789 wrote:

    wow very good story cant wait for part 3 keep up the good work please sign my gustbook when the next part is out \:rah\: \:rah\: \:rah\: i have rated u 5.0 coz it was very good and i am hooked

    On Jan 27, 2008 Lailey01 wrote:

    Nicely done. I'm glad that by the looks of it from the title page that Bessie and that boy get together. 4.0 \:D

    On Jan 27, 2008 Sim Boy 5 wrote:

    those devils...\:mad\:

    On Jan 27, 2008 Grotesque_Burlesque wrote:

    \:rah\: Great second part! I was wondering where this story had gone!

    On Jan 27, 2008 dealer_day wrote:

    Nice \;\) 5.0 \:rah\: .

    On Jan 27, 2008 hanzo11 wrote:

    Was there a DEAD BODY in the garden?! \:eek\: Oh my god, that's sick! Talking of sick that Bessie needs to get better. \:wacko\: And those rich snobby girls need to come back down to earth and get REAL! \:D

    On Jan 27, 2008 Claudia35 wrote:

    i can't understand why they keep them into that awful school! W/e it seems that the next part will be very intersting\:rah\:

    On Jan 27, 2008 wrote:

    I just read the first part and this part and I thought that Bessie might be pregnant at first but then that horrible thing happened to her father so now I am not sure. Great job!

    On Jan 27, 2008 donaldch wrote:

    \:cool\: \:rah\:

    On Jan 28, 2008 rover202 wrote:

    Very suspencfull! \:cool\: \:rah\: \:rah\: Great story telling.

    On Jan 28, 2008 RIDance wrote:

    Creeeeepyyyyy! What are these people up to and why are they making them clean an already clean house? Wackos. \:P Great job!

    On Jan 28, 2008 wrote:

    Awesome!! this is really good.
    It would be cool if the girls decorated the room. haha.

    Anyways, can't wait for the third part!

    5.0!

    On Jan 29, 2008 maxi king wrote:

    \:rah\: great story!\:rah\:

    On Jan 29, 2008 wrote:

    5.0!!! I can't wait until part 3 comes out, very good effect in the pictures \:\)

    On Jan 30, 2008 aaaaaaac wrote:

    \:rah\: \:D NICE STORY! \:D \:rah\:

    On Feb 1, 2008 spacemouse wrote:

    Very nice, well done. Keep up the good work! \:\)

    On Feb 2, 2008 OpheliaNival wrote:

    What did he find in the garden????!!! I must say that this school makes the one I'm living at seem like paradice... But I like your writing especially the "ten extra flakes of cereal"-bit; lucky, lucky girl! I feel so sorry for them...

    On Mar 12, 2008 civetinja wrote:

    Great work ! Thanks for sharing !

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