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Hi, I'm Deborah Evergreen. Today is my birthday and I have a story to tell. It's a story of 7 children. Our "Mom", Molly, adopted all of us, one at a time, starting with me. Unfortunately, after Rhianna was adopted (the baby), Mom decided she'd made a mistake and she ran off. It was a horrible time for us. I was the only one old enough to understand the implications and I immediately called a Nanny to come stay with us. Over the years, we've had several Nannys, but no more!
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On Apr 26, 2006 queenie28 wrote:
Hi! Like your story! Great sister to care for her siblings without their mom. Great job!
On Apr 27, 2006 love_42013 wrote:
Great story but the ending seemed a little abrupt. It could have used a little something more.
On Apr 28, 2006 SimsBarbie wrote:
The story was getting really good, but then stopped!
On Apr 28, 2006 peta wrote:
This is a very nice story. I thought the ending was great you left it open so the reader can come to their own conclusion. Good technic.
On Apr 29, 2006 oldmember_iCreator wrote:
ooh, liked your story
She sure has ALOT of siblings 
On Apr 29, 2006 wrote:
Great story.. can't wait to hear more about this great family!
On Apr 29, 2006 Tempty wrote:
a nice story, interesting idea easy to read and I liked the open ending. I hope we hear more about this family
On Apr 29, 2006 prcd wrote:
I really liked your story. Are you going to continue it? I would like to see if Deborah finds a love of her own and how everything turns out for her.
On Apr 29, 2006 wrote:
Very nice story and touching... please continue with it...
On Apr 30, 2006 kidnumber48 wrote:
Perhaps the next story could be about what Molly has been doing since she ran off?
On Apr 30, 2006 gr8 gal wrote:
awww! this story is really sweet. see...who needs parents hey? this proves it.
On May 1, 2006 sara_87 wrote:
It's a great story!I would really like to see what will Deborah do...
On May 1, 2006 shockstar wrote:
I really liked your story
On May 1, 2006 xxsimsluhverxx wrote:
Great story.. I really liked it.
On May 1, 2006 kellik wrote:
that was a great story, one of the best so far
On May 1, 2006 abbieken888 wrote:
Great story, thanks
On May 1, 2006 Ivancica wrote:
I liked your story
On May 1, 2006 luisana17 wrote:
I love your story
On May 2, 2006 Takerdkdk323 wrote:
Man what a great story! I want to hear the rest of it.
On May 2, 2006 Takerdkdk323 wrote:
Sorry I go so carried away by the story I forgot to rate it
On May 2, 2006 SimEmma wrote:
Whata great story!
On May 3, 2006 simplyxsweet wrote:
lovely! and inspiring. mind if i attempt something similar?
On May 3, 2006 LIUBlueJeans wrote:
Simplyxsweet -- feel free to attempt something similar! This was a challenge I found on a Yahoo group. PM me if you want the challenge details.
On May 3, 2006 CalicoSim wrote:
Great story! I really enjoyed it. Starting reading just out of curiousity to see what storytelling was all about and it was so interesting I had to read it all! Very captivating story! Love the ending too........
On May 4, 2006 kaspers wrote:
I love the story...
On May 5, 2006 BBKZ wrote:
OMG, what a crazy story
On May 5, 2006 evetsangel wrote:
I really enjoyed your story. I hope there is more to come.
On May 5, 2006 spottsmom wrote:
Love the story. Though I am now sitting here wishing to find out what happens next and if Mom ever visits.
Hope we hear more about them. I also have to admit I am very curious a to what the baby looks like with the Terrence being red and his wife being green.
I hope that you will follow them and share with us the baby as it grows.
On May 7, 2006 andrestrydom wrote:
Great story ! Can't wait for more !
On May 7, 2006 snidertree wrote:
It's a nice story. The ending needed more to finish the story unless there is going to be a part 2! Terrance is a hottie.
On May 7, 2006 Vlana wrote:
Great and original story. Please go on.
On May 7, 2006 cinyoung8 wrote:
Great Job! Cute kids. Would have like to seen this molly visit once. Yeah would love to see what those kids turn out to be. Green and red make? Purple?
On May 7, 2006 morneau_grl27 wrote:
cute story, i like your sims, they're all really good looking!
On May 8, 2006 tonkpils24 wrote:
I love your story you should make more
On May 8, 2006 Jubilant wrote:
I do hope there is more to this story.
On May 8, 2006 sweetheartwva wrote:
cant wait for the rest.
On May 8, 2006 wrote:
That's a really sweet story. I hope we hear more about her-- I'd love to hear it.
On May 9, 2006 LIUBlueJeans wrote:
The next part has been uploaded...watch for it as soon as it's approved!
On May 9, 2006 lisa_t wrote:
I really loved your story! I agree with everyone that there should be a part 2!
On May 9, 2006 MissJay wrote:
That was so sad how the mom left
. But it was a really good story and I would like to see part 2.
On May 9, 2006 little_ruby wrote:
Great story! Maybe a sequel should be in the making?
On May 10, 2006 jeyca wrote:
Nice story.
On May 10, 2006 cr-art wrote:
Nice story, really. Thanx!
On May 10, 2006 Albiel wrote:
Great story. Can't wait for part 2!
On May 10, 2006 tephielea wrote:
Great story...will it continue on??
On May 10, 2006 oldmember_lovebigb wrote:
That was a wonderful story
On May 14, 2006 jenniegoldy wrote:
i loved it !!!
On May 15, 2006 wrote:
It's really cute, love it!
On May 18, 2006 maddox97 wrote:
Nice story. What a great big sis!
On May 18, 2006 lori84 wrote:
nice
On May 18, 2006 shiva_jmr wrote:
On May 21, 2006 LaGatita2005 wrote:
It's a very good story.
On May 24, 2006 bojani wrote:
very touching..
On May 24, 2006 Mika_N wrote:
Great story, I've almost cried when I read about that bunny Deborah gave to Rhianna.
On Jun 6, 2006 IheartRHPS wrote:
Wow, it must have been hard for them. Very nice story!
On Jun 7, 2006 S_Top wrote:
i wish that dtory wasn't so good, i am spendin 2 much time on the comp
On Jun 20, 2006 Minti3 wrote:
Great story, I would love to hear what happened later.
On Jun 24, 2006 wrote:
Must Be hard Cool
On Jul 3, 2006 zlsuter wrote:
great story
On Jul 5, 2006 sheneiney wrote:
great story
On Jul 8, 2006 joxanth wrote:
Does mom ever come back?
Will there be a sequel? Hope so! Thanks for the great story
On Jul 8, 2006 Gibson Twins wrote:
FABULOUS is all I can say thi is an excellent story you shou;d be a story writer
On Jul 20, 2006 xoxopinkprincessxoxo wrote:
I love it and am spechless! Bravo Bravo Bravo!+ Molly should be thrown off the balcony!
On Aug 11, 2006 Olga2102 wrote:
5 points
On Aug 23, 2006 sixks5 wrote:
I wuv it!
U can take care of sims so good! u lucky! 
On Sep 6, 2006 mannutibi wrote:
awesome story
On Sep 14, 2006 beautifulletdown wrote:
cool story
On Sep 15, 2006 lia2223 wrote:
On Sep 26, 2006 wrote:
Funny!
On Sep 26, 2006 wrote:
Do a Part 2!!
On Sep 26, 2006 wrote:
That Was a good Story!
On Sep 26, 2006 wrote:
Loved It
On Sep 26, 2006 wrote:
I love that story!
On Sep 26, 2006 wrote:
It's Great!!
On Sep 26, 2006 wrote:
Wonderful!!
On Sep 26, 2006 wrote:
Brilliant!
On Sep 26, 2006 darqstar wrote:
Aww, that was sweet! The mother deserves a poke in the eye!
On Sep 26, 2006 wrote:
Great Story!
On Sep 27, 2006 wrote:
Deborah is indeed a courageous and selfless girl! Thanks for the story!
On Sep 28, 2006 chellefleur wrote:
loved it thanks
On Oct 9, 2006 bayba1707 wrote:
On Oct 12, 2006 gozig86 wrote:
nice story=)
On Oct 13, 2006 bec71 wrote:
great story
On Oct 14, 2006 msxn4me39 wrote:
On Oct 14, 2006 wrote:
very nice story!
On Oct 16, 2006 Palina wrote:
Wonderful story!!
On Oct 24, 2006 ajamcek wrote:
really sweet story! and great screenshots!
On Oct 26, 2006 KatCat wrote:
Well done, I liked your story!
On Nov 9, 2006 Maiviastorm wrote:
great story!
On Nov 19, 2006 wrote:
On Nov 24, 2006 wrote:
Excellent story!
On Dec 2, 2006 civetinja wrote:
Thanks !!
On Dec 4, 2006 kiwiana girl wrote:
cool story
On Dec 5, 2006 gilysse wrote:
Hey yeah, you should make more!!
On Dec 7, 2006 wrote:
Good story. I like the variety of characters, but the story ends kind of suddenly.
On Dec 17, 2006 Sophistifunk wrote:
it was horrible thatthe mother ditched them like that
i wonder how the story will end
On Dec 20, 2006 Pete789 wrote:
Lovely
On Jan 5, 2007 manuela55 wrote:
On Jan 8, 2007 wrote:
how did you make the teens get pregnant
On Feb 2, 2007 wrote:
Nice!
On Feb 24, 2007 binky13 wrote:
It's a wonderful little story!
On Feb 26, 2007 wrote:
great story!!! i hope she finds love and happiness!
On Mar 25, 2007 Tantra wrote:
Funny story
Thanks for this
On Mar 30, 2007 wrote:
Very nice
On Apr 1, 2007 md198 wrote:
Deborah finds someone surely
On Apr 24, 2007 lildebbye75 wrote:
great story
On Apr 28, 2007 wrote:
Really good,how does she cope...but an incredible idea
On May 16, 2007 Cherylgass wrote:
great story!
On May 16, 2007 Pem wrote:
kl story but a very sudden ending, great story when you put it all together though. xxx, bi
On May 17, 2007 spacemouse wrote:
Nice story, well done
On May 18, 2007 LinkinParkFreak996 wrote:
Aww, what a cute story. She was such a good sister.
On May 24, 2007 wrote:
Awww,poor kids...the mother is a cheeseball!!
On Jun 2, 2007 Foxychik925 wrote:
i agree with hula-hoop. Their mother is a total wierdo
On Jun 5, 2007 wrote:
hey this is a really cool story. I like it
although some of the skintones make them look like they were at the sun for too long.... 
I'm very happy for them that they made it through this difficult life and that there is a happy ending 
On Jun 18, 2007 MinnieID wrote:
Nice story.
On Jul 5, 2007 shady411 wrote:
Im glad that they were able to all stay together and make it on their own.
On Jul 9, 2007 kellyhopkins22 wrote:
good story
On Jul 13, 2007 wrote:
Great idea and nice story
On Jul 15, 2007 Maiviastorm wrote:
On Aug 6, 2007 hp_simmer wrote:
Interesting story
Nice work
On Aug 8, 2007 andi and grim wrote:
On Oct 4, 2007 sweetkate1125 wrote:
On Oct 6, 2007 AlexKimmons wrote:
Interesting story, a bit of an abrupt ending though! i hope there will be anather part!
On Nov 6, 2007 simgirl4evr wrote:
interesting story
On Dec 15, 2007 ClaudiaR wrote:
I'll search for the next chapter!!
On Dec 21, 2007 Claudia35 wrote:
On Jan 13, 2008 eticaecidadania wrote:
On Jan 20, 2008 jadespacemonkey wrote:
Love the pjs with the dinosaur slipper..
On Jan 25, 2008 kat795 wrote:
On Feb 17, 2008 Bloomilicious wrote:
5 stars from me! An amazing work. You insipred me to do my own storyline. Thanks!
On Mar 10, 2008 wrote:
On Mar 18, 2008 Lady Miata wrote:
pretty sad
On Mar 21, 2008 Srecana wrote:
your young sims are so cool! nice storey!
On Apr 30, 2008 arc1801 wrote:
On May 13, 2008 redwingsbeann wrote:
I really like your story.
On Jun 21, 2008 maryash wrote:
good
On Jul 11, 2008 Chuck66 wrote:
make more!
On Aug 17, 2008 wrote:
On Sep 21, 2008 cutedazy wrote:
Interesting story!
On Oct 18, 2008 Catie-Cat wrote:
Like the story but not the ending. It just ended.
Is there a sequel? That would be cool.
On Oct 18, 2008 angelduckie wrote:
Good Job
On Oct 25, 2008 skyblue7377 wrote:
oh wow...how lucky..I am glad I found this...great story
On Nov 2, 2008 saturrn wrote:
wonderfull
On Nov 22, 2008 damnanoir wrote:
LOVE IT!!!!!!!!
5.0
On Nov 29, 2008 angeliney wrote:
i love jerrika's and rhiannas hair... where did you get them?
On Dec 20, 2008 *Neko* wrote:
What a pleasant! It is so wonderful! Good job!
On Jan 7, 2009 etheea wrote:
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please read my sim story "The Bates family"
On Jun 12, 2010 melaniecox wrote:
I liked it, I particularly love your group snapshots they are really good.
How did you manage to do them?
On Dec 26, 2010 Swotiz wrote:
I love your story can you do a part 2 plz
On May 14, 2011 kristie91 wrote:
Well that was interesting.. I can't imagine growing up with so many siblings let alone being the one to take care of them.