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This part 2 of Mommy And Me: Forever. It is a side story really. This is Sterling's oldest daughter Joelle.
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On Oct 2, 2006 LaurieR wrote:
I'm sorry guys! This one accidentally turned out longer than the first! Ooops!
On Oct 5, 2006 kidnumber48 wrote:
It didn't seem particularly overlong because the captions were nice and short.
On Oct 5, 2006 kkffoo wrote:
I like the short captions too! It was a fun story and you captured the atmosphere well!
On Oct 5, 2006 Frog_man05 wrote:
On Oct 5, 2006 evi wrote:
On Oct 5, 2006 nea200pl wrote:
I really like it
and I'm waiting for the next parts!
On Oct 5, 2006 gonein60 wrote:
very nice story, well done.
On Oct 5, 2006 Buckeye428 wrote:
Great story again, everything flowed well. I like how you showed her maturing throughout the story and then a the end you set up the next installment. Really good job and it was a fun read. I already said it but I didn't have a problem with the length because it flowed easily. Great job.
On Oct 5, 2006 gav14 wrote:
good story again
On Oct 5, 2006 gav14 wrote:
good story again
On Oct 5, 2006 annicia wrote:
Great story- both were very entertaining!
On Oct 5, 2006 caclark wrote:
interesting
On Oct 5, 2006 nerissasims wrote:
Cute story. If the captions were longer, it would have been too long, but it held my interest, so it is cool. It wasn't that long.
On Oct 5, 2006 vanessa190371 wrote:
On Oct 5, 2006 wrote:
Cool story!
On Oct 5, 2006 vkd wrote:
Great and entertaining story, love your style. Love the secret society bit, I will definitely have to get into one when I can play the game again! Can't wait for more. I wonder if she will manage to change her father's mind about the baby... guess I'll have to wait and see. Thanks
On Oct 5, 2006 wrote:
Great n i liked her hair n her clothes
but unfortunatli to me it wont let me download anymore
On Oct 5, 2006 SimanthaRat wrote:
Nice job, good shots and captions.
On Oct 5, 2006 Gibson Twins wrote:
Length doesn't matter LaurieR the story only matters and 5.0 is what I am going to give you man I wish you could get 10.0 heheheh
On Oct 5, 2006 filizk wrote:
As long as you like reading and the story is entertaining or captivating, I think it doesn't matter if it is long or short. And your story was very entertaining.
On Oct 5, 2006 josh1092 wrote:
i loved your story LarieR cant wait for the next part
On Oct 5, 2006 kellik wrote:
On Oct 5, 2006 Karie wrote:
eh...it was alright...i guess
:. I liked it a lot!! (duh, of course you already KNOW that). Good job, my friend, good job! But I only rated it a 1...you could do better!Me
Ha, I gave it a 5.
Your bestest bud in the whole wide world!!
On Oct 5, 2006 Buckeye428 wrote:
Some people are retarded, how in the world does this story have a 2.4 rating?!?!?! It is much better quality than that.
On Oct 5, 2006 stella828 wrote:
On Oct 5, 2006 LaurieR wrote:
Well, I thank all of you for your wonderful comments! Except of course Karie! My best friend of 22 years! She is so harassing! Thank you all for reading!
On Oct 6, 2006 miagirl340 wrote:
On Oct 6, 2006 lilredkat wrote:
On Oct 6, 2006 Gileswench wrote:
A fun and interesting read. I can't wait to see what happens next!
On Oct 6, 2006 so what wrote:
lost............
On Oct 6, 2006 little_ruby wrote:
I liked it, cute story
I loved her hair/clothes, they looked terrific. And all the facial expressions made me laugh. xD
On Oct 6, 2006 zlsuter wrote:
great story keep up the good work
On Oct 6, 2006 wrote:
Nice!
On Oct 6, 2006 cringo wrote:
great reading part 3 now!
4.0
On Oct 6, 2006 wrote:
Awesome story.
On Oct 7, 2006 ohmyitsnikki wrote:
Nice story! Great job.
On Oct 7, 2006 MoriaG wrote:
Great story! Nice that it kinda ties into the other one, with a different perspective. She just might make her dad change his mind, how can he be so cruel if he has kids of his own???? cant wait to see what happens next.
On Oct 7, 2006 drewsoltesz wrote:
Nicely done and well thought out! Good Job!!
On Oct 9, 2006 bayba1707 wrote:
On Oct 11, 2006 lia2223 wrote:
Good story!
On Oct 13, 2006 Olga2102 wrote:
AWWWWWWWWWW!
On Oct 14, 2006 wrote:
Everything was a treat for my luffly eyes!
On Oct 15, 2006 shady411 wrote:
On Oct 18, 2006 msxn4me39 wrote:
Really good job
You kept me interested and some suspense.
Great Story
On Oct 22, 2006 newmansfan12 wrote:
That is not long and even if it was it didn't matter cause it was really good.Glad you enjoy writing these because I enjoy reading them..
On Dec 17, 2006 wrote:
it was okay. but when sterling called and said about the baby, was he talking about candice or Joelle and the twins mum? i'm like, really confused.
On Jan 10, 2007 Pete789 wrote:
On Jan 16, 2007 civetinja wrote:
Thanks !!
On Jan 18, 2007 manuela55 wrote:
good story