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Another Part. So...Enjoy =) And I am really sorry about grammar mistakes, I live in Estonia, I am 14 years old and english isnīt my first language...
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On Jul 31, 2008 catsandbooks wrote:
Great story!
On Jul 31, 2008 islandchild97 wrote:
ABOUT TIME! MAKE THEM LONGER!!
On Jul 31, 2008 kazakh wrote:
Lovely story as always
I hope you'll write a new one soon
On Jul 31, 2008 tiffanydenise69 wrote:
that was great the twins are sooo cute cant wait to read the next part
On Aug 1, 2008 mollymooh@insightbb.com wrote:
WHERE DID YOU GET THE JONAS BROTHERS WALLPAPER?!!?!!?
-Nick J. is off the chain
On Aug 3, 2008 trinepatriak wrote:
Nice story! I really like, you tell the story more with the pictures, than with text! Itīs like my fantasy works on its own then also!
I could read and understand it fine 
And by the way, I think, the text there is, is just fine; almost no gramma-mistakes
Keep up the good work!
On Aug 4, 2008 pinkfloydgroupie wrote:
i love it!