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Another Part! I hope you like that... and I am sorry... There will be no parts on Saturday and Sundey.. I go to one trip with my brother and granny...there will be other kids and parents... I hope it will be fun. And Thank You Sooo Much That You Read That Story... it means so much to me... So Really Thank you sooo much. And again very sorry about grammar mistakes... I am only 14 years old....
Happy Reading ;D
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15 Comment(s) posted so far
On Jul 11, 2008 DrEaMyPriNcEsS wrote:
nice one.. ^_^
On Jul 11, 2008 pinkfloydgroupie wrote:
still doing great!
On Jul 11, 2008 Nadindi wrote:
Liking your stories even though the english isnt great
It adds character 
Lovin it!
On Jul 11, 2008 maryash2 wrote:
It was good, but all of the ... makes it hard to read the story. You should stop doing that or only do it al little!
On Jul 11, 2008 -mackenzie- wrote:
your english is fine
good story again
5.0 
On Jul 11, 2008 mollymooh@insightbb.com wrote:
Your english is awesome. Thats really good that you can type in english. Its easier to talk in english. lol
-Nick J. is off the chain
On Jul 12, 2008 maryash wrote:
great job
On Jul 12, 2008 kazakh wrote:
Beautiful story, I love it!
On Jul 12, 2008 TeenIdol wrote:
Fab!
On Jul 12, 2008 Samanthagreer wrote:
awesome job!!
On Jul 14, 2008 spacemouse wrote:
Great story, thanks for sharing!
On Jul 15, 2008 catsandbooks wrote:
Great job, can't wait for the next part!
On Jul 19, 2008 redtheprep wrote:
lovv ett,,
On Jul 26, 2008 tiffanydenise69 wrote:
lovely story cant wait for the next part ur english rocks
On Dec 31, 2008 loveneo7788 wrote:
She was going to the airport dressed like that?
Nice story by the way!