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My first story - EVER. Ok... There was only one introduction before this, but I never finished that story... xD Don't ask
Anyway, here it is, my story, and this cover is by me, even thought, I don't really like it *Made in PS CS3* Didn't get used to it .___. I have it just for few days so yea... This is actually the first thing I edited with it. [I used to use GIMP]
Get back to story. Sorry for all misspellings, I am still learning English, and I is only little girl from Croatia and my grammar be really bad. Joke, joke. My grammar isn't THAT bad.
So anyway... Won't bother you anymore. Read the story. :]
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33 Comment(s) posted so far
On Jan 16, 2008 samcactus101 wrote:
Good intro,,
can't wait for chapter 1!
On Jan 16, 2008 maxi king wrote:
On Jan 16, 2008 thekewlestnerd wrote:
great first story!
On Jan 16, 2008 trolzgirl wrote:
looks intresting
On Jan 16, 2008 thecaringcat wrote:
More more!!! 4.5!
On Jan 16, 2008 qasert wrote:
On Jan 16, 2008 xbluexmistx wrote:
Your sims are beautiful, specially Rudy!
On Jan 16, 2008 .:Mary:. wrote:
Thanks all
I really worked hard on it, so I am glad ya like :] And thanks xbluexmistx 
, never thought that my Sims are beautiful xD Only the beautifulest from my beautiful bodyshop Sims were chosen xD
On Jan 16, 2008 ,xPheobe. wrote:
The main character is the best..I think her names Rudy!?:S Any way great Intro..
On Jan 16, 2008 wrote:
Bravo..I am glad I was the proof reader and you listened what I was telling to you..I hope I will be proof reader for all parts!
On Jan 16, 2008 Sxylady_1978 wrote:
On Jan 16, 2008 iluvhorses13 wrote:
Good job!
On Jan 16, 2008 jero22 wrote:
very nice start
On Jan 17, 2008 happyb8888 wrote:
On Jan 17, 2008 donaldch wrote:
On Jan 17, 2008 AshGreg wrote:
cool story cant wait to see the next one
On Jan 17, 2008 atangki wrote:
Nice start!~
On Jan 17, 2008 spicylove wrote:
nice head start on your first story
On Jan 17, 2008 SMB2121 wrote:
I like the cover! great shots!
On Jan 18, 2008 eva hanstvedt wrote:
good
On Jan 18, 2008 dealer_day wrote:
great! please continiue
On Jan 18, 2008 lillith_666 wrote:
On Jan 18, 2008 hanzo11 wrote:
This was great!!! I was just wonderin, you said that you used ps cs3, I would like to make cover pics like that but PS is expensive. Is there any other software that I can use?
On Jan 18, 2008 OpheliaNival wrote:
Sweet story, you got me interested in why George was staring at Anthony... And the friendship between the two girls seem very realistic and your characters seem like genuine teens to. Looking forward to see the next part, don't quit on this story to!
On Jan 19, 2008 1ayotola1 wrote:
Great job and Janice is funny!
On Jan 19, 2008 seelindarun wrote:
Great job, for someone who isn't a native speaker!
On Jan 20, 2008 cptnemo6 wrote:
very good job
On Jan 20, 2008 Platinumplaygurl82 wrote:
NICE STORY
On Jan 20, 2008 jadespacemonkey wrote:
Nice teenage story
On Jan 20, 2008 Seerlyn wrote:
Great job!!!!!
On Mar 6, 2008 civetinja wrote:
good work ! Thanks for sharing !
On Mar 12, 2008 emmy27 wrote:
loved it.! very good for your first story.! i'll be waiting for more.!
On Oct 30, 2008 .:Mary:. wrote:
I kind of actually gave up on this story, and I lost these Sims anyway. I remember backing up my sims files long time ago, so if those were these files, I'll continue this story. If not, well... I can't continue. I could rebuild Sims, but I doubt that I could find any of this CC.