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This is the introduction to the story of two sisters,friends, souls. 'we, sisters'.
By me...

This is the introduction to the story of two sisters,friends, souls. 'we, sisters'.
By me...
 The Cors sisters, now 18.
Hiding in the toilet, at their mother's 45th birthday party.
'We've got another two hours AT THE LEAST, of this!' Lisa groans staring at her watch.
'Yeah, but look at us,I can't believe she's forced us to match our dresses- humiliating, I mean, I NEVER wear dresses, NEVER! She knows that!'Maggie squeeled.
They were close as could be, almost best friends, if there was such a thing in the world of secrecy and betrayal ahead of them. Their dad, Michael, a successful businessman, he had built an online empire, and is a household name.
He has got his two beloved daughters into the best university outside of town. He's really excited, and about to break the news...
 'When? Are we...Going?' nervous Maggie stares at her shuffling feet.
'Next month, I'm sorry this is a little late, but they squeezed you guys in ya see' Michael smiled.
'Oh wow! This is gonna be so cool! All the people, the parties..' Lisa giggles.
She catches her dad's eye, 'the education too of course'.

But maggie, is still pretty unsure about it all, but knows her father will flip out if she doesn't go.
Maggie wasn't introverted or anything, she just had to continuously sum-up consequences, possibilities, she had to be thinking all the time, it's her nature, kept her sanity.
 'I have to say, it's the best experience ever, Maggie, you'd love it there, it's so....Culutural, right up your street' her father persuades her.
'I've booked you both in at the best dorm on site, because I think that you'd make more friends that way, you'll be completly independant'.
INDEPENDANT.
'Independant eh?' Maggie smiles.

 That's the END of the introduction to my FIRST ever story (hopefully not the last).
Chapter one coming soon, so watch this space folks!
And oh, before I forget, any comments/suggestions, will be very much appreciated, and...Well...I'm going to say, constructive criticism, why not?
BRING IT ON! lol.

see you in Chapter one!!!

We, Sisters. 'Sneak-Peak, and all that jazz'

Mar 27, 2008 by Naz_Rocks
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    7 Comment(s) posted so far

    On Mar 28, 2008 onutika4u wrote:

    \:wub\: \:D nice story

    On Mar 29, 2008 spicylove wrote:

    kinda shot but it's nice though\:rah\:

    On Mar 29, 2008 aaaaaaac wrote:

    \:rah\: \:rah\: \:rah\:GREAT JOB!!!!!\:rah\: \:rah\: \:rah\:

    On Mar 29, 2008 qasert wrote:

    \:D

    On Mar 29, 2008 thekewlestnerd wrote:

    short, but good \:\)

    On Apr 19, 2008 civetinja wrote:

    Thanks !\:\)

    On Jun 22, 2008 arc1801 wrote:

    \:\) \:D \;\)

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