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Meet Elise
"H.h..h"
Hi, Elise. Hi.
"Who are you?"
I'm the great creater. Have a problem?
"N..n..," Stops for a brief second.
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8 Comment(s) posted so far
On Nov 26, 2008 tykijones wrote:
that was so good i cant wait for the next story to come out
On Nov 26, 2008 butterfly_girl wrote:
Interesting narration style.
On Nov 26, 2008 skyblue7377 wrote:
great story...very good stuff
On Nov 26, 2008 Hardyfan101 wrote:
Very interesting narration. Nice
On Nov 27, 2008 charray wrote:
Very good
On Nov 27, 2008 narniana wrote:
I'm soo curious to know what will happen next!
On Nov 28, 2008 kitfu11 wrote:
Lol. I like the style
On Nov 28, 2008 muggelx1 wrote:
very nice story