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Geoffrey and Lydia Wallace were wealthy Sims. In fact, they had all the best things that simoleons can buy, including foreign sports cars, a ski retreat in the mountains, a beach house on the shore, designer clothes and had been the first in town to convert an old office building into a contemporary urban dwelling. But for all their wealth, something was missing.

Geoffrey and Lydia Wallace were wealthy Sims. In fact, they had all the best things that simoleons can buy, including foreign sports cars, a ski retreat in the mountains, a beach house on the shore, designer clothes and had been the first in town to convert an old office building into a contemporary urban dwelling. But for all their wealth, something was missing. Lydia couldn't put her well-manicured finger on it. She had her highlights retouched and her legs waxed weekly at the finest spa in the city. She had a team visit her home for manicures and pedicures. She played tennis every Tuesday at the club and had lunch on Thursdays with Mimi VanTine. Likewise, Geoffrey also couldn't identify what was lacking in their lives. After all, he was the youngest senior partner in the history of his law firm. He played golf every Wednesday with the partners and sometimes on Fridays with clients. He took his wife to the islands each winter and bought her diamonds on birthdays and anniversaries. Then, one afternoon, while Lydia was ordering her new spring wardrobe directly from the designer (who was a close, personal friend), she looked out the window and saw a young woman walk past holding a baby. Like a ton of bricks it hit her; Lydia realized what was missing. "Geoffrey!" she exclaimed. "We need a nanny! Everyone else has one and we'll be social outcasts without one!"

"But Lydia, we don't have a child." Geoffrey pointed out.

"Then we must get one!" Lydia insisted as she picked up the phone to call Mimi VanTine, so she could find out where to buy the very best layette for her future child. "As soon as possible!" Geoffrey, of course, was thrilled to oblige. But as the months passed, conventional methods weren't working. Lydia was growing more and more desperate by the day. How could she keep up with the Joneses if she didn't have a nanny? Preferably a Scandinavian au pair. Or perhaps a no frills British nanny like the ones on television. She consoled herself with a new pair of Manolo Blahniks, but the thrill wore off as soon as they arrived. Geoffrey and Lydia went to the doctor who, after running a battery of tests, informed them that they would never be able to conceive a child. Lydia was inconsolable. Her dreams of having a nanny were slipping away.

"But darling." Geoffrey pointed out. "We can just adopt like Angelina and Brad."

"That's brilliant!" Lydia agreed, excitedly. "Then I won't have to go through all that icky childbirth stuff or get stretch marks!"

So it was settled. They'd phone the adoption agency in the morning. That evening, while Lydia was calling all her friends to tell them about her traumatic day at the doctor's office, Geoffrey went outside to do some stargazing. He didn't know what he was looking at; he only knew it was the most expensive telescope simoleons could buy. And he didn't mind watching Mimi VanTine undressing, either. Suddenly a flash of light appeared in the sky. Geoffrey couldn't believe his eyes. An alien spacecraft was hovering above his house! He was about to call Lydia outside to see it, when a bright beam of light pierced the night sky and Geoffrey felt himself being pulled upward toward the spacecraft.

"Help! Lydia! Anyone! Help!" he screamed, but his wife couldn't hear him over the sound of her own voice, as she and Mimi VanTine discussed which was the best Scandinavian country for au pairs. And then Geoffrey was gone. She was so absorbed in finding a decorator for the nursery that three days passed before Lydia realized her husband wasn't there. But at just the moment she decided it was time to panic, he fell from the sky, landing in a heap at the curb. "Geoffrey!" she exclaimed, as he staggered to his feet. "Get in here at once! You're a mess! What will the neighbors say? Have you been drinking?!" Geoffrey tried to tell his wife what had happened to him aboard the alien craft. He told her about the green-skinned aliens who had poked and probed him in places that still made him blush. But Lydia didn't believe him.

"You HAVE been drinking!" she accused. The next morning, while Lydia was playing an early morning game of tennis at the club, Geoffrey felt nauseous. Afraid he'd caught an alien virus, he took the day off work. When his abdomen expanded, he panicked and rushed to see the doctor. "This is the strangest thing I've ever seen in all my years of practicing medicine." the doctor said. "But you, Mr. Wallace, are pregnant."

Geoffrey was stunned. Pregnant? Him? If anyone at work... no, if anyone at all... knew he was pregnant, he'd be a laughingstock. "I'll have to take a leave of absence." He was surprised at how enthusiastic Lydia was when he told her the news. She immediately hired the Danish nanny she'd interviewed while Geoffrey had been "away". She didn't like to believe her husband had been abducted. Alien abductions were only for rednecks. Two days later, Geoffrey went into labor. Although they were shocked that his pregnancy progressed so rapidly, Lydia awaited eagerly for her husband to give birth. But their expressions turned to pure horror when they saw the baby. It was green. "W-Wh-What is THAT?" Lydia stammered.

"I don't know." Geoffrey replied. "But we must get rid of it. Call Childrens Services."

"No!" Lydia exclaimed. "We would never be able to show our faces again if anyone ever found out we had a... a... whatever that thing is... taken by Childrens Services. No. We'll have the nanny raise it. After all, that's what nannies do."

Lydia called for the young Danish woman. Geoffrey and Lydia held their breaths, hoping the ugly green alien being wouldn't frighten the new nanny away, but she didn't even seem to notice. She picked up the baby and cuddled it against her, cooing softly in its ear. It was decided that the Wallaces would proceed with the adoption they'd planned before Geoffrey's unfortunate "journey". They would hire another nanny -- the English one that Lydia now clamed had been her first choice all along -- to care for the adopted child. And the Danish nanny (whom the Wallaces never called by her proper name of Anneke) would raise the green one... who would never, ever be seen in public. The next day, Childrens Services arrived with a baby girl, who Lydia christened Emma. After all, the baby name books all said it was the most popular girl's name in the country. And Lydia would never settle for anything but the best. Before she was even old enough to play, baby Emma received heaps of toys. She was strolled all over town in her carriage by her English nanny. And whenever they had friends over, Lydia brought the nanny...erm... the baby... out to meet the guests. The alien baby, on the other hand, had little in the way of creature comforts. Her crib was tucked into a corner of Anneke's efficiency suite on the top floor of the house. But what the baby lacked in material possessions, was more than made up for in love. The young nanny made sure her every need was met. With their dirty little secret hidden in the attic, life was again perfect for Geoffrey and Lydia Wallace. Having a child barely made a dent in their daily schedules, except that Lydia added a "play date" for baby Emma every Monday afternoon at the park, so Lydia and her nanny could be seen by the other women and their nannies. Life was no so perfect, however, for Anneke. Although she loved caring for the toddler she'd begun calling Semine, she was often lonely. She had little time to meet other people her own age. Nor was she invited to the play date in the park. And when she had time off, she went shopping at the thrift store for things for Semine. With her pocket change, she managed to find a few Lego bricks for the little girl. With Anneke's love and attention, Semine grew into a sweet little girl who loved to giggle, especially when tickled. She loved to try new foods and rarely cried. Despite having all the advantages in the world, Emma had all the indications of becoming a spoiled brat. As a toddler, her mother spoke for her, so Emma refused to speak. She refused to walk, although she knew how. Every morning Emma screamed at the top of her lungs until her nanny fetched her from her crib. And on her fifth birthday, Emma threw a temper tantrum, smashing the dollhouse she'd only just opened. After her lavish party -- complete with ponies, clowns and all the children from the neighborhood in attendance -- it was time for Emma to start Kindergarten. There was a waiting list for the ultra-exclusive Canterbury School, but Emma's name had been on the list since birth. But because Lydia and Geoffrey did not want anyone to know about the alien child, it was decided that Anneke would teach her at home. So each day, the young woman sat aside a period of time for schoolwork. Semine, Anneke quickly discovered, was a very intelligent child who was eager to learn. "Anneke, are you my mommy?" Semine asked one day, as the nanny read her a story.

"No, sweetheart." the young woman replied. "I am your nanny."

"Do I have a mommy and daddy?" the green-skinned child asked.

"Yes." Anneke replied. "But your parents hired me to take care of you when you were just a tiny baby."

"Why?" the child asked. As she looked down at Semine's expectant face, Anneke didn't want to have to tell the child that her parents were ashamed of her green skin. But she did not believe in telling lies.

"They didn't want a green-skinned baby. They wanted a baby whose skin color is the same as theirs." Anneke admitted. The tears that filled the little girl's eyes nearly broke Anneke's heart.

"Do they love me?" Semine asked.

Anneke shook her head sadly.

"I don't know." she replied. "They have never taken the time to even get to know you."

The tears spilled down Semine's cheeks as she sobbed into her hands. "Semine, let me tell you a story." Anneke said, sitting down on the couch and pulling the little girl up beside her. "When I first started caring for you as a baby, you didn't even have a name. So I decided to call you Semine, because where I come from, Semine is the name of the goddess of the sun and the moon and the star. She is very kind and very brave, just like you."

"She is?" Semine asked, her blue eyes wide.

"Yes." Anneke replied. "And just like you, Semine comes from the heavens."

"I come from the heavens?" the little girl breathed in awe.

"Yes, you do." the nanny replied. "That's part of what makes you so very special. Your parents just don't understand that you are a gift from the sun and the moon and the stars."

Semine was quiet as she wiped her tears.

"Do you love me?" she asked.

"Oh yes, sweetie." Anneke replied, snuggling the little girl close. "I love you very, very much." One day while Semine was baking a muffin in the toy oven Anneke had found at a yard sale, a strange man came into their room. He recoiled at the sight of her.

"Where is your nanny?" he asked.

"She's having a rest. " Semine replied, pointing to the bed where Anneke was napping. Anneke awoke to fine Geoffrey Wallace beside her bed. He'd never visited the third floor before. She saw him only on payday in his office, when he gave her an envelope full of cash to cover her pay and living expenses for Semine.

"Mr. Wallace, what are you doing here?" she asked.

"I only see you on Friday afternoons for a few minutes." he said. "But I think about you all the time. I can't get you out of my head. I must have you!" He made a lunge for her, trying to kiss her, but Anneke pushed him off and scrambled to her feet.

"What do you think you're doing?" she demanded.

"You are my employee." Geoffrey said angrily. "And if you'd like to remain as such... well, then I hope you'll be a little more... receptive... to my affections."

"I won't." Anneke retorted.

 "Then you are fired." Geoffrey replied. "Pack your things immediately and be gone."

"But what about Semine?" the nanny asked, her voice thick with tears of concern.

"Who?" her employer asked.

"Your child!" she spat.

"Oh, that." Geoffrey replied, shrugging. "I guess you should have thought about that before you turned me down."
 "Please don't send Anneke away." Semine begged, having witnessed the entire exchange.

Geoffrey ignored her, pressing a 1000 simoleon bill into the nanny's hand.

"Let's make sure no one finds out about our little secret." he said.

Anneke leaned down and hugged the little green girl tightly.

"Be a good girl, Semine." she whispered. "Keep reading, brush your teeth and don't forget that I love you very much." When she reached the curb, Anneke opened the mailbox and put the 1000 simoleon bill inside. Although it was more than enough to get her into a new apartment, she didn't want Geoffrey Wallace's blackmail money. In fact, she had no intention of keeping his secret at all. Anneke went directly to the Childrens Services office, where she was greeted by a social worker named Amy Nelson.

"I want to report a case of child neglect." she said. "I'm sorry I didn't report it sooner, but I needed the money." Anneke admitted, after she'd told Amy the whole story. "And, well, I love that little girl. But I'm worried sick about her. Mr. Wallace told me they would hire another nanny, but until they do, I'm afraid she's all alone and scared."

"We'll investigate this right away." Amy assured her. Amy Nelson wasted no time driving over to the Wallaces' home. She introduced herself when Lydia answered the door.

"I'm here to see the child who lives on the third floor." Amy said.

"Child on the third floor? I have no idea what you're talking about." Lydia replied. "Our third floor is nothing more than a storage room."

"Then you'll have no problem with me just going up to have a look around." Amy said, heading into the house toward the stairs. "You can't go up there!" Lydia protested. "This is private property!"

"I have the authority to investigate any claim of abuse or neglect." Amy replied. "So I can and I am going upstairs, Mrs. Wallace."

"Abuse!" Lydia exclaimed. "That's insane! I'm calling my husband!" When she reached the third floor, Amy opened a door, revealing the alien child Anneke had described in detail. The little girl was eating the kind of muffin that was baked in a child's toy oven. "Hello Semine." Amy greeted, her voice soft. "My name is Amy and I'm here to make sure you're being cared for properly. Are you okay?"

"She's fine." Lydia insisted, rushing up beind the social worker. "See for yourself. She's happily baking muffins like a normal little girl."

"I'm speaking to the child." Amy said.

"I did my schoolwork like Anneke said I should." the child offered. "Then I watched TV, but just a little bit because Anneke only lets me watch for 30 minutes. And then I got a little bit hungry, so I cooked a muffin. Do you know when I will have dinner? Because it's past the time that Anneke always makes dinner." "Don't be silly, darling." Lydia giggled nervously. "Of course you know that Mommy and Daddy will call you when it's time for dinner."

The alien child looked up at Lydia and Amy could see no recognition register on the child's face.

"Semine, do you know who this lady is?" Amy asked.

"No." the green-skinned little girl shook her head. "But this morning my daddy came up here. He tried to kiss Anneke and when she told him no, he told her to go away."

"Surely you don't believe her!" Lydia burst out. "She's just a child with an overactive imagination."

"Yes, Mrs. Wallace, I do believe her." Amy replied. "And I'm taking her with me." Semine was frightened, but she followed Amy to the Childrens Services van. She had spent her entire life on the third floor of the house, looking longingly at the outside world through the window. But now that she was outside, she had no idea what was going to happen to her. And she missed Anneke terribly. Amy took the child to her office, where she gave Semine a sandwich and some juice.

"Now, Semine, I'd like you to tell me about your life." she said, after the little girl had eaten. "As much as you can remember. Tell me about the places you went and the people you met."

"I didn't go anywhere." Semine said. "Anneke and I stayed in our room. She played with me and taught me how to read and made my food and took care of me when I didn't feel good. And on my birthday, she even made me a cake with candles on it!"

"But what about your mommy and daddy and sister?" Amy asked. "Did they play with you, too?"

"I have a sister?" Semine asked in wonderment. After their chat, Amy tucked an exhausted Semine into bed in the transitional housing wing of Childrens Services, then went to her desk to type her report. The child clearly had no recollection of having spent any time with Geoffrey or Lydia Wallace. She had not recognized the woman as her mother. Nor had she known about her sister. While there was no evidence of abuse -- Anneke Eriksen had seen to it that Semine was well cared for -- there was abundant evidence that her birth family had grossly neglected the child. She recommended Semine be permanently removed from the home and placed in the adoption system. She'd just sent the report to her supervisor when a very angry Geoffrey Wallace stormed into the office.

"You had no right coming into our home without a warrant." he raged.

"As an officer of the court, you should know better, Mr. Wallace." Amy replied calmly. "According to Sim law, I have a duty to remove a child from an environment in which that child is being abused or neglected."

"We have never abused any child!" Geoffrey shouted.

"That is true." Amy replied. "In order to abuse a child, you'd have to have contact with that child. But you and your wife had no contact whatsoever with your alien child." Geoffrey Wallace pulled out his wallet and began peeling bill after bill from a thick wad.

"How much will it take to keep this quiet?" he asked.

"I beg your pardon?" Amy asked indignantly. "Are you suggesting you can buy your way out of this, Mr. Wallace?"

"Everyone has a price." the man replied. "I'd be willing to bet you don't make much money as a social worker. Consider it an income supplement."

"Mr. Wallace, you are very lucky we only took ONE child from your home todya." Amy said. "Your behavior indicates that perhaps your other child isn't being raised in a healthy environment either. Now I suggest you put your wallet away and go home before you lose BOTH children." When she returned to her computer, Amy found the preliminary paperwork for a family that was a perfect match for the newest child in the adoption system. As she read over the application, she smiled to herself. Indeed, this was the perfect home for Semine. When Semine woke, Amy Nelson was sitting beside her bed. The social worker helped her wash and dress, then took her to the office.

"I know yesterday was very scary for you." Amy said. "And I bet you're wondering what will happen to you now."

The little girl nodded.

"We have decided that you will not go back to live with your parents." Amy told her.

Semine was relieved. Even though she'd only seen the man and the lady one time, they had both been angry and mean.

"Most children go to a place called an orphanage until we can find them the very best forever home." Amy explained. "But I have already found a home that is a perfect fit for you." Semine's eyes filled with tears. She didn't want a new family. She wanted Anneke back. But Anneke had told her to be a good girl, so she didn't say it out loud. She only thought it in her head. Then she remembered that Anneke would want her to be brave like Semine the goddess of the sun and the moon and the stars, so she wiped her tears.

 "You get to choose, sweetie." Amy said. "If you don't want to go live with this new family, I'm not going to make you go. But I hope you will keep an open mind."

Semine was anxious as she waited for her new family to arrive. Her eyes opened wide in shock when the door to Childrens Services opened and Semine's heart was filled with joy. "Anneke!" she exclaimed, launching herself at the young woman, who hugged her fiercely. "I missed you!"

"I missed you, too, baby." Anneke replied, her throat clogged with tears.

"Are YOU going to be my new mommy?" the little girl asked.

Anneke nodded.

"If you want me to be." she replied.

"Oh yes, yes, yes, yes, YES!" Semine cried. "And can I call you Mommy?"

"You sure can, sweetheart." Anneke answered, as she signed the adoption form. That night, as Anneke tucked her new daughter into bed, the sleepy little girl yawned, "Mommy, tell me again about my name."

"When I first started caring for you as a baby, you didn't even have a name. So I decided to call you Semine, because where I come from, Semine is the name of the goddess of the sun and the moon and the stars." Anneke told her. "She is very kind and very brave, just like you. And because she is a goddess, Semine comes from the heavens."

"Just like me?" the little girl asked, her voice growing faint as she began drifting off to sleep.

"Yes, just like you." Anneke whispered, stroking Semine's soft black hair. "And you are my gift... from the sun and the moon and the stars."

Dirty Little Secret

Jun 2, 2012 by PRDGirls
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    177 Comment(s) posted so far

    On Sep 24, 2006 evi wrote:

    Smart idea for a story. Very interesting. Great shots. Absolutely wondrful!\:rah\:

    On Sep 24, 2006 gulbet wrote:

    very well done\:rah\: great story good shots..bravo\:rah\: \:rah\:

    On Sep 24, 2006 wrote:

    Fantastic story! I loved it \:D It was very neat, clear and entertaining. \:rah\:

    On Sep 24, 2006 Ducks_Rule wrote:

    awww that ends just so cheesy yet to cute! \:D

    On Sep 24, 2006 PRDGirls wrote:

    What can I say? I love cheese \;\) And the Sims lend themselves to it so well!

    On Sep 24, 2006 confide wrote:

    This was a Great story, very well written and very interesting. It was a pleasure to read it !

    On Sep 24, 2006 neovente wrote:

    you made me go all teary. Great story \:D

    On Sep 24, 2006 Olga2102 wrote:

    very nice story! 5 points!

    On Sep 24, 2006 kkffoo wrote:

    Fabulous to see another photo-story from you! Loved the humour, the clear, colourful photos and the emotion of the tale. Great read.

    On Sep 24, 2006 anck_su_namun668 wrote:

    Aww that's so cute and original!\:D

    On Sep 24, 2006 frogger1617 wrote:

    \:D Good Job!

    On Sep 24, 2006 gonein60 wrote:

    very interesting story, well done.\:rah\:

    On Sep 24, 2006 nea200pl wrote:

    Wonderful story \:\) \:\) and I like it very much! Great screenshots and story idea. Five stars from me! \:\) \:\)

    On Sep 24, 2006 wrote:

    Awesome jod dude!\:cool\: It would be kool if there was a sequal!\:rah\:

    \:D

    On Sep 24, 2006 Gileswench wrote:

    (sniffles happily)

    What a heartwarming story! I know Semine will be happy with Anneke for her mom.

    On Sep 24, 2006 Racheal00 wrote:

    \:D Great story,hope there going to be another chapter. what to know what happened to the real parents and her sister.

    On Sep 24, 2006 LilPimpette282 wrote:

    That was great... make a sequal so we can see how the community reacts lol \:D

    On Sep 24, 2006 jupiterinleo wrote:

    Omg! Lydia's top! I HAVE THAT SAME TOP, lmao! \:cool\:
    Great story, too. It kept me reading. \:rah\:

    On Sep 24, 2006 13bleedingmascara13 wrote:

    \:wub\: LOVE IT! =] there should be a part two called Semines enemy and it turns out to be her sister! =D!!!!!!!!

    On Sep 24, 2006 Gibson Twins wrote:

    Does anyone have a tissue I think I feel tears coming on. Mr and Mrs Wallace are so nasty\:mad\: but I am glad\:P that Seline got Anneke.\:wub\:

    On Sep 24, 2006 caclark wrote:

    interesting

    On Sep 24, 2006 ssjjcrane wrote:

    I didn't want it to end!\:\(

    On Sep 24, 2006 e.avery1987 wrote:

    Very Nice\:o

    On Sep 24, 2006 sexijae wrote:

    Wonderful story! I know people just like the Wallaces and you portrayed them dead on!

    On Sep 24, 2006 D2Diamond wrote:

    \:wub\: Five star rating! That was absolutley awesome! The pictures were great, the story was beautiful! Fantastic job!

    On Sep 24, 2006 Jesse555 wrote:

    Loved it girl\:D JD

    On Sep 24, 2006 kellik wrote:

    That was a great story, one of the best i have read, keep up the great work, hopefully we see a part 2 \:rah\:

    On Sep 24, 2006 itscleo wrote:

    Very enjoyable story, kept my interest all the way through, and even tugged at the heartstrings a little. OK, a lot. Good job!

    On Sep 24, 2006 ii_miss-uux3 wrote:

    loved it \:\) great job, 5 stars!

    On Sep 24, 2006 jenncarr wrote:

    Excellent story\:rah\:

    On Sep 24, 2006 filizk wrote:

    That was a great story. I loved the humor. Although it was a very entertaining, I got very emotional when I reached the end. Awesome.

    On Sep 24, 2006 sweetsbeta420 wrote:

    Awesome story....Hope to see more.\:rah\:

    On Sep 24, 2006 MSLSNYDER wrote:

    Just makes you feel all warm and fuzzy \:cool\:

    On Sep 24, 2006 lia2223 wrote:

    Sweet story with a very happy ending. \:wub\:

    On Sep 24, 2006 vanessa190371 wrote:

    good story

    On Sep 24, 2006 chellefleur wrote:

    soooooooooooooooooo sweet such a happy ending im glad anneka had semine \:\) such a lovely story well done \:wub\: \:D

    On Sep 24, 2006 chellefleur wrote:

    forgot to rate ***** 5 stars \:\)

    On Sep 24, 2006 wrote:

    \:\) That was a super cute story!! Their hands looked a little odd, but it was sweet.

    On Sep 24, 2006 wrote:

    That was a brilliant story, very well done \:D

    On Sep 24, 2006 Csajtr wrote:

    Beautiful story! It made me cry! \:o \:wub\: \;\)

    On Sep 24, 2006 andymc2470 wrote:

    good story a new plot! \:D \:wub\:

    On Sep 24, 2006 heijke wrote:

    Wonderful story with a geat ending. My brother and I really enjoyed reading it together.\:\)

    On Sep 24, 2006 oldmember_CuteAngel25 wrote:

    love this story

    On Sep 24, 2006 elocinpage wrote:

    \:D One of the best stories I have read!! Wonderful!

    On Sep 24, 2006 Wheels89 wrote:

    Lol this is great \:D I loved when Lydia said something like: we need to get a nanny or we'll be social outcasts \:rah\: It cracked me up \:D And I also love happy endings to these kinds of stories You're getting a five from me well diserved!

    On Sep 24, 2006 oldmember_jthaofficer wrote:

    Terrific story! Best I've read in a long time!

    On Sep 24, 2006 gav14 wrote:

    love the story really good ending \:rah\:

    On Sep 24, 2006 wrote:

    That's pretty funny

    On Sep 24, 2006 earth2luna wrote:

    I loved your story. I had tears in my eye's also. Yes, please do a sequel.

    On Sep 24, 2006 laura199108 wrote:

    Very good story...But thoose rich people always think that they are the best\:mad\: whatever.....I`m glad Semine is happy \;\)

    On Sep 24, 2006 greedy wrote:

    "Alien abductions were only for rednecks" hahahahahaha great story \:rah\: \:rah\: \:rah\:

    On Sep 24, 2006 jobug1015 wrote:

    Great story!\:\)

    On Sep 24, 2006 sandybvv wrote:

    wonderful story.. i loved it...\:rah\:

    On Sep 24, 2006 wrote:

    Aww! Semine is soooo cute!!!\:wub\: This was an awesome story!\:D

    On Sep 24, 2006 Dogtop23 wrote:

    I knew it! i knew it was going to end like that. Great story! How do you do all that stuff anyways? like the social worker? sign my gb if anybody knows im planning on writing a story and well i want stuff like that.

    On Sep 25, 2006 LaurieR wrote:

    That was really great! I loved it! 5 for you! \:rah\:

    On Sep 25, 2006 miaRavenFallen wrote:

    this story is really really wonderful \:\) Thank you PRDGirls \:wub\: \:wub\:

    On Sep 25, 2006 wrote:

    Awwww, what a sweet story! Yay for happy endings! \:rah\:

    On Sep 25, 2006 munsket wrote:

    What a beautiful story! My heart feels all warm & gooey. I'm looking forward to the next chapter in this story.... \:\)

    On Sep 25, 2006 PPPenkochan wrote:

    Aww that was so sad I cried. That was a great story though. thanks for sharing it with us.

    On Sep 25, 2006 veronica50034 wrote:

    \:rah\: thanks for sharing!

    On Sep 25, 2006 shady411 wrote:

    \:rah\: Awesome\:rah\: \:wub\: Love your story.

    On Sep 25, 2006 Miyu-Tenshi wrote:

    This is an amazing story! I loved it very touching! Great job! Such a cute little girl! thanks for sharing!\:D loved your story.

    On Sep 25, 2006 veronica_234 wrote:

    great story 5\:rah\:

    On Sep 25, 2006 simbasmykitty wrote:

    Great job! \:rah\:

    On Sep 25, 2006 Pandora3co wrote:

    I actualy had tears in my eyes at the end. One of the best I've read. Great pictures!!

    On Sep 25, 2006 grasya wrote:

    Great story! All Photos perfect for the scene. A very unique story. Can't wait for another one. \:cool\: \:cool\: \:rah\:

    On Sep 25, 2006 csolis2 wrote:

    \:rah\: Great story!

    On Sep 25, 2006 SweetLeilani0429 wrote:

    Great story \:rah\:

    On Sep 25, 2006 Thrennish wrote:

    \:\)

    On Sep 25, 2006 willowswand wrote:

    exscuse me for a minute while i grab a kleenex....that was the BEST story i have read in these pages EVER.five stars to you , that was brilliant.\:rah\: \:rah\: \:rah\: \:rah\:

    On Sep 25, 2006 Arduinna wrote:

    Awesome story

    On Sep 25, 2006 floydine wrote:

    Good work! Your story is great!\:rah\:

    On Sep 25, 2006 Adira wrote:

    Good chracters and storyline!\:rah\:

    On Sep 25, 2006 wrote:

    \:wub\: awww, such a cute story

    On Sep 25, 2006 vkd wrote:

    Wonderful! Great story, great idea and you alian child is pretty normal looking compared to the ones I get! Good work, fab shots! Thanks for sharing it! \:D

    On Sep 25, 2006 bookasaurus wrote:

    \:rah\: I really enjoyed this, very original!

    On Sep 25, 2006 Vanilla Sim wrote:

    Loved your story. I hope you write a sequel. I'd love to see what happens next. \:rah\:

    On Sep 25, 2006 PRDGirls wrote:

    vkd, I was REALLY lucky that Semine ended up so cute. I've had some really awful-looking alien babies, too! \:puke\:

    On Sep 25, 2006 wrote:

    \:rah\: \:rah\: That was a really awesome story!

    On Sep 25, 2006 darqstar wrote:

    That's a great story! What a brat Lydia is!

    On Sep 25, 2006 BBKZ wrote:

    5 points from me! This story was so great \:D

    On Sep 25, 2006 Minti3 wrote:

    Very good story with original idea and great screenshots. Very touching! \:\)

    On Sep 25, 2006 Buckeye428 wrote:

    I am not a huge fan of alien stories period. I hate sci-fi. Regardless, you did a great job on this story. Excellent camera shots and an interesting story told. You did an excellent job and people who like this genre will be even more pleased.

    On Sep 25, 2006 Schneckchen wrote:

    You have a great sense of humor and I also liked the end \:\)

    On Sep 25, 2006 SimsBarbie wrote:

    Precious, just precious.... \:wub\:

    On Sep 25, 2006 carebear_kat wrote:

    aww what a great story\:cool\: \:D

    On Sep 25, 2006 sweetmixx21 wrote:

    Great story! I loved it! Almost brought me in tears! \:rah\:

    On Sep 25, 2006 Crystalstar wrote:

    Cute Story. I liked it.

    On Sep 25, 2006 jayb04 wrote:

    \:D i love this story great job

    On Sep 25, 2006 wrote:

    Greate! 5.0\:rah\:

    On Sep 25, 2006 killercurls wrote:

    Awww! I'm so glad that she got adopted by Anneke in the end!

    On Sep 25, 2006 Raven98590 wrote:

    Very creative and unique. I really enjoyed it.

    On Sep 25, 2006 Albiel wrote:

    Great story!

    On Sep 25, 2006 rchris_ness wrote:

    i loved it. It was different and interesting. Will there be more to it later?

    On Sep 25, 2006 cheshyrcatgrins wrote:

    what a great story. i hope we get to see more from them!

    On Sep 25, 2006 DIDA wrote:

    Just Perfect!I love it.It's B R I L L I A N T !!!\:rah\: \:wub\: \:rah\:

    On Sep 25, 2006 crayzdanimal456 wrote:

    \:wub\: AWESOME story!!

    On Sep 25, 2006 clcewest441 wrote:

    That is wonderful. Believe me about this, I think you should actually make a real book about that. I'm an author, and if you don't mind...could I use that as a book of mine? \:D

    On Sep 25, 2006 CASSIA238 wrote:

    What a wonderful story!\:\) I am so glad their was a happy ending for little Anneke.\:rah\: Anneke's real parents were awful.\:\( I am glad that Anneke has a mom that really loves her now.\:wub\:

    On Sep 25, 2006 heamon55 wrote:

    AWesome story, very heartfelt\:wub\: loved the pictures, hoping for a part 2\:D

    On Sep 25, 2006 jaojao wrote:

    Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhh it was soo sweet!
    Captured me, and it made me read!
    You really have an eye for the great shots too!
    \:wub\: \:wub\: \:wub\:

    On Sep 26, 2006 xoxopinkprincessxoxo wrote:

    \:wub\: that was great! I loved it! Normal i would act like simen and instult the storey maker but i have nothing to insult about! I loved the storey line and great shots! that made me feel wonderful!\:wub\: \:D

    On Sep 26, 2006 xoxopinkprincessxoxo wrote:

    I hope for A PART TWO!\:wub\:

    On Sep 26, 2006 Nikouchoco wrote:

    Superb story ! \:rah\: Emotion for this little alien girl who haven't finaly a too little nose. \;\)
    God job anyways ! And 5 stars ! \:wub\:

    On Sep 26, 2006 wrote:

    nice story i like the green girl

    On Sep 26, 2006 wazza966 wrote:

    kool! story >:P

    On Sep 26, 2006 Hottiesheldon wrote:

    wonderful storie i felt so sorry for Semine she is such a little cutie i have a family with a little green boy and his name is Trance and he is a little sweetie like your little green girl but my family had like twin girl and boy named Frankie and Charlie so like the little green boy gets teased \:\( But yyour storie is suc a great storie well done hope there is a part 2 i would love to find out what happens in there new home and if Anneka would find a husband and have sibblings for Semine\:rah\:

    On Sep 26, 2006 Iolanthe wrote:

    Great story! \:\)

    On Sep 26, 2006 TizRus wrote:

    \:rah\: OMG! Totally awesome story. It was different and different was good. Thanks so much for the time you put into it. Please make another one. \:D

    On Sep 26, 2006 Tremayne77 wrote:

    I too will add, Great Story and I loved it. Very nice touch and you kept your characters true. Keep up the good work. \:rah\:

    On Sep 26, 2006 KrawkDbz16 wrote:

    Perhaps you should rename Lydia to be "Paris". She sounds a bit too much like Paris Hilton to me.\:P

    On Sep 26, 2006 grenondini wrote:

    Brilliant\:D Good story, well done. so much imagination, so many good screenshots. Realy realy nice. Congratulations it was fab\:wub\:

    On Sep 26, 2006 cyberlucy1965 wrote:

    Fantastic job. One of the best stories I've seen here. \:D

    On Sep 26, 2006 wrote:

    \:rah\: \:D \:rah\: thats all i can say WOW

    On Sep 26, 2006 happyb8888 wrote:

    Excellent Story\:rah\: \:rah\: Was just as good as reading a small novel. Great pictures and settings \:\)

    On Sep 26, 2006 KellyLynn73 wrote:

    Wow. You did a great job getting screen shots to match your story. I'm very impressed. The story was interesting definitely kept my attention. Plus, happy ending. Yay!

    On Sep 26, 2006 susie222 wrote:

    Very nice Story \:rah\:

    On Sep 26, 2006 annaemilia wrote:

    What a lovely story. \:\) And a happy ending, yay! \:D

    On Sep 26, 2006 savanabonita wrote:

    This is really a wonderful story \:rah\: It's soooo interesting!!!!!!!!!!!
    Wow really great job. I love it!!!!! Really great \:wub\: \:wub\:

    On Sep 26, 2006 Sigyn wrote:

    Loved to read it!!\:\)

    On Sep 26, 2006 zlsuter wrote:

    loved the story cant wait 4 more keep up the good work\:rah\: \:wub\:

    On Sep 26, 2006 wrote:

    this is a really intresting ang gd story \:D luved it \:wub\: good job! thanxz \:D

    On Sep 26, 2006 GoddessofWar1022 wrote:

    \:rah\: loved it! Awesome job!

    On Sep 26, 2006 wrote:

    \:rah\: Wow...that was just amazing! Stupid parents...\:mad\:

    On Sep 26, 2006 venusdemilo wrote:

    This is great! I'm a sucker for happy endings, and this story is proof that motherhood doesn't necessarily mean by blood. i wonder what happened to that little brat Emma....I rated it 5 stars.

    On Sep 26, 2006 slime wrote:

    tat was a gud story make another one like tat\:rah\:

    On Sep 26, 2006 ^^TnT^^ wrote:

    Wow.. nice stories!

    On Sep 26, 2006 Anna^-^ wrote:

    Did you get the title of your story from the song by american rejects Dirty Little Secret? Just Curious!\:D

    On Sep 27, 2006 wrote:

    WOW!!! Amazing story! I was about to burst out crying! Keep on going!

    On Sep 27, 2006 haesle wrote:

    Beautiful....It brought tears to my eyes..great story...keep it coming...\:wub\: \:rah\:

    On Sep 27, 2006 sweetheartwva wrote:

    love the story\:rah\:

    On Sep 27, 2006 peony_pony wrote:

    That waS INCREDIABLE!

    I loved it!

    On Sep 27, 2006 Lidia wrote:

    Great!I like your story.\:D

    On Sep 27, 2006 irina_nr13 wrote:

    \:wub\: Great story!

    On Sep 28, 2006 so what wrote:

    Awwwwwww............

    On Sep 28, 2006 shylibra wrote:

    I laughed, I sighed and I got teary-eyed. Job well done!!\:rah\:

    On Sep 28, 2006 Saoz wrote:

    Great story, Trish! \:\) The satire was hysterical. And the Semine/Anneke relationship was very touching.

    On Sep 29, 2006 evilredduckie wrote:

    That was a great story, PDR's! Such a sweet ending!\:rah\: I can't wait to see where you go with them from this point.

    On Sep 29, 2006 andradasasha wrote:

    \:D great story!

    On Sep 29, 2006 wrote:

    SO GOOD! Really touchng, i acctually cried (and im not being sarcastic)

    On Sep 29, 2006 Little Seer wrote:

    Gosh I'm glad I'm not the only one who got teary! I thought I was being such a baby! Loved the redneck line tee hee. A very wonderful story.\:cool\:

    On Sep 29, 2006 wrote:

    ahhhh what a sweet story. lovely! \:wub\:

    On Sep 30, 2006 kiarafra wrote:

    Wonderful story

    On Sep 30, 2006 wrote:

    What a sweet story. I loved it.

    On Oct 1, 2006 wrote:

    Great story!! I absolutly loved it! \:rah\:

    On Oct 7, 2006 wrote:

    \:D Oh my great story.

    On Oct 7, 2006 jstwinkle5 wrote:

    Awwwe I'm such a sucker for happy endings.\:wub\:

    On Oct 8, 2006 elbyness wrote:

    Very creative...good work\:rah\:

    On Oct 11, 2006 kransp wrote:

    \:rah\: awesome job, one of the best stories I've ever read on here... you had me totally hooked \:D

    On Oct 13, 2006 Sk8tergirl69 wrote:

    Oh my gosh, I loved it! This is the first story in a long time that has made me get teary\:wub\:

    On Oct 14, 2006 wrote:

    great story!\:rah\: \:rah\: \:rah\:

    On Oct 16, 2006 Kismyname wrote:

    What a beautiful story! Wonderfully written and very entertaining. Overall it was very sweet. I laughed and I cried. Great job! \:rah\:

    On Oct 21, 2006 wrote:

    That was a really wonderful story, fantastically well written and very sweet! \:\)

    On Oct 21, 2006 wrote:

    That was a really wonderful story, fantastically well written and very sweet! \:\)

    On Oct 21, 2006 bflosweethart wrote:

    I love it! it is so logical you had a great ending with the reapeting pharse that is mostley the story! love it I know I just sayed the last staory I read was the best but I have to say this story is better than that one 10.0!!!!!\:rah\: \:rah\: \:rah\: lol

    On Nov 20, 2006 JuLaYa-K wrote:

    OMG, that was the best story I have seen on TSR!!!\:rah\: I love the way u have all your screenshots in order. \:D U r obviously a terrific writer. My friend told me about this story and it is my favorite story of all time. Hooray 4 u!! \;\)

    On Nov 20, 2006 JuLaYa-K wrote:

    sorry i 4 got the rating. \:\(

    On Nov 25, 2006 wrote:

    That was adorable!!!\:wub\: That was such a sweet ending!\:rah\: \:wub\:

    On Nov 27, 2006 stonetower wrote:

    Wow!! It's amasing story.\:wub\: Certainly, you're so talented for children's story\:\)

    On Nov 30, 2006 xxkirsty19xx wrote:

    excellent story, i loved it \:D

    On Dec 3, 2006 Llama_Llord wrote:

    \:wub\: Sniffle. So good! \:rah\: \:rah\:

    On Dec 4, 2006 Mistress Useless wrote:

    Very sweet ending to a good story! Well thought out and good pacing too!

    On Dec 11, 2006 hellocanuhearme wrote:

    I loved it!\:\( Little emotional though..\:wub\:

    On Dec 19, 2006 manuela55 wrote:

    \:cool\:

    On Dec 28, 2006 Pete789 wrote:

    \:wub\:

    On Jan 11, 2007 civetinja wrote:

    Thanks !!!\:\)

    On Jan 15, 2007 bookfairy23 wrote:

    This is one of my favorite TSR stories, and the first one I ever read here. It's beautiful, good pictures, good storyline. I thought it was cool how you showed al the social workers as well, how DID you do that? Anyway, 5.0 and great job!

    On Jan 19, 2007 kadoatie wrote:

    Aww! How sweet. Poor thing \:wub\: I'm glad everything worked out for Semine in the end! \:rah\:

    On Feb 2, 2007 fizz bomb wrote:

    I love that so well done

    On Mar 17, 2007 wrote:

    What a lovely story...\:wub\: It's okay, I love the cheese too...hee hee hee!

    On Mar 31, 2007 atangki wrote:

    wonderful! simply magnificent! hope you make more stories! I'll wait for more, I'll be expecting more too! Keep up the good work!\:rah\: \:rah\: \:rah\:

    On Jul 3, 2007 spacemouse wrote:

    Very nice story. Thanks for sharing. \:\)

    On Jul 25, 2007 kecr101 wrote:

    Awwww!! It was such a nice story, and I \:wub\: the happy ending!

    On Jul 31, 2007 wrote:

    \:wub\: good story

    On Sep 2, 2007 md198 wrote:

    Awwww\:wub\: That's beautiful. Good story\:D

    On Dec 9, 2007 Kenvjo wrote:

    Very creative and original! Its great to read a story not like all ther others!\:rah\:

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