Parisleaf / Stories / Unlucky with the heart (Part 3)
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Hello and welcome to the 3rd part of my story.

Hello and welcome to the 3rd part of my story. Jessica woke up to a doctor examining her, ‘Where am I?’ She thought to herself. “Where am I?”this time she said it out loud, “You are in Simchester Hospital, you have a visitor,” replied the doctor. “How you doing sweetie? The doctor told me you have amnesia from when you... err... fell down the steps last night” said Jordan, getting ready to start his plan, “Oh... ok, but who are you...? My brother? My uncle?” asked Jessica. “No I’m your boyfriend,” answered Jordan, getting up, “and you are ...Lucy ...Thomas.”
 “Here are some flowers, today we were going to look for a house so we could move in together,” Jordan lied, “Can you remember that you are a millionaire?” “A...a millionaire...really? Come on I’m not stupid!” Lucy/Jessica replied. “No really and you were going to get a make over today to go with the house we were going to buy.” Jordan Lied, ‘Then Elliot won’t be able to recognize her and tell her who she is,’ he thought to himself. “Come here,” Jordan reached out to Lucy and pulled her, softly, into a hug. ‘Oh I wish I could remember you,' she thought. “Lets go and see the house we are going to buy, well as soon as you are let out,” Jordan smiled. The next day Jordan and Lucy walked up to the house that “they” picked out. It was also the most expensive house in Simchester. They stood and looked at the house, “I can’t afford this,” Lucy said at she looked at the huge house that stood in front of her. “You can, you have billions,” Jordan smiled. “Really? Well then lets get it!” Lucy smiled back.

 2 weeks later, “Oh, Jordan I am soo glad you talked me into this makeover, I now look like a model,” Jessica said with her glass of champagne, “Yes you look like a million dollars,” Jordan added.

 “I think I need a makeover too, so I look like your boyfriend, you should become a model,” Jordan replied. “Yes really me, a model, don’t be so silly,’” Lucy laughed. “No really, you are gorgeous!” The next day, “Hello Lucy Thomas speaking,” Lucy said down the phone.
 “Hello... Do you know a Jessica Richardson?... I need to find her,” said the person on the other line, “No... one minute I’ll ask my boyfriend,” answered Lucy. “Jordan, sweetie, do you know a Jessica...Richardson?” Jessica asked, Jordan froze, “N..n..no no I don’t sorry.”
 Jordan walked down the hall thinking, ‘No that idiot is closer to finding Jessica... and her money! I’ll have to make sure I keep her... and her money.’ “He says no, sorry, good luck finding your friend,” Lucy put the phone down. Lucy went in to the living room to read when Jordan walked in. “Oh hello honey,” Lucy smiled looking up from her book. “Can I talk to you a second, asked Jordan. “Yes sure, what’s this about,” Lucy was nervous. Jordan suddenly got down on his knees and produced a small black box. “Lucy Thomas will you marry me, I can’t bear someone taking you off me!” Jordan asked. “Yes yes yes, oh yes!” Lucy squealed and passionately kissed Jordan. Jordan just smiled singing ‘money money money’ by ABBA in his head. That same afternoon, Lisa (the maid) arrived to finish cleaning the house when she ran into Jordan, “Hello Gorgeous, what took you so long to get her,” he smiled winking at her. “Well I had to wait until your fiancee left, duh!” They both burst out laughing. “Well what’s the plan, you’re getting married tomorrow, I thought you loved me!” Lisa teased, “Don’t worry I’m doing this to gain her trust, by the time of the wedding I will have already stolen her money and when we are at the altar I will accuse her of cheating on me, causing her to make a scene which is when I will make my escape, she will think I will come back and by the time she goes to the police me and you will be on our own private island.” Jordan explained. They both laughed hysterically, “Last time before we are on the run,” Jordan gestured towards the bedroom. “I thought you would never ask!” Lisa smiled evilly. “Oh I love you,” Lisa smiled, “Same here, love!” replied Jordan. The day of the wedding: Lucy started to walk down the else, ‘Here we go!’ she thought.
 As she got closer she thought, ‘I wish I could...’ All her memories came flooding back. She stood in the middle of the else as every memory came back to her. “Remember!” she whispered. She walked quickly up to the altar and screamed at Jordan, “How could you, How DARE you!” Everyone around them gasped as the bride screamed at Jordan, “I can’t believe you would lie to me like that you stupid Gold digger!” She turned to run, “I’m going to the police,” she whispered with her back to him. Hope you liked part 3 I think the next part will be the final.
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Co-writer: Kelster205 :D

Unlucky with the heart (Part 3)

Jul 28, 2009 by Parisleaf
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    On Jul 28, 2009 kelster205 wrote:

    i fink its great thant u made the effort of writing stories but as they go on they see to ge more and more dull n borin sorry but the critisism is the best advice sme times i fink eva u should make it more interesting like gdstorylines or throw it onto the scrap heap\:eek\:

    On Jul 28, 2009 urm0m wrote:

    Good part, I think it's a good story \:\)

    On Jul 28, 2009 fredbrenny wrote:

    I liked it and rated it 5.0! It is definately NOT easy to do a story and think of a story line. I wonder what the finale is going to be like!

    On Sep 20, 2009 pwettiiee_pwiincess wrote:

    Well i really liked that and i can not wait for the next part. \:\)

    On Jan 22, 2010 charray wrote:

    Wonderful part \:rah\:  5.0 \:\)

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